Reply with suggestions to improve this draft here: - Mix audio so voice is consistent volume (@dksemple) - Replace Matryoshka Brain with Boltzman Brain - Condense chapters to eliminate repetition - Add chapter to beginning that mirrors the end, the process in which multiplicity returns to unity - Voice Blake's lines manually
related to your request for constructive critiques: i like the intro. the narative is also interesting. i also like the 2 voice interview alike. u could work on adding text i actually enjoy watching random vids
Thank you for the feedback , this is the first draft iteration of this narrative, so all feedback will be incorporated into the final product that is currently in the works.
Reply with suggestions to improve this draft here:
- Mix audio so voice is consistent volume (@dksemple)
- Replace Matryoshka Brain with Boltzman Brain
- Condense chapters to eliminate repetition
- Add chapter to beginning that mirrors the end, the process in which multiplicity returns to unity
- Voice Blake's lines manually
@James Qor
old guy voice feels like he's about to die...
and bit slow
maybe more dynamic sounds...
Without the listener there is no meaning. I observe your reflection! :)
related to your request for constructive critiques:
i like the intro. the narative is also interesting. i also like the 2 voice interview alike.
u could work on adding text
i actually enjoy watching random vids
I would love to set up automated captions, I'll look into that
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Why is she so loud?!
Thank you for the feedback , this is the first draft iteration of this narrative, so all feedback will be incorporated into the final product that is currently in the works.