Just the opinion of an avid Sci fi book reader. I lost track of how many times this story stated "They had ruled by fear". The AI needs adjusting, after the 1st time hearing it, I knew they ruled by fear and humans were not afraid, repeating it again and again does not add to the story, if anything it detracts. Just surprised there was not a dire battle, where Humans attacked the "Hub" in a desperate gamble multiple times, like so many of these stories. And can we find a different adversary, the Galactic Council is getting a little worn. But keep up the effort, eventually a great story will emerge without the unnecessary repeats.
"palpable" at the 5:52 mark. I'm not hanging around for the "tapestry" of word play using "precision". With a grim determination, I say "Later Dude".
This was a 5 minute story retold 6 different ways
Just the opinion of an avid Sci fi book reader.
I lost track of how many times this story stated "They had ruled by fear".
The AI needs adjusting, after the 1st time hearing it, I knew they ruled by fear and humans were not afraid, repeating it again and again does not add to the story, if anything it detracts.
Just surprised there was not a dire battle, where Humans attacked the "Hub" in a desperate gamble multiple times, like so many of these stories.
And can we find a different adversary, the Galactic Council is getting a little worn.
But keep up the effort, eventually a great story will emerge without the unnecessary repeats.
Galactic Federation Council best of all technology and ways of doing things .
change and evolution are scary
thanks
Usual repetition dedecated to extending the story length.
Additionally, this story has about twice as many commercials as is normal.