an excerpt from a letter I will never send (a prose poem)

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  • Опубликовано: 18 окт 2024

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  • @gosiacal5533
    @gosiacal5533 2 года назад +286

    listening to this felt like a beautiful invasion of someone's privacy

  • @hwlsgrl
    @hwlsgrl 2 года назад +403

    "I’m so thankful I got to be beautiful in this life, maybe in the next life I’ll be whole" FELT.

    • @gosiacal5533
      @gosiacal5533 2 года назад +6

      i felt this on a spiritual level

    • @faetheisen4423
      @faetheisen4423 2 года назад +19

      Wait, you guys got to be beautiful

    • @hwlsgrl
      @hwlsgrl 2 года назад +4

      @@faetheisen4423 lmao 😭😭

    • @Lee_.Writes
      @Lee_.Writes 2 года назад +1

      I related way too much to that line

    • @dobs407
      @dobs407 Год назад +1

      I'm yet to be either

  • @mayamemories
    @mayamemories 2 года назад +143

    ''a letter that will never see the light of day... a letter to my darkness'' this contrast is insane and mindblowing

  • @pomegranatepoetess8804
    @pomegranatepoetess8804 2 года назад +72

    "we consumed each other like sticky fruit on a hot day" so beautiful

  • @lunavaasmr1618
    @lunavaasmr1618 Год назад +3

    "don't write back..i don't want to hear from you anymore" that really hurt and i don't know why

  • @evangelinecantlemere6266
    @evangelinecantlemere6266 2 года назад +250

    This felt like a prologue of a dark academia novel that I could become obsessed with.

  • @pitbull305
    @pitbull305 2 года назад +231

    Please make more of these!! There isn't many people of my age that enjoy the beauty of poetry

  • @meganparkk
    @meganparkk 2 года назад +282

    this is one of the most beautiful things i've ever experienced

    • @pearld1ver
      @pearld1ver 2 года назад +3

      right?? im about to cry honestly

  • @s0f1a8_
    @s0f1a8_ 2 года назад +42

    "have you ever realized that swords look like crosses from the right angle?" I have and I felt that

    • @andrewbyronloveshire5209
      @andrewbyronloveshire5209 4 месяца назад

      its the one line i would have deleted/edited - its misplaced... a good line if required in another more fictional narrative, but not here

  • @halimalol2624
    @halimalol2624 2 года назад +14

    "My lunacy is hereditary. It bleeds from both sides." Hit me harder than any moving vehicle ever could.

  • @noxpig9577
    @noxpig9577 Год назад +3

    "i think im getting used to being alone again" FELT

  • @jack_in_the_books
    @jack_in_the_books 2 года назад +13

    oh my GOD.

    • @ASWedits
      @ASWedits 2 года назад

      Hi Jack I love your content

  • @river3516
    @river3516 2 года назад +46

    The most beautiful thing I saw today. Makes me want to write again, but I feel like I lost that spark idk...

    • @river3516
      @river3516 2 года назад +1

      @Star dreamer aww thank you, that's so kind of you. I'll do it, I promise :)

  • @booknook127
    @booknook127 2 года назад +114

    You're voice is so beautiful and filled with emotions that are indescribable

    • @durgeswardas7861
      @durgeswardas7861 2 года назад

      I didn't knew my daughter had such great taste

  • @chygirl999
    @chygirl999 2 года назад +59

    Mesmeric. I’ve only recently got into prose (and poetry) as growing up it just felt like people were speaking in riddles and it put me off of it completely. But coming across you, a very sudden and unexpected heat of affection overtook me. I don’t know if its solely because of the prose it’s self or that it’s loved by you that makes it more enthralling.

  • @amitshahak9184
    @amitshahak9184 2 года назад +158

    My lady, my muse, I shall cherish your videos forever

  • @noelambrus3937
    @noelambrus3937 2 года назад +80

    mistress of the night, Lady Dakota, our Queen, your videos and works makes me think about my own existence, my soul and spirit. i love how every of your works has an expression towards the Holy Spirit and the Fallen Angel. you write about darkness and light, hatred and numbness. you're both not a God, but not a Devil, but that's okay. your spirit and soul and even your perspective of the world do open our mind to see regilion, crime, love as a beautiful, existing creature of life. sorry for my explanation, i couldn't resist. long live Lady Dakota

    • @hwlsgrl
      @hwlsgrl 2 года назад +6

      I adore her usage of religious themes, as someone with religious trauma it’s lovely to see religion be used for poetry and art rather than being preached to you

  • @anagha7441
    @anagha7441 2 года назад +18

    im in shock from how heartwrenching this is. i love your words

  • @zaltheapulido9867
    @zaltheapulido9867 2 года назад +26

    "the songs say love is a tonic and i am desperate to be clean," IM SCREAMING

  • @kaylab6416
    @kaylab6416 2 года назад +6

    rewatching this isnt enough, i need it pulsing through my veins and burnt into my tongue

  • @poojitachand2811
    @poojitachand2811 2 года назад +15

    This is inexplicably beautiful. I am awestruck.

  • @josiejodosiedoe
    @josiejodosiedoe 2 года назад +11

    wow, I feel the raw emotion in this so deeply. im glad you're doing better dakota. absolutely beautiful poetry.

  • @switch4342
    @switch4342 2 года назад +8

    your talent rivals that of the bard himself 😭😭

  • @wispoftheheart
    @wispoftheheart 2 года назад +11

    i’ve rewatched this video three times and each time i finish it i fall in love with it again. thank you for sharing this, your words are mystifyingly beautiful ♥️

  • @Lilacpoetica
    @Lilacpoetica 2 года назад +6

    i literally walked out of a room full of people to watch this.

  • @caromaria9090
    @caromaria9090 2 года назад +7

    there is nothing that makes me feel the way ur writing does I LOVE YOU LADY DAKOTA

  • @anjalipal_1820
    @anjalipal_1820 Год назад +2

    This is so good!!!
    I have no words for you Dakota
    You are my inspiration
    Ily❤

  • @elsie2521
    @elsie2521 Год назад +1

    Can't describe how much I love this.

  • @taliw7736
    @taliw7736 2 года назад +2

    So grateful for your poems , existing vlogs and your happiness captured on screen

  • @fairyelno
    @fairyelno 2 года назад +2

    “maybe in the next world i’ll be whole”

  • @fatimash.9223
    @fatimash.9223 2 года назад +1

    wake up from my noon nap to a notification from you channel and I just knew that my day have been made. Each sentence is a pure joy but at the same time a pure agony. "my cropped hair should be evidence of my lack of commitment to growing" make me questioning my long hair because I don't want grow but at the the same time I worship it.

  • @thyleia
    @thyleia 2 года назад +9

    this almost feels like a lullaby 🥺💌

  • @eldritch.terror
    @eldritch.terror Год назад +1

    Now why did I end up crying.

  • @ritzybora1880
    @ritzybora1880 2 года назад +5

    Such a beautiful poem and the reading, soothing. My heart flutters everytime you read your o's , my lady.

  • @ayoub5215
    @ayoub5215 2 года назад +2

    3:37 she just got inspired by the stranger in this line, seriously best line.

  • @priscilandreza
    @priscilandreza 2 года назад +5

    This was so honest! Thank you for sharing your darkest thoughts 🖤✨

  • @edina4902
    @edina4902 2 года назад +5

    this was so exceptionally beautiful it made me tear up and long for something I thought I forgot
    Dakota I adore you

  • @sophhnavarro
    @sophhnavarro 2 года назад +3

    That was so beautiful and touching. Thanks for sharing 🖤

  • @flashblack7811
    @flashblack7811 2 года назад +5

    Holy smokes this is BEAUTIFUL! I was completely spellbound listening to you 🖤

  • @literaterue
    @literaterue 2 года назад +3

    because of you, i’m all the more inspired to work harder on my own booktube channel. your contents are literally it!!! ily dakota! 🌸🥹

  • @HappyG1lm0re
    @HappyG1lm0re Год назад +2

    fucking love this title

  • @amalbenfraj4467
    @amalbenfraj4467 2 года назад +2

    your tone & voice & words and everything…. .. ur otherworldly i love u

  • @kasunkavishka2976
    @kasunkavishka2976 2 года назад +2

    Wow. This was an ethereal experience. Thank you lady Dakota.

  • @choocli
    @choocli 2 года назад +4

    i love love love love this dakota, thank you for sharing this it's breathtaking

  • @Pazoo_underscore
    @Pazoo_underscore 8 месяцев назад

    i watched this when it came out but rewatching it now ripped me apart. i relate so hard now

  • @sonjastojiljkovic757
    @sonjastojiljkovic757 2 года назад +1

    this is the most beautiful thing i’ve ever listened to.

  • @chewythetorterra
    @chewythetorterra 2 года назад +2

    I adore your filming style, if that makes any sense,,, and how u talk is oddly comfortign in a good way

  • @kaylab6416
    @kaylab6416 2 года назад +2

    this was so beautiful i could cry

  • @skye6418
    @skye6418 2 года назад +2

    this was insanely beautiful

  • @amiciawalczak5688
    @amiciawalczak5688 2 года назад

    no words. just admiration.

  • @envi33
    @envi33 2 года назад +1

    Those first few lines from your blog :') Hope you're feeling better, this was truly beautiful and cryptic to watch

  • @Chris_Originals_Studio
    @Chris_Originals_Studio 2 месяца назад

    Ohh you're a good writer. I am excited for you to have published books to buy.

  • @rose-colouredgrrrl812
    @rose-colouredgrrrl812 2 года назад +1

    i am so obsessed with this wow

  • @layyii_playlist
    @layyii_playlist 2 года назад +1

    you are absolutely the most perfect person I have ever seen, I love you lady dakota 💘

  • @evitamaria6526
    @evitamaria6526 2 года назад

    “my lunacy is hereditary. it bleeds from both sides.” WOW

  • @hay2380
    @hay2380 2 года назад

    that's a masterpiece. i am living for moments like this. honestly breathtaking piece of art.

  • @lamjin9519
    @lamjin9519 2 года назад

    "yours perhaps in another life"
    wow

  • @EllaMitsch123
    @EllaMitsch123 2 года назад +4

    obsessed with yew! melbourne girlies going places

  • @mayamemories
    @mayamemories 2 года назад +1

    you are beauty in its purest form everything you do is horrifyingly beautiful ily

  • @sydneyfox7655
    @sydneyfox7655 2 года назад +2

    this is so beautiful

  • @rebekatokovic6097
    @rebekatokovic6097 2 года назад

    "I am thankful i got to be beautiful in this life, maybe in the next, Ill be whole"

  • @munchforcaprisuns
    @munchforcaprisuns 2 года назад +1

    Your voice and writing is so beautiful.

  • @vittoriamariggio5888
    @vittoriamariggio5888 2 года назад +1

    this is absolutely beautiful.

  • @bella-zk6sy
    @bella-zk6sy 2 года назад +1

    beautiful! but the letter did kinda see the light of day hehe forever immortalized in a gorgeous digital video.
    may you experience love in all its colors

  • @taliw7736
    @taliw7736 2 года назад

    sad, and honest, a raw depection on emotion

  • @Lee_.Writes
    @Lee_.Writes 2 года назад

    I related to the 3 confessions way too much… on a personal level. This is gorgeous. I aspire to write like you someday Lady Dakota.

  • @chaoticidiottt
    @chaoticidiottt 2 года назад +2

    it feels like a dream

  • @elisazouza
    @elisazouza 2 года назад +4

    This is beautiful ❤ you made me read Dorian Gray and now it’s one of my favourite books! I would also love to see outfit videos Lady Dakota! Absolutely adore your videos and hope I can achieve an audience like yours one day. Your words are so beautiful and always leave an impact on me

  • @matildafriend1066
    @matildafriend1066 2 года назад

    you're so talented!! i am *begging* you to write something (book, anthology, anything you like) because i would fully consume it

  • @elisabethn3913
    @elisabethn3913 2 года назад

    Oh, this is so beautiful. Thank you.

  • @ophelia3646
    @ophelia3646 2 года назад +1

    that was so beautiful to listen to

  • @grishikaarora7408
    @grishikaarora7408 2 года назад

    the most magnificent thing i’ve ever seen

  • @Mariamox
    @Mariamox 2 года назад +1

    Beautifully written

  • @sofiacabrini1848
    @sofiacabrini1848 2 года назад +1

    whole body chills

  • @Jen-jt9bp
    @Jen-jt9bp 2 года назад

    this was utterly stunning and incredible

  • @mimimilani8620
    @mimimilani8620 2 года назад +1

    This is so stunning

  • @annapaolazuccarini
    @annapaolazuccarini 2 года назад

    This was so deep and beautiful and personal. I feel like I should not have heard it.

  • @danielle48021
    @danielle48021 2 года назад

    This is astounding

  • @accidentalcver
    @accidentalcver 2 года назад +4

    this is so beautiful :,)) reminds me of the name of a new album from sabrina carpenter called 'emails i can't send'

  • @mila8252
    @mila8252 2 года назад +7

    holy fuck

  • @ReadingNymph
    @ReadingNymph 2 года назад

    Wow, i have no words, just stunning

  • @estherbutton6399
    @estherbutton6399 2 года назад +1

    that was gorgeous

  • @wamyarabel1288
    @wamyarabel1288 Год назад +1

    My comfort letter.
    I summon that part of your soul I want to invade.

  • @hannaknolke1180
    @hannaknolke1180 2 года назад

    It may never see the light of day, but for sure the darkness of our minds

  • @whoisxenon
    @whoisxenon 2 года назад

    please post more of your poetry & prose on here!!

  • @indigo_diary
    @indigo_diary 2 года назад

    This is so good I watched it twice on the same day 🥰

  • @khhk6439
    @khhk6439 2 года назад

    this is the best thing i have ever seen

  • @DidiAphra
    @DidiAphra 2 года назад

    this is INSANE in the best way!!!

  • @lapvona
    @lapvona 2 года назад

    wow that was eerily beautiful !!

  • @ana.piumbini
    @ana.piumbini Год назад +1

    omggg i am crying

  • @jzaaaa4372
    @jzaaaa4372 2 года назад

    we NEED the written version.

  • @ciaranicoole
    @ciaranicoole 2 года назад

    haunting in the best way

  • @vermenaa
    @vermenaa 2 года назад +3

    is the background music something I can find on Spotify or do I have to live with the fact that I just fell in love with a piece of music and can't cry to it at 3 am?

    • @vermenaa
      @vermenaa 2 года назад +2

      that was a bit dramatic let's call it Dakota-core

  • @birkinbagmommy
    @birkinbagmommy 2 года назад

    I'm in love with your mind

  • @andi7522
    @andi7522 2 года назад

    Absolutely beautiful. I interpreted it as a letter to a part of herself, did anyone else?

  • @karina-kk2ew
    @karina-kk2ew 2 года назад

    that was so beautiful oh wow

  • @martagavi
    @martagavi 2 года назад

    i can't wait to read your novel

  • @lapvona
    @lapvona 2 года назад

    i love how the video is exactly 4:44 mins long

  • @bailagringacovers
    @bailagringacovers 2 года назад

    This hits so hard.

  • @layyii_playlist
    @layyii_playlist 2 года назад

    this is amazing