POV is from an observer doing a real time analysis, wrong conclusions forcing a closer look in order to make better projections Nicely put together, I like it
@fonzdevries4575 Thanks for the feedback! I'm trying to figure something out for that which will hopefully be better than just pasting paragraphs. For now I just upload the story file to RUclips for the subtitles so they are 100% accurate. :)
POV is from an observer doing a real time analysis, wrong conclusions forcing a closer look in order to make better projections
Nicely put together, I like it
Glad you liked it! Hopefully the observer gets to encounter humans once more so they can remedy that! :)
I'll be curious to see what people think about this one--it's unique to what I normally put on this channel. I hope you all like it!
I can't speak for others, but I like to read along while listening
Maybe include the text (paragraphs, not lines)
Your choice
@fonzdevries4575 Thanks for the feedback! I'm trying to figure something out for that which will hopefully be better than just pasting paragraphs. For now I just upload the story file to RUclips for the subtitles so they are 100% accurate. :)
Thanks!
Wow! Thank you so much!!! This is the first Super Thanks on the channel, so thank you even more! :)
greatly done! and it feels complete, I really don't feel a NEED for a part 2, I mean, you could but this feels like a full story
If there is a part 2 then I hope it measures up to this! :)
I enjoyed this story.
I'm glad you liked it, thanks for the comment! :)
Good story
Thanks! Glad you liked it. :)