Edu Skills: Body Paragraph - 1 Jake Thompson; Day - 3; STEP - 6 Writing Made Easy
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It's a beautiful class father Helpful for all oet beginers like me to create a Wondeful body paragraph
My learning experience
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Ref: Mr. Jake Thomson, 56years old
Main body paragraph
**********************
Ask questions
3.Who was admitted?
Mr. Thomson was admitted
2.Where was he admitted?
He was admitted to KMC Hospital
3.When did he admitted?
He was admitted 2 days ago
Compain these into 1 sentence
Mr. Thomson was admitted to KMC Hospital two days ago
6..why did he admitted?
Due to swelling and fluid collection in the right knee
7.How did it happened?
This was the result of a total knee replacement surgery.
8.when did he undergo a total knee replacement surgery?
On 10/12/19
9.Why did he undego total knee replacement surgery?
Due to osteoarthritis
Create a letter by clubbing all datas with flexibility aspects
Ist sentence
************
Mr. Thompson was admitted to KMC Hospital two days ago with swelling and fluid building in his right knee, the result of a total knee replacement surgery +which he underwent on 10/12/19 + due to osteo arthritis.
Second sentence
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10.What was the impact of pain and swelling?
The pain and swelling have severely limited his mobility
His self care activitiy have been significantly compromised.
Second & third sentences
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The resulting pain and swelling have severely limited his mobility. Consequently his self care activities have been significantly compromised.
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Thank you father for this excellent explanation and thank you all panal members
My learning experience is
1.who is the patient -Jake Thompson
2.what is his age-56years old
3.who was admitted- Mr Thompson was admitted
4.where was he admitted-He was admitted to KMC hospital
5.when did he get admitted- He was admitted two days ago
- Mr Thompson was admitted to KMC hospital two days ago
6.why did he get admitted-He was admitted due to swelling and fluid buil-dup in his right knee
7. How did it happen-This was the result of a total knee replacement surgery
8.When did he undergo a total knee replacement surgery-He underwent a total knee replacement surgery on 10/12/19
Why did he undergo a total knee replacement surgery- He underwent a total knee replacement surgery due to osteoarthritis
- Transform the sentence in to compound and complex sentence.
Mr Thompson was admitted to KMC hospital two days ago with swelling and fluid buil-dup in his right knee, the result of a total knee replacement surgery which he underwent on 10/12/19. The resulting pain and swelling have severely limited his mobility. Consequently,his self-care activity have been significantly compromised.
Para1 Purpose expanded.
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My learning experience from this class🌹
How to construct a perfect paragraph 🌹
1,Who is the patient
2,What is his age - Mr Jake Thompson, aged 56
3,who was admitted
Mr Thomas was admitted
4,where he was admitted
He was admitted to KMC hospital
5,when did he get admitted
He was admitted 2days ago
6,why did he get admitted
He was admitted due to swelling and fluid build - up in his right knee
7,How did it happen
This was the result of a total knee replacement surgery
8,when did he undergo a total replacement surgery
He underwent a total knee replacement surgery on 10/12/19
9,Why did he undergo a total knee replacement surgery
He underwent a total knee replacement surgery due to osteoarthritis
Questions 3,4,5 answers combined together
Mr Thomas was admitted to KMC hospital two days ago
6-9 question answers combined together, use the conjunction and connectors to make a perfect sentence
Mr Thomas was admitted to KMC Hospital two days ago with swelling and fluid build-up in his right knee, the rest of a total knee replacement surgery which he underwent on 10/12/19 due to osteoarthritis
What is the impact of pain and swelling
The resulting pain and swelling have severely limited his mobility. Consequently his self care activities have been significantly compromised
Next paragraph - what happend during hospitalization
Next paragraph - How is his condition now
Request assistance - Last paragraph
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Thank you father for another wonderful session
How will organize first paragraph and how can write easy steps.its always amazing session father...
1.who was admitted?.
2.where was he admitted?.
3.when did he admitted?.
Second sentence..
4.why did he got admitted?.
5.How did it happen?.
6.when did he undergo surgery?.
7.why did he undergo surgery?.
# Do not use digits 1-9
Mr Thompson requires your professional assistance for his ongoing difficulties with mobility following recent surgery.
Mr Thompson was admitted to K.MC Hospital two days ago with swelling and fluid buildup in his right knee,the result of a total knee replacement surgery which he underwent on 10/12/19 due to osteoarthritis.The resulting pain and swelling have severely limited his mobility. Consequently, his self-care activities have been significantly compromised.
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Thank You, 💐 Fr Saleen Joseph, for the informative session regarding the writing task: Body Paragraph :1 (day 3)
1)Who is the Patient?
2) What's his age?
🌼 Questions 1 & 2 answers will be the Re-line
3) Who was admitted?
4)Where was he admitted?
5)when did he get admitted?
🌼 Questions 3,4&5 Answers will be 1st sentence
6)Why did he get admitted?
7)How did it happen?=cause?
🌼 Questions 6&7 Answer will be 2nd sentence
8)When did he undergo total knee replacement surgery?
9)Why did he undergo total knee replacement surgery?
🌼 Questions 8&9 Answers will be 3rd sentence
🌼Transform the Sentences into compound and complex sentences🌼
10)What is the impact of pain and swelling?
🌼Answer to question 10 will be 4th sentence
Next (para) what happened during hospitalization?
Next (para) how is his condition now?
Last (para)Request assistance
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Father could you please take a session on day 4 &5 writing task .Thank you
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Thank you Fr. Saleen and Edu-Skills International for properly guiding us.
Step-6 of OET Letter writing:-
Body para-1 -It will be the expansion of the purpose paragraph:
Task:Transform the case notes into sentences-
3. Who was admitted?
4. Where was he admitted?
5. When did he get admitted?
6. Why did he get admitted?
7. How did it happen?
8. When did he undergo total knee replacement surgery?
9. Why did he undergo total knee replacement surgery?
The answers to these questions will be in the first paragraph.
Answers to question 2 were our Re:line.
1. Who is the patient?
2. What is his age?
Then the purpose paragraph:
Mr Thompson requires your professional assistance for his ongoing difficulties with mobility following recent surgery.
Para1:the expansion of purpose para;
Mr. Thompson was admitted to KMC Hospital two days ago with swelling and fluid build-up in his right knee, the result of total knee replacement surgery which he underwent on 10/12/19 due to osteoarthritis. The resulting pain and swelling have severely limited his mobility. Consequently, his self-care activities have been significantly compromised.
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I have a doubt father:
Total knee replacement is a singular noun or a plural noun?
Do we need to write an article before that?
Because for thyroidectomy we use to write a thyroidectomy, but for total thyroidectomy, we write - total thyroidectomy only(without an article)
Kindly clarify....
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Thank you, sir it was a wonderful class, and thank you Goscore Admin team for your effort to arrange this class looking forward for these kind of classes .Thank you sir in this class you cleared my doubt about Re: and how to write the date
much appreciated always
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Thank u father for this wonderful explanation.
Now I understood how to write a body paragraphs.
You have explained it in a simple way..
Thank you so much.
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Thankyou father for the session you have wonderfully explained about how to purpose expanded by asking questions ourselves and how to combine in a sentence.
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Thank you Father for this Wonder full class,may God bless you Father
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Thank you so much father and all admin panel. Father how nicely you explained about purpose expansion .09 question
1.who is the patient
2.what is his age
3.who was admitted
4.where was he admitted
5.When did he admitted
6.why did he admitted
7.How did it happen
8.when did he undergo
9.why did he undergo
Combine
1and2
3,4 &5
6and 7
8and 9
Thank you father
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Thank you father for this amazing explanation regarding body paragraph of letter.this really good and will beneficial to all oet aspirants.once again thank you,,,
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Thank u so much father for this wonderful session.... Its really beneficial for those who struggling to write..... Ask questions and find out answers for that.... Finally we will reach into a main body para.... Magical strategies.... Waiting for next session......
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my learning experience
3.who was admitted?
4.where was he admitted?
5.when did he admitted?
6.why did he get admitted?
7.How did it happen?
8.when did he undergo a total knee replacement surgery?
9.why did he undergo a total knee replacement surgery?
Mr Thompson was admitted to KMC hospital two days ago with swelling and fluid build up in his right knee, the result of a total knee replacement surgery which he underwent on 10/12/19 due to osteoarthritis. The resulting pain and swelling have severly limited his mobility. Consequently, his self - care activities have been significantly compromised.
thank you father.
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Thanks father for another wonderful session...Iam proud of you father
My Learning Experience with the explanation I wrote and commented on 10 September 2022and posted in You tube but unfortunately it is not seen in our comment space is there any reason for that ?
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Thank you father
My learning experience
How to write first body paragraph
1.Who was admitted?
2.where was he admitted?
3.when did he get admitted?
4.why did he gey admitted?
5.How did it happen?
6.when did he undergo total knees replacement surgery?
7.Why did he undergo a total knee replacement surgery?
Mr Thompson was admitted to KMC hospital two days ago with swelling and fluid buildup in his right knee,the result of a total knee replacement surgery which he underwent on10/12/2019 due to osteoarthritis. The resulting pain and swelling have severely limited his mobility. Consequently, his self care activities have been significantly compromised. 🌹
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Thank you father for this session
Simple way to create body para and very clear explanation also
With the answers of this 9 question you made 1 St body para...
Once again Thank you so much father
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Thank you father for your another excellent explanation.From this video I learned how to expand purpose paragraph and also understood how to make compound and complex sentences.
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Thank you father for the first body paragraph sessions
Answering a few questions & connecting these will help to construct the sentence
First sentence
1. Who was admitted
2.where was he admitted
3.when did he admitted (admission date) two days ago ( dont use digits )
Second sentence
1.why did he got admitted
2. How did it happen
3.when did he undergo surgery
4.why did he undergo surgery.
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Thank you father for the wonderful opportunity
My learning experience
Paragraph =1
Transfer the case notes into Sentence
1. Who is the patient? Mr Jake Thompson
2. What is his age?56 years old
Re: Mr Jake Thompson, 56 years old
We can write age▶️ 56 years old
▶️ aged 56
▶️ 56
We have to fix on one format
Best format is 56 years old
3. Who was admitted? Mr Thompson was admitted
4. Where was he admitted? He was admitted to KMC hospital
5.when did he get admitted? He was admitted two days ago
#add these three single sentences into compound sentence
👉Mr Thompson was admitted to KMC hospital two days ago.
6.why did he get admitted? He was admitted due to swelling and fluid build-up in his right knee.
7. How did it happen? (Cause) This was 3result of a total knee replacement surgery
8. When did he undergo a total knee replacement surgery? He underwent a total knee replacement surgery on 10/12/19
9. Why did he undergo total knee replacement surgery? He underwent a total knee replacement surgery due to osteoarthritis.
Transfer the sentence into compound and complex sentence
Sentences 3,4,5 + 6,7
🌺 Mr Thompson was admitted to KMC hospital two days ago with swelling and fluid build-up in his right knee, the result of a total knee replacement surgery.
8. He underwent a total knee replacement surgery on 10/12/19
9. He underwent a total knee replacement surgery due to osteoarthritis
Then make the complex sentence
3,4,5,6,7 + 8,9
👍👉Mr Thompson was admitted to KMC hospital two days ago with swelling and fluid build-up in his right knee, the result of a total knee replacement surgery which he underwent on 10/12/19 due to osteoarthritis.
Next sentence
What is the impact of pain and swelling?
1. The pain and swelling have limited his mobility
2. His self-care activities have been compromised
Add the sentence 👆
The resulting pain and swelling have severely limited his mobility. Consequently, his self-care activities have been significantly compromised.
Add this 👆 and first sentence
🧐👍 Mr Thompson was admitted to KMC hospital two days ago with swelling and fluid build-up in his right knee , the result of a total knee replacement surgery which he underwent on 10/12/19 due to osteoarthritis. The resulting pain and swelling have severely limited his mobility. Consequently, his self-care activities have been significantly compromised.
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Day-3 Step-6 Body paragraph -1
🌹Transform the case notes into a sentences
🌻Re: line
1 Who is the patient?
MrJake Thompson is a patient
2 What's his age?
His age is 56 years old
3 Who was admitted?
Mr Thompson was admitted
4 Where he was admitted?
He was admitted to K M C Hospital( facility)
5 When did he get admitted?
He was admitted two days ago
🌷Mr Thompson was admitted to K M C Hospital two days ago. (3+4+5)
6 Why did he get admitted?
He was admitted due to swelling and fluid build-up in his right knee.
7 How did it happen? (= cause)?
This was the result of a total knee replacement surgery.
🌷He was admitted with swelling and fluid build-up in his right knee, the result of a total knee replacement surgery. (6+7)
8 He underwent a total knee replacement surgery on 10/12/19
9 He underwent a total knee replacement surgery due to osteoarthritis
🌷He underwent a total knee replacement surgery on 10/12/19(cause)= due to osteoarthritis. (8+9)
10 What is the impact of pain and swellin?
The pain and swelling have limited his mobility
His self-care activities have been compromised.
🌷The resulting pain and swelling have severely limited his mobility. Consequently, his self-care activities have been significantly compromised.
🌹Body paragraph Expanded
Mr Thompson was admitted to KMC Hospital two days ago with swelling and fluid build-up in his right knee, the result of a total knee replacement surgery which he underwent on 10/12/19 due to osteoarthritis. The resulting pain and swelling have severely limited his mobility. Consequently, his self-care activities have been significantly compromised.
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First sentence
1)Who was admitted?
2)Where was he admitted?
3)When did he admit it? (admission date)
Second sentence
4)Why did he got admitted?
5)How did it happen?
6)When did he undergo?
7)Why did he undergo?
Mr Thompson was admitted to KMC hospital two days ago with swelling and fluid build up in his right knee, the result of a total knee replacement surgery which he underwent on 10/12/19 due to osteoarthritis.The resulting pain and swelling have severely limited his mobility. Consequently, his self care activities have been significantly compromised.
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1 st body paragraph included
Who was admitted
Where he was admitted
When was admitted
Reason behind the admission
When did he undergone surgery
Cause of surgery
Results of surgery
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Day 3 step 6,Body para 1
Transform the case note into sentences
1,Who is the patient?
2,what is the age?
3,who was admitted?
4,where was he admitted?
5,when did he get admitted?
6,why did he get admitted?
7,how did it happen?
8,when did he undergo a total knee replacement surgery?
9,why did he undergo a total knee replacement surgery?
10,what is the impact of pain and swelling?
WE SHOULD NOT WRITE THE DIGIT 1-9 eg: one
Next para.
What happened during hospitalization
Next para,
How is the condition now?
Next para,
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Thank you father for the wonderful explanation regarding writing first body paragraphs
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🎀Who is the patient:re line
🎀What is his age
🎀Mr jake Thompson, 56yearsold
🎀Admission
🎀 Who was admitted
Mr Thompson was admitted
🎀Where was he admitted
He was admitted to kmc hospital
🎀When did he get admitted
He was admitted two days ago
🎀Why did he get admitted
He was admitted due to swelling and fluid build-up in his right knee
🎀How did it happen
This was the result of total knee replacement surgery
🎀 When did he undergo
He underwent a total knee replacement surgery on 10/12/19
🎀Why did he undergo
He underwent a total knee replacement surgery due to osteoarthritis
🎀All together put in a 1 sentence and repeated sentence can avoid
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1st para ---(after introduction para).
We have to ask these qns and found ans ther consise into one sentence
1.who was admitted
2.where was he admitted
3.when did he admitted.
This will be one sentence.
Next..
4.Why did he get admitted
5.how did it happen.
6.when did he underwent surgery.
7.why did he undergo surgery.
We have to write
Present complaint .... Cause for that complaint...Date of the surgery...Then reason for the surgery.
∆∆if less than 10 digit we need to write in a letter use number
Eg.2....Two
9...Nine.
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🌹My Learning Experience🌹
🌹First body para is the expansion of
Purpose
Answering a few questions & connecting these will help to construct the sentence
First sentence
1. Who was admitted
2.where was he admitted
3.when did he admitted (admission date)
🌹Second sentence🌹
1.why did he got admitted
2. How did it happen
3.when did he undergo surgery
4.why did he undergo surgery.
Donot use digits 1-9
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▶️ I would like to express my extreme gratitude towards Fr. Saleen and the admin panel for this session. From this video I could understand how can I construct sentences and connect them by using conjunction and other connectors
♦️ * Re line;
1. Who is the patient?
2. What is his age?
Eg;
Re:Mr Jake Thompson,56 years old
Re: Mr Jake Thompson, aged 56
Re:Mr Jake Thompson, 56
♦️ 10 questions and answers to build up first paragraph.
1. Who was admitted?
Mr Thompson was admitted
2.where was he admitted?
He was admitted to kmc hospital
3. When did he get admitted?
He was admitted two days ago
4.why did he get admitted?
He was admitted due to swelling and fluid build up in his right knee
5. How did it happen ?
This was the result of a total knee replacement surgery
6. When did he undergo a total knee replacement surgery?
He underwent a total knee replacement surgery on 10/12/2019
7. Why did he undergo a total knee replacement surgery?
He underwent a total knee replacement surgery due to osteoarthritis
8. What isthe impact of pain and swelling ?
The resulting pain and swelling have severely limited his mobility. Consequently, his self care activities have been significantly compromised.
All these answers can be clubbed together and make one or two sentence
Like this:
🔺️Mr Thompson was admitted to kmc hospital two days ago with swelling and fluid build_up in his right knee,the result of a total knee replacement surgery which he underwent on 10/12/2019 due to osteoarthritis. The resulting pain and swelling have severely limited his mobility. Consequently, his self care activities have been significantly compromised 🔻
⭕️ Digits from 1 to 9 can be written in words. ♥️
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Thank you father for the wonderful section about Bodyparagraph1
It is purpose expanded
Ask ourselves questions(who was admitted, where admitted, when admitted)
Combine jointly the answers to these three questions we get one single sense
Me Thompson was admitted to KMC Hospital two days ago
🍓Again ask questions like (why, How did, when did he undergo, and why did he undergo)
Combine these questions and answers we get
I Thompson was admitted to KMC Hospital two days ago with swelling and fluid buildup in his right knee, the result of total knee replacement surgery, which he underwent on 10/12/2019 due to Osteoarthritis
🍓Never write digits (1to9 to)write to words
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Thank you so much father 🌹🌹🌹🌹 Now I got an idea about how to write the first body para.🌷🌷🌷
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Achaaa, u r great... What a beautiful sentence and structure... 🙏🏻♥️♥️♥️
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Thank you father
Learning experience:
Ask questions and write down the answers
🌼Re:
1 Who is the patient?
2 what is his age?
🌼Body para 1:
3 who was admitted?
Mr Jake's Thompson was admitted
4 where was he admitted?
He was admitted to KMC hospital
5 when did he admitted?
He was admitted two days ago
6 why did he admitted?
He was admitted due to swelling and fluid build up in his right knee
7 How did it happened?
This was the result of a total knee replacement surgery
8 when did he undergo surgery?
He underwent a total knee replacement surgery on 10/12/19
9 why did he undergo a total replacement surgery
He underwent a total knee replacement surgery due to osteoarthritis.
10 what is the impact of pain and swelling?
The resulting pain and swelling have severly limited his mobility, consequently his self care activities have been significantly compromised.
Thank you father for the explanation of paragraph structure and sequence
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Thank you, father, for the video about body paragraph. I learned to ask questions like who was admitted ,where was he admitted, when did he admitted, why did he get admitted etc. find answer for the questions and combine the answer to make paragraph .In Peter Dunbar case note, for such case note how to ask questions. there is no hospital admission
Thank you so much father for your wonderful explanation about how to write first paragraph for a letter which is the expanation purpose paragraph.
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Thank you father well explained 👏
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After watching this video we are able to write an *****adipoli**** body Para..... Thank you acha ans my dear admin panel God bless you all
Thank you for the wonderful explanation.My learning experience
1- how to transform case notes into sentences
2- how to join sentences together
3- Do not use 1 to 9 numerical forms
Father one doubt admitted on 10/12/19 or we have to write 10/12/2019
Both expressions are cool..... however 2nd option is better
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Thank you Father for this Day 3 video regarding the body para 1 on the basis of Jake Thompson's letter.Here we got a clear explanation of simple sentences to compound and complex.The way used to conscie with clarity of seven bullet point to one complex sentence,really embarrassing. Thank you.
Mr Thompson was admitted to kmc hospital two days ago with swelling and fluid buildup in his right knee the result of a total knee replacement surgery which he underwent on 10 December 2022 due to osteoarthritis.The resulting pain and swelling have severely limited his mobility. Consequently, his self care activities have been significantly compromised. ( Thank u fr for wonderful explanation )
Thank you Father for such a great session about writing body paragraph-1.
My learning experience: Case note: Mr Jake Thompson
For Re: line: ask two questions:
1. Who was the patient?
2. What is his age?
Answers:
1. Mr Jake Thompson
2.56 years old
Combine together: Mr Jake Thompson, 56 years old (preferred)
Mr Jake Thompson aged 56
Mr Jake Thompson
For body paragraph-1
3. Who was admitted?
4. Where was he admitted?
5. When did he admitted?
6. .Why did he admitted?
7. How did it happen (=cause)?
8. When did he undergo a total knee replacement surgery?
9. Why did he undergo a total knee replacement surgery?
Answers:
3. Mr Thompson was admitted
4. He was admitted to KMC Hospital
5. He was admitted two days ago
6. He was admitted due to swelling and fluid build-up in his right knee
7. This was the result of a total knee replacement surgery
8. He underwent a total knee replacement surgery on 10/12/19
9. He underwent a total knee replacement surgery due to osteoarthritis.
Combine these sentences to get complex and compound sentence
3.Mr Thompson was admitted
4.He was admitted to KMC Hospital Mr Thompson was admitted to KMC Hospital two days ago
5.He was admitted two days ago
6.He was admitted due to swelling and fluid build-up in his right knee
7. This was the result of a total knee replacement surgery
8. He underwent a total knee replacement surgery on 10/12/19
9. He underwent a total knee replacement surgery due to osteoarthritis.
Answer: Mr Thompson was admitted to KMC Hospital two days ago with swelling and fluid build-up in his right knee ,the result of a total knee replacement surgery which he underwent on 10/12/19 due to osteoarthritis.
Body para -1 next sentence
Questions: What is the impact of pain and swelling?
Answer:@The pain and swelling have limited his mobility
@His self-care activities have been compromised------The resulting pain and swelling have severely limited his mobility. Consequently, his self-café activities have been significantly compromised.
BODY PARAGRAPGH ONE
Mr Thompson was admitted to KMC Hospital two days ago with swelling and fluid build-up in his right knee, the result of a total knee replacement surgery which he underwent on 10/12/19 due to osteoarthritis. The resulting pain and swelling have severely limited his mobility. Consequently, his self-café activities have been significantly compromised.
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Thank you father for the good session
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Thank you Father.i understood who whom which what we need to focus in the first para.
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Who is the patient?
What is the age?
Realine the sentence
1Mr.Jake Thompson,56 years old.
2.Who was admitted?
3.Mr.Thompson was admitted.
4.Where was he admitted?
He was admitted KMC hospital.
5.When did he get admitted?
He was admitted two days ago.
Realine these answers
Mr.Thompson was admitted to KMC hospital two days ago.
6.why did he get admitted?
He was admitted due to swelling and fluid build-up in his right knee.
7. How did it happen?
This was the result of total knee replacement surgery.
8.When did he under go total replacement surgery?
He underwent a total knee replacement surgery on 10/12/19
9. Why did he undergo a total knee replacement surgery?
He underwent a total knee replacement surgery due to osteoarthritis
Transform the admission into compound into complex sentence.
He was admitted with swelling and fluid build-up in his right knee,the result of a total knee replacement surgery.
He underwent total knee replacement surgery on 10/12/19 due to osteoarthritis.
This is the first body paragraph.
10.what is the impact of pain and swelling?
_ The pain and swelling have limited his mobility.
_ His self-care activities have been compromised. You can write these sentences in to
The resulting pain and swelling have severely limited his mobility. Consequently, his self care activities have been significantly compromised.
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Great father thank you so much 🙏. purpose -who requires assistance,from whom,for what. First paragraph who was admitted , where,when and why and what are the main causes behind the present condition as well as how that affected the condition of the client should be write in this paragraph with consciousness and preciseness
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THANK YOU FATHER FOR EXPLAINING ABOUT THIS LETTER PARA1
Who was admitted?
2)Where was he admitted?
3)When did he admit it? (admission date)
Second sentence
4)Why did he got admitted?
5)How did it happen?
6)When did he undergo?
7)Why did he undergo?
Mr Thompson was admitted to KMC hospital two days ago with swelling and fluid build up in his right knee, the result of a total knee replacement surgery which he underwent on 10/12/19 due to osteoarthritis.The resulting pain and swelling have severely limited his mobility. Consequently, his self care activities have been significantly compromised.
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Thank you father for the detailed explanation 🙏🙏
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Thank you so much father.My learning experience from this vedio,
DAY 3 : BODY PARA 1( PURPOSE EXPANDED )
🌹1)Who is the patient?
2)What is his age?
RE: Mr. Jake Thompson, 56 years
🌹Admission
3)Who is admitted?
A) Mr Thompson was admitted.
4) Where he was admitted?
A) He was admitted to K M C hospital.
5) When he did get admitted?
A) He was admitted two days back.
6) Why did he get admitted?
A) He was admitted due to swelling and fluid build-up in his right knee.
7)How did it happen?
A) This was the result of a Total Knee Replacement surgery.
8)When did he under go a TKR surgery?
A) He underwent a TKR surgery on 10/12/19
9)Why did he undergo a TKR surgery?
A) He underwent a TKR surgery due to Osteoarthritis.
🌹What is the impact of pain and swelling?
🍬The pain and swelling have severely limited his mobility.
🍬His self- care activities have been significantly compromised.
BODY PARA 1
Mr Thompson was admitted to K M C hospital two days ago with swelling and fluid build-up in his right knee, the result of a Total Knee Replacement surgery, which he underwent on 10/12/19 due to Osteoarthritis. The resulting pain and swelling have severely limited his mobility. Consequently, his self- care acti😠have been significantly compromised.
Thank you Father for explaining how to construct a body para1 or purpose expanded Paragraph amazingly. My learning experience is
Step 6,
body para 1
Transform the casenote into sentences
Re:Mr Jake Thompson, 56years old
3) who was admitted?
Mr Thompson was admitted
4)where he was admitted?
He admitted to KMC Hospital
5) when he was admitted?
He was admitted to kmc hospital two days ago
6) why did he get admitted?
He was admitted due to swelling & fluid buildup in his right knee
7) How did it happen?
This was the result of total knee replacement surgery
8)When did he undergo surgery?
He underwent total knee replacement surgery on 10/12/19
9)Why did he undergo surgery?
He underwent total knee replacement surgery due to osteoarthritis
10) what is the impact of pain and swelling?
The pain and swelling have limited his mobility
His self care activities have been compromised
3+4+5=Mr Thompson was admitted to kmc hospital two days ago
6+7= He was admitted with swelling and fluid buildup in his right knee the result of a total knee replacement surgery
8+9=He underwent a total knee replacement surgery on 10/12/19 due to osteoarthritis.
10 The resulting pain and swelling have severely limited his mobility. Consequently, his self care activities have been compromised.
3+4+5+6+7+8+9+10
Mr Thompson was admitted to kmc Hospital two days ago with swelling and fluid buildup in his right knee, the result of a total knee replacement surgery which he underwent on 10/12/2019 due to osteoarthritis. The resulting pain and swelling have severely limited his mobility. Consequently, self care activities have been significantly compromised. Next para- what happened during hospitalization.
Attended zoom section .amazing, thank you father for the beautiful teaching. Hope you will take the next section soon.pls take all the letter recently posted in main telegram group.
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Thank you father for writing tips with questions and answers, 1 who was admitted?..... 2 2where he was admitted? 3 when did he admitted? (Donot use digits). second sentence_4 why did he got admitted? .. ........ 5 How did it happen? 6when did he under go surgery? 7 why did he undergo surgery?
Hi...Father!
Thankyou for this uploaded video...A very easy way to understand how to construct a A1 first body para.
Ask questions:
🌹Who was admitted
🌹Where was he admitted
🌹When did he get admitted
🌹Why did he get admitted
🌹How did it happened (cause)
🌹When did he undergo a total knee replacement surgery
🌹Why did he undergo a total knee replacement surgery
👉Transform d sentences into a compound n complex sentences.
eg.Mr.Thompsan was admitted to KMC Hospital two days ago with swelling and fluid build-up in his right knee which he underwent on 10/12/19 due to osteoarthritis.The resulting pain and swelling have severely affected his mobility. Consequently,his self-care activities have been significantly compromised..
👆PURPOSE EXPANDED.
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