Ok, my computer speakers blew up when I started listening to it, so I would lower the DB levels. I would fade some of the sound, and also add some more too. Other than that, it was a decent piece.
I like the concept of the breathing in the beginning a lot; though it didn't quite match his mouth that is a quick fix! I think the addition of music would've aired out the slight silence but other then that I enjoyed it good job!!
The breathing at the beginning is shown when you see his mouth is closed. either removing the breathing or keeping it at the very beginning would totally make it better! Sound was a little loud, maybe it was just my volume though lol. Some fading and etc. in the city sounds and etc. would totally make it more natural. Good work!
Ok, my computer speakers blew up when I started listening to it, so I would lower the DB levels. I would fade some of the sound, and also add some more too. Other than that, it was a decent piece.
I like the concept of the breathing in the beginning a lot; though it didn't quite match his mouth that is a quick fix! I think the addition of music would've aired out the slight silence but other then that I enjoyed it good job!!
The breathing at the beginning is shown when you see his mouth is closed. either removing the breathing or keeping it at the very beginning would totally make it better! Sound was a little loud, maybe it was just my volume though lol. Some fading and etc. in the city sounds and etc. would totally make it more natural. Good work!
I really liked it all, especially the opening, but there were some sound effects that were off by a few seconds. Overall, good job.
Really great, I would just adjust the timing of some parts and lower the db levels, but other than that it's good!
a few of the sounds are really load but its really good
8/10
Some off-time sound effects, but otherwise an incredibly solid project.