"My father punished me when I talked to ghosts" Creepypasta | Scary Stories

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  • Опубликовано: 17 ноя 2024

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  • @Darksomnium
    @Darksomnium  4 года назад +83

    Hope everyone is having a good week! let me know what you think of the story and remember to like and share ! (if you want to) it helps the channel alot! see you tomorrow!

    • @evisluE
      @evisluE 4 года назад +2

      First to reply

    • @beanbagchair5832
      @beanbagchair5832 4 года назад

      @Elusive first to reply to your reply

    • @Darksomnium
      @Darksomnium  4 года назад +3

      @@beanbagchair5832 first to reply to your reply

    • @beanbagchair5832
      @beanbagchair5832 4 года назад

      @The Dark Somnium you got me there. *replies to your reply*

    • @ehabfml9916
      @ehabfml9916 4 года назад +1

      that was sooo unexpected, good story tho

  • @senseidames9972
    @senseidames9972 4 года назад +23

    Wow! I started to see the twist with the father being a horrible man kidnapping the girls but the fact that he could see the whole time floored me.

  • @gdtestqueen
    @gdtestqueen 4 года назад +174

    Man...The ones about human monsters are always the the scariest!!!
    Just found you a week ago and you are my new ultimate narrator...hands down!! Thanks for keeping us sane during isolation!

    • @Darksomnium
      @Darksomnium  4 года назад +7

      thank you so much! :D

    • @luciellawliet
      @luciellawliet 4 года назад +3

      That’s because all the real monsters are human

  • @stephenstevens6573
    @stephenstevens6573 4 года назад +129

    This one was REALLY good...the twist really caught me off guard! It was like a sledgehammer! Wow!! As usual, the emotion in your voice was incredible...almost like guiding a blind man to see....thank you!! Bravo,!

  • @livent7514
    @livent7514 4 года назад +31

    “There is no need for a supernatural source of evil. Man alone are capable of every wickedness.” Joseph Conrad

  • @mazda787car
    @mazda787car 4 года назад +55

    I am always just amazed by these stories I can never predict how it's gonna end. Always loving the narration you present

  • @kurtale3363
    @kurtale3363 4 года назад +50

    Love the video, haven’t even finished it but I already know it is and will be amazing, you get me through really hard times, I enjoy listening to your videos as a excuse on why I can’t sleep at night. Staying up late at night seeing the images flood in my head that are being drawn up through your narrations. Although they spook me and make me paranoid, it always has this warm and safe like feeling, thank you for everything.

    • @Darksomnium
      @Darksomnium  4 года назад +4

      thank you so much! im honored :)

  • @shio5234
    @shio5234 2 года назад +1

    oh god, the realization of what the father was doing, made my stomach turn. what a gripping story

  • @noahmueller709
    @noahmueller709 4 года назад +5

    Very well written one. Quite a rare gem of a Creepypasta you dont see many like it.

  • @skyetonbo1011
    @skyetonbo1011 4 года назад +17

    *It's like Schroedinger's cat except with ghosts or... People 😂. Wonderful story. 😍*

  • @iamhusainrizvi5477
    @iamhusainrizvi5477 4 года назад +31

    Love from India bruh..
    Stay safe out there... We will win against this pandemic!

  • @declanedmison5442
    @declanedmison5442 4 года назад +33

    Damn ghosts. Always a hassle.

    • @declanedmison5442
      @declanedmison5442 4 года назад +5

      You know how hard it is to banish a demon or ghost? Gotta learn Latin, gotta but a bunch of salt, gotta lace the damn salt on all the window sills. Then you gotta paint the pentagrams...

    • @beanbagchair5832
      @beanbagchair5832 4 года назад +3

      Hate when that happens. Every other thursday

    • @declanedmison5442
      @declanedmison5442 4 года назад +2

      Chips Ahoooey Like, man, do you know my salt expenses?

    • @declanedmison5442
      @declanedmison5442 4 года назад +2

      Oh, and also
      Hello.

    • @Darksomnium
      @Darksomnium  4 года назад +6

      damn ghosts >:V

  • @raymondsheehan5847
    @raymondsheehan5847 4 года назад +15

    The girl voice actor sounds like the girl from the “my final call as a police dispatcher scarred me”

  • @wolfman7284
    @wolfman7284 3 года назад +1

    Very well written and narrated. The author took things in a different direction and it turned out really well.

  • @beanstalker2123
    @beanstalker2123 4 года назад +51

    There weren't any ghosts. Those were the kids his dad kidnapped.

    • @gillyp
      @gillyp 4 года назад +19

      Francis Talastas The thing is the father kept them hidden so he doesn’t know if the kids he talk to escaped from the basement or whatever and then the dad took them back downstairs when he found them or if they were the ghosts of the children after they where killed.

    • @HippieInHeart
      @HippieInHeart 2 года назад +6

      @@gillyp well the last girl asked mc for help, and mc unlocked the front door to get her to leave. and the last girl was also the one that escaped and called the police. so i think all the "ghosts" the mc talked to were still alive at that point. that's also why the so-called "father" told mc to never talk to the ghosts. because he knew that they weren't ghosts and he was afraid that they might reveal something.

  • @royleyva197
    @royleyva197 4 года назад +3

    That twist! Oh my gosh.

  • @Alfonzo2410
    @Alfonzo2410 4 года назад +13

    Just amazing! You have become my favorite narrator since the phantom lybrarian stop making videos. A lot of respect to your work, narrative and the effort you put in every video, thank you! 🖤🥂

    • @debbieheath7838
      @debbieheath7838 4 года назад

      Alfonzo Cavazos The Dark Somnium is stellar!! He makes constant improvements, which somehow elevate the game yet again!! Oh man, I miss Phantom Librarian SO much too! I know awhile back, Killer Orange Cat, I believe it was, said Phantom was doing okay. I surely hope he's well these days!! You take care!!

  • @wintermoonomen
    @wintermoonomen 8 месяцев назад +1

    Great short with a nice twist. Enjoyed the narration very much and as always the music and effects that make your videos that much more realistic and enjoyable.

  • @TheTmieBandit
    @TheTmieBandit 4 года назад +2

    I cant get over how you find such amazing stories, just blows my mind. Your narrations make my work day that much better, and I save up all your new uploads for when I have work so I can listen to them all week in the back. Honestly the narrations are a grade above horror movies in my mind, truly amazing.

  • @Blaz3rr
    @Blaz3rr 4 года назад +6

    I love the music you compose so much. it's all so tailored to the story EVERY.TIME. It gets me, I love it all ronnie. Great job as always!

  • @SadMach1n3
    @SadMach1n3 Год назад

    I started suspecting the dad was up to what he was but the twist with the son and the very last line of the story were pure gold

  • @SomaShiori
    @SomaShiori 4 года назад +2

    Omg yes!!!! I read this one months ago and was hoping upon hoping you'd find it and read it...heck while I was reading it was in your voice and I thought it was a perfect story for you because since you do alot with music it would add even more to the story!!!!!

  • @mattcrandall5045
    @mattcrandall5045 3 года назад +1

    My guess is he heard the kidnapped people while they were alive. He heard the girl, and then his dad was suddenly dying. I'm assuming he either heard the people trying to call out for help or escape while still alive

  • @abhishekbhandari8270
    @abhishekbhandari8270 4 года назад +1

    Wow, quite a gripping story with an unexpected twist & ending. Always looking forward to more such " encounters "

  • @GreenShuri
    @GreenShuri 4 года назад +2

    Literally had goosebumps at the end.

  • @tarawillis5450
    @tarawillis5450 4 года назад +1

    This story made me cry. Wow. So powerful and heart wrenching. Thank you so much for sharing it. ♥️

  • @jjgonzalez7703
    @jjgonzalez7703 4 года назад +4

    This was one of the best stories I've heard

  • @scolar_visari
    @scolar_visari 4 года назад +2

    My guy, your voice is so soothing and calming, it is making me fall asleep. Also, still waiting for part 4 on "Why We never went back to the moon."

  • @sagetscippio8878
    @sagetscippio8878 4 года назад +3

    Man, this was really good, especially for a short read!!🤔👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👍🏿👌🏿💯 #GreatStory #WellDone

  • @vaughanbaker5498
    @vaughanbaker5498 4 года назад +4

    Wooo this is gonna be a good one I can feel it! Thank you so much for your effort and hard work and everything else my man!

  • @cameomiddleton79
    @cameomiddleton79 4 года назад +2

    Omg this is a great story!!!! What a surprise ending for sure!! 💙💙💙💙

  • @benullom2301
    @benullom2301 4 года назад +1

    Great story. This one could almost be based on true events. Very creepy.

  • @Kaosaur
    @Kaosaur 4 года назад +1

    Wow, this story really caught me off guard. Great great great story. Chilling.

  • @cassieg.5742
    @cassieg.5742 4 года назад +1

    I loved this sad , but scary story, thanks ❤️Dark Somnium. Stay safe and well.👻🙀

  • @mrrandom3064
    @mrrandom3064 4 года назад +1

    Another wild story. And wild narrating skillz by Sir Somnium!👍

  • @hauntedcell
    @hauntedcell 4 года назад +1

    Finally, I can sleep. Thank you man. Great narration and keep up the good work!

  • @TheWye
    @TheWye 4 года назад +1

    Great story and excellent narration as usual, man. And thanks for continuing to entertain us during these lockdowns!

  • @fernandoalvarez6260
    @fernandoalvarez6260 4 года назад +1

    I don't want to shade Dr. Creepen, CreepsMcPasta, and Mr. Creeps, but personally I think you have the best narrating voice. It doesn't change much but the background music really captures the suspense very well. Every ending is crisp. After the last sentence, the music (which I love btw) immediately starts playing. Absolutely satisfying and wonderful!

    • @Darksomnium
      @Darksomnium  4 года назад +1

      Thank you so much, I'm so honored :) i write all the music myself to try to fit it to the feeling of the story

  • @leekendall7155
    @leekendall7155 4 года назад +3

    Absolutely bloody awesome story man. So good to hear your voice used for such a good tale. Does ECrowe have anything else to submit? Thank you for the ride⚡

  • @jeffreyrivera3669
    @jeffreyrivera3669 4 года назад +1

    Loved it! Scary good ;). That plot twist near the ending was the icing on the cake for this story. Great work as usual, and hope you’ve been doing well and keeping safe :)

  • @conwaydante4155
    @conwaydante4155 4 года назад

    I honestly didn't see that twist coming. nice!

  • @missdolittle
    @missdolittle 4 месяца назад

    Outstanding!!!! Relatable, awesome twists and extremely captivating!

  • @mitchellwintrow4495
    @mitchellwintrow4495 Месяц назад

    Whoa! This one was so good. What a twist at the end. Amazing with dude!

  • @glxssy8037
    @glxssy8037 4 года назад +1

    I love your work so much. You're so unique and put so much passion into these narrations. Thank you kind sir

  • @beanbagchair5832
    @beanbagchair5832 4 года назад +12

    Notification squad! Also it’s like 1:17am so insomnia, here I come!

  • @tracioday3778
    @tracioday3778 4 года назад +1

    Oohhhh that was wicked good!!!! Why hasn't this concept been turned into a movie yet! Stephen King would be the perfect person to write this. He is one of the greatest descriptive writer's ever. Its one of the reasons I love his work so much BC he leaves no stone unturned in regards to setting a scene. You can utterly emerse yourself in his writing BC he leads your minds eye thru every crevice of the plot. I wonder if its possible to somehow share this video to one of his social media accounts and pitch the idea of him writing a movie script. God that would be amazing.

  • @Elisabeth-tq3jr
    @Elisabeth-tq3jr 4 года назад +1

    The way you described what it’s like being blind was interesting. Did you talk to any blind people before writing?

  • @crissantos44
    @crissantos44 4 года назад +2

    This short story was amazing!

  • @lemonpeaches8314
    @lemonpeaches8314 4 года назад

    Oh my god that's the BEST story I've EVER HEARD holy hecc

  • @Mikoto13
    @Mikoto13 4 года назад +1

    Haha I had a feeling it would end like that! It was really good!!

  • @GloriousZote
    @GloriousZote 4 года назад +1

    called it when the girl said his father was dying - was way too suspicious how the father supposedly knew so much about "ghosts", though I admit the blindness being all a lie didn't get to me

  • @angelinadavenport495
    @angelinadavenport495 4 года назад +2

    This was a great one! Loved it.

  • @amylooneychaoticsacrifice2585
    @amylooneychaoticsacrifice2585 4 года назад +2

    I freaking LIVE for your uploads!!!! The stories are amazing, and your voice.... just omg!!! It's got it's own personality going on...... though, Sometimes I have weird dreams because your voice is soothing and helps me fall asleep, then whichever story I'm listening to just kinda jumps overboard and swims for my brain lol. (I'm not the only one right?) You and and a select few other youtubers are keeping me somewhat same during all this! So a HUGE THANK YOU!!!!

    • @NajxxTrebla
      @NajxxTrebla 3 года назад

      Just gonna reply to this 10month old post just to say, you we're indeed not the only one haha.

  • @lisadgingersnaps9843
    @lisadgingersnaps9843 4 года назад +1

    Oh, I've heard this one before. You did an excellent job with it D.S.!

  • @grim2029
    @grim2029 4 года назад +2

    This is what I believe. I believe the rest of the victims his dad killed were ghost while the last remaining survivor that was alive was Sarah.

  • @AngelMartinez-me1bf
    @AngelMartinez-me1bf 4 года назад +2

    That fuckin ending Jesus

  • @megamovieman101
    @megamovieman101 2 года назад +1

    This is literally Insidious the Last Key

  • @jamiepowers3978
    @jamiepowers3978 4 года назад +3

    oh my god that is awful what his dad did to those little girls,

    • @rtten239
      @rtten239 4 года назад +1

      M8 I would say dying is better than being tortured and having Yuit eyes sewed shut

  • @SYEDA84
    @SYEDA84 4 года назад

    Stories I want to listen all the time.

  • @shizuoushio846
    @shizuoushio846 4 года назад +1

    This is a wonderful story

  • @emilywest5991
    @emilywest5991 4 года назад

    Such a good one! Love your voice for this per usual

  • @willowsullivan6121
    @willowsullivan6121 4 года назад

    Great stories! When your locked in.

  • @1ronw1ll78
    @1ronw1ll78 4 года назад +1

    Wow. That's some heavy shit right there. Great story!

  • @tanniestienie7833
    @tanniestienie7833 4 года назад

    Very cool and terrifying! Thanks!

  • @JustShova
    @JustShova 4 года назад +2

    This was good, like, really good...

  • @DocBree13
    @DocBree13 4 года назад +1

    well,... damn! I’m speechless

  • @JuniOrqw12
    @JuniOrqw12 4 года назад +1

    Holy moly what a plot twist

  • @SkarlettRage
    @SkarlettRage 2 года назад

    I was on the edge of my seat trying to figure out what was going on with his face and eyes. He never says what the paramedic was actually doing.. unless I missed something..?
    "Let me find out the protagonist had his eyes sewn shut by his dad since infancy."

  • @nonatie8514
    @nonatie8514 4 года назад +1

    What the hell? No mention of what his father did to his face and why he blinded him by sewing them shut? Was it a mask ? Did he kill the boy's mom? So many things that are unclear and just left hanging. Good story line and great narration. Story could use some clarification, I think. Or maybe I am just missing it?

  • @beaucrxwsxn6912
    @beaucrxwsxn6912 4 года назад

    This story was amazing

  • @anonnona4591
    @anonnona4591 4 года назад

    fuck i stuff like this i have a new respect to creepypasta commentary, you deserve so much more subs dude

  • @mandyfair9082
    @mandyfair9082 4 года назад

    Excellent story!!!

  • @tutoszn
    @tutoszn 4 года назад

    THIS STORY TRIPPED ME OUT!

  • @missladybob4208
    @missladybob4208 4 года назад

    LOVE The Story, That Music That Plays at the end of the video is awesome I love it , I think it's my. Favorite I also love I Think it's The 5th. Trompet , I Really enjoy Your music it can be Haunting at Times

  • @skelley4081
    @skelley4081 4 года назад

    Oooh. This was a good short story.

  • @randominternetguy1499
    @randominternetguy1499 4 года назад +2

    Personally I think it was a tad bit predictable from the beginning (for me at least), but it was mostly good none the less, and the actuall narration of it was great as always with your voice and the background effects and music. Also one question, what is the name of the music in the very end of the video? I cant seem to find it but its really good.

    • @chrisgonzalez6816
      @chrisgonzalez6816 4 года назад

      Been looking for that track too! Cant seem to find it!

  • @shugoibaka
    @shugoibaka 4 года назад

    Just found your channel. Guess what I'll be listening to for the next couple weeks lol

  • @masterjeephightower8124
    @masterjeephightower8124 4 года назад

    OMG that was awesome I'm sorry that I haven't been leaving comments lately I've been so busy working but I do listen to you ,rom and sprint voices I hope you and rom are staying safe as for me I'm a essential worker and im stress the fuck out but I do listen to all your vids and I've turned on some folks at my job shout out to all of those who like me can't stay home we risk our lives so everyone can have things they need

  • @LWolf12
    @LWolf12 3 года назад

    Well, I didn't expect that.

  • @mishanelson1677
    @mishanelson1677 4 года назад +1

    I just love your stories. And the way you narrate them is perfect! You're the best!

  • @TheLegend-wt7yx
    @TheLegend-wt7yx 2 года назад

    well done once again !!

  • @banjobanjington2344
    @banjobanjington2344 4 года назад +1

    Holy shit that was actually creepy!!!!

  • @dealofnight2027
    @dealofnight2027 4 года назад +2

    You have a very somber voice my friend, perfect for these readings. Keep up the good work! I'm always up for your msreations.

  • @nicholasmattson7988
    @nicholasmattson7988 4 года назад

    Thanks for this story love them all I’m a huge supporter

  • @richardsvorhees9542
    @richardsvorhees9542 4 года назад

    Great Story

  • @citrusceleste9798
    @citrusceleste9798 4 года назад +1

    wow,,, you have a great reading voice!! ahhh!!

  • @lisajallchin
    @lisajallchin 2 года назад

    Great twist.

  • @DemonCreep
    @DemonCreep 4 года назад

    This story is super sad :(

  • @noaaaahhh6899
    @noaaaahhh6899 4 года назад

    That was so good!!

  • @jamiepowers3978
    @jamiepowers3978 4 года назад +1

    Yay, l am so glad he can see,

  • @bethechange4401
    @bethechange4401 4 года назад

    Another good one☺️

  • @unicornmistress9414
    @unicornmistress9414 4 года назад

    I'm speechless.

  • @ossybe6530
    @ossybe6530 4 года назад

    When you activate your Sharigan.

  • @rtten239
    @rtten239 4 года назад

    Short and harsh how I like it

  • @jacoblively4790
    @jacoblively4790 3 месяца назад

    Holy crap that was good

  • @tunehyster1
    @tunehyster1 4 года назад

    Wonderful!

  • @ahmadghazal6063
    @ahmadghazal6063 4 года назад

    Man that was sad 😥

  • @kielbasathief9576
    @kielbasathief9576 4 года назад

    Good story

  • @muzinka2c987
    @muzinka2c987 3 года назад

    Just loved it in 2021 ❤️

  • @kittybill1019
    @kittybill1019 4 года назад

    Hi Dark! how are you? how's quarantine treating you?