I like it so far! I recently started my own mlp infection, may I suggest something? You could be a little more cleaner with your editing. It's a small detail but can make a huge difference! You could also slow down some parts so u don't have to rush to read it. That's all I have to say! I look forward to seeing more!
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My sis has a spot on here nose 😂😂😂
What about Spike?
Will he survive this AU?
I like it so far! I recently started my own mlp infection, may I suggest something?
You could be a little more cleaner with your editing. It's a small detail but can make a huge difference!
You could also slow down some parts so u don't have to rush to read it.
That's all I have to say! I look forward to seeing more!
Ok!