MY ACCEPTED NYU ESSAY

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  • Опубликовано: 25 авг 2019
  • This is the essay that got me into NYU! I applied for the TISCH Interactive Media Arts Program and received the Tisch Scholarship! Watch this video to hear my accepted essay and TIPS for the "Why Us" essay! *The requirements for the NYU essay have since changed*
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  • @DyllenNellis
    @DyllenNellis  Год назад

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  • @yashwantashok8589
    @yashwantashok8589 2 года назад

    thank you so much i am also thinking for studying abroad and i think NYU is the best option for me and my bussiness choices and mindset

  • @aaronyeung7074
    @aaronyeung7074 3 года назад +1

    Thank you !

  • @zhechenzhao8942
    @zhechenzhao8942 4 года назад +19

    Thank you soooo much for these videos and resources!! They are so helpful for me as I have similar interdisciplinary interests too! Just curious, have you compared Interactive Media Arts with Integrated Digital Media in NYU's Tandon School of Engineering when you were applying? I think they are very similar and could not decide which one I should apply to this fall.

    • @DyllenNellis
      @DyllenNellis  4 года назад +2

      You're welcome! I did have the same question when applying. Based on what I remember, I chose the one in Tisch rather than in Tandon because it seemed a little more artistic while the Tandon one was a little more techy. I recommend taking a look at their websites and coursework though to determine which would be the best for you!

    • @zhechenzhao8942
      @zhechenzhao8942 4 года назад

      @@DyllenNellis Thanks!!

  • @thechannelofall398
    @thechannelofall398 4 года назад +10

    starts at 0:34

  • @principegeno2559
    @principegeno2559 4 года назад +8

    How many words was your essay

  • @dispygyro8817
    @dispygyro8817 4 года назад +31

    Hi! I am applying for NYU for Fall 2021 and I loved your essay! Would it be fine if I get your opinion on my NYU essay? Thank you!

    • @DyllenNellis
      @DyllenNellis  4 года назад +4

      Hey!! I currently charge $25 per essay for comments & revision. Feel free to dm me on Instagram @imdyllen if you want to set this up!

    • @dispygyro8817
      @dispygyro8817 4 года назад

      Dyllen Nellis Oh ok thank you!

    • @robloxnews2659
      @robloxnews2659 3 года назад +23

      @@dispygyro8817 aak ur counselor they do it for free

    • @daivyashah4555
      @daivyashah4555 2 года назад

      did u get in??

    • @OneAutumn-xb4ok
      @OneAutumn-xb4ok 2 года назад

      dispygyro did you get in?

  • @fitrisalampessy7087
    @fitrisalampessy7087 4 года назад +7

    How many words were in your essay? I am currently writing mine and am stuck at about 200

  • @belori.e
    @belori.e 3 года назад

    You wrote an essay for every different university/college

    • @DyllenNellis
      @DyllenNellis  3 года назад +2

      Yes, depending on what supplementals they required. But I could reuse some depending on the prompt.

  • @christianmugisha7933
    @christianmugisha7933 3 года назад

    How many words

  • @ben-kn8bt
    @ben-kn8bt 4 года назад +1

    Did you have to submit a portfolio for your program?

    • @DyllenNellis
      @DyllenNellis  4 года назад +1

      I think it was optional, but I did do one! So instead of a formal portfolio it was a link that I sent them to a page on my website with a bunch of my creative work.

  • @faisalazad156
    @faisalazad156 4 года назад +2

    can you help me by giving information about creative writing program for undergraduate student in NYU ?

    • @DyllenNellis
      @DyllenNellis  4 года назад +1

      Hey! I actually don't know about NYU's creative writing program but I encourage you to look on their website!

    • @faisalazad156
      @faisalazad156 4 года назад

      @@DyllenNellis I want to the website but i didn't got clarity from there , that's why I asked from you .

    • @DyllenNellis
      @DyllenNellis  4 года назад

      @@faisalazad156 I see. You can also probably call or email the department, or try to find people within the department to contact.

    • @faisalazad156
      @faisalazad156 4 года назад

      @@DyllenNellis thanks you for your help ,i think it helps me a lot.

  • @Addelorme20
    @Addelorme20 4 года назад

    hey! would you read my essay draft and give me feedback?

  • @erzhanjanuzakov7464
    @erzhanjanuzakov7464 4 года назад +4

    did u get into usc?

  • @Kevessi
    @Kevessi 4 года назад

    What is your stats?

    • @DyllenNellis
      @DyllenNellis  4 года назад +1

      I explain all my stats in my How I Got Into Stanford video! ruclips.net/video/kJ9GZkCL8p4/видео.html

  • @rahmahaider5941
    @rahmahaider5941 4 года назад +2

    Hello this video was so helpful, do you think you could look at my Why NYU essay?

    • @rahmahaider5941
      @rahmahaider5941 4 года назад

      Also when you discussed the quote you saw on their webpage do you think it is smart to directly quote from their webpage within the Why NYU essay?

    • @DyllenNellis
      @DyllenNellis  4 года назад +1

      Thanks! Unfortunately, I don't have time to review essays.

    • @DyllenNellis
      @DyllenNellis  4 года назад +1

      @@rahmahaider5941 It depends. I wouldn't quote an entire phrase but I just threw in a key word that I thought might stand out to them.

  • @longma338
    @longma338 2 года назад

    I am unable to watch the video USC, Duke, Northwestern, Carnegie Melon, Tufts, MIT, Barnard, Georgia Tech, Boston University, NYU - ruclips.net/video/t9Q7ouQW4zM/видео.html.Could you solve the problem?Thanks a lot!

  • @cr69148
    @cr69148 3 года назад +1

    you probably had great extra-curriculars cause that's way short

    • @DyllenNellis
      @DyllenNellis  3 года назад +1

      Ur right! Looking back, I don’t think this was the best essay but I’ve continued to do a lot more research on the why us essay and I’ve read some amazing examples. This video might be helpful! ruclips.net/video/1-cK3SqDOg0/видео.html

    • @Alicat-hl2yg
      @Alicat-hl2yg 3 года назад

      they actually had a much shorter word count back then so it's a pretty normal length

  • @ottedits9986
    @ottedits9986 2 года назад

    ye look like icarly