Paper Trail - Chapter 1 (Undertale Deltarune Comic Dub)
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- Опубликовано: 1 фев 2019
- Our first major foray into Deltarune! We're new to voicing these characters so we'd love some feedback!
This comic was drawn by the illustrious Lynxgriffin - / lynxgriffin and you can read the original as it comes out here - lynxgriffin.tumblr.com/post/18...
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A phenomenal performance for all the actors who portrayed the characters in this comic dub. I really felt like it was a living comic due to its emotions that gives out of fear, anger, disappointment, pleasure and joy.
The sound editing was amazing as it felt like the background fitted perfectly with the environment.
I cant find another way to say this but this was the best comic dub you have done so far. I hope to see chapter 2 soon ^.^
Holy shit this was a full on review-
@@miriamzrm2299 indeed
@@ihaveaname699 xd
I RECOGNIZE THAT MUSIC 😀😀😀 DETROIT BECONE HUMAN!!!😀😀😀😀😀 Its Kara's theme song if I'm not mistaken
And also "THE DESERT OF JACK SHIT"
Kris: ...
Susie: what did ralsie turn into?
*suspense rise*
Kris: junior jumble.
THAT ONE GOT ME SO GOOD!!! XD
the IDK network -_- HI LOL
There was a surprise-rise because the back of it was the not Asriel wrote when he was going to collage.
I hope you get it, I needed to get that off my chest XD
With Kris speaking so calmly after the suspense build up had me laughing for about three minutes lol
Turns into an actual goat
Megathot lol yeah
5:17
*creepy suspenseful music*
*music stops*
"junior jumble."
XD
Yay
Lol XD
Lol
Undertale reference, I see?
LMAO
Lancer is like
"Shut the hell up I found something"
The voice for kris is absolutely amazing
CalveeThe Eevee i can do that too
That's vade lmao
Thogh there is an issue,Kris is genderfluid yet sounds so,masculine.
@@bananafruitloops I always personally saw Kris as a male, so I dont really see a problem with it, but I can see where the problem could come from
@@fluffyeevee383 I understand and agree with your opinion,though,Kris is reffered to as they/them in this comic,thus I believe they should have a genderfluid voice.
Moral of the story: Don't clean your room because, you might destroy an entire world.
Well, you might destroy an alternate world where inanimate objects turn into animate entities.
So basically inanimate objects
Good reason to tell XD
Now that makes me wonder what would happen if I put 1 of my toys in the Dark World
Maybe I secretly knew there was an alternate universe in my room and that's why I don't like cleaning.
7:40 “my only friend”
Kris: ouch, Susie
C o r r e c t.
THAT A LOTTA DAMAGE
Yes.......
*screeching*
@LogicMuch 2.0 Oh I know wat U mean there buddy :)
Kris: **Susie I thought what we had was special.*
im honestly suprised there arent as many "au's" for delta rune, like...that's kind of what 90% of the under tale fan-base was based off of.
In a way, Deltarune is an Undertale au.
It can’t happen because in a really weird way deltarune is a alternative universe of undertake and an alternate universe can’t have an alternate universe.....or can it?
@@pom1489
I mean, there's stuff like swapfell
I think Deltarune should have many AUs because you can just take almost all fan-made Undertale AUs, make it fit with Deltarune, then change the name. Ex: Deltafell, Horrorune, Birdrune, ect.
Unless that's technecaly copyright.
I think the thing is, with Undertale, Swap and Fell had become pre-established things since, at one point, they were both created by one person each before the community adopted and adapted them. Things like Swap, Fell, Shift, Horror, Outer, etc, are easy to mix, match, and modify. For Deltarune, there's nothing that's universally accepted. There are TONS of interpretations of DeltaSwap and who gets swapped with who and even whether Ralsei swaps with Lancer or just becomes a Monster Kid Ralsei (which I personally prefer). There's no universally accepted Fell designs for any of the Deltarune characters. I've seen both Edgy Fell Jevils and Friendly Fell Jevils. Hell, I'm working on writing a Felltarune AU where Kris has Flowey as an imaginary friend and Ralsei is a flower with boots who's more like an older brother than a younger brother like classic Ralsei is (I'm SUPER proud of it, by the way). And by that logic, my interpretation of FellSwap Ralsei would be a goddamn Temmie. There are so many different interpretations of Deltarune AUs that none actually stand out above the rest. There are a few exceptions, like Horrorrune and Deltatale, but other than that, not much. On the plus side, that gives much more room for creative freedom since you don't feel obligated to stick to just a combination of different pre-made templates.
AND I WANNA USE *LIGHT* DOLLARS TO BUY *LIGHT* MP3S
**PIRACY**
Lancer said that as soon as i sae this
I love how the thumbnail is everybody screaming
Lol
Kris: *AAAAAAAAAA*
Susie: *AAAAAAAAAA*
Ralsei: *AAAAAAAAAA*
Lancer: *AAAAAAAAAA*
why else did you think made me click it? lmao
Or yawning
**Inhales**
*_AAAAAAAAAAAA-_*
Hey all- if anyone has criticism for the voices here I'd love to hear it! I took a big risk making Kris sound so mature but personally, after a lot of experimentation it really started growing on me. What do you guys think? If you wanna get mean or be honest, I really wanna hear your thoughts. Thank you!
Well since frisk doesn’t speak and kris looks like frisk mabye kris can have the mute voice like frisk
Kris sounds good to me. Lancer..Im not sure if it's too goofy or not goofy. Barney sounds good ralsei sounds like alphys but then again they are both shy. I think you should change or edit Ralseis voice and Lancers.
Susie and Raslie sound the same, to me. Maybe you could make Raslie sound a bit more... Different or some sort. You don't have to.
I think the voices were perfect even though lancer was diffrent from what I imagined
I think Ralsei should sound more...male
4:15 It says "your beautiful creation" and also in 4:35 "No one can choose who they are in this world". I think it's the person who we've just created in chapter one.
That explains why Kris is freaking out so much, they are somehow connected
or, maybe it's Gaster, as the voice in the start was (most likely) him...
Or the person talking to you during that segment, presumably gaster
*W O A H*
Very possible. I mean, why else would you make a character if they weren’t gonna be in there somewhere
Is no one seeing NOELLES FACE WHEN BERDLY SAIDS: With what, making out in the closet, HER FACE KILLED ME!
;-; I know
She’s gay for Susie (but so am I so..)
(somewhat of a spoiler)
later in the story its revealed Noelle has feeling for Susie (and vice versa) so the reaction is appropiate
The Moment you realize they cant return to the Real World, because there is no fountain...
Toriel is gonna be putting up missing posters, damn XD
I didn't think about it! 😫
Oh.. No....
Actually, at the top of the New Castle, there's a Fountain.
@@joeylely8585 Huh, didnt see that... Well, lets hope youre wrong and Toriel sticks missing posters everywhere and cries
Loving it XD
Damn you so woke bruh
I was hooked almost immediately. I wasn’t expecting this to be so captivating. Kris’ voice does sound lower than I would think, but as someone said, it grew on me and seemed to fit the more he spoke.
Lancer’s voice seems like it should be a little more squeaky, for lack of a better word.
Ralsei’s sounds pretty good; I feel like his voice (like Kris) is open to a lot of interpretation.
Susie’s voice was good, but I felt needed to be a lower pitch with a raspy edge.
I can’t believe how incredibly well done this was, well I can, knowing who’s behind it, but seriously, this was intense and made me feel like I was watching an actual movie.
You actually summed up my thoughts just about perfectly.
@@gigithehedgehog8469 Same.
Even how the voices should sound, in fact.
Though Kris' voice didn't grow on me whatsoever.
Lancer's voice was my favorite, Kris grew on me very quickly and love Susie's and Ralsei's too. Tories and Alphys were quite good as well but Alphys sounds like a goat, which I'm sure she ain't.
The only thing that bothered me was the Destiny 2 music.
Dr. Saib 999 Agreed, Alphys’ voice was a little distracting for me.
This kinda predicts how Deltarune chapter 2 would go......
i was thinking that
10:35
Suzie: "GOD FRICKING DAMNIT KRIS, WHERE THE HECK ARE WE?!"
Everyone said the acting was on point, but another thing that was on point is his music taste. GOD DAMN THOSE DESTINY 2 BGMS FIT SO WELL.
They truly did fit
Yay! New series to watch!...
But that also means more waiting for episodes to come out...
...yay...
YAY
Waiting for a epsiode is one of best feelings in the world. Like binging and watching something is nice, but waiting for a new epsiode for something to come on is one of the best feelings.
Like Glitchtale.....Yay....But Faster
Actually, following more shows would be less waiting since you would have more episode to kill time...
*right????*
* THE HAND OF THE KNIGHT IS DRIFTING FORWARD...
* SOON, THE "QUEEN" RETURNS, AND HELL'S ROAR BUBBLES FROM THE DEPTHS...
* LIGHTNERS, CAN YOU STOP IT?
-Jevil, Deltarune 2018
*DEAR GOD....*
This comic is actually really suspenseful and I love it. The threat of the whole Dark World being erased just by clearing out all the things that make it up is in is such an interesting idea.
*New title:*
"DELTARUNE CHAPTER 2 *_CONFIRMED????_* (CONSPIRACY THEORY)"
*DELTARUNE IN DESPACITO 2 CONFIRMED*
5:19 Makes perfect sense.
Ralsei
Arlsei
Arslei
Asrlei
Asreli
Asreil
Asriel
*heard the soundtrack of Kara from Detroit become human* _ _ *start panicking and almost cry while Kris and Susie were just walking on the street*
me too tho-
10:15
Well... here we go again
(Insert doctor who intro sequence)
ermahgerd!
dercter hue!
Honestly, I had 0 problems with the voices! They were amazing and fit the characters great (in my opinion)! Btw, love your work! Your comic dubs are the best out of all the of the creators I've seen making these comic dubs! Also, can't wait for the next chapter of "Sooner or Later You'll be Mine"!
-Love, one of your many fans.
My thoughts exactly!
I just now realized that Kris rhymes with Frisk...
Dude also right when he said run an ad came on about Us and red said "Run"
cool
The voice actor for Kris is just perfect. And also Susie’s VA too. The voice acting matches how I would actually depict their voices in the game. Props to both of you! :)
5:10 kris went sicko mode for a second
You still in the moovh for the memes?
Right
No its chara mode
Ikurr
XD hehehe! X3 That's funny
i love it as for voices just make lancer sound more goofy and childish
Deadcrayz
I thought he sounded a bit to mature.
I like his voice, it's cute and cool
Yeah, isn't he like 8
Edit: Although, I would like to add that they did a good job on adding his lisp. That's something I noticed a lot of voice actors for him miss, so, gotta give credit where it's due.
@@ladyscholastica3176 alot of "kids" in anime sound like 30 something year olds too. Kinda tough for adults to make believable sounding kid voices. Also,if we're being literal here, Lancer wouldn't be able to speak or live since he's a skelebro. So's Mr. Befriends your mom Sans. 0o0
Seeing this for the first time after chapter 2 is hilarious.
I've always loved how Kris was voiced by you! It really fits their sort of shy, keep-to-themselves personality.
10:12 mom, there's a monster under my bed
XD
WHY AM I SO HYPED FOR THE NEXT ONE? I have so many theoriessssssss
in T-4 hours we will find out how close to the mark they were...
And even if they're miles off, they still created an amazing take on the story to watch unfold.
Fun fact
It was actually accurate
@@axelperez2917 yup. with just a bit less ralsei and a bit more (rips out soul) AAAAAAAGGHHHHH!
Y'know, for as much shit as I saw destiny get, everyone for some reason loves putting the music into comic dubs...I approve
When it's in the actual game it's meh but when it's in this just fit so well honestly I re-watched this because it's so good
4:12
*GENERAL KENOBI*
sorry not sorry
In all seriousness, this was amazing! Good job!
YOU ARE A BOLD ONE
This comment should not have made me laugh as much as it did. Thanks tho.
Outstanding move!
*GENERAL GREVIOUS*
Oh, god.
Oh, *god.*
I cannot unsee that.
Thanks, dammit, and XD all at once.
Thexdit...?????
I will never look at a jack of Spades the same again
Me: ". . . . . Lancer?"
Friend:"wot"
Edit: happy now?
Lol me to
*Jack
Melina Izzyawesome I LEGIT DID THIS THE OTHER DAY AND MY FRIEND LOST HIS SHIT LMAOOO
@@flatearther5712 it must've been even funnier if he knew about Deltarune
@@hellointernet4467 wait, Lancers card had a J symbol on the back, but his card was an Ace....did Jevil sneak a peak into our world?
detROIT BECOME HUMAN MUSIC IN A DELTARUNE VIDEO? maDMEN!
since you guys recognised the songs, can you tell me which is the title of the one at 1:28?
You noticed that too?
IKR, KARA IS THE BEST!
4:15
Top middle panel is a bit of the "Your answers... Your beautiful creation..." dialogue
*Is that shadow person the original creation?*
Maybe, but I feel like it might be Gaster?
Yeah but think about this. "It's A Beautiful day outside"
It would be pretty neat if the OC turned out to be the knight, like who has heard of the character creator being for the antagonist character rather than the player character?
Finally, a freaking AU comic dub which I can finally watch.
Well knock my socks off and toast my buns this is great. I'm gonna like this series. I think ur guy's main series should be this and handplates. Keep up the gud work!!!
Omg a heart from vade!!!! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA. tnx 4 noticing me xp
@@TrousleInk owo no problem
So the 11th part of this comic came out, and it way it ended felt like the end of a chapter. This video goes up to part 6. That means that either chapter 2 is coming very soon, or is coming after part 12 comes out. I can't wait!
Actually I can wait. I have to because I don't have a time machine.
Chapter 2 spoilers
It's amazing how much this comic got right.
Ralsei: a whole world of light-
Kris: *BLASTING LIFELIGHT FROM SMASH ULTIMATE*
Also I approve your music choice in the end. Audiomachine is an amazing epic orchestra group!
The music is Detroit Become Human I believe
Sipping Tea yeah it is
@@jello4112 ok
Kara theme
This is really good! The voice acting and animation are both top notch! Can’t wait for part 2!
I love the Destiny 2 soundtracks you chose, they fit so well!
Omg i loved it i loved it so much, the transitions were so smooth, the voice acting sounded so professional, and the music and sound effects were so on point! And of course, holy moly the story blew me the hell away lol, i just loved how it makes so many theories on what happens after chapter 1/the demo of deltarune, and on what if they actually came back *^* omg i cannot wait for the next episode 😍😀 *vibrates intensely*
*DO MORE*
(Not rushing you but please keep this series alive...)
Lynxgriffin did an outstanding job with the plot of this story. The voice acting and background music was phenomenal. Please update part 2 whenever possible!
I love the way you put it, so simplistic yet so well made, it almost feels like it was legit
This is why I subscribed to this channel because
COMICS and THEY’RE AMAZING WORK THAT THEY DID
I heard Detroit Become Human music in the backrounds of some parts!
(Boy is that game good)
First i heard Destiny and litherely jumped, and then i heard Detroit...
Oh, you don’t wanna know what happened...
no detroit become chungus
7:58 I heard this and knew things were about to get tougher.
@alex the BLUE fox it was Kara
oh my gosh that was so cool!! This was the first Deltarune comic dub I've watched but still, it was great! The voice acting was very good. Susie had a great sense of fear and anger at just the right times, and while Kris did speak, they still kept their mysterious character. Awesome work!
This is probably the best comic dub I've seen on the web. Fantastic performance from all the actors, and visual presentation is incredible. I hope to see more!
OMY GOD THAT WAS WICKED AF PLEASE CONTINUE THIS SERIES AHHHH YOURE BOTH SO TALENTED
Plot twist: this comic was made by Toby fox and this is chapter 2
Real Plot Twist: You're REALLY Stupid!
I would actually kinda lOVE THAT-
@@hellointernet4467 r/wooooooooosh
@@hellointernet4467 r/Whoooooooosh
Hello Internet
Plot twist: This was a joke!
Out of all the Comic Dubs I've seen you and Celio work on, I think this is honestly the best one. Great voice acting, love the panel transitions and love the music (Someone LOVES Destiny 2 cause I recognize that soundtrack anywhere). You two gave these characters serious life and it's making me fall in love with them more along with the game. I desperately want to see you dub this more of this series.
This was really, REALLY fucking well done. The voice acting, the transition between comic sections, hell the music choice was PERFECT. Jesus christ I can't believe how much I ADORED this! I cannot wait for more, I am frickin HYPED man!
Congrats on the 100K !!!
That was... Super good. Even with the segments of a familiar game OST in there, which were strikingly well-matched to the content (heheh, light and dark...), that was super fresh... I really need to play the game. lol
I dig the voices a lot. I'm familiar with some of the voices as well, but I almost feel like we could have had an older Toriel. She seems less Goatmom and more Goatauntie. lol As far as the more mature-sounding Kris... I had a friend back when we were fifteen and he had a voice deeper than that, strikingly with the same body type, so it's not so strange to me. I've seen it with real people, so it seems totally normal to me, and I like it. Reflects his calm personality, which is something my old friend had as well. :]
Detroit:Become has such an underrated soundtrack
Ok this is absolutely amazing! The music is so cool and so well chosen, and the voice actors and editing is so good!
I never thought that Destiny 2's soundtrack would sound so good in a comic dub
*10:59* Where all missing socks go
Yeah! XD
'Laughs hysterically'
My god. I *never* give more than one like to the comments section! this is amazing!
Oh my gosh I love this! Not only the art and storyline but your voices just made everything come to life! Good job at it and I can't wait for the next part!! :)
P.S. You earned a new watcher ;3
OH MY GOSH this was amazing!! The voices were a bit different than what I expected, but that just made me love them even more!
That was the best comic + vocal Roleplay I've seen to date on Deltarune. Good on ya, keep it up, can't wait for more.
Love this! New series! Same excitement! Keep up the amazing work!!
Kris’s voice is so awesome. It’s exactly what I thought it would be in my imagination.
7:26
Me: Oh shit finally I have a good reason to do genocide run of Undertale
I just realized that for the music, they used the tower background from Destiny. I LOVE IT!!! MY FAVORITE GAME IS NOW INCLUDED IN A COMIC DUB! YES!!@
Hmm...the music from Detroit become human actually fits this very well
Oh Cool New Series!.... DAMMIT THE EPISODES OVER!
Theses voices fit well! Wonderful job in bringing in life to the comic!
Who paused the video to read the diary
This is so good and it looks amazing you brought all the characters to life so well and I’m so exsited to see part 2! :)
Yay new series that means...
More waiting...
Yay.... AHHHHHHH
Pls don't tell me Paper Trail chapter 2 is going to be released in the same time deltarune chapter 2 is released itself.
(Get it.. .?)
You can find the rest on the tumblr page they linked in the description, from what I read there the creator of the comic is making other comics right now too though.
@@Fallen_Angel9078 pun intended sorry 😅
Ngela Pena I wasn’t sure if you were making a joke or not lol, so I thought I’d let you know in case.
@@Fallen_Angel9078 shush its not your fault 😅 ᕕ(ᐛ)ᕗ ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
Ngela Pena A’ight Lol.
IT FEELS LIKE A MOVIE!?!
*Great comic dub! I'm excited for the next part!*
Hi vade. I have a qurstion: is sooner or later you'll be mine discontinued? One of my favourite series. Love your work regardless xx
It will continue soon. The next part is gonna be pretty long.
Vade YAY
Vade it’d be nice if we didn’t have to dig through comments to find updates dude. I can wait a while but not without updates, it’s been 2 months with no info. We love what you do, so I think a small update here and there is a fair request...
This was fantastic!!
Finally some good ComicDubs
Outstanding work! You really are an inspiration when it comes to audio and video editing!
Oh my god wait... is Kris' voice actor is so familiar.... is it Gaster from handplates? I cant remember...! Its so familiar I know I heard it from another comic.... I love the voice though. Pretty good
He plays gaster and sans in handplates. I think he does grown up papyrus as well
It's vade himself
It’s the voices (people to are questioning error and ink) from ask glitch and squid
THIS IS THE GREATEST SERIES IVE EVER SEEN!!!!! PLEASE CONTINUE IT!!!!!!!!!!
This is freakin' amazing! You guys did a great job and now got me waiting for some more of this. I hope u guys stay doing this kind of stuff because was really awesome.
Amazing voice acting and art! Can’t wait for the rest!
Lancer sounds like Mickey Mouse
He totally fuckin odes oh my god
@@miriamzrm2299 lmao ikr
@@ihaveaname699 pbfft- Now we just need someone to sound like Minnie Mouse
@Pixies World life comes at you fast
I was thinking Meowth
I wish Calysto/these voice actors finished this dub. The comic is so good. Sans did a fine job with their dub, but this version is next level.
Yeah me too
HOLY- OH MY GOD THE QUALITY OF THIS IS OUTSTANDING
PLEASE CONTINUE THIS!! THIS IS MY MOST FAVORITE COMIC SERIES
MAKE A NUMBER 2 STAT! I CANT GO ON LIKE THIS
*BEST COMIC EVER* is it me or dose ralsei sound like a girl?
Edit: I have no problem with the voice :)
Yep
Ooh, Nice grammar you got there, can i have it
@@12KTOYOTA *nope...*
For some reason I want to say something
That's because the actor for him is female.
Oh, THIS comic! I've been reading this on-and-off over the last few months. Nice to see it voice-acted WITH music! :)
i have never been so hyped like this! EVER! Amazing dub out there!
There's just something about deltarune that feels more... _suitable_ for these kind of things.
Don't get me wrong, undertale ones are good too, but it's just that I find a lot more of them that make me go...
*_eh..._*
Spoilers for Chapter 2:
How did this almost predict what would happen in chapter 2
Honestly it's more like what 3 might be, portal is in tori's house
Yesterday I think enough has been released for a part two, and I am so excited for whenever that is finished!
Ya all did a really good job dubbing this comic