This is good. The energy ranges from fairly intense to something more close to lo-fi. The instruments work pretty well until we get to the drums that kick up at around 0:17, they're a little too intense for the piece, drowning out the nice subtleties of the music. The music is not too too homogeneous, but it is not quite heterogeneous enough (in my opinion) to really hit hare, but there is enough nuance and variation in the melody to be enjoyable. The mood of the song is somewhat dark and melancholic, with some semblance of a more chipper mood at times, and a slight seasoning (comparing this to oatmeal about the amount of cinnamon you would season it with) of anger. All that put together, I would give it a 7 for energy it is a bit slow, a 4 for instrument implementation those drums really drag it down, a 7 for variety as I said it's not quite heterogeneous enough (for me) to give it full marks, a 9 for mood it is really good what you did with the mood there, it fits the energy well, and an 8 for execution, plus 3 for other trace reasons (I just generally liked it), over all I would give it a 7.6. Please note I am not the foremost authority on music rating, so this rating is not the end all be all.
This all was not to say this piece is bad, as I said I actually really enjoyed it in general, with this rating, I merely wished to provide you with some constructive criticism, and illustrate some ways I personally think you can improve (this was just my opinion so don't take it as cold hard fact)
Видно будущий талант. но... во первых трек слишком короткий во вторых поменяй эти басы пожалуйста на 0:17 это бесит я не в коем случае не оскорбляю твое творение, просто указываю на минусы.. если их убрать то получится очень круто
спасибки за объективный коммент, меня и самого бесили эти басы, но я подумал да пофиг уже всё ровно выйдет проходняк , а ещё ты мне дал понять что надо будет делать V3, приятно что меня смотрят не только англоязычные люди ;D
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geez that bass boost-like part was unexpected
wow that start is fire
This is increible.. I have new idea
Nice, feels slower than others and its quite nice :)
Buena 👍
Cool
wow i like this alot!
God remix
This is good. The energy ranges from fairly intense to something more close to lo-fi. The instruments work pretty well until we get to the drums that kick up at around 0:17, they're a little too intense for the piece, drowning out the nice subtleties of the music. The music is not too too homogeneous, but it is not quite heterogeneous enough (in my opinion) to really hit hare, but there is enough nuance and variation in the melody to be enjoyable. The mood of the song is somewhat dark and melancholic, with some semblance of a more chipper mood at times, and a slight seasoning (comparing this to oatmeal about the amount of cinnamon you would season it with) of anger. All that put together, I would give it a 7 for energy it is a bit slow, a 4 for instrument implementation those drums really drag it down, a 7 for variety as I said it's not quite heterogeneous enough (for me) to give it full marks, a 9 for mood it is really good what you did with the mood there, it fits the energy well, and an 8 for execution, plus 3 for other trace reasons (I just generally liked it), over all I would give it a 7.6. Please note I am not the foremost authority on music rating, so this rating is not the end all be all.
This all was not to say this piece is bad, as I said I actually really enjoyed it in general, with this rating, I merely wished to provide you with some constructive criticism, and illustrate some ways I personally think you can improve (this was just my opinion so don't take it as cold hard fact)
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@@FreezeSKH was this offensive?
@@theendofemeralds No, of course not
Maybe I'll change something.
(sorry for not noticing the answer)
Видно будущий талант.
но... во первых трек слишком короткий
во вторых поменяй эти басы пожалуйста на 0:17 это бесит
я не в коем случае не оскорбляю твое творение, просто указываю на минусы.. если их убрать то получится очень круто
спасибки за объективный коммент, меня и самого бесили эти басы, но я подумал да пофиг уже всё ровно выйдет проходняк , а ещё ты мне дал понять что надо будет делать V3, приятно что меня смотрят не только англоязычные люди ;D