Hi Dylan. I like what you're trying to do with sharing your authentic story to improve yourself and along the way models and strategies for other viewers. Work on your hook for the start of the video so that you summarise in 30 seconds what you are going to talk about. Entice me into what should all and convince me why it is worth my attention. There are lots of RUclips videos about just that and also how to write killer titles. Good luck with your journey mate
Thank you for the wonderful feedback! Hearing from viewers really is an amazing part of this process. I totally agree with your assessment and will do better in the future!
That reading part I totally agree with you brother, I find that the more time spent on social media the less you’re able to focus and have a good attention span.
Good video man, dropped a gem that directly helped me. ✌🏽
great, thanks for watching!
Hi Dylan. I like what you're trying to do with sharing your authentic story to improve yourself and along the way models and strategies for other viewers. Work on your hook for the start of the video so that you summarise in 30 seconds what you are going to talk about. Entice me into what should all and convince me why it is worth my attention. There are lots of RUclips videos about just that and also how to write killer titles. Good luck with your journey mate
Thank you for the wonderful feedback! Hearing from viewers really is an amazing part of this process. I totally agree with your assessment and will do better in the future!
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That reading part I totally agree with you brother, I find that the more time spent on social media the less you’re able to focus and have a good attention span.
yeah, I am definitely going to overhaul my reading. It's crazy how much I miss and how brief my attention lasts.