One Call Fires the Pizza (Fanmade Pizza Tower Ost)

[@Doise-v9n]

This. Has. INSANE. Potential.
As it stands at the moment, the song sounds... a bit all over the place. The general idea of what the song wants to be is there, it's just that it's trying too much all at the same time, and as a result, sounds just a little bit more like a miss match then a song.
Again, with a bit of time and planning, this could be a FANTASTIC song, and honestly, I think it would be awesome to see it get reworked into something truly awesome.

[@Ultra-Delta-64]

Any tips to make it better would really help. I knew it had potential so I uploaded this as a v1 and never expected to be good or get a v2. But like FF v2 Redux, I learned that was false

[@maillenmontenegro1025]

this goes in my hotfix music🔥🔥🔥

[@Ultra-Delta-64]

I bet it's for your suffering

[@Not_P1]

I feel this has potential, might just need some more time in the pizza oven

[@Ultra-Delta-64]

Yeah, might cook it deeper in hell

[@floofdoge217]

yeah that's ass i'm not even gonna sugarcoat it

[@Ultra-Delta-64]

I know right?

[@imadrasyad831]

I don't want to sound like a big jerk. But it sucks. It had potential. But it was wasted. You could've sped up or slowed down the speed of one of the 2 songs.

[@FaresKhayat]

this is hard on mute

[@Ultra-Delta-64]

I know it's trash but that's kinda hurtful. I'm not KSI

[@FaresKhayat]

@@Ultra-Delta-64 opps i didint know sry