I love your content, before calling my screenplay done, I binged your content and made so many changes (for the better) after that! Logline to my 1st screenplay is - What do you get when you mix June Cleaver, Julia Child and Dr. Moreau, FBI Agent Peter Lange finds out today. 🙂
Should be Detective x discovers what happens when a meets b meets c. It also seems like your logline is more a description of the main character, whereas your want it to be a description of what happens in your movie, with a tiny amount of characterisation thrown in. E.g. a lonely young boy finds an extraterrestrial in his backyard and must help it to evade the authorities and make it home safely.
@@formulaic78 Hey Formulaic, thanks for the info. Actually it may seem like the logline is more of a description of the main character, but it isn't. It is actually the one line that describes the whole plot. The title is #6, the screenplay is making its film festival rounds with the film to follow (First premier in June!), so feel free to check it out when it comes out 🙂 - thanks again for taking the time to give some advice - it is much appreciated
Most storys are predictable, but their storytelling i.e.the particular events that unfold, aren't. We know that the hero's almost certainly going to win in the end, but we don't know how.
It's not about expectations, it's about what kind of genre the production company likes and who you know inside the business
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Goddesszilla would be the feminine form I would think
Like your subjects, presentations and I laugh at your use of “Skippy”. Thanks.
Being unpredictable has become predictable, and that's the irony of all ironies.
I thought today's Republican party brought about the death of irony....
@@JamesFleming1 Okay I'll bite.
How exactly?
Godzilla is both😂😂
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I love your content, before calling my screenplay done, I binged your content and made so many changes (for the better) after that! Logline to my 1st screenplay is - What do you get when you mix June Cleaver, Julia Child and Dr. Moreau, FBI Agent Peter Lange finds out today. 🙂
Should be Detective x discovers what happens when a meets b meets c. It also seems like your logline is more a description of the main character, whereas your want it to be a description of what happens in your movie, with a tiny amount of characterisation thrown in. E.g. a lonely young boy finds an extraterrestrial in his backyard and must help it to evade the authorities and make it home safely.
@@formulaic78 Hey Formulaic, thanks for the info. Actually it may seem like the logline is more of a description of the main character, but it isn't. It is actually the one line that describes the whole plot. The title is #6, the screenplay is making its film festival rounds with the film to follow (First premier in June!), so feel free to check it out when it comes out 🙂 - thanks again for taking the time to give some advice - it is much appreciated
Expectations are disappointments under construction
Most storys are predictable, but their storytelling i.e.the particular events that unfold, aren't. We know that the hero's almost certainly going to win in the end, but we don't know how.
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