Hi, thanks so much for your questions. You mean in the following "What if you woke up one morning and all your furniture was floating?" you mean replace 'was' with 'would'? It should be 'was' because it is a hypothetical scenario that occurred in the past as a stimulus for a story. The idea being that the writer imagines this had happened and then writes a story based on the idea.
hi mr tim! its me jayden cai! i was in your Monday class meeting today! hope you have a great time!
Very helpful and presented well ..please do more videos.
Best video after a longggg morning of searching. Thank you!
Thank you. I had fun making it. I plan to make many more (: Glad you found it useful.
@@mrtimsclassroom5023 the best video I've ever seen about creative writing
Nice video Mr Tim it’s me Lachlan
Great presentation
You presented the lesson in a format that is so easy to understand and apply thank you
Hi Tim l am Alice from your class
This is perfect. Helping my kids with their creative writing at home, and this is an excellent resource, thank you.
the most useful video ever. .pls make more vids
Wonderful!!!
very unique style. the website as in the description is not working. Would like to hear more of your talks
Thank you for that good explamation
I'm glad it was helpful (:
Mr Tim, it's Jane and your video really helps. Thank you!
Working on creative writing with my boys at home later today. We will be watching this video before we get started.
Excellent presentation. Easy to follow and put into practice
Thanks for this video. Even thought Im not a kid, I still found this very helpful XD
Fantastic video Tim, you are Naturally gifted with Teaching. You are going to do great things. 😁👍
Thank you my brother. I'm blessed to be able to make a small contribution to the lives and language skills of kids (:
Good stuff Tim
your classes are the best mr Tim
Thank you Dora. What a pleasure it is teaching you! Stay safe (:
nice
Great.
A question! 4:50 don't you think that "would" would be there instead of "was"
Furniture would gone
Hi, thanks so much for your questions. You mean in the following "What if you woke up one morning and all your furniture was floating?" you mean replace 'was' with 'would'? It should be 'was' because it is a hypothetical scenario that occurred in the past as a stimulus for a story. The idea being that the writer imagines this had happened and then writes a story based on the idea.
Awesome Tim!
Thanks bro
This is actually really helpful
Great content. My kids found this really helpful
Glad it was helpful! Thanks Scott
Hi MR TIM your video has really helped me a lot in my writing thank you for your help
Great to hear Ahmad. Glad it helped (:
Nice explanation this helps a lot
Dear Mr Tim, thank you for your wonderful class, it is help me a lot writing in school. Thank you. From Mark
My Pleasure Mark. What a star you are!!
Thank you so much I have a creative writing competition and I hope I win this thanks a lot for the 7tips
Wow I love it it’s so good
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Hi im in the monday class hehe 😜
Thanks a lot
Really helpful and informative.
Hi long time no see it os Chris
Hi Chris. Hope you're well champ. See you soon
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hello mr tim this did not help me in my creative can you give me more tips to make me understand more
Thank you
hi Mr Tim I love your English!
Thank you Boys. Stay safe and see you soon (:
Hi I’m Joel
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Hi Mr Tim
Hi Genna. Thanks for connecting. This video will be great for Geoffrey (: Take care
No worries if students
Hi im harvey
Hi dad
Yeah it’s definetely esther
XD
And l’m not mr tim
Is that esther talking
Hi Esther (: My darling daughter xx
this video was so great
Thank you