It’s long, but for me, I like it. I felt like I was getting a 20 hour story in 3 hours. Which was perfect for a short work day. I would love more from this world being built.🖤
the story isn't that bad. i liked it. it seems more like a full story of at least 6 parts. i liked especially the idea of a vulnerable teenager who isn't the overpowered deathworlder. it is sometimes a litle longwinded but hey... have you ever tried to read "The lord of the rings"?
It’s long, but for me, I like it. I felt like I was getting a 20 hour story in 3 hours. Which was perfect for a short work day. I would love more from this world being built.🖤
the story isn't that bad. i liked it. it seems more like a full story of at least 6 parts. i liked especially the idea of a vulnerable teenager who isn't the overpowered deathworlder. it is sometimes a litle longwinded but hey... have you ever tried to read "The lord of the rings"?
I liked it
Gods...this dragged on and on... it could have been great but it was to boring with nonsense 😢
Randomly çhanging verb tenses are quite annoying.
Crap