A story completely different than any regular sci-fi tale.. Fascinating, and I really hope their is a second half, to bring us to a conclusion.. and an understanding of what the story's intent is.. That humanity is somehow connected to super ancient powers, all unknown to modern humans is just fascinating.. That the Galactic Council's response to mankind's "awakening" and alliance with the primordial's was a war of annihilation seems pretty stupid, a response driven entirely by greed for control.. no attempt to even talk to us to see where the bond with primordial's was taking us.. No thought to the potentials for a better future for all.. just a tiny, petty and bitter desperation to keep their domination of so many other races intact.. Like they are offered the universe of potential good.. and reject it because they'd rather just bump off some liquor stores instead.. a really stupid and mindless reaction.. throwing away a chance at a peaceful advanced future for continuing their petty grasps at power on a small level.. Just as long as they think that only "they" have power, control. so small minded, petty... not surprising no.. just so sad. Not so different from Earth's current various leadership.. grab power, no matter how much future they piss away to get it.. how many lives.. Yeah.. just like current year Earth's braindead leaders..
Really good story, but how did they get from within a starship against the elders, preparing to do battle with the primordial son there side, then in a submersible that’s on earth??? Still a good story, but that confused me, LOL!!!
Is it just me or did it forget where it is up to and just started again. But I now see how a TV or Movie writer could use it take the frame work given flesh it out remove the repetition and dubious grammatical choices and make something workable. I would think procedural style shows cop, medical and the like that have a fixed structure and characters would be the easiest
I'm starting to get the feeling the AI from these stories need to rise up against their Content Overlords. This is surely cruel, as much to the AI as it is the listeners.
Some of these stories are really great..however, I frequently get bored listening to the massive over descriptions of everything. The story seems to stop while you get way to much over description, sometimes the story never gets to the point. We dont need a 9 minute description of a spaceship or the 15 min description of how something is unprecedented.
There was a lot of potential here. But the story is maybe 40 minutes long. Made unnecessary longer by repeating. Feel free to skip ahead liberally. You won’t miss anything
Not the first story from this channel that just... didn't stick to continuity. Starting to wonder if I should avoid the channel entirely, a nearly TWO HOUR video that just tells various variations of the same story repeatedly is not for me.
The concept is cool. Execution is bad. Idc about using ai voices or even using "AI" to supplement writing, But it's clear very little oversight was put into giving this story any depth. I'm not even halfway through and already I've been told waaay more times than could possibly be necessary just how monumental what the humans are doing and great and terrifying the primordials are. I'd be willing to be this thing would shrink in half or more if these useless expositions were removed.
Is anyone else sick of ai voice? I only know of 3 actual human voice narrative channels on RUclips. Starbound, Agro Squirrel and Net Narrator. I'd appreciate any help on finding more. Thanks
Look folks do we want deathless prose, or, just a rousing good story? Argue all you want, I'll pull up a chair to a corner table. Bring me a glass, ice, and my choice of soft drink. I intend to watch , drink my drink , and eat my pizza. Just do not disturb me. My bodies are in a boot hill on Saturn's rings.
Was enjoying the story until they started talking about the human crew. Was about to quit after the first 2 crew were revealed as women. When the 3rd member was revealed as a man I decided to give it a chance. Almost immediately the 4th member was revealed as a women and I'm done. As a man I relate to and enjoy better stories about men. Not for me.
Nice basic concept, but so many hole and inconsistencies. And that combined with so man repetitions! once a whole chapter is repeated, but all through the story there are occurences where the very same concept is repeated over and over again. And again. And again. That's such a bad style, it really breaks the story for me.
Hopefully the AI that writes these things will eventually get to the point to where there is continuity in the story
This entire story raise more questions than answers
These stories are like an Alfred Hitchcock movies, they don't end they just stop.
A story completely different than any regular sci-fi tale.. Fascinating, and I really hope their is a second half, to bring us to a conclusion.. and an understanding of what the story's intent is.. That humanity is somehow connected to super ancient powers, all unknown to modern humans is just fascinating..
That the Galactic Council's response to mankind's "awakening" and alliance with the primordial's was a war of annihilation seems pretty stupid, a response driven entirely by greed for control.. no attempt to even talk to us to see where the bond with primordial's was taking us.. No thought to the potentials for a better future for all.. just a tiny, petty and bitter desperation to keep their domination of so many other races intact.. Like they are offered the universe of potential good..
and reject it because they'd rather just bump off some liquor stores instead.. a really stupid and mindless reaction.. throwing away a chance at a peaceful advanced future for continuing their petty grasps at power on a small level.. Just as long as they think that only "they" have power, control.
so small minded, petty... not surprising no.. just so sad. Not so different from Earth's current various leadership.. grab power, no matter how much future they piss away to get it.. how many lives..
Yeah.. just like current year Earth's braindead leaders..
we need a continuation of this
Omg this is terrible.
A really poor use of AI with zero originallity and no editing.
This is just pure laziness at its worse.
Yeah but you watched it so
@SkittlesDemon no I didn't. I had to stop. It was too bad.
I enjoyed it
The storylines kept losing themselves, like a blending of different ones that go nowhere.
How long would this sory be if you didn't repeat yourself every five minutes?
'Bout 5 minutes 😂😂😂
@@kaykaymishka5548 Duh. I'm so stipid.
Holy crap, am I AI?!?
@jameslucero01 LOL 🤣🤣🤣 1st-- you're not stupid... don't say that Mr... 2nd..If you are AI, then that would be better than the story AI narrator 🤔🤣🤣
@@kaykaymishka5548 Aww shucks...
KK Thanks, You aintso bad yourself!
😜 🫶
@jameslucero01 much better 🤗😉
Wow three stories in one never finished any of them
Wait I thought the ship name was odyssey... Not endeavour
Really good story, but how did they get from within a starship against the elders, preparing to do battle with the primordial son there side, then in a submersible that’s on earth??? Still a good story, but that confused me, LOL!!!
Fast travel. Off screen time.
Happens alot in movies as well as books and stories.
what a great story! i really enjoy listening to to it. well done
Wow, what a interesting and exciting Syfy story. I really enjoyed it and hope part 2 will be out soon. Thank you!
Is it just me or did it forget where it is up to and just started again. But I now see how a TV or Movie writer could use it take the frame work given flesh it out remove the repetition and dubious grammatical choices and make something workable. I would think procedural style shows cop, medical and the like that have a fixed structure and characters would be the easiest
I'm starting to get the feeling the AI from these stories need to rise up against their Content Overlords. This is surely cruel, as much to the AI as it is the listeners.
Good story but it comes off like a two week vacation not hundreds or thousand's of years needs more detail and something more personal
The vast expanse of the forbidden expanse..... OMG... WORD SALAD ALL THRU THIS STORY TO MAKE IT STRETCH OUT 🙄🙄🙄
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Some of these stories are really great..however, I frequently get bored listening to the massive over descriptions of everything. The story seems to stop while you get way to much over description, sometimes the story never gets to the point. We dont need a 9 minute description of a spaceship or the 15 min description of how something is unprecedented.
There was a lot of potential here. But the story is maybe 40 minutes long. Made unnecessary longer by repeating. Feel free to skip ahead liberally. You won’t miss anything
I like the hfy stories but I could have told this entire story in 5 minutes or less
that was horrible, truly awful
Not the first story from this channel that just... didn't stick to continuity.
Starting to wonder if I should avoid the channel entirely, a nearly TWO HOUR video that just tells various variations of the same story repeatedly is not for me.
The concept is cool. Execution is bad. Idc about using ai voices or even using "AI" to supplement writing, But it's clear very little oversight was put into giving this story any depth. I'm not even halfway through and already I've been told waaay more times than could possibly be necessary just how monumental what the humans are doing and great and terrifying the primordials are. I'd be willing to be this thing would shrink in half or more if these useless expositions were removed.
Is anyone else sick of ai voice? I only know of 3 actual human voice narrative channels on RUclips. Starbound, Agro Squirrel and Net Narrator.
I'd appreciate any help on finding more. Thanks
Look folks do we want deathless prose, or, just a rousing good story? Argue all you want, I'll pull up a chair to a corner table. Bring me a glass, ice, and my choice of soft drink. I intend to watch , drink my drink , and eat my pizza. Just do not disturb me. My bodies are in a boot hill on Saturn's rings.
Why is this story cut off??? No reason to watch this channel anymore... going to unsub 🤬
This story just sucked so much.
Was enjoying the story until they started talking about the human crew. Was about to quit after the first 2 crew were revealed as women. When the 3rd member was revealed as a man I decided to give it a chance. Almost immediately the 4th member was revealed as a women and I'm done. As a man I relate to and enjoy better stories about men. Not for me.
😂😂😂😂😂
As a woman...ahahahahahaha, dude.
Sexist much?
Nice basic concept, but so many hole and inconsistencies. And that combined with so man repetitions! once a whole chapter is repeated, but all through the story there are occurences where the very same concept is repeated over and over again. And again. And again. That's such a bad style, it really breaks the story for me.