You're an amazing writer! It makes childhood play things seem so edgy and creepy. The way you've written it just creepy enough, but, not in-you-face. Loved it! Keep writing these!
"HELLO KYLE" "DIDN'T YOU KNOW YOUR MII IS COMING TO VISIT?" "THE MII YOU CREATED! HE SHOULD BE HERE ANY MINUTE." "LEAVING SO SOON? YOU HAVEN'T EVEN SEEN HIM UP CLOSE YET!" "I WON'T GET AWAY FROM HIM. ONCE HE'S DEALT WITH."
It's not real. It says creepypasta on it. So... Uh... Creepypastas are stories.... Mostly not true... But they can be true... This one is probably not.
I'd throw it across the room, boil it and throw it into the street then light it on fire then put it out and throw it into my pool, then taking it and throwing it into the Grand Canyon.
What to do if Eteled appears on your Wii 1.Set it on fire outside. 2.Throw it into a pool. 3.Smash it with a Hammer. 4.Run it over with a Car And number 5 JUST DELETE ETELED FOR GOD'S SAKE!
I'm trying to not sound like a Buzz kill, but there's not going to be part 3 cause at 7:23 it says to be concluded which mean there's not going to be part 3. I will be suprised if there was a part 3 but, I'm not counting on it.
"are *wii* gonna have a problem" "you best *switch* up that attitude" "you're playing a dangerous *game boy* " "don't *nintendo sixty-four* ce me to use this"
Btw i got delelted for no reason then i broke my wii then i started te bagging it then i bruned it after that i throw it in the lava lamp i had it took me like 4 mins to put the wii in
I mean, it's cool and stuff but you should try to make it more realistic, blood coming out from a mii? A wierd af mii chopping the legs and head from another mii in the mii Chanel? Like make it like they talk to each other but with tho mii's face fuked up or shit like that. No like taking an axe from nothing and poof
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This is one of the best misheard conversation lmao "Just I thought ,he found the weed" Kyle's friend: dude! You have a weed? Why didn't you tell me? "He said with excitement"
I'll say this first. I'm not trying to attack you as a person and this review is only targeting the story so do not take this personally. While the audio was hard to hear in the first video, I could still manage to hear it to a extent. But the concept of something being in your game (or in this case, console) has been done to death. And it makes me think: "Why not have system formatted the console?". On top of that, we never got a explaination of what eteled is, if your protagonist could theorize about the antagonist to give us a idea of what eteled is, that would make the story better in my eyes. There are also the pointless gore segments at the end of both stories which puts me off. Gore does not equal scary. Furthermore, eteled pulled out a axe out of nowhere. Maybe I missed a line but I don't remember eteled having a axe. These are only some of the complaints I have about the story. (once again, why not just format the system and start from scratch?) But if you are reading this and you're the author or the author is reading this, you can only get better. Don't rely on Jeff the Killer as inspiration for horror. Try to scare listeners or readers in a unique way! I only have my opinons as to how to scare the listeners or readers so I won't put them in this comment. Afterall, it's your story! Just don't rely on gore to scare your readers and maybe take a class or research how to write a horror story better! You can only become a better author!
T10 Fox Fisher Thanks for your opinions on the story, I'm glad to have people like you who give out constructive criticism. I'll keep note of this when writing future Creepypastas, once again, thank you.
DELETE DELETE
Also, Translations for Eteled's dialog is in the description.
IceyPie lol
I'm gonna make a creepy pasta of a twisted mario game
IceyPie DELETE YOUR CHANNEL
IceyPie again wow a lot of cliff hangers
Original story:
*There was blood everywhere.*
Remake:
_Let's just dial that back, alright-?_
Yeah now there’s just red stains
@@Combustive_cheese576 ugly red stains😟
Jesus loves ya all and He wants you to turn to Him and repent, it’s your choice if you want to or not…
Top 10 saddest anime deaths
@@lceGhost it just a joke idiot
Lol
Daniel Dragon1 r/woooosh
Daniel Dragon1 your such an idiot. It’s a joke so shut up.
Daniel Dragon1 wait.. the miis arent anime!?!?
Eteled: why are you trying to delete me?
Me: your name is literally delete what am I supposed to do?
True
eteled: oh, this is embarrassing, I deleted many miis soooo im fucked
Nice one
yah
Jesus loves ya all and He wants you to turn to Him and repent, it’s your choice if you want to or not…
*MOM WII DELETED MEEEEE!*
Mom: NO ONE CARES ITS A STUPID WII
"Smashes the Wii" DIIIIIIIIIIIE!
XD
gg
ぉl
How they could of convinced their dad
Take a picture with a camera
It was 2006 smartphones were made in 2007
Philman boe A CAMERA. Not your smartphone camera
Even if they did have a camera etelid would delete it
I was just being a noob so now I look stupid
Plus the fact that this is my most popular comment :(
I can't take this seriously.
In tomodachi life miis have funny voices.
I just imagine when the mii screamed: "YA A A A A A"
lol
YAS THE KID ON CRACK!
it would probably sound like
yahahahah
I tried to exit the mii channel
Me: *unplugs wii*
Me: that’s done
A Watched Pot yeah
A Watched Pot I would throw the wii out the window
A Watched Pot *punts wii out the window lights it on fire blows it up with firecrackers*
I tried to exit but I couldn't
Me: comes to GameStop why is this will acting
i was thinking the same thing
You're an amazing writer! It makes childhood play things seem so edgy and creepy. The way you've written it just creepy enough, but, not in-you-face. Loved it! Keep writing these!
SpalooshbroTV *E d g y*
Ye
*E D J I Y F U C C*
y’know, these gruesome images actually seem hilarious when you apply them to what it would look like on a mii
lmao
wwi*
@@noobysrobloxstudiostutoria704 wi*
@@HyperTextMarkupLanguage-HTMLwii
Jesus loves ya all and He wants you to turn to Him and repent, it’s your choice if you want to or not…
i made eteled on mii maker and i put him to tomodachi life
What Will Happen?
he will delete your data
OH MY GOD!! not my data!!!
Tomodachi life! :)
*Wiill
i'm sorry
Cyber Star McCyborg nothing
Wii want part 3..
Mystical Pie oh BOY
hhjvhjv
😂 very funny
They did
You know shit gets serious when eteled drew eyebrows on himself with a marker in the thumbnail.
Yeah it about to go down😟
HELP MII (Pun very indended XD)
Nice one.
OHHHHH
The ambulance is coming!
WII U WII U WII U
•_______________________•
Neeko Gaming BOO!
not the dislike boo
The ghost boo OK?
Kinda cliched (again) the bloodshot eyes, blood, etc.
mindo?
Listen, the whole story is a clusterfuck of overused horror cliches. Not just a few things.
what the heck
it's not making fun of anything, this kid is dead serious thinking this is "so scary."
What? I'm not being "Dead serious" about anything.
*buys playstation*
Sony: EXCELLENT.
Me: THEY MAD ETELED
"Xbox One is better, lol."
OR A SWITCH
the shadow D 64 TM ikr
@@shogunsstudent9043 ps4 is way better than xbox
who ever eteled belongs to I do NOT want to streetpass with them
Vic Roblox and more I would...
WHY DOE?
Why?????
H belongs to Henry, who used to work for Wii.
USED TO, HE DIED.
Eteled is a hacker, or a scary demon or something.
Why does eteled sound like Kylo Ren?
KYLO REN
voice changer
duck in pond do you mean darth Vader
duck in pond IKR
He really does
Anyone else think eteled sounds like Kylo Ren?
Lol I agree.
lol yes
Can’t un hear it now
KYLE REN
I forgot kylos voice
TO BE HONEST I would tell Nathan to man up
sierra mikulus for that u deserve a like
u deserve a like!
I would tell him to man up too
Hi! I'm Nathan!
sierra mikulus they were childs boi
i dont have find this that creepy. i find the mii dying so sad. i cried while hugging my dog tightly
Shut yo sensitive ass up
Nevermind I just cried
(Anyone from the meme team here?)
Same my dogs called Riley
I have no idea how this made you feel anything. It's a Mii for one thing, and also we've known it for like 2 seconds.
Chaos Playz oh come ON!
It's not real -_-
"HELLO KYLE"
"DIDN'T YOU KNOW YOUR MII IS COMING TO VISIT?"
"THE MII YOU CREATED! HE SHOULD BE HERE ANY MINUTE."
"LEAVING SO SOON? YOU HAVEN'T EVEN SEEN HIM UP CLOSE YET!"
"I WON'T GET AWAY FROM HIM. ONCE HE'S DEALT WITH."
Thx
Actually the last one is “Oh i’ll get away from him. Once he’s dealt with.”
卂尺乇 ㄒ卄ㄖ丂乇 爪ㄚ 尺乇千尺乇几匚乇丂?
@@duckhoodd if I ever see you on my wii I’m deleting you
@@DCescoria N. O. :(
To be honest I would of told Nathan to man up because
1:it's a game
2: it's a cartoon pixelated character
3: this is probably fake
JEEZ
Daily with Skye if it was real it woukd most likely be a hacked wii
Nathan is my name.
It's fake because it's a creppypasta lmao
Also how it is a game, Nathan is a fictional character, aka a character who doesn't exist in real life.
It's not real. It says creepypasta on it. So... Uh... Creepypastas are stories.... Mostly not true... But they can be true... This one is probably not.
Yea
Eteled's voice gives me chills
Dude I Know But Your Profile Picture Gives me chills
No offence
Eteled. The derpiest Mii
Hello brotheren
ouy E M A T ot ereh ma I
Andres Galeano your right
Andres Galeano lol
Andres Galeano XD
*sees eteled* "I'm switching to the switch..."
*you can't run*
I already did because I had a Wii and its glitched out so I saved up for a Nintendo switch
Im switching to the switch to play a game on the switch and switching characters on the switch game. (I tried.)
Basic Hannah wii ís still betta
Basic Hannah I'll make a new mii for you: esare
who else is hiding in the comments?
Arthemis20 mee
Arthemis20 meee
Me: *builds a fort inside comments* I’m scared *adds more to fort*
Not me.
Wii all are
I’m sorry I had to do it
If something like this happensjust unplug the wii
Xenomorph Games *then get a hammer then smack the wii 18 times then sell the metal to a junk shop and burn the disk*
Don't ElteleD is Powerful enough to come back after death so he could be powerful enough to come out of the PowerPoint.
Home button?
Cory Tonelli just trade it on gamestop
He was also a kid, he wouldn't think correctly at this time.
I would throw my Wii in my pool
TheAmazingAndrew I would get my hammer
TheAmazingAndrew i would grab a nuke and blow up thr Wii
I'd throw it across the room, boil it and throw it into the street then light it on fire then put it out and throw it into my pool, then taking it and throwing it into the Grand Canyon.
i would just turn it off and just get it far away
TheAmazingAndrew I would burn it with a flamethrower quickly
Never trust edited comments.
I don’t trust you
Y tho
Haha
Look at the bottom right of your comment
Bruh
i wont play my wii ever again. oh wait... i sold my wii.
tamaka ross i still have my 9 year old wii actually i have *4*
Wii's #R1CHA55
tamaka ross same
tamaka ross why? You could of played Wii and gamecubes game on it!
tamaka ross I did the same
What to do if Eteled appears on your Wii
1.Set it on fire outside.
2.Throw it into a pool.
3.Smash it with a Hammer.
4.Run it over with a Car
And number 5
JUST DELETE ETELED FOR GOD'S SAKE!
You can't delete Eteled
How to Survive Eleled
1. Run
2. Run
3. Run
4.Face the consequences
Did u see watch part 1!!!!
What about option 6.run home to mama
Shadow Chan throwing it in the pool defeats the purpose of seting it on fire but heh ok
If that happened to me my first reaction would be grabbing my phone and start recording it all and selling the console for a high price
Dark Matter lol
*P R O F I T*
Super creepy, can't wait for part 3
Bryson Webber
Ikr
I'm trying to not sound like a Buzz kill, but there's not going to be part 3 cause
at 7:23 it says to be concluded which mean there's not going to be part 3. I will
be suprised if there was a part 3 but, I'm not counting on it.
Seth Horst the finale would part 3 idiot can't you count
Seth Horst there is a Part 3. I'm legit working on it. But you see the thing is, it's the last part.
IceyPie poor eteled he doesn't deserve to be deleted
welp i can never play wii again
same
Same
Haha me to tho I’m gone di
@@randomstuff6241 and then he died.
Wii Eteled You...
uoy edeled iiW
You Eteled Mii?
Haaaaaaaaaaaaa h a ha uh funny
iiw eteled uoy
uoY deteleD iiW
I didnt know you can make Wii that creepy 😰😂
Katootjeuh 401
True true (¬､¬)
I have a wii
Agreed
*ITS...*
*A...*
*W I I...*
Katootjeuh 401 same😂😂😂😂😂
*You report this to nintendo*
Nintendo: *_HAVE YOU TRIED TURNING IT ON AND OFF AGAIN?_*
Nintendo: *Golky Serv-*
You've should've put wii music in the back round 😂
Laci Gillies What about spongebob? 😂
Mystical Pie lol😂😂
My dimension 101 o my god 😂😂
That's what I was thinking……
AAAAAAAAAHAGAGAHA
ok never mind i commented on the first one about the guest mii but ok that got cleared up.
nice
Dungeon Manatee that's eteled
It would be creepy if Guest G(Not existing) would be eteled.
Holy shit I love manatees
Barry B. Benson Just dont sting me
I’m not gonna get to sleep
Kaden Bungay it's 10:01
S A M E
Kaden Bungay nothing is gonna get you this is a fake story ok its alright
I'll put eteled as the dark lord in miitopia lol
lol
lol
Pixel Bacon I put him as every person in every town.
lol
ill put him as the darkest lord
"I was bored"
H0STILEzERO I
Eteled is not bad guy he trying to save himself I will leave him in my wii and be friends
Eteled is Deleted back words so maybe he was deleted but then you got hacked some way
part 1
It's delete not deleted
Jackfarr9710 its delete backwards not DELETED
DuMmY
No shit sherlock
Have you watched part 1?
Yay it's part 2
"are *wii* gonna have a problem"
"you best *switch* up that attitude"
"you're playing a dangerous *game boy* "
"don't *nintendo sixty-four* ce me to use this"
omg I'm so exited for the final episode
Me too, but also my new creepypasta called Habits is out! Check it out!
Ur profile name is nice
Man Up Or Chicken Out ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
I would've -asked- *FORCED* my parents to return the Wii. Also, i'm watching this in the dark.
id just format system memory
Me: *sees Eteled* "Oh yay he's here we can play forever! Oh I'll make him some friends! :D"
How u gonna make him friends if he just gonna kill em🤨
Eteled: friends?!
eteled just wanted to play wii sports bowling. #eteledlivesmatter
Dorset Ball start this movement!!
This creepypasta was the first creepypasta to actually SCARE ME (and scar me) so good job dude👍
This shit is nothing
IKR
Ony thing that scared me wus de voice
Yeah
Ikr this is scary really scary it's sad too
Btw i got delelted for no reason then i broke my wii then i started te bagging it then i bruned it after that i throw it in the lava lamp i had it took me like 4 mins to put the wii in
ere core y tho
*D E L E T E*
*E T E L E D*
I love you eteled no matter what people say I want you in my mii group
Sammy Laurence no
stop
you fuckin' batim fan
Make him then!
Sammy
Please
Leave the demons alone
First bendy, now this?
Please man
U miss spelled your name it’s Sammy Lawrence not Sammy laurence
#Pray4Mii
Spoopy scary eteled
sends shivers down your spine .
eduardo brito And sells your doom tonight.
Lol you guys actually continued the song xD
WolfMagic is lit yeet
While he kills anyone at sight
sometimes the views disappeared sometimes while watching this...
*scery*
xXxA_Doge_LoverxXx yep
DELETE
xXxA_Doge_LoverxXx nah spoopy
*_ETELED_* ...tog yeht yas dluoc uoy sseug I
When I went into fullscreen his face would appear as my background wtf
Yeah it's a glitch on a type of android phone dont worry about it
U fail
You sound like those kids in call of duty lobbies that try make deep voice to sound grown up
flightless kitchen goner I like his voice
The story is written from the perspective of a kid, so a kid reading it makes sense.
flightless kitchen goner lol
I'm actually 13.
IceyPie oh. ._.sorry
You act like a person to hate little children
*takes wii*
*smashes wii*
goodbye satan
*OOF*
Wii: *GOLKY SERV*-
"h-help mii"
Angel Black “s-s-senpai~?”
"God this eteled is more worse than me!" (1x1x1x1)
1x1x20_0
you're a Roblox hacker you're not that bad because roblox is something called a game
1x1x20_0 your never alone ;-;
citrus sync / GOLDEN JAKE he isnt a hacker he was a test account to test exploits
1x1x20_0 nothing is worse than ugandan nuckles in april
He cried about a video game chacter??? he could make a new one
Game theorist 2 read the first one
Man this new Wii update is crazy man
Ok so its 2006, you're 6 years old and you upload this video in 2017. You're 17 years old yet your voice hasnt changed at all smh😂
XD. But I was actually born in 2004, so im 13 now, coming onto 14. 7 is just the age of the character in the story.
IceyPie Oooh i thought you made this up lmao
Lol
I was born in 2006 I'm 11 now and i still sound like a two year old
citrus sync / GOLDEN JAKE I was born in 2008 and I sound like an eteled
Luckily my Wii isn't haunted...
Same
The MII whispered “help me” More Like “Help MII”
I mean, it's cool and stuff but you should try to make it more realistic, blood coming out from a mii? A wierd af mii chopping the legs and head from another mii in the mii Chanel?
Like make it like they talk to each other but with tho mii's face fuked up or shit like that. No like taking an axe from nothing and poof
Orange Phantom C Creepypastas are not supposed to be believable
Be quiet I like this
I made a mii based off of eteled called 'He's Back'.
How do you write these creepypastas?! They're absolutely amazing! Keep it up!!! 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
dude this is so good turn it into a simulation or a texture pack for wii if you know how
skate 318. Really.........this story could only scare a two year old
still its cool
OMG I WAS A YEAR OLD DEC 5 IS MY BIRTHDAY
endergirl1421_YT so you're saying you are a few weeks old?
OMG SAME MONTH SAME DAY MY SISTERS BIRTHDAY WAS DEC 5 SHES 5 YEARS OLD
Oh my god it’s my birthday too
Wow
OH MY GOD IM STILL A SPERM CELL MY BIRTHDAY IS ON 69th of the 420th Of REEE
Top 10 anime betrayals
Delete! Del ete! D E L E T E !
hi i like your commet
your average loser Matt Hardy? Is that you?
! E T E L E D !ete leD !eteleD
This is the most magical username you'll ever see, like your name
I found your channel
why did I have to eat during this?
1000 out of 10 creepypasta
Aidan Harris The Seal King if you were eating pasta that would be perfect
yes it would but I think I would still be disgusted
Aidan Harris The Seal King this isnt scary tho
it's not scary but its creepy creppy enough to be a creepy pasta
Andrew'sComputerChannel -lol-
I love this story it’s really good
I'm screaming
This is so good omg
eteled spelled backwards is delete SO DELETE HIM
did you watch the first part?
ik u cnt delete him though
Gamer1shot he tried!!!! Idiot
See part 1!!!!!!
Gamer1shot what if he was called Deteled?
Me: Let’s play some Wii!
Eteled: heh think again
Me Again: Ok, lemme rephrase that. Let’s not play Wii
I'm making an eteled mii rn lmao pray for me
camila.shook msp me to
he says the creepypastas are fake
ur mom gay diss tracks
You get emotional over MII’s?.....
Dylan Dixie I don't but I do have a wii
Mii’s are family:)
Dylan Dixie I do
Ikr it’s like a rick crying over a morty
I get emotional over Miis.
I get emotional over anything.
"Eteled = Delete"
I never knew the Wii was BACKWARDS COMPATABLE
OOF
Velrage
No shit
? Wot ?
GamingWOLF
No shit = That was obvious.
oof
do u know da wae?
we nid da kween
do u know da wae?
*Wii* Du U Nut Nu Da Wae *Why Do You Not Know The Way*
Ofelia more like
UHH
You know
Minecraft Death Noise
Knuckles mania...
Knuckles boom...
Knuckles all star racing...
Knuckles dash
Knuckles jump
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Knuckles mania thanks
Hi
This is one of the best misheard conversation lmao
"Just I thought ,he found the weed"
Kyle's friend: dude! You have a weed? Why didn't you tell me?
"He said with excitement"
I'll say this first. I'm not trying to attack you as a person and this review is only targeting the story so do not take this personally.
While the audio was hard to hear in the first video, I could still manage to hear it to a extent. But the concept of something being in your game (or in this case, console) has been done to death. And it makes me think: "Why not have system formatted the console?". On top of that, we never got a explaination of what eteled is, if your protagonist could theorize about the antagonist to give us a idea of what eteled is, that would make the story better in my eyes. There are also the pointless gore segments at the end of both stories which puts me off. Gore does not equal scary.
Furthermore, eteled pulled out a axe out of nowhere. Maybe I missed a line but I don't remember eteled having a axe. These are only some of the complaints I have about the story. (once again, why not just format the system and start from scratch?) But if you are reading this and you're the author or the author is reading this, you can only get better. Don't rely on Jeff the Killer as inspiration for horror. Try to scare listeners or readers in a unique way! I only have my opinons as to how to scare the listeners or readers so I won't put them in this comment. Afterall, it's your story! Just don't rely on gore to scare your readers and maybe take a class or research how to write a horror story better! You can only become a better author!
T10 Fox Fisher Thanks for your opinions on the story, I'm glad to have people like you who give out constructive criticism.
I'll keep note of this when writing future Creepypastas, once again, thank you.
IceyPie Try doing something other than just creepypastas. That shit just attracts 9 year olds to your channel.
TommyTom I actually do reaction videos and commentaries as well.
T10 Fox Fisher lol
He probably didn't know that system formatting was a thing or how to do it
TommyTom your probably nine yourself.
I wanna cry, somehow I love miis and how you can customise them today im checking my mii channel even tho I know its fake
As soon as Nathan was in Kyle's home the time was 13:37
Ya don't say!?????
Elite.
Mii channel is best game.
Im glad i got a Nintendo switch instead of a wii
Beau Davis true dat
And eteled will be there in super Mario ossedy
super eteled oddesy
Beau Davis in soviet Russia switch gets YOU
Beau Davis its a fake creepy tale
I grew up with a Wii, so this is giving me major nostalgia, but in a terrifying way, and I love it
THE CONCLUSION MUST HAPPEN ASAP!!!!
Wut cho mill look like?
"The Mii Channel Music was all distorted"
NO, WE DON'T NEED ANY MORE MII CHANNEL MUSIC EDITS, THERE'S ENOUGH ALREADY
Good story liked
I WAS FREAKING BORN IN 2006 BAKA
GirlTDMHerobrine same...
If Eteled was bothering me at the start I'd Just burn my Wii and ask my dad for a new one.
Eteled appeared on my 2DS!!!! Holy crappp
MicahDogeGaming it a creepy pasta NOT REAL
William Hutchins but he did...
William Hutchins now it's stuck on sleep mode and whenever I flick the switch it just says "DELETED"
MicahDogeGaming FLIM IT
Liar
HOLLY FUCK!!!¡!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!¡
Javier Zavala this is fake
AM SCARED TO SHIT
Lol another person with the lastname Zavala
Who is Holly?