Stalled Trek: The City on the Edge of Foreclosure (Full Movie)

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  • Опубликовано: 31 дек 2024

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  • @Floydrush-zx9wz
    @Floydrush-zx9wz Год назад +240

    12:17 "You cannot have your fate, and EDITH too"
    What a line, bravo script writer, bravo 👌

    • @isomeme
      @isomeme Год назад +13

      Yeah, that was some incredible writing, and ludicrously funny. 😂

    • @OhmyPeteWhole
      @OhmyPeteWhole Год назад

      It's from Great Space Coaster. ruclips.net/video/ceHbkjKQ3vg/видео.html

    • @cpuuk
      @cpuuk Год назад +8

      That was a rather good line.

    • @waltwhite2534
      @waltwhite2534 Год назад +6

      Pausing the video here - don't know how they'll top that one!

    • @jv-lk7bc
      @jv-lk7bc Год назад +2

      Harlan will NOT forgive you .. but you're in good company ;)

  • @protorhinocerator142
    @protorhinocerator142 Год назад +82

    I thought the McCoy/McGruff impersonation when he said, "Assassins! Murderers!" was spot-on.

    • @SteveKluver
      @SteveKluver Год назад +7

      I loved the: "Politicians" part best! 😊

    • @flagg85
      @flagg85 Год назад +4

      Telemarketers!!!

    • @gregshock
      @gregshock Год назад +1

      You mean, “Mr Spott” on.

    • @Robert08010
      @Robert08010 5 месяцев назад

      And the spots were on him too!

  • @trotbelatrot3282
    @trotbelatrot3282 Год назад +100

    Kirk saying "You had an adopted sister that started the war with the klingons!" while viewing history thru Guardian. Hysterical!

    • @scotth6814
      @scotth6814 Год назад +5

      A nice homage.

    • @paulcochran1721
      @paulcochran1721 Год назад +5

      Hopefully they correct that timeline also!

    • @seanryan3020
      @seanryan3020 Год назад +1

      I missed the reference the first time I read this comment and in the video. Caught it when I saw the comment while looking for another one!

    • @bentonmarcum8924
      @bentonmarcum8924 7 месяцев назад +1

      Her name was Wadda B'Itch

  • @TheNeonParadox
    @TheNeonParadox Год назад +161

    The little details in this make it absolutely fkn superb. The red-shirt transporting into the rock popped me so hard. 😂😂 How does this not have more views?

    • @ralphwiggum3134
      @ralphwiggum3134 Год назад +9

      I like how they did the glow around the woman when we first see her and the boxes behind the Spock character that let you know he was behind the attempts to kill her.

    • @powerbadpowerbad
      @powerbadpowerbad Год назад +3

      Man,I laughed out loud at that sight gag !!! TOO-funny. LOL.

    • @WickedStepGrandmother
      @WickedStepGrandmother Год назад +9

      Yes, the TARDIS in the background when they first reach New York was dang funny!

    • @harvey3rdman464
      @harvey3rdman464 Год назад +2

      I noticed that too. Also the sign for "Rottenberry's Fresh Fruit" after Krok and Scott land in the city. The apologies at the end, too. I agree; superb.

    • @arcanondrum6543
      @arcanondrum6543 Год назад +3

      Red Shirt (Rock) guy is Ensign Bill's son. And you would have to remember that from an early, early Family Guy episode. This -> 2:39 is the Wilhelm Scream, BTW.

  • @BasementBerean
    @BasementBerean Год назад +147

    This is fantastic! I hope this gets shown at Star Trek conventions, and that somehow you are compensated for all the work this must have taken

  • @PeBoVision
    @PeBoVision Год назад +68

    Love how an original story element is brought in (the giant statues), and then not used. Clever.
    There is just so much passion on display here, that I can't come up with anything better than 'WOW'.
    Kudos and sincere admiration to everyone involved.

    • @kellyq21
      @kellyq21 Год назад

      Explain.

    • @PeBoVision
      @PeBoVision Год назад +8

      @kellyq21 the original Harlan Ellison story includes giant statues...they spoke - not the gateway as in the show....irlt was decided that they were too pricey to gilm, and so we're never shown, and the gateway spoke instead.

    • @grindelston5968
      @grindelston5968 Год назад +2

      Ohhh, thank you for explaining that!
      Haha, very clever Easter egg!

    • @PeBoVision
      @PeBoVision Год назад +1

      @@grindelston5968 Too bad when Discovery has the opportunity to introduce the ancient giant statues in Guardian of Forever (they had the CGI and budget to pull it off), they too chose to ignore Ellison, and went with "Carl" instead.
      Just another reaosn to feel "burned" by Discovery. (but it still does Roddenberry better than Foundation does Azimov - even if only ever so slightly)

  • @ThatTieDyeGuy
    @ThatTieDyeGuy Год назад +35

    I laughed, I cried, I hurled. PLEASE MAKE MORE THESE. The Spock and McCoy voices were perfect :D

  • @NathanTarantlawriter
    @NathanTarantlawriter Год назад +9

    Spocks ears are perfect.

  • @stevejordan7275
    @stevejordan7275 Год назад +11

    Only someone who truly loved the original could possibly do this to it.
    I hope you're as proud of this as you should be; only Mad Magazine could have come close.

  • @michaelflowers5712
    @michaelflowers5712 Год назад +5

    " guess You won't be needing that electric razor"-that was great!

  • @juliemarshall7458
    @juliemarshall7458 Год назад +5

    The poster on the wall behind Krok and Spott that says "Rottenberry" gave me a reason to live. 😁

  • @lechatbotte.
    @lechatbotte. Год назад +80

    Absolutely terrific and hilarious. I was laughing so hard. Well done bravo 👏🏻

    • @daveroche6522
      @daveroche6522 Год назад +2

      "Captain, this appears to be yet another example of the excrescence of human illogic........".

    • @DoctorDuckie1964
      @DoctorDuckie1964 Год назад +1

      AND...drumroll please! Bette White made Star Trek!❤❤❤❤🎉😂

    • @tonyb6007
      @tonyb6007 Год назад +2

      The fact that Mr. Spott was wearing his cap as a mask too funny..

  • @MrNobodysSanctuary
    @MrNobodysSanctuary Год назад +12

    Set phasers on funny, you stunned me with this parody! 🖖

  • @ChristinaMoore79
    @ChristinaMoore79 Год назад +60

    Love the parody puppets! Great re-telling of this classic Trek episode.

    • @KutWrite
      @KutWrite Год назад +2

      Yes. What a paradox: An animated puppet.

  • @Bob-qk2zg
    @Bob-qk2zg Год назад +17

    The red shirt ensign who teleported into the rock got me! 🤣♥️👍

    • @seanryan3020
      @seanryan3020 Год назад +2

      I've always wanted to see that happen in the show!

    • @Robert08010
      @Robert08010 7 месяцев назад +1

      There were lots of great passover eggs tucked away. Did you notice the star wars and lost in space intros up on screens on the bridge?

    • @gorillaau
      @gorillaau 5 месяцев назад

      I have just gotten to that part. Hilarious! Especially with the other red shirt deciding no to say anything.

    • @jayrenner211
      @jayrenner211 5 месяцев назад

      I think Battlestar Galactia did it first, but with an entire Raider.

  • @tomkerruish2982
    @tomkerruish2982 Год назад +13

    I was quite impressed by the references to the original script. Then you threw in "In Search Of"? Magnificent!

  • @afriendlyfaceinthecrowd
    @afriendlyfaceinthecrowd Год назад +29

    Now *this* is Trek!! I love all the call-backs to Harlan Ellison’s original script. You did this episode proud! Subscribed, liked, and sharing! 🖖 ❤😂

    • @milascave2
      @milascave2 Год назад

      Huh. I've read Ellison, and I have met Ellison, but I did not know that he wrote Star Trek scripts.

  • @williamschlosser77
    @williamschlosser77 Год назад +22

    Totally lost it at"...you cannot have your fate and Edith too." 😂😂😂

  • @CalverWeems
    @CalverWeems Год назад +6

    Complete with two, count 'em, two Wilhelm screams! Genius!!

  • @buzzinpoa
    @buzzinpoa Год назад +38

    Funny, and very clever...!! Very well done and written...!! A pleasure to watch...!! Congratulations!! I'll share it...!!

  • @timepoet77
    @timepoet77 Год назад +19

    If Harlan Ellison were here and he saw this, he'd be laughing with victorious delight.

  • @eddiechoir
    @eddiechoir Год назад +30

    absolutely superb. Top notch score. Gets close to Star Trek IV without ever quoting it.

  • @thebigdog2295
    @thebigdog2295 Год назад +8

    I think Harlan Ellison would have loved this. He wrote some books that could have been considered comedy. This was fantastic. Especially Mr. Spott's eyebrows. 😅😂🤣

  • @Strawberry_Fire
    @Strawberry_Fire Год назад +71

    Honestly this has been the best parody I've seen! And it's so cool! I'm so happy that youtube recommended it to me.This definitely made my day, your effort in sharing this episode is greatly appreciated. ✨️🖖💙

  • @johnmarx3919
    @johnmarx3919 Год назад +30

    Love that message to Harlan at the end - he HATED what they did 2 his episode and would've loved someone taking the piss out of it like this!!!

    • @stevenjones6780
      @stevenjones6780 Год назад +3

      I never quite understood that, it's such a beloved episode. After all, this story concept was directly related or lifted from Ray Bradbury's short story 'ASound of Thunder'- definitely a concept worth retelling...

    • @isomeme
      @isomeme Год назад +5

      ​@@stevenjones6780, Ellison's version was (not surprisingly) much darker. Just for example the drug that set the whole plot in motion was being smuggled by a crew member. What better job to transport illegal drugs between planets, right? Roddenberry vetoed that idea; I think it would have been a much better story element. All the changes to Ellison's original story were similar.

    • @joangordoneieio
      @joangordoneieio Год назад +4

      Exactly! Harlan has always been my Spirit Animal. Im imagining what hed be saying about AI ( I Have No Mouth & I Must Scream!)

    • @afriendlyfaceinthecrowd
      @afriendlyfaceinthecrowd Год назад +2

      ​@@joangordoneieioHarlan definitely was prescient about AI's dangers, even if he didn't forsee all the "countries as beautiful women" shorts.

  • @sandraqureshi9333
    @sandraqureshi9333 Год назад +4

    I love the way you put, Dr Who's TARDIS in the background for a second! So funny 🤣

  • @johnhamm5361
    @johnhamm5361 Год назад +16

    I hate to use this phrase but OMG that was hilariously cheesy. Kudos to the folks that put this together, I need more laughs like this in my life. Thanks again

  • @antonnym214
    @antonnym214 5 месяцев назад +3

    Outstanding. I wrote a book about the original series, and City was my favorite episode.

  • @anthonylowder6687
    @anthonylowder6687 Год назад +2

    I absolutely lost it when they did the reference to ‘In Search Of’!🤣🤣

  • @chrisperrien7055
    @chrisperrien7055 Год назад +5

    "He's a briquet , Jam" 😎
    The main crew not even noticing the red-shirt dying immediately is classic Trek.
    The little fight/action choreography was excellent
    "Edith Keester" subtle risque
    the "In Search of" cut was spot on too.

  • @Gunnberg85
    @Gunnberg85 5 месяцев назад +1

    It's been a year, but the algorithm finally got around to sending me this gem.
    Simply delightful!
    Thank you for making this!

  • @CailenCambeul
    @CailenCambeul Год назад +7

    "Telemarketers!" This is as good as one of the Sex Trek episodes with Randy Spears as Captain Quirk. Liked and Subscribed.

  • @smokeynedith3555
    @smokeynedith3555 Год назад +5

    I remember this episode with Joan Collins. Well done.

  • @tunnsie
    @tunnsie 5 месяцев назад +1

    I haven’t belly laughed this much in a long time. I cracked up when I noticed the red shirt arm sticking out of the rock after beaming down. Bravo, bravo. Wonderful writing!

  • @Justiciar1284
    @Justiciar1284 Год назад +32

    Great writing! Classic parody! Thank you!

  • @sandraqureshi9333
    @sandraqureshi9333 Год назад +14

    The city on the edge of forever is one of my favorite original series episodes. Really funny!😂 I couldn't stop laughing really great will share!

  • @Deborita777
    @Deborita777 Год назад +6

    "Murderers! Politicians!" Lmaooo!
    You gotta do more of these! This parody of ST:ToS is brilliant.
    The classic comedic "triple" is utilized wonderfully!

  • @thelosthippie1969
    @thelosthippie1969 Год назад +7

    Bravo! Love the shout out to Harlan Ellison.

  • @ananominity
    @ananominity Год назад +6

    I'm flabbergasted that I never knew about this series you've done!
    Every one of them is so detailed I can't imagine the time put into them.
    Great job with the voices!

  • @kjamison5951
    @kjamison5951 Год назад +5

    The great tragedy is only 57K views at this stage!
    Liked, loved and subscribed.
    More please!
    Not only did you parody a classic, iconic episode of original Trek, the tiny details, visual gags and more are brilliantly conceived.

  • @mastercheif117ize
    @mastercheif117ize Год назад +8

    I hope he makes more episodes! Hilarious!!

  • @Terminus_El_Camino
    @Terminus_El_Camino Год назад +13

    That was fantastic. I *almost* didn't click on it. Never seen this channel before. I hope there's more.

    • @OldTrekkie23
      @OldTrekkie23 Год назад

      STALLED TREK: AXED WEE ARE. Send up the lawsuit against Star Trek: Axanar

    • @seanryan3020
      @seanryan3020 Год назад +1

      I almost didn't either! So glad I did! I almost died laughing!

  • @voyagesfanfilm
    @voyagesfanfilm Год назад +16

    Haha! That was great - love all the little easter eggs too! :D

  • @0MetallicaManX0
    @0MetallicaManX0 Год назад +4

    FREAKEN GENIUS! I need more of this!

  • @aerospike00
    @aerospike00 Год назад +6

    The "In Search Of..." reference was AWESOME! I watched that show as a kid, and it often scared the daylights out of me! 😂

  • @mcparadise97
    @mcparadise97 Год назад +8

    I can’t stop laughing 😭🤣 what the hell…I love it! 😍 We need more Star Trek TOS spoofs, parodies and reboots out there like this, because this is freakin golden. ✨

  • @762MusicFan
    @762MusicFan 3 месяца назад +1

    As a life long Trekkie, I approve! Loved all the little inside jokes & Easter eggs. Well done!

  • @Francois424
    @Francois424 Год назад +7

    This was awesome ! Thanks for making it.

  • @stevesmith7839
    @stevesmith7839 Год назад +2

    THANK YOU for going up side down. In the Star Trek universe space ships are always upright even though there is no such thing.

  • @FabricFool
    @FabricFool Год назад +4

    I’d give an extra thumbs-up for the “fate and Edith too” joke alone.
    Genius!!

  • @rodimuspryme1267
    @rodimuspryme1267 Год назад +8

    “You cannot have your fate, and Edith too”. 🤣🤣

  • @Doodles68
    @Doodles68 Год назад +6

    As puppeteer/ventriloquist, I applaud your puppetry skills! The lip synch and bottom jaw only movement are very impressive. Keep it up!

    • @MarkLargent
      @MarkLargent  Год назад +3

      Thanks, but I have to confess that all the puppets are computer generated, so I'm animating them instead of puppeteering them. In fact, I built in a little upper jaw movement just so it doesn't seem too mechanical. :-)

    • @spuds6423
      @spuds6423 Год назад +1

      ​@@MarkLargentObviously your computer went to the "William Shatner School of OverActing"!!!😂😂😂

    • @grindelston5968
      @grindelston5968 Год назад +1

      @Doodles68
      That is a dying art , my friend - thank you for keeping the old skills alive.
      There's no reason why traditional puppetry and computer modelling can't both exist today. Both require great talent.

  • @fr57ujf
    @fr57ujf Год назад +4

    You cannot have your fate and Edith too. Wonderful.

  • @DistracticusPrime
    @DistracticusPrime Год назад +7

    Wonderful! So many perfect details show your love and joy for good writing.

  • @nobillismccaw7450
    @nobillismccaw7450 Год назад +5

    This is very well done. Thank you kindly for your art.

  • @mysterymac38
    @mysterymac38 Год назад +4

    Well done sir. From start to the very end. Loved the photo's in the end credits!

  • @ladymyst8809
    @ladymyst8809 Год назад +24

    This has made my day Fantastic!!!! I love these and today I get to watch a new one Awesome!! Thank you for creating this wonderful movie❣❣❣❣❣❣❣❣❣

  • @Shindai
    @Shindai Год назад +2

    The way the alternate future comes around in this is just impeccable xD

  • @andrewmurray1550
    @andrewmurray1550 Год назад +2

    love the "Time Tunnel" promo.

  • @daveroche6522
    @daveroche6522 Год назад +27

    Childish? Infantile? Puerile? Hell yeah - haven't laughed this long 'n loud for ages - thank you & more please.....

  • @RobertGraziose
    @RobertGraziose 3 месяца назад +1

    A very humorous parody of my favorite episode. Do more these are great.

  • @derrickpatten7252
    @derrickpatten7252 Год назад +9

    "Then I stepped into a BEAR TRAP that was placed under Edith's welcome mat."
    "Clearly an amazing coincidence." As He says this We can see boxes on the table behind Him. One is marked "ACME Bear Trap", the other "Happy Funtime Roller Skates"😂

  • @charliebsexcitinglifeplayl3046
    @charliebsexcitinglifeplayl3046 Год назад +6

    Absolutely Brilliant and funny! Make more!

  • @_JimS
    @_JimS Год назад +1

    Love the running gags with the Starship elevator.

  • @chrisgavin3330
    @chrisgavin3330 Год назад +2

    I had heard this production was really good, but was not ready for THIS! Wow! Well done to the obviously very talented team👌✔👍
    Thanks!!

  • @marklafrance8141
    @marklafrance8141 Год назад +6

    Outstanding! Hilarious! Had to keep backing it up because of laughter interrupting the next joke! Way too funny! I absolutely love this! BRILLIANT! The end credits totally Awesome!...👍👍👍👍👍 Bravo!

  • @mrquicky
    @mrquicky Год назад +7

    I loved it more than anything put out by the studios in the past several years.

  • @fernandogarajalde4066
    @fernandogarajalde4066 Год назад +4

    Ghost of Harlan Ellison is thinking of coming back to sue them, but he can’t get in touch with the Guardian of Forever. 😆

  • @AudiophileStooge
    @AudiophileStooge Год назад +5

    Thanks for this. As a TOS fan, I thoroughly enjoyed it.

  • @chrisschembari2486
    @chrisschembari2486 Год назад +11

    Fantastic work here. Thank you very much for this. I love so many of the gags in this, but I especially love how Spott appears to try to right the time line by "killing the Keester" himself. (Allegedly.) Quite a character development for the devil-faced science officer! 😂

    • @eddieboggs8306
      @eddieboggs8306 Год назад

      Spock always made me think he was the reputation of Satan .

    • @chrisschembari2486
      @chrisschembari2486 Год назад

      @@eddieboggs8306 yeah, it even caused trouble for the show when Gene was still trying to get it off the ground. Some TV executives didn't want to put the show on the air because of Spock looking somewhat devilish.

  • @SoawNyce
    @SoawNyce Год назад +4

    haha just spot on excellent. Animation and the writing. I hope you get the Million views , you deserve.

  • @pete4258
    @pete4258 Год назад +3

    Spott's knit cap just had me dying. 😂😂😂

  • @chrischristel6680
    @chrischristel6680 3 месяца назад +1

    An absolute masterpiece! Funny, creative, well done!!

  • @DarkStar-wu9nq
    @DarkStar-wu9nq Год назад +5

    These are just superb and I am addicted now !!
    I would love you to be financed and produced all the series and films
    The film would be amazing !

  • @dalebronniman9060
    @dalebronniman9060 Год назад +1

    I watched every episode as it originally aired and it's still by far the best of the Star Trek series.

  • @feenix219
    @feenix219 Год назад +4

    I love that it cuts so deep, like elements of Ellison's original script being present in the distance, but opting to look at the space donut instead.

  • @liteney
    @liteney Год назад +13

    Scotty: 'What happened Captain, you only just left.'
    McCoy: 'It was 35 years for us.'
    Spock: 'It would've been 18 with good behaviour Doctor.'
    McCoy: 'That guy had it coming to him.'
    Ha, ha, ha....
    I cannot stop laughing at that sceen, that is simply hilarious. Thank you good sir, well done. Well done indeed. Cheers... Live long and prosper... :)

  • @MoonjumperReviews
    @MoonjumperReviews Год назад +9

    Hilarious and wonderful production value! Congratulations and well done!

  • @Allegheny500
    @Allegheny500 Год назад +8

    Amazeballs, keep em coming! I laughed my (bleep) off!

  • @RobertScott1952
    @RobertScott1952 Год назад +1

    That was a gas! Thanks. So many inside jokes to see. I loved it.

  • @elroma7712
    @elroma7712 Год назад +4

    Holy shit, it's like the parodies my brother and I used to make back when we were kids but with StarWars instead

  • @pex_the_unalivedrunk6785
    @pex_the_unalivedrunk6785 Год назад +3

    Just about 2-and-a-half minutes into this...and I'm totally hooked! Once the Doctor starts ranting about "murderers, assassins, telemarketers", I knew this was going to be golden. (Oh, My) It makes all my planned parodies about every time the War Pigeons are mentioned, look like amateur satire material. (Coo-Coo!) 🐦

  • @billwrascal8147
    @billwrascal8147 Год назад +6

    Clearly the Burroughs computer did all the hard work, deserves top billing. :)

    • @Roboprogs
      @Roboprogs Год назад

      Missed opportunity to say “Hello, computer?!?” to the Fakentosh on the bench, though.

  • @DIREWOLFx75
    @DIREWOLFx75 Год назад +2

    Great parody.
    This series is now competing with Star Wreck, the Pirkinning as my favorite Star trek parody.

  • @angiehill5884
    @angiehill5884 Год назад +1

    I LOVE how they put "In Search of..." in the episode!! 💜 This is AWESOME!!

  • @brianhiles8164
    @brianhiles8164 Год назад +4

    (02:40) Love the _Wilhelm scream_ put here!

  • @Finarphin
    @Finarphin Год назад +8

    Good job. Looks like a lot of work. I'm making a puppet movie of Macbeth (with Barbies), and I don't know if I'll ever finish it. Nice work.

    • @MarkLargent
      @MarkLargent  Год назад +3

      Thanks! Don't give up. It took me three years to finish this one.

    • @grindelston5968
      @grindelston5968 Год назад

      If CBS had any sense they would hire you and your team straight away!

  • @paulthew2
    @paulthew2 Год назад +2

    Fantastic writing....so enjoyable, thank you! The characters were portrayed superbly, and the dialogue between each other was fantastic, as was the story line. Awesome.

  • @southernguy35
    @southernguy35 Год назад +2

    Gee, this is the best thing to watch since Walter Cronkite. It makes you wish there was another pandemic so we could all sit home and watch these.

  • @bupdaddy1
    @bupdaddy1 Год назад +1

    "That's interesting, Spock, but let's go look at this Stone Doughnut instead." LOL😆

  • @miniskunk
    @miniskunk Год назад +2

    Nice use of the Wilhelm scream!

  • @carlpeters8690
    @carlpeters8690 Год назад +3

    Even the end credits are great. Well done!

  • @GenStallion
    @GenStallion Год назад +4

    Spot is the parent who has had enough of their kids shit.

  • @fractalelf7760
    @fractalelf7760 Год назад +1

    Well done, and even doing the beginning and ending credits. My hats off to you!

  • @gilbertcouillard6313
    @gilbertcouillard6313 4 месяца назад +1

    Mr. Spott: "Conjecture...she's a kook."
    TOO FUNNY!

  • @KutWrite
    @KutWrite Год назад +2

    Haha! Great! Hope you do one of "Trouble with Tribbles!"

  • @bernardocoto8519
    @bernardocoto8519 Год назад +1

    Have been re-watching the original series lately, and now my wife (who has never even heard of it) got hooked on it out of the blue. Loved this short was amazing, it's a perfect parody! The puppets only make it better.

  • @ivanstanoffski1444
    @ivanstanoffski1444 Год назад +5

    Space with rooms to rent 😂😂😂😂 what a punchline cant stop laughing. 😅😅😅😅😅

  • @bethwaller1789
    @bethwaller1789 Год назад +1

    Sulu's "Oh, my!" cracked me up.

  • @X-boomer
    @X-boomer Год назад +1

    Brilliant and a must watch for all genuine classic TOS fans