love the video, the troll levels are just amazing I'm not a video editor, but I'll try to give some feedback (and a sacrifice to the algorithm in the form of a comment): Scene at 4:12, talking about your skissue. You finish the sentence, then have the black screen during the reload. Then you see the beginning again for 2 seconds to finish your sentence. Then you play the beginning for 2 seconds and then jump to another scene with no transition. Maybe only the first half of the sentence is enough, or you zoom in on yourself or something like that. Or play the beginning up to the first door. In my opinion, hard cuts are always dangerous/tricky. It's a small thing, but such jumps often manage to disrupt the dynamics of the video. And I like that you no longer start the videos with a zoom on you, but I personally think a zoom would be appropriate in scenes like this. Because your reaction was great :D Also, I think the "Some Skissueing later" section at 6:20 was too long. I really like this kind of visualization, especially with the music. It shows how often you die in such levels :D But at some points you stop/jump on the spot and interact with the chat. But in time-lapse, 5 seconds of inactivity seems even longer. And there's no voice from you in the fast-forward, so those 30 seconds aren't very entertaining for the viewer. We are here for you first, and for Mario second. You have an incredibly entertaining sense of humor that we really appreciate. When parts of the video have no sound, they have to be extra good to make up for the fact that we can't hear you :) Also (although it's possible that it's just me and it's just a tiny thing :D): The text is not centered properly. It has the same distance from both edges of the video, not from the edges of the game. It immediately looked 'off' to me. But as I said: Could be a me issue :) Keep it up! :) - NinjaSeven
Thank you so much for the detailed feedback NinjaSeven! I truly appreciate the time you put into typing this out and I shared it with the team. We'll work on continuing to level up our game and create better vids :D Please do let me know if you are interested in giving more feedback, the team loves it
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love the video, the troll levels are just amazing
I'm not a video editor, but I'll try to give some feedback (and a sacrifice to the algorithm in the form of a comment):
Scene at 4:12, talking about your skissue. You finish the sentence, then have the black screen during the reload. Then you see the beginning again for 2 seconds to finish your sentence. Then you play the beginning for 2 seconds and then jump to another scene with no transition.
Maybe only the first half of the sentence is enough, or you zoom in on yourself or something like that. Or play the beginning up to the first door. In my opinion, hard cuts are always dangerous/tricky. It's a small thing, but such jumps often manage to disrupt the dynamics of the video. And I like that you no longer start the videos with a zoom on you, but I personally think a zoom would be appropriate in scenes like this. Because your reaction was great :D
Also, I think the "Some Skissueing later" section at 6:20 was too long. I really like this kind of visualization, especially with the music. It shows how often you die in such levels :D But at some points you stop/jump on the spot and interact with the chat. But in time-lapse, 5 seconds of inactivity seems even longer. And there's no voice from you in the fast-forward, so those 30 seconds aren't very entertaining for the viewer. We are here for you first, and for Mario second.
You have an incredibly entertaining sense of humor that we really appreciate. When parts of the video have no sound, they have to be extra good to make up for the fact that we can't hear you :)
Also (although it's possible that it's just me and it's just a tiny thing :D): The text is not centered properly. It has the same distance from both edges of the video, not from the edges of the game. It immediately looked 'off' to me. But as I said: Could be a me issue :)
Keep it up! :)
- NinjaSeven
Thank you so much for the detailed feedback NinjaSeven!
I truly appreciate the time you put into typing this out and I shared it with the team.
We'll work on continuing to level up our game and create better vids :D
Please do let me know if you are interested in giving more feedback, the team loves it
it's okay I'm watching and I think your videos are fantastic
Appreciate you!