Use These 10 Sentences In ANY Creative Writing Story | Language Paper 1, Question 5 (2025 Exams)

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  • @FirstRateTutors
    @FirstRateTutors  11 дней назад +1

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  • @Ducky5981
    @Ducky5981 3 месяца назад +57

    Dark, ragged clouds gathered ...
    Shimmering heat blazed down onto ...
    Inhaling deeply, i filled my lungs with fresh air.
    It felt like one of those rare, perfect days when ...
    Just then, squalling wind lashed down / across ...
    Registering what was before me, my heart tightened in my chest.
    Scowling, grunting and grimacing, i struggled for what felt like an eternity ...
    Suddenly after an eternity ...
    Surveying the scene before me, my lower lip quivered ...
    Slowing from a pounding to a flutter, my racing heart quietened.

    • @dorliniroghama5823
      @dorliniroghama5823 2 месяца назад +5

      thank you!

    • @psychogamer2106
      @psychogamer2106 2 месяца назад

      11:18 11:20 11:20 11:20 11:20 11:21 11:21 11:21 11:21 11:21 11:21 11:22 11:22 11:22 11:22 11:23 11:23 11:23 11:24 11:24 11:25 11:25 11:26 11:27 11:28 11:29

  • @muhammedomar-t2o
    @muhammedomar-t2o 3 месяца назад +13

    i got 38 / 40 marks thanks to you god bkless best teacher in the world👆🤠

  • @FirstRateTutors
    @FirstRateTutors  12 дней назад

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  • @UNAZA.
    @UNAZA. 17 дней назад

    First sentence
    Dark atmosphere dark ragged clouds gathered
    Shimmering heat blazezd through window
    Inhaling deeping air filled my lungs with fresh air
    It felt like those perfect days when
    Just then sqalling wind

  • @MohammadMujtabaSharifi
    @MohammadMujtabaSharifi 3 месяца назад +4

    Hi first rate tutor your videos are perfect and can you make a video on Types of noun and types Adjective as a language device for my GCSE English language

  • @muhammedomar-t2o
    @muhammedomar-t2o 3 месяца назад

    god bless you madam
    😇

  • @ab2frl
    @ab2frl 8 дней назад

    video starts at 4:48

  • @muhammedomar-t2o
    @muhammedomar-t2o 2 месяца назад

    amazing

  • @UNAZA.
    @UNAZA. 17 дней назад

    4:23 actuall lesson start

  • @moulikarora7890
    @moulikarora7890 4 месяца назад +6

    Pls make more Christmas carol grade 9 videos. Could you make one on analysing each stave, so 5 videos in total. Each having quote analysis and context , dickens intention and reader effect

    • @Lglanpuppy
      @Lglanpuppy 4 месяца назад

      Emotional Value > Material Value, is all I remember.

  • @vbhgs257
    @vbhgs257 3 месяца назад +9

    3:04 is when the video starts

    • @Abraar227
      @Abraar227 Месяц назад

      Thank you so much

  • @multiixandom
    @multiixandom 4 месяца назад +7

    Glad im done with English, it was absolute hell

  • @gitanjali5775
    @gitanjali5775 4 месяца назад +1

    Heyy i wrote up a story which started with
    And there they heard the pleasent news.....
    It was a about a high school sweethearts who struggle to conceive but
    A challenge and all of it
    Then they achieve it
    5 characters
    5-10 dialogues
    5 plots
    Any. More tips i really like stories

  • @LV90463
    @LV90463 4 месяца назад +2

    Please keep posting continue I'm learning from you , bundle of thanks 🙏

  • @ShahinNorsei
    @ShahinNorsei Месяц назад

    Can you please show us a model answer to a story that has got full marks please?

  • @Studyseshx
    @Studyseshx 4 месяца назад +1

    PLEASE MAKE A LEVEL LITERATURE VIDEOSSS😭 LIKE HAMLET , DUCHESS OF MALFI , PARADISE LOST 😭PLSSSSSS

  • @JonesJagger-j2v
    @JonesJagger-j2v 7 дней назад

    I am not that good at show not tell do you have any tips?
    Thank you!

    • @FirstRateTutors
      @FirstRateTutors  7 дней назад +1

      This is actually one of the most common questions I get in my Language Paper 1 masterclass - it’s a common issue and I’d recommend joining in my next creative writing masterclass here: www.firstratetutors.com/masterclass

    • @JonesJagger-j2v
      @JonesJagger-j2v 6 дней назад

      @@FirstRateTutors thx

  • @idk-ud6kl
    @idk-ud6kl 3 месяца назад

    in paper 1 question 5, could i use chat gpt to help me, for example using it to give me a rule of three using the word exasperated or using the word indignant while in a simile, would that be classified as cheating?

  • @KhushalPathak-d2l
    @KhushalPathak-d2l 4 месяца назад +16

    Mam you are so beautiful 😍😍

    • @ashxyiu
      @ashxyiu 4 месяца назад +72

      crazy work on a revision vid😭🙏

    • @ceaxyt4933
      @ceaxyt4933 3 месяца назад +7

      @@ashxyiu word 😂

    • @chaniecemukasa2785
      @chaniecemukasa2785 3 месяца назад +1

      I know😍

    • @nysamdx
      @nysamdx Месяц назад +1

      @ashxyiumums

    • @kiriLMAOO
      @kiriLMAOO 12 дней назад

      Lock in bruh😂

  • @Aljamila90
    @Aljamila90 7 дней назад

    It’s very annoying she always stand in the middle of board. Am try to listened and looking at the board

  • @fgul8367
    @fgul8367 3 месяца назад

    I can’t see them properly,they are not clear clearly written 😊