Wayward Eagle - A New Explorer Corps Story - BattleTech Independent Fiction

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  • Опубликовано: 22 окт 2024

Комментарии • 218

  • @derekburge5294
    @derekburge5294 3 месяца назад +24

    Taneka makes a new small friend.
    Vasyl would nod approvingly.

  • @metalzk1
    @metalzk1 3 месяца назад +26

    NEC is what brought me here and earned a membership for me, so excited to have at least a bit of it back. Now you've got me wanting to kitbash the FrankenCrab, but for now please accept a heartfelt thanks for what you do for the community MechFrog!

    • @MechanicalFrog
      @MechanicalFrog  3 месяца назад +5

      Now I need to kitbash a frankencrab... Thank you so much for the support!

  • @thomascraiker6449
    @thomascraiker6449 3 месяца назад +24

    Only a couple of minutes and you can feel the effort and quality put in.

    • @MechanicalFrog
      @MechanicalFrog  3 месяца назад +3

      Liisa can make anything sound good.

  • @randomnetsurfer
    @randomnetsurfer 3 месяца назад +15

    "All the grace of an inebriated giraffe". What a fantastic image!

  • @PreemoPez
    @PreemoPez 3 месяца назад +8

    Not sure why the stories don’t get the views but I love it…It’s what the community needs more of

    • @MechanicalFrog
      @MechanicalFrog  3 месяца назад +2

      I'm happy to give this gift to the channel regulars. views or no.

  • @KingMakerRook
    @KingMakerRook 3 месяца назад +15

    insane get on the narrator, I immediately recognized her from Blood Will Tell! really great story, glad the lower audience numbers isn't dissuading you from writing good character stuff. it's very well done

    • @MechanicalFrog
      @MechanicalFrog  3 месяца назад +5

      I'm not at all concerned about the views for this. It was a gift for you and well worth the effort.

    • @MrDmitriRavenoff
      @MrDmitriRavenoff 3 месяца назад +3

      ​@MechanicalFrog Thank you from the community. I also like the modified Crab. Snubby!

  • @NegTharayas16
    @NegTharayas16 3 месяца назад +2

    NEC! Also your short stories are fantastic... new power on Flynn? Unified planet? Trading partners? Periphery kingdom????

  • @nikkity5491
    @nikkity5491 3 месяца назад +14

    NEC IS BACK BAYBE! GRAB A SIBCO AND A SPHEROID

  • @ralphsexton8531
    @ralphsexton8531 3 месяца назад +7

    Once again, Mech Frog knocks it out of the park with an excellent story! Awesome narration work, too! But it takes a good story, and you sir, you write a good story!

  • @D.Mc1232
    @D.Mc1232 3 месяца назад +9

    Well written and enjoyable story.
    Lisa's narration really added to the characters.

  • @ALECOS44
    @ALECOS44 3 месяца назад +6

    I actually only just finished NEC a couple months ago and was sad it was the end; it was a solid end and satisfying but I really enjoy your work.
    So needless to say this was an amazing surprise yo see pop up today!

    • @MechanicalFrog
      @MechanicalFrog  3 месяца назад +2

      Hope you enjoyed it. It was important to me that Teneca get a solid wrap up.

  • @franksmedley8619
    @franksmedley8619 3 месяца назад +3

    Hello Frog.
    Hey! Another good NEC story! I agree that Tenika needed 'closure' as a character. Hopefully, she finds some peace in that mining colony site. Being both a Mechwarrior and Tech, she should be able to salvage an entire Mech out of the remains of the two Javelins. From the description, the Hatchetman just needs a new cockpit, and Tenika can salvage most of the systems from her crab's cockpit to build a new one for the Hatchetman. That alone would give the community two jumping Mechs for defense, and any other weapons systems should be able to be salvaged and mounted for defense into more substantial ground bunkers. Powered by salvaging a Mech's reactor core and heat sinks.
    Before you say 'that can't be done', it can. And if done right, it would work well. It would mean mining the site downhill of the town a bit. Building the reinforced bunkers, and laying power cabling deep into the earth to the buried reactor and its heat sinks. Which I would build with a 'dog leg' so that any stray shot would not hit the reactor. Building both bunkers and, lets call it a Power Center, deep in the earth and rock should protect them from all but the most accurate frontal shots, where the most armor would be placed for protection.
    Once built, the town would have to plant bushes and small trees to disguise the bunkers, but that's just landscaping. The community has at least some heavy equipment in the mines, so earth moving shouldn't be THAT big of a problem, since Tenika has bought them time.
    Selling ores at the town where Tenika met the recruiter, should enable the community to buy one, or two, of those derelict Mech Repair Gantries mentioned in the story.
    I am unsure of mining tech in the Battletech Universe, but I would think the miners have ready access to mining explosives. So, digging those bunkers and other field emplacements shouldn't be difficult. Also, access to explosives would allow the miners to build and emplace lots of mines along the access road and the road's edges. Claymore mines are not difficult to make, use, or place, so anti-infantry would be enhanced with explosives. Even 'only' mining grade explosives.
    Hell, one could make 'bouncing betty' mines out of large tin cans (actually steel, not tin), scrap, mining explosives, and low calibur rounds without projectiles. The firing mechanism would be somewhat 'bodged', but should be simple to make and use, along with trip wires.
    Back to the Mech salvage... There should be plenty of myomer, armor plates, actuators, etc from the 5 Mechs involved, to get at least two Mechs up and running again. Possibly three, depending upon just how damaged the others were.
    Just about all of this could be accomplished in a year. And I figure that it would be at least a year before the other sites could even hope to replace the Mechs they had lost, if then. It would be a busy year, yes. But a fruitful one for the community. Oh, and Tenika could train the guy that recruited her to operate one of the Mechs, and train Ann (the little girl) to be an Astech, with a view to her becoming a pilot as she gets older.
    Just a few thoughts.
    P. S. I agree wholeheartedly that you got yourself a good voice actor to read the story. She did very well indeed. Kudos to you both.

  • @Kepora1
    @Kepora1 3 месяца назад +4

    As much as I love the crab, PGI's cockpit placement is soooo much better. I look at Catalyst's and wonder if the pilot is supposed to lay on his belly and crane his head up.

  • @flintyewwood7563
    @flintyewwood7563 3 месяца назад +6

    This hits so oddly with Opera GX background music jumping in when there are moments of silence. Love Lisa Lee's voice for this!

  • @jasonstandlea1784
    @jasonstandlea1784 3 месяца назад +14

    Yesssss! New Story!

  • @harbingerx7793
    @harbingerx7793 3 месяца назад +3

    What a wholesome sendoff for Taneka. Love the reference of the tattoos.

    • @MechanicalFrog
      @MechanicalFrog  3 месяца назад +1

      She, (and Vasyl as proxy) deserved a good wrap up.

    • @harbingerx7793
      @harbingerx7793 3 месяца назад

      @@MechanicalFrog absolutely. And Vasyl.....an elemental with a heart as big as a 400xl engine.

  • @MKmaki6094
    @MKmaki6094 3 месяца назад +12

    RAAAAAGH WE ARE SO BACK

  • @randyslater199
    @randyslater199 3 месяца назад +4

    I waited a while MF for another NEC, and not surprise at the start, of the Big Guy's effect still lingering. From King Crab to Franken-Crab. All still will be crab and a new home. Till the next NEC tale, keep hoppin MF

    • @MechanicalFrog
      @MechanicalFrog  3 месяца назад

      Thanks a ton for coming along on the adventure.

  • @nono2645
    @nono2645 3 месяца назад +3

    Im so glad you are still doing NEC stories

  • @Psychohistorian42
    @Psychohistorian42 3 месяца назад +4

    Has it really been almost a year since the Finale? Wow. Glad to see your knack for writing compelling characters is still sharp, and Lisa did a fantastic job!

    • @MechanicalFrog
      @MechanicalFrog  3 месяца назад +1

      Thanks a lot. Liisa really does amazing work.

  • @CraigSteinhoff
    @CraigSteinhoff 3 месяца назад +5

    Loved the story and Lisa did an awesome job! More? :)

    • @MechanicalFrog
      @MechanicalFrog  3 месяца назад +1

      Thank you so much for the support. I'm sure there will be more stories to tell in the future...

  • @rho1581
    @rho1581 3 месяца назад +6

    Thanks for having this done, it was very enjoyable and the narration top notch!🎉

    • @MechanicalFrog
      @MechanicalFrog  3 месяца назад +1

      Thanks for giving it a go and for the continued support for the channel.

  • @harvestblades
    @harvestblades 3 месяца назад +2

    So looking forward to getting off work at 0600 & listening to this one!

  • @MAD-5D-DC
    @MAD-5D-DC 3 месяца назад +2

    Tier 1. Can’t get over how enjoyable your writing and Lisa’s delivery is.

  • @CalicoEmpathy
    @CalicoEmpathy 3 месяца назад +5

    Awesome story and narration! Happy to see NEC return!

    • @MechanicalFrog
      @MechanicalFrog  3 месяца назад +2

      Thanks for giving it a go and coming along on the adventure.

  • @jeffd7976
    @jeffd7976 3 месяца назад +5

    whoaaaa. standing ovation all round. stoked for the return of NEC. Lisa's narration was awesome. Caught me off-guard to hear "Teneca" but listen to a different voice deliver her lines but it was great. I hope to hear more narration from Lisa.

    • @MechanicalFrog
      @MechanicalFrog  3 месяца назад +1

      Glad you enjoyed it! Liisa is great!

  • @ogrehaslayers605
    @ogrehaslayers605 3 месяца назад +5

    I'm absolutely PUMPED for another New Explorer Corps story!

  • @georgesulea
    @georgesulea 3 месяца назад +7

    Yaaaaaaaay! Really well done! Great story and great voice acting!

    • @MechanicalFrog
      @MechanicalFrog  3 месяца назад +2

      Thank you so much! I really wanted to go all out for this one.

  • @LiberalApplicationOfThud
    @LiberalApplicationOfThud 3 месяца назад +4

    OUTSTANDING!!!! Now I have to go back and listen through those original NEC videos again.

  • @DeclanHawkes
    @DeclanHawkes 3 месяца назад +2

    It's pieces like this that fuel my desire to start writing, myself. One day i hope totell even half as compelling a story as this. Well done, Mechfrog. I cant wait for the next one, and i hope to hear of a upstart new merc outfit called Taneca's Talons sometime in the future.

    • @MechanicalFrog
      @MechanicalFrog  3 месяца назад

      The best time to start writing was ten years ago. The second best time is today.

  • @juicaj1
    @juicaj1 3 месяца назад +2

    I cant up vote this enough!

  • @roguedexx938
    @roguedexx938 3 месяца назад +7

    Just saw this EXCITED about to listen at work🎉🎉🎉

  • @anja2792
    @anja2792 3 месяца назад +2

    This is my first taste of the series, now I need to go back and listen to the rest

  • @meining-mech4378
    @meining-mech4378 3 месяца назад +3

    Yes! NEC goodness! This was a happy surprise. Great narration, and happy to once again follow one of my favorite characters.

  • @devalk_
    @devalk_ 3 месяца назад +3

    A great story,
    And congrats on 15k!

  • @joelaugustin6407
    @joelaugustin6407 3 месяца назад +3

    This was great and really nice conclusion for my favorite character in the NEC.

  • @OnisanT
    @OnisanT 3 месяца назад +2

    Such a good and heartfelt story. I’m not crying (but just because my hormone setup makes crying harder).
    Really happy for Taneka to have found a home (for now).

    • @MechanicalFrog
      @MechanicalFrog  3 месяца назад

      I'm glad she could be given a good conclusion.

  • @gryphon3241
    @gryphon3241 3 месяца назад +4

    I'm a simple man, i see New Explorer Corp, i squee like a teenage girl at a boyband concert 😆

    • @MechanicalFrog
      @MechanicalFrog  3 месяца назад +1

      Hah. Glad to have you along for the fun.

  • @scytheseven9173
    @scytheseven9173 3 месяца назад +4

    happy to see more NEC!

  • @STSGingie
    @STSGingie 3 месяца назад +1

    What a wonderful epilogue for Teneka. Vasil would be proud of her accomplishment.
    The wayward warrior finding defending a forgotten town is an old trope but a good one and she wears it well. I was both touched and happy with this story and if this is where we leave her I can be content with it.

  • @Brigand231
    @Brigand231 3 месяца назад +2

    Absolutely fantastic. The narration was very good and we got some closure on things left hanging.

  • @Max-dw9kg
    @Max-dw9kg 3 месяца назад +2

    very good periphery story and the voice actress who played it is excellent at what she does

  • @jjsheets330
    @jjsheets330 3 месяца назад +2

    Great story by you as always. I really appreciate these and how more are to come.

    • @MechanicalFrog
      @MechanicalFrog  3 месяца назад +1

      Thanks for listening. I think Teneca needed a proper wrap-up.

  • @kierdalemodels
    @kierdalemodels 3 месяца назад +2

    Bravo, bravo!👏👏👏It was great to listen to. Well written and well read👍 More, please!🙏

  • @gregmichaud7314
    @gregmichaud7314 3 месяца назад +1

    It was a wonderful surprise to hear this great story. The N.E.C was a fantastic story and we need more like it

    • @MechanicalFrog
      @MechanicalFrog  3 месяца назад +1

      Thanks so much for giving it a go.

  • @therakshasan8547
    @therakshasan8547 3 месяца назад +2

    Lisa Lee , Mechchanical Frog ; BRAVO !

  • @Greggg1981
    @Greggg1981 3 месяца назад +5

    Awesome! I've been "patiently" waiting for this lol.

    • @MechanicalFrog
      @MechanicalFrog  3 месяца назад +2

      Felt good to finally give Teneca some closure.

  • @BazztheBazz
    @BazztheBazz 3 месяца назад +2

    This is great!

  • @brandonhoy8315
    @brandonhoy8315 2 месяца назад +1

    I couldn’t help noticing that the emotional support small laser was getting a bunch of shots in at the end 😂

    • @MechanicalFrog
      @MechanicalFrog  2 месяца назад

      Purely coincidental and not due to any author bias.

  • @Nikotheos
    @Nikotheos 3 месяца назад +2

    Mr Frog, your voice has CHANGED my little green friend! 😂

    • @Nikotheos
      @Nikotheos 3 месяца назад +1

      Seriously, this is awesome. Glad to have the stories back!

    • @MechanicalFrog
      @MechanicalFrog  3 месяца назад

      Hah.

    • @MechanicalFrog
      @MechanicalFrog  3 месяца назад +1

      Thanks! Good to be writing stories again.

  • @RobertWilke
    @RobertWilke 3 месяца назад +2

    Soo good to have a story of the NEC. Can't wait for more.

  • @trueakuma777
    @trueakuma777 3 месяца назад +1

    That was a great story! I'll have to go back and check out the previous ones now! Thanks for the entertaining video and stay safe out there!

    • @MechanicalFrog
      @MechanicalFrog  3 месяца назад

      Thanks a lot. If you do back to listen to the NEC, it'll definitely add something to what you listened to here with Teneca.

  • @MrDmitriRavenoff
    @MrDmitriRavenoff Месяц назад +1

    I really want to see Tenecca (spelling) cobble the Crab together with the scrap from the attacking mechs. They likley have a couple SRM-6's, a hatchet, maybe an AC-10 and aome miscellanious lasers.
    A Crab with a Snub PPC, a hatchet, and an SRM-6 pack would be a very interesting build.

  • @nikolavandyk9360
    @nikolavandyk9360 3 месяца назад +2

    Pumped to see another NEC out! Comments and likes for the algorithm

  • @commissarstanley3055
    @commissarstanley3055 2 месяца назад +1

    Very awesome to see this story continued, and I can't wait to see more!!!

  • @williamd8360
    @williamd8360 3 месяца назад +1

    Great job Mechfrog! You sir are an author! Keep them coming!

  • @jlokison
    @jlokison 3 месяца назад +2

    Glad to see your fiction back

  • @RealgarTheSchist
    @RealgarTheSchist 3 месяца назад +1

    I miss Vasyl :( there is a huge gigantic elemental shaped and teal'c flavoured void in my soul.
    I love that she got a matching tattoo to honour him though.

    • @MechanicalFrog
      @MechanicalFrog  3 месяца назад

      Vasyl was good people. It hurt to see him go.

  • @JustinCase-qs6zv
    @JustinCase-qs6zv 3 месяца назад +2

    Thoroughly enjoyed it.

  • @andrewrose3748
    @andrewrose3748 3 месяца назад +2

    So glad the NEC has returned

  • @rafale1981
    @rafale1981 3 месяца назад +1

    Great story, thank you both author and narrator!

  • @PastorwithoutaPulpit
    @PastorwithoutaPulpit 3 месяца назад

    Well done to all involved on a very entertaining and engaging story.
    I will be looking forward to more in the future as with a little time and polish I can see even better stories being crafted by you in the future.
    Not that this was bad at all as I already stated it was a good story that left me wanting more.
    Take care and God Bless...

  • @spededucation8564
    @spededucation8564 3 месяца назад +1

    Loved the story Mr frog, Lisa was great but I also missed your voice. Glad I got some at the end. 😅

    • @MechanicalFrog
      @MechanicalFrog  3 месяца назад

      Thanks for listening. Liisa's amazing voice was a nice special treat. Back to the usual nonsense in the future. Already working on the next thing.

  • @Alizardwithdaftideas
    @Alizardwithdaftideas 3 месяца назад +2

    I really enjoyed this.

  • @RootsLion
    @RootsLion 3 месяца назад +2

    excellent more more plz ;)m

  • @Max-dw9kg
    @Max-dw9kg 3 месяца назад +1

    shame on me for commenting before finishing but i also like that it ends in a positive way that fits all characters minor arcs

  • @tehpw7574
    @tehpw7574 3 месяца назад +1

    YES. Justice... Moar Please?

  • @clintonford9609
    @clintonford9609 3 месяца назад +1

    Thank you for the great content.

  • @johnwiles2119
    @johnwiles2119 3 месяца назад +1

    Excellent story. I loved it very much ❤️

  • @ursulcx299
    @ursulcx299 3 месяца назад +2

    I see mech frog and a crab, I click

    • @MechanicalFrog
      @MechanicalFrog  3 месяца назад +1

      A solid policy for a sound administration.

  • @nukenuked5749
    @nukenuked5749 3 месяца назад +1

    top story mate and love the new narator
    thanks mate and thanks lisa

    • @MechanicalFrog
      @MechanicalFrog  3 месяца назад

      Thank you for giving it a go.

    • @nukenuked5749
      @nukenuked5749 3 месяца назад

      @@MechanicalFrog lisa did a exlant job mate
      i wish i could do half as good of a job as her :)

  • @jessestanley1690
    @jessestanley1690 3 месяца назад +1

    Amazing 🤩 finally battletech story that’s good

  • @Astartes1000
    @Astartes1000 3 месяца назад +2

    Yay! More story time with the frog!

  • @piprdakota
    @piprdakota 3 месяца назад +1

    Great story! Liisa did a great job!

  • @pf6797
    @pf6797 3 месяца назад +1

    March 3rd 3153 would be my dads 1200th birthday 🥳

  • @richardnicholson3827
    @richardnicholson3827 3 месяца назад +1

    Now, that was an enjoyable story, and the narrator did an awesome job and brought the characters to life. I really do enjoy your channel, and please keep up the good content. Just out of curiosity, are you going to keep writing more short stories? Because you did write a good story.

    • @MechanicalFrog
      @MechanicalFrog  3 месяца назад +1

      Thank you very much. There will be more short stories in the future from time to time.

    • @richardnicholson3827
      @richardnicholson3827 3 месяца назад

      @MechanicalFrog Well, that is great to hear that. Well, then, you have a great and awesome day.🙂

  • @azberd
    @azberd 3 месяца назад +1

    Excellent work, enjoyed it.

  • @chadevans7519
    @chadevans7519 3 месяца назад +1

    This was such a fun story!

    • @MechanicalFrog
      @MechanicalFrog  3 месяца назад +1

      Thank you for giving it a go and your continued support. The nonsense must flow.

  • @leonasmith6180
    @leonasmith6180 3 месяца назад

    That was good, hope you have a follow up to come. Leona, PS thanks.

  • @JosephMitchell-zw3db
    @JosephMitchell-zw3db 3 месяца назад +1

    Wow thank you and using the scenario ty

  • @karmadyllic
    @karmadyllic 2 месяца назад +1

    Thanks MechFrog.

  • @JohnDoe-oh7gf
    @JohnDoe-oh7gf 3 месяца назад

    Love the stories. Nice to see franken mechs in action, always spurs my imagination for stories where a single 'useless' mech with only MGs or AC2 could be very valuable vs bandits.
    Great content, Im very old I dont get these modern layouts, wanted to support on koffi but can't find wheres a link for it. Get back to me with some pointers if you can xD

  • @nukenuked5749
    @nukenuked5749 3 месяца назад +1

    sweet a new story had to wait days till i got home to watch it
    no mobile recption on 125 acreas

    • @MechanicalFrog
      @MechanicalFrog  3 месяца назад +1

      I was in a national park for 4 days so I feel your pain.

    • @nukenuked5749
      @nukenuked5749 3 месяца назад

      @@MechanicalFrog thanks mate
      it was nice a peaceful and i got to see the ISS and the chinse knock off fly over australia

  • @memph1ston
    @memph1ston 3 месяца назад +1

    I shall listen in earnest!

  • @mikegould6590
    @mikegould6590 3 месяца назад +1

    I just wanna say, MF, that I began writing again after a 5 yr hiatus due in no small part to you. Thank you.

    • @MechanicalFrog
      @MechanicalFrog  3 месяца назад

      Wow, thank you. May you always find the right word without effort.

  • @RussellHoleman
    @RussellHoleman 3 месяца назад +1

    great narration and story

  • @jessestanley1690
    @jessestanley1690 3 месяца назад +1

    This and wild rose are battletech stories with women done right

  • @ToastedWaffles_
    @ToastedWaffles_ 3 месяца назад +1

    Havent clicked this fast in my entire life LFG!

    • @MechanicalFrog
      @MechanicalFrog  3 месяца назад +1

      Teneca deserved a solid wrap-up to her story. Thanks so much for the support.

  • @powman77
    @powman77 3 месяца назад +1

    Thanks Frog!!!! Love it!

  • @SamSam-qh1os
    @SamSam-qh1os 3 месяца назад +1

    Very good and much enjoyed.

  • @Alea_Rasa
    @Alea_Rasa 3 месяца назад +1

    Great as always

  • @ldroland
    @ldroland 3 месяца назад +1

    Fantastic narrator!

  • @pete7872
    @pete7872 3 месяца назад +1

    NEC is back! Yaaay! \o/

  • @sebastiang.5032
    @sebastiang.5032 3 месяца назад +1

    This is the good stuff.

  • @kenhodge9046
    @kenhodge9046 3 месяца назад +1

    Yes! Miss her Zeus though ;)

  • @grimos6490
    @grimos6490 3 месяца назад +1

    NEW EXPLORER COOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE!~

  • @jocylinfrancis930
    @jocylinfrancis930 3 месяца назад +1

    This was so good!!!

  • @JustinPivinski-cm2rh
    @JustinPivinski-cm2rh 3 месяца назад +1

    Thanks for the story

  • @ch4osaeternum74
    @ch4osaeternum74 2 месяца назад +1

    A great story.

  • @MAD-5D-DC
    @MAD-5D-DC 3 месяца назад

    Outstanding!