Love this. My draft zero is handwritten in spiral notebooks with a favorite pen. Handwriting keeps the temptation to edit on a keyboard somewhat at bay.
I'm always amazed at how polite you Brits are. I was raised by a German mother. Consequently, my childhood was the polar opposite of polite. It comes as no surprise to me that you won the war. Politeness always trumps harshness. My debut novel, The Year of The Cat, has been submitted to an editor. As I anxiously await her verdict, I'm playing around with ideas for my next story. I hope to avoid the nervous breakdown I experienced with my first book when edited as I wrote (talk about driving with your foot on the gas and breaker peddle) by embracing the concept of a Zero Draft. I greatly appreciate your video. You both did a great job, and I'm inspired.
A trick that I've started using is to write my zero draft in a table, as if it's a spreadsheet and not a page to truly do _Writing_ on. In the cell on the left side I'll write admin info, like scene 2: the classroom. Then in the right hand cell I'll write out everything that happens there, as granularly as I can. It's, like you said, halfway between an outline and a draft. I don't bother thinking of pretty words unless they come to me right away. I don't bother capitalizing characters' names. I use bullet points. I tell and tell and tell and don't bother showing. I'll write [they flirt awkwardly] and have the character leave the room so I can move on. Sometimes I'll even critique myself in writing so I KNOW what I've written is dumb and that I'm acknowledging it and not trying to tell myself it's good. I'll write something like LOL THIS IS SO DUMB right there in the draft. It feels good. Acknowledge it's terrible and move on, write _more_ terrible. Then, tomorrow when I'm in an editing mood, I'll make it sound better. But today isn't for that. Today is for shite. Everyone has their own process, but this works for me since my main issue is paralyzing myself with things like word choice and stalling for the whole session. I love the guy who write his zero draft under a different name like it has nothing to do with him lol.
Thanks for this! I like your idea of turning the screen brightness down so it's impossible to edit while writing. (I used an online pomodoro timer to get through my latest draft 0 for an essay-turned-script.) Longhand really helps me get a first draft out. My other problem is getting bogged down in details I know are wrong or factoids I don't know that i need to know - I just put or whatever in angle brackets (I do that with words or phrases I know are cliche too) and that lets me carry on without fear of forgetting to look whatever up. Kind of in-line notes-to-self. Hah! Just at 53:30 and hear you use [for research needed]. (listening in after the fact from St. John's, Newfoundland & Labrador)
load the left brain with info then shift into right brain and ignore it as you draft. Get the book called, Drawing on the Right Side of the Brain, for more on how this works. Yes, anyone can draw.
Write as much as you can without editing/correcting and without slowing down. This is where you write the stuff that gets edited out after 5 or 6 revisions. It's placeholder Action statements and Dialogue to give you the structure of your first actual draft--nothing more.
This video itself could use an editing stage. It is such a stream of consciousness and takes so long to get to the point, it is the epitome of the zero draft.
"A page of bad writing is better than 100 pages of no writing." Loved that!
Love this. My draft zero is handwritten in spiral notebooks with a favorite pen. Handwriting keeps the temptation to edit on a keyboard somewhat at bay.
I'm always amazed at how polite you Brits are. I was raised by a German mother. Consequently, my childhood was the polar opposite of polite. It comes as no surprise to me that you won the war. Politeness always trumps harshness.
My debut novel, The Year of The Cat, has been submitted to an editor. As I anxiously await her verdict, I'm playing around with ideas for my next story. I hope to avoid the nervous breakdown I experienced with my first book when edited as I wrote (talk about driving with your foot on the gas and breaker peddle) by embracing the concept of a Zero Draft.
I greatly appreciate your video. You both did a great job, and I'm inspired.
A trick that I've started using is to write my zero draft in a table, as if it's a spreadsheet and not a page to truly do _Writing_ on.
In the cell on the left side I'll write admin info, like scene 2: the classroom. Then in the right hand cell I'll write out everything that happens there, as granularly as I can. It's, like you said, halfway between an outline and a draft. I don't bother thinking of pretty words unless they come to me right away. I don't bother capitalizing characters' names. I use bullet points. I tell and tell and tell and don't bother showing. I'll write [they flirt awkwardly] and have the character leave the room so I can move on.
Sometimes I'll even critique myself in writing so I KNOW what I've written is dumb and that I'm acknowledging it and not trying to tell myself it's good. I'll write something like LOL THIS IS SO DUMB right there in the draft. It feels good. Acknowledge it's terrible and move on, write _more_ terrible.
Then, tomorrow when I'm in an editing mood, I'll make it sound better. But today isn't for that. Today is for shite.
Everyone has their own process, but this works for me since my main issue is paralyzing myself with things like word choice and stalling for the whole session.
I love the guy who write his zero draft under a different name like it has nothing to do with him lol.
Start at minute 10:30
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I think this is one of Reedsy's most useful and interesting videos to date. I loved this.
So many valuable gems. I always write better with a candle and/or soft lighting. It’s a thing! Another great talk.
Thanks for this! I like your idea of turning the screen brightness down so it's impossible to edit while writing. (I used an online pomodoro timer to get through my latest draft 0 for an essay-turned-script.) Longhand really helps me get a first draft out.
My other problem is getting bogged down in details I know are wrong or factoids I don't know that i need to know - I just put or whatever in angle brackets (I do that with words or phrases I know are cliche too) and that lets me carry on without fear of forgetting to look whatever up. Kind of in-line notes-to-self. Hah! Just at 53:30 and hear you use [for research needed].
(listening in after the fact from St. John's, Newfoundland & Labrador)
Turning the screen off, I’m gonna try that!! It’s like I’m embarrassed to see myself writing a bad draft 😂 maybe that will fix it
load the left brain with info then shift into right brain and ignore it as you draft. Get the book called, Drawing on the Right Side of the Brain, for more on how this works. Yes, anyone can draw.
Extremely helpful insight to change one's perspective about writing and getting started.
Thanks for this, I had intended attending this but I slept through my alarm :( was a tad early here in Australia.
I loved every single minute of this class!! Thanks from Brazil!
Fantastic - as usual!
We have Sandy Beach, Seymour Butt, and Peter Goesinya.
Write as much as you can without editing/correcting and without slowing down. This is where you write the stuff that gets edited out after 5 or 6 revisions. It's placeholder Action statements and Dialogue to give you the structure of your first actual draft--nothing more.
Click Like if you like the idea of blitzing out a structure draft without wasting time on spelling or grammar.
"Write or Die."
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This video itself could use an editing stage. It is such a stream of consciousness and takes so long to get to the point, it is the epitome of the zero draft.
That's nuts! LOL