I'm so glad to have come across your video! Recently started homeschooling and had no idea where to look when I found out my now 7th grader, didn't even know how to write a paragraph. I will forever be grateful for videos like yours, that help us parents explain things better! ❤
*Topic sentence:"Playing Outside"* Playing outside is essential as it gives you a lot of beneficial such as jogging, running and swimming. By doing these exercise your brains will relax as well as your physical health. Outdoor activities on the other hand can decrease the stresses due to the relaxation of mind. Thank you for your video, it helps me a lot, but can you please check if ever i have a grammatical mistakes!!
I'm not her, but if it's okay I can point out some mistakes 😄 "Playing outside is essential as it gives you a lot of *beneficial* " _you can use the word _*_benefits_*_ instead_
I found this video really useful. I was actually having trouble writing a paragraph and then I researched on how to learn how to write a paragraph and then I found this video and I found it really really thank you! ♥
wow, thanks a lot , last day i had an exam in writing section and it was really helpful i could write a clear and better paragraph once again thanks a lot fir sharing good or helpful videos.
Thank you for your positive feedback! It's encouraging to know that my work aids in your learning process. Be sure to stay tuned for more insightful videos!
I wanna thank you so much you have helped me so much with my personal essay, I was so stressed with all of the work I had to do on it but now I know what to do because your video helped me, thank you
Omg this is so helpful I am studying for a exam next week and because of this video I understand how to write the perfect paragraph 👍👍👏I am really thankful for this video 😂😃🥰Thank you
Thank you so much for sharing your easy-to-understand video on paragraph writing. Indeed, this is a good scaffold to enable my students to construct their own paragraphs. God bless and happy holidays!
This video is absolutely perfect for my Gr. 6 class to learn the basics of paragraph writing. So simple to follow and well explained. Love the visuals !! You rock !!
This is a great explanation. Would you be OK with my embedding this video (giving you credit) in my online writing course? The course I am working on is a free public not for-profit course for the CA Dept. of Education Adult Education Division. Thank you.
I’m glad to hear that you found my video helpful and would like to use it in your online course. I hope that my video will be a valuable addition to your course. Best regards,
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I'm so glad to have come across your video! Recently started homeschooling and had no idea where to look when I found out my now 7th grader, didn't even know how to write a paragraph. I will forever be grateful for videos like yours, that help us parents explain things better! ❤
I hope your homeschooling is going well! - 9th grader
@@YooKkang so far no problem!
Thank you Brittany! I appreciate you taking the time to comment here. 🌹🌹
Im homeschooled to. So much easier!!!
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*Topic sentence:"Playing Outside"*
Playing outside is essential as it gives you a lot of beneficial such as jogging, running and swimming. By doing these exercise your brains will relax as well as your physical health. Outdoor activities on the other hand can decrease the stresses due to the relaxation of mind.
Thank you for your video, it helps me a lot, but can you please check if ever i have a grammatical mistakes!!
I'm not her, but if it's okay I can point out some mistakes 😄
"Playing outside is essential as it gives you a lot of *beneficial* "
_you can use the word _*_benefits_*_ instead_
I want to pay you back so i subscribed to your channel instead.
I hope it helps you even a little. Thank you! have a wonderful day!!
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thank's for the video i got 50/50 in my exam
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In english a half mark is cut intentionally right
I got a 0
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Lol.... No ones get full mark in English or alternative
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I found this video really useful. I was actually having trouble writing a paragraph and then I researched on how to learn how to write a paragraph and then I found this video and I found it really really thank you! ♥
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Thats just perfect explaination, My english teacher is trash and shall get tips from here TY so much wish me luck tomorrow
If you don’t mind, Amal, I’m going to show my students this video. What a brilliant video, indeed.
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wow, thanks a lot , last day i had an exam in writing section and it was really helpful i could write a clear and better paragraph once again thanks a lot fir sharing good or helpful videos.
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Good video to learn how to write a paragraph... ❤
Hi Amal
I really appreciate it
It's a good explanation and help me a lot. Thanks!
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A very good video about paragraph writing.
Thank you! Your comment is highly appreciated!
Thanks, this was really good help because I wasn't listening to my teacher on how to write a paragraph!
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I wanna thank you so much you have helped me so much with my personal essay, I was so stressed with all of the work I had to do on it but now I know what to do because your video helped me, thank you
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By the way this is extremly helpful.
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So I have a question.did you have to put a comma after every transition word.
Omg this is so helpful I am studying for a exam next week and because of this video I understand how to write the perfect paragraph 👍👍👏I am really thankful for this video 😂😃🥰Thank you
Simple and well detailed. Thank you!
Thank you so much for sharing your easy-to-understand video on paragraph writing. Indeed, this is a good scaffold to enable my students to construct their own paragraphs. God bless and happy holidays!
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My teacher put us this video and i understood so much thanks you :)
I am playing school with my sister who is behind in learning how to write good sentences and paragraphs and this really helped her
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Best paragraph lesson I've seen! Could you make a lesson for summaries.
Sure! Stay tuned, and hit the subscribe button.
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This video is absolutely perfect for my Gr. 6 class to learn the basics of paragraph writing. So simple to follow and well explained. Love the visuals !! You rock !!
Your comment totally brightened my day! It's always great to hear that the videos are helping others in their educational journey.
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I have never watched such clear steps to write a paragraph before. Thank you so much
Thanks ur a life saver I was confused but I wasn’t confused of 2:40 now I am not all thanks to u😉😉😉😅
i showed this to my school presentation and i got A+++++
MY WHOLE CLASS
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Thank you so much! This helped me a lot! Tomorrow I have a exam wish me good luck!
This is a great explanation. Would you be OK with my embedding this video (giving you credit) in my online writing course? The course I am working on is a free public not for-profit course for the CA Dept. of Education Adult Education Division. Thank you.
I’m glad to hear that you found my video helpful and would like to use it in your online course.
I hope that my video will be a valuable addition to your course.
Best regards,
You are a good teacher
Thank you so much! I was stuck for years till now 😅😂
Thank you for this useful information. Its very helpful to use in the classroom for paragraphs lesson. Appreciate you!
I’m glad you found value in my content! 🌹
this was nice i learned so many things
3:39 One more concluding sentence word is "Hence". Good video
I love your voice it make me get a lot in my test I get a100/100
Thank you for the video! It helped me a lot with my paragraph. Have a good day!
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Good luck with your exam!
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Yuppp now I feel prepared for the midterm tomorrow 👍
Great video Amal. Thanks for sharing. I am using it with my students and they love it. You explain very clearly.
Thank you I need it very much because I’m in year four😢🎉
my teacher send it to my class
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Thank you so much i was finding out how to make one since my mom told me to
Thank you for this video my teacher send it to me it help me with paragraph writing
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i was bad in writing any way this video helped me