Human Narrator | Why Humans are Illegal | HFY Sci Fi Short Story

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  • Опубликовано: 21 ноя 2024

Комментарии • 174

  • @ironwolfF1
    @ironwolfF1 3 месяца назад +64

    FYI, the baseline volume is kinda low...
    Without headphones (with a volume control), listening to the video is problematic.

    • @BirbletonVA
      @BirbletonVA  3 месяца назад +21

      Yeah. Swapped over to new editing software, missed the audio issue. Sound is a little low for the first four mins. Sorry about that

    • @zerospace101
      @zerospace101 3 месяца назад +7

      The audio is not perfect but it was not bad without headphones. The volume level and voices were pretty even.
      Maybe because of my speakers or perception.

    • @Ajibica117
      @Ajibica117 3 месяца назад

      You could record this through a soup can and I’d be happy to listen. Perg & Rusty are instantly charming and your interpretations of them are good.

    • @wdwadindwatri
      @wdwadindwatri 2 месяца назад

      not for me

    • @HammboneBob
      @HammboneBob 2 месяца назад

      "we must reach consensus" 🦀 🦞

  • @lavetissene339
    @lavetissene339 3 месяца назад +188

    Humanity invented artillery before the printing press. We'll be fine.

    • @projectdeveloper9311
      @projectdeveloper9311 3 месяца назад +16

      Priorities

    • @rayray2856
      @rayray2856 2 месяца назад +7

      Why write a letter when this bomb works just fine, right? :D

    • @projectdeveloper9311
      @projectdeveloper9311 2 месяца назад +6

      @@rayray2856 Shelling their home carries more information than any piece of paper lol

    • @lavetissene339
      @lavetissene339 2 месяца назад +4

      @@rayray2856 A brick through the window is cheaper than paying for a stamp.

  • @wompa70
    @wompa70 3 месяца назад +36

    I’m absolutely loving the stories of Oxidize, err, Rusty. The narration is awesome and the stories are great, too. I hope the author is seeing the praise.

  • @yannismorris4772
    @yannismorris4772 3 месяца назад +83

    Human: *(goes full throttle in saving everyone's lives)*
    Mennix for some reason: Yeah so we're banning humans from the system because they're a safety risk
    ...What???

    • @Olivecheese965
      @Olivecheese965 3 месяца назад +11

      Kinda reminds me of the first fallout game, after you bring back a water chip.

    • @PollexTheCat
      @PollexTheCat 2 месяца назад +5

      Imagine you see a gorilla tear a crashed school buss in half to save the children inside.
      Would you want other gorillas in schools after that?

    • @jacobturner1490
      @jacobturner1490 2 месяца назад

      ​@@PollexTheCatas an American, I think you may just be onto something...

  • @Kankan_Mahadi
    @Kankan_Mahadi 3 месяца назад +58

    Seriously, we need more (adorable) alien otters in media! & I just love Perg's voice.

    • @leiaclark8388
      @leiaclark8388 3 месяца назад +3

      Happy spoiler alert: there is more Perg literature.

    • @karenbaldwin2867
      @karenbaldwin2867 3 месяца назад +3

      Space otters my one weakness❤ It’s not fair, I can’t burn down a planet if there’s something cute and fuzzy on it!

    • @htoniiscy-ujas1544
      @htoniiscy-ujas1544 2 месяца назад

      ​@@leiaclark8388 ГДЕ? КУДА СМОТРЕТЬ ЧТОБЫ ЕЩЕ ПРОЧЕСТЬ?

  • @4483vet
    @4483vet 3 месяца назад +34

    WOOT! A story that has correct dialog AND multiple voices and ambient sounds!! Keep up the good work!

  • @Speed001
    @Speed001 3 месяца назад +31

    Finally, someone who at least says the author's name.

    • @BirbletonVA
      @BirbletonVA  3 месяца назад +8

      funny you say that. Gaffed up and accidently cut it out the intro on my latest upload. Sorry misterben4360 lol

  • @gulli72
    @gulli72 3 месяца назад +116

    "Finally, some good fucking ."
    -- Gordon Ramsay

  • @ironwolfF1
    @ironwolfF1 3 месяца назад +48

    Fun Fact: the main purpose of 'eyebrows' is to divert water away from the eye sockets (actual results may vary, however), which could interfere with vision.
    An evolutionary survival trait / feature...

    • @Exquailibur
      @Exquailibur 3 месяца назад +8

      That is a function but the more important function is that they help to convey emotions, eyebrows, our plump lips, and our white sclera all have social importance as they make it easier to distinguish faces and our sclera being white also makes it easier to tell where others are looking. Humans are also one of the only species to have chins that protrude outward which may also have a social function as many people find others who have small chins unattractive.
      Humans have a surprising number of characteristics that are ornamental in nature, we just dont realize it as they are normal for us.

    • @tsm688
      @tsm688 3 месяца назад +1

      @@Exquailibur Thankfully a whole lot less than other primates, who got things like a fully inflatable ass.

    • @zerospace101
      @zerospace101 3 месяца назад +2

      Too bad it does a piss poor job with sweat lol
      I wonder why unibrows are not a common thing because of this haha

    • @gljames24
      @gljames24 3 месяца назад

      ​​@@Exquailibur All tetrapods have white sclera. Other animals just have a high iris area to eye ratio. If it's colored, it's iris.

    • @Exquailibur
      @Exquailibur 3 месяца назад +3

      @@gljames24 well not all since there are some where its got melanin, but yeah most species don't have an exposed sclera or if it is its darkened with melanin
      Either way its a relatively rare characteristic to have an exposed white sclera and it helps us see where others are looking. its a social adaptation.

  • @PeterLGଈ
    @PeterLGଈ 3 месяца назад +12

    GeneralLeia is an amazing author, and your narration + effects is, as always, perfect. I just love your voicing of Rusty and Perg.

  • @keving2726
    @keving2726 3 месяца назад +46

    I'm a fan of your ability to convey when someone is high in such a convincing fashion.

  • @ethancrowe280
    @ethancrowe280 3 месяца назад +4

    Finally quality HFY, a real human not just AI slop. Ijust wonder where the art came from

  • @leiaclark8388
    @leiaclark8388 3 месяца назад +13

    I’m pleased as punch by this and the picture of Perg is perfect! Your voice reading is so much superior to AI. And the way you change moods with your voice really expresses the story exactly as I intended. Thank you!
    I’m really becoming a fan of your work.

  • @dalandorochester315
    @dalandorochester315 3 месяца назад +12

    Has this writer made more stories in this setting? I'm actually fully invested in these videos...

  • @martyschrader
    @martyschrader 3 месяца назад +7

    These folks will be around for quite a long time, I am hoping. Wonderful characters with great interaction. And the telling! Flawless.

  • @abrr2000
    @abrr2000 3 месяца назад +5

    I can already tell there is ACTUAL EFFORT put into this video.
    the image appears drawn, not AI generated, there's an actual human voice over, and sound affects have been added, as well as different voices for different characters, making it an audio drama, rather than a book reading.

  • @gyrrakavian
    @gyrrakavian 2 месяца назад +1

    "No matter how weird the universe got, it could always get weirder."

  • @ozen4909
    @ozen4909 3 месяца назад +11

    Thank you for not using Ai
    The only ai narrator I can tolerate is Adastra cus he uses his own voice then alter it with ai for different characters.

    • @BradleySherlock-n4x
      @BradleySherlock-n4x 3 месяца назад +1

      Try Nature's Temper. Best story narrator on the web.

  • @svantesvedin1299
    @svantesvedin1299 3 месяца назад +5

    Hi, Nice work! Please set up playlists for series and links from episodes to the playlist so it is easy to listen to the whole story, if you like it. Keep up the good work!

  • @johnsanford3596
    @johnsanford3596 3 месяца назад +11

    Rusty & Perg are a fun pair. BTW, who was watching over Peanutbutter while Rusty was laid up?

    • @BirbletonVA
      @BirbletonVA  3 месяца назад +7

      Peanut butter was still at the market! This is set before the previous video (confusing i know) haha

  • @novusaldynn8121
    @novusaldynn8121 3 месяца назад +35

    So, having listened to the previous stories, Vo'Ohn definitely did not consider Rusty's opinion of involving the humans in their conflict. Another Superb Narration of a well written story. Thank you.

    • @loganshaw4527
      @loganshaw4527 3 месяца назад

      O what was the names of the previous stories of this same universe?

    • @novusaldynn8121
      @novusaldynn8121 3 месяца назад +2

      @@loganshaw4527 Sorry for the late reply, I believe it is in "The one that you feed", with its companion story ""All the rumors are true". Another one is ""The only thing more terrifying than a human is its pet"

    • @leiaclark8388
      @leiaclark8388 3 месяца назад +3

      Vo’ohn wasn’t the only one. He was basically one vote in a large Quorum.

  • @ravensnflies8167
    @ravensnflies8167 3 месяца назад +26

    poor Rusty. no good deed goes unpunished.

    • @loganshaw4527
      @loganshaw4527 3 месяца назад +4

      To be fair he was very manly and very much a insurance risk. But he did lower other claims tanking all that damage him self.

  • @mk1interactive944
    @mk1interactive944 3 месяца назад +6

    I Love this story, the jokes were awesome. I even had to pause a few times/rewind bc of my laughter

  • @damenwhelan3236
    @damenwhelan3236 2 месяца назад

    The name "manj" for a spider is brilliant.
    I love playing with mouth forms and sounds. And "manj" is a clear series of sounds being able to be made without lips. Spiders dont have lips.

  • @CherubielOne
    @CherubielOne 3 месяца назад +19

    Just the first thing I have to say - this is the best thumbnail so far!

    • @BirbletonVA
      @BirbletonVA  3 месяца назад +4

      Thank you! I think so to haha

    • @unformedeight
      @unformedeight 3 месяца назад +2

      Agreed

    • @D.R.Y.
      @D.R.Y. 3 месяца назад +1

      Is the thumbnail ai?

    • @yeenbaby2891
      @yeenbaby2891 Месяц назад

      ​@@D.R.Y.i dont think so, feels too drawn

  • @pontusgustavsson7298
    @pontusgustavsson7298 3 месяца назад +3

    Finally some proper voice acting, with editing! One thing though; I think it would be easier to follow the story if you showed larger paragraphs of text instead of just parts of a sentence at a time on-screen. A lot of people find it easier to read along as they listen ^^

  • @mrt1880
    @mrt1880 3 месяца назад +7

    A video where they are not using some trash AI to make weird images

  • @lupaswolfshead9971
    @lupaswolfshead9971 3 месяца назад +62

    wait perg is a space otter. That explains the picture.

    • @BirbletonVA
      @BirbletonVA  3 месяца назад +16

      He do be

    • @joyhoward6105
      @joyhoward6105 3 месяца назад +4

      @@BirbletonVAyes

    • @zerospace101
      @zerospace101 3 месяца назад

      It was in the description of Perg near the beginning

    • @lupaswolfshead9971
      @lupaswolfshead9971 3 месяца назад +1

      @@zerospace101 That is why i posted that this is the second story with rusty and perg in i had listened to lol.

    • @zerospace101
      @zerospace101 3 месяца назад

      @@lupaswolfshead9971 I did not see that post so....ok lol

  • @Gordon519
    @Gordon519 3 месяца назад +12

    HIS NAME IS RUSTY GOD DAMMIT (jk)
    I love it and find the running gag that no one gets his name right funny

    • @YakubTheFather
      @YakubTheFather 2 месяца назад +2

      I love the fact that they get it wrong due to the translation of the process of iron developing rust too. It’s really damn clever

  • @tsm688
    @tsm688 3 месяца назад +12

    I had wondered why no one was doing these things with voice effects. It adds a lot. Good job

    • @BirbletonVA
      @BirbletonVA  3 месяца назад +3

      I’m surprised more channels don’t tbf. It’s only a little extra work. Thank you!

  • @Wildgamer2205
    @Wildgamer2205 3 месяца назад +48

    Humans when a galactic war starts: Mumm Lunch
    Alien species: Oh, frick why are they looking at us like that
    Humans with a devilish grin on their face: Because were bored and y'all have volunteered to be our punching bag

    • @riddell26
      @riddell26 2 месяца назад +1

      The American way

    • @justindunlap1235
      @justindunlap1235 2 месяца назад +1

      And since you're not human you're on the menu.

  • @joyhoward6105
    @joyhoward6105 3 месяца назад +8

    I just noticed the background noise that is suitable to the current situation

  • @todvanced7842
    @todvanced7842 3 месяца назад +2

    THANK YOU! Especially for doing it right by being a human! Excellent sound effects. Very very happy!

  • @Shadowkey392
    @Shadowkey392 3 месяца назад +2

    I am but a simple fellow. I see cute space otters, I click.

  • @sarkandrago3222
    @sarkandrago3222 3 месяца назад +6

    I can almost hear natures temper, any one else?

    • @BirbletonVA
      @BirbletonVA  3 месяца назад +4

      Heard that a couple of times haha

    • @BradleySherlock-n4x
      @BradleySherlock-n4x 3 месяца назад

      Made that same comment myself. He sounds so like Skott.

  • @clan741
    @clan741 3 месяца назад +4

    One thing I find iffy about the story is an adrenaline rush being a foreign concept to aliens. Maybe some species don’t have it if they were either so superior they had no reason for it or evolved in such a safe and ideal environment they were basically Dodo birds. At least the spider waifu’s are impressed.

  • @Mac12366
    @Mac12366 2 месяца назад

    Okay, I have listened to two of these and deeply hope it is an on going series. I want more and so a SUB is required. Also the narration is really good and I hope you keep it up.

  • @pulverize3
    @pulverize3 3 месяца назад +6

    Human! Narration! Fuck! yea!

  • @0michelleki020
    @0michelleki020 3 месяца назад +5

    Finally, someone who dosn't use ai to short read stories.

    • @BirbletonVA
      @BirbletonVA  3 месяца назад +8

      Honestly it's so sad. AI is a great tool, but it shouldn't be used to churn out lazy content. Started having to put "Human narrator" in my titles because of all the lazy content farms.

    • @arcturuslight_
      @arcturuslight_ 3 месяца назад +1

      ​@@BirbletonVAthe worst part is that I'm seeing a lot of newly spawned channels using "shocking" ai thumbnails and bad AI narrator and getting more views than channels that have already narrated THESE SAME HFY STORIES FIVE YEARS AGO. I haven't listened to hfy stories for couple years and tried to return to a couple long ones that I haven't finished. Found this entire AI mess instead.

    • @Dexter01992
      @Dexter01992 3 месяца назад

      Happened to me to a video about the 7 hour war of Half Life. I could understand the AI voice, but soon it was clear the script was AI generated as well (lots of made up stuff and discrepancies between things said earlier). It was proof the one who posted it did not even check what the AI wrote.
      That and just the utter AI spam youtube is obsessed to put on my feed, I now immediately click on "hide this video" the moment I see it was made with AI.

  • @ՓvՓ
    @ՓvՓ 3 месяца назад +3

    guess its time to add another to the netnarrator /asn / starbound roster

  • @Staladus
    @Staladus Месяц назад

    Its so nice to find a narration channel that isn't AI, really nice work too

  • @LordLuko-rd7pc
    @LordLuko-rd7pc 3 месяца назад +1

    That Was Geat Bro, I Cant Stop Smileing

  • @bigunone
    @bigunone 3 месяца назад +5

    It can always get weirder! LOL Cats right out of the 60s!!

  • @vicarofrevelwood
    @vicarofrevelwood 2 месяца назад

    This is the second of your stories I have stumbled across, your voice is perfect for this.

  • @Golden_Pawz
    @Golden_Pawz 3 месяца назад +1

    The other is so adorable

  • @puro321
    @puro321 2 месяца назад

    Man how are you not famous yet? I loved the narration and how you voiced the characters!

  • @layman6750
    @layman6750 2 месяца назад

    I have said it once and will say it again, I love the South African Accent for HFY stories. Lekker man!

  • @unformedeight
    @unformedeight 3 месяца назад +4

    16:45 - For future note, there is in fact no X in especially
    25:28 - Never heard foot with an A in it, heard it first as fart

  • @elib9002
    @elib9002 3 месяца назад +1

    Pit hair grab got me
    😂😂😂😂

  • @housegabel
    @housegabel 3 месяца назад +3

    ok the voice changes are on point!

  • @alankohn6709
    @alankohn6709 2 месяца назад

    Great Story, Great rendition of the story and Great setting which I would like to hear more stories from what more could I ask for

  • @darrinwebber4077
    @darrinwebber4077 2 месяца назад

    Another "Oxidize" universe story. Cool.

  • @Sameer-ox7wu
    @Sameer-ox7wu 2 месяца назад

    Whoah! Awesome narration! Love it! Subscribed.

  • @sabrielelliott2427
    @sabrielelliott2427 3 месяца назад +3

    Your voice is soooooooooo nice to listen read these HFY stories, I might have to sub if more of your readings don't naturally pop up on my fyp!

    • @BirbletonVA
      @BirbletonVA  3 месяца назад +2

      Thank you so much!

    • @lavetissene339
      @lavetissene339 3 месяца назад +1

      HFY?

    • @sabrielelliott2427
      @sabrielelliott2427 3 месяца назад +2

      @@lavetissene339 HFY, also known as, Humans, Funk Yeah. This is not hyperbole. I could be slightly inaccurate, but that's basically what it translates to. :\

    • @lavetissene339
      @lavetissene339 3 месяца назад +1

      @@sabrielelliott2427 lmao

    • @BradleySherlock-n4x
      @BradleySherlock-n4x 3 месяца назад

      Very close to sounding like Nature's Temper and he is the best.

  • @chillax319
    @chillax319 2 месяца назад

    I'm not sure Rusty is too happy with a cannibalistic spider gal considering him as breedable.

  • @unformedeight
    @unformedeight 3 месяца назад +5

    18:57 - Byrocracy never changes, go find an expert opinion, disregard it and do it anyways
    Well read, small side notes:
    16:45 - There is no X in especially
    25:28 - Never heard foot with an A in it, heard it first as fart

    • @BirbletonVA
      @BirbletonVA  3 месяца назад +2

      Whoops, maybe a little much of my accent seeped in. Thanks for the pointer. Will keep it in mind :)

    • @unformedeight
      @unformedeight 3 месяца назад +2

      @@BirbletonVA I mean if anyone ever thinks you're a machine those'll stand as nice proof that indeed, you are human
      The voice actor of the main character of Overlord and the narrator for the Overlord audiobooks said exspecially for over 10 books until someone pointed it out to him =P

  • @Polygonetwo
    @Polygonetwo 2 месяца назад

    After hearing multiple humans say not to involve them in the war, then seeing a couple humans go ham to save someone...Yeah the ban kind of makes sense, in a way. Though, the potential for such a ban to spark a new war really should've been considered longer. xD

  • @BluBird12
    @BluBird12 3 месяца назад +6

    Idk why your upload schedule suddenly got so busy but im bnot complaining. Its great and i love your narrations and edits

    • @BirbletonVA
      @BirbletonVA  3 месяца назад +2

      Got a lot more time on my hands. Going to be sticking to a daily upload for awhile. Thanks for sticking by :D

    • @BluBird12
      @BluBird12 3 месяца назад +2

      @@BirbletonVA I hope you're channel gets more views. The narration is so good

  • @KatyManning-xd6lr
    @KatyManning-xd6lr 3 месяца назад

    So much atmosphere

  • @oxyowo4585
    @oxyowo4585 3 месяца назад +5

    otter :D

  • @melodyyoung9640
    @melodyyoung9640 3 месяца назад

    Really enjoyed this one

  • @kamikeserpentail3778
    @kamikeserpentail3778 2 месяца назад

    Space Otters are definitely adorable.
    But I wonder how the aliens can be mammals and not have the kinds of powerful traits we have.
    And the ban seems kind of silly.
    If humans are a potentially terrifying threat, they are also a potentially incredible boon.
    Like space travel, and any number of machines.

  • @widget0028
    @widget0028 3 месяца назад +5

    More chrysalis

  • @ironwolfF1
    @ironwolfF1 3 месяца назад +12

    This particular episode appears to have occurred before the 'kitten episode. My suggestion is that a little research might in order.
    Presenting the chapters in the order the author released them would help in maintaining a better 'story flow'.
    Just my two cents...

    • @BirbletonVA
      @BirbletonVA  3 месяца назад +3

      I agree. I read them in the order that they were posted. I'll check for future ones for the correct order. It seems that General Leia might have had some stories taken down, so it could be a repost? I'll reach out

    • @joyhoward6105
      @joyhoward6105 3 месяца назад +5

      @@BirbletonVAon their newest story, they confirmed in the comments that “these are not written nor published in chronological order”

    • @leiaclark8388
      @leiaclark8388 3 месяца назад +4

      Sorry for the confusion. I don’t write or publish the stories in chronological order. I get an idea, the story comes, details fill in, and it seems to figure out where it goes in the timeline.
      I actually got a set of notecards so I can jot things down to hopefully keep the timeline straight.
      After doing this, I understand why The Martian Chronicles wasn’t linear.

    • @BirbletonVA
      @BirbletonVA  3 месяца назад +1

      @@leiaclark8388 Thanks for clarification. Like i said before, I noticed that a story of yours was removed by the moderators. What happened there? Premise sounded interesting

    • @leiaclark8388
      @leiaclark8388 3 месяца назад

      @@BirbletonVA they said it was low effort? I think it was because it wasn’t long enough.
      Look in humansarespaceorcs for DONT LIE TO HUMANS, THEY WILL BELIEVE YOU.

  • @fancyquandaledingle5276
    @fancyquandaledingle5276 3 месяца назад +1

    Felt like i heard this before

  • @lupaswolfshead9971
    @lupaswolfshead9971 3 месяца назад +6

    wait is this a story about Rusty.

  • @slayer2450
    @slayer2450 2 месяца назад

    Your voice is quite nice for narration

  • @Lunaxire
    @Lunaxire 2 месяца назад

    I love this. 😢🩶

  • @fredfarrellproductions1404
    @fredfarrellproductions1404 3 месяца назад +1

    sorry to bug you youngster, but how many stories do you have with rusty and perg in them/ Those are too cute.

    • @BirbletonVA
      @BirbletonVA  2 месяца назад +1

      Not problem at all! Only three so far, but planning on narrating a Lot more of her work. She has written a lot more stories involving the two characters, they're all on her reddit page. :)

  • @John-jv5gt
    @John-jv5gt 2 месяца назад

    I like the application of human government burocsy showing F u b a r on a galactic scale maby we are not the only insane species

  • @hoangvuification
    @hoangvuification 3 месяца назад +1

    hello fellow humans

  • @ARandomULTRAKILLFan
    @ARandomULTRAKILLFan 3 месяца назад +8

    FIRST CAT, NOW OTTER WITH TABLET.

    • @lupaswolfshead9971
      @lupaswolfshead9971 3 месяца назад +2

      i think the cat is later in the story arc. Because it appeared to reference certain points of this chapter.

  • @disodosid
    @disodosid 3 месяца назад +1

    i loved this 💖

  • @HammboneBob
    @HammboneBob 2 месяца назад

    Nobody tell the bird people about KFC

  • @stanleyholmes1266
    @stanleyholmes1266 3 месяца назад +4

    Who keeps writeing these stories about space otters?

    • @leiaclark8388
      @leiaclark8388 3 месяца назад +5

      Me

    • @BradleySherlock-n4x
      @BradleySherlock-n4x 3 месяца назад

      Creepy furries. Always report them irl if you know any. They abuse animals physically and sexually.

    • @edudmodnar4661
      @edudmodnar4661 3 месяца назад +4

      Everyone loves space otters

  • @Speed001
    @Speed001 3 месяца назад +1

    Found you

  • @justsomeguywithahandlebarm2456
    @justsomeguywithahandlebarm2456 Месяц назад

    Huamn narrator lesgo

  • @Dewkeeper
    @Dewkeeper 2 месяца назад

    Fwiw i believe the 'corp' in words like corpman is pronounced 'core'. (E.g. 27:20ish)

  • @melodyyoung9640
    @melodyyoung9640 3 месяца назад

    Are there more Rusty and Perg stories?

  • @leadingauctions8440
    @leadingauctions8440 3 месяца назад

    The volume is insanely low

  • @wdwadindwatri
    @wdwadindwatri 2 месяца назад

    "clicked tongue" not teeth...

  • @lupaswolfshead9971
    @lupaswolfshead9971 3 месяца назад +2

    deus

  • @BradleySherlock-n4x
    @BradleySherlock-n4x 3 месяца назад

    Is the narrator Nature's Temper?

    • @BirbletonVA
      @BirbletonVA  3 месяца назад

      No :P but I've been compared to him a few times now haha

  • @someguycalledCh0wdah
    @someguycalledCh0wdah 3 месяца назад

    All you had to say was "Human Narrator"

  • @7tp341
    @7tp341 2 месяца назад

    Short story - 30mins

  • @themarlboromandalorian
    @themarlboromandalorian 3 месяца назад +1

    Pretty good.
    You mispronounced **especially** though.

    • @BirbletonVA
      @BirbletonVA  3 месяца назад

      Yeah, my whole world collapsed when I realised I’d been saying it wrong my entire life 😐

    • @themarlboromandalorian
      @themarlboromandalorian 3 месяца назад

      @@BirbletonVA good.
      Do better.
      I have faith in you.

    • @gamerboiiiiiii
      @gamerboiiiiiii 3 месяца назад +2

      ​@@themarlboromandaloriana bit rude :|..

  • @widget0028
    @widget0028 3 месяца назад +3

    First!

  • @nox5555
    @nox5555 3 месяца назад

    This was written by AI... no fur on the shoulders and feet?

    • @leiaclark8388
      @leiaclark8388 3 месяца назад +4

      @@nox5555 nope, I’m not an AI. The description of Rusty was from Pergs perspective.

  • @denifnaf5874
    @denifnaf5874 3 месяца назад

    Is the narrator human?

    • @BirbletonVA
      @BirbletonVA  3 месяца назад +1

      I am indeed human

    • @denifnaf5874
      @denifnaf5874 3 месяца назад +1

      ​@@BirbletonVAyou are only the third human hfy narrator i know of

  • @hilmaallen1302
    @hilmaallen1302 2 месяца назад

    You have taken a good story and ruined it with this narrative.