Eeek!! I was going for that! I wanted it to be almost "creeping up" on the listener, until is was super overpowering! I hope that came across!! Thanks so much my friend!!
yeah, but Firestar became an warrior with only 3 moons of apprenticeship, which is way less than a regular apprentice would take to become a warrior, but still, 6 moons don't take that long! your comment is so true :0
I like to believe that “pack pack, kill kill” is the dogs raising cigarette awareness. “If someone offers you a PACK of cigarettes, don’t accept. Smoking will KILL you.”
I actually love all the different interpretations of Brightpaw before the dog incident. Some depict her as just as furious as Swiftpaw right from the start, but this shows her as hesitant but always wanting to stick by Swiftpaw no matter what-- so she would have bottled up her anger if not for him. Also, ouch, that "this is the last day I'll have a name with "Paw"" line hurts, especially seeing as Swiftpaw kept his name and went to StarClan...
I think this is amazing! When I realized in the end it was saying "pack pack kill kill" I was like: Woah! Could this match the characters any more? You are great and I listen to everything you post.
I really like this depiction of Brightpaw/heart as the hesitant but influencial friend as opposed to the equally rash partner-in-crime that we usually see her as. I don't know if it was just the dog experience that humbled her, but from what we see of Brightheart she is nearly always compassionate and putting the needs of others before herself, it makes sense for her to go with Swiftpaw more to make sure that he's alright than anything else- like she knows it's a bad idea but she feels obligated at first as his friend to stand by him. I was honestly never a fan of Swiftpaw- and I don't get why he's so popular. He wasn't a big part before dying, and his entire plan if anything just proves that he really WASN'T ready to be a warrior as he was too rash and lacked patience.
I feel the same way! He was totally like Thistleclaw imo. I remember reading that Brightheart wanted to go with Swiftpaw because she loved him and if he died she would want to go with him.
XFabuMazX I see Swiftpaw as quite a determined apprentice, he tried to prove to Bluestar that he was ready to become a warrior. He really didn't know what was stealing the prey, so it was probably quiet a big risk to even think of finding what it was, and if he wasn't there, Brightpaw wouldn't have thought of that, and so the prey would keep being stolen and no one would know about the dogs until it was too late, he really played a big part, so this is why I believe he deserves to have his own month, without him, they would have been doomed.
Actually Swiftpaw was more then ready to be a warrior he was MUCH older then Cloudtail and if Fireheart/star hadn't told swiftpaw to get more cats for a battle maybe things would be different. And Brightheart did love Swiftpaw and swiftpaw loved her one of the erins i think said that Swiftpaw hopes Brightheart will choose him over Cloudtail in starclan and he was not like thistleclaw in any way. He was trying to prove to his clan he was worthy to be a warrior Read the books over! Book five of the prophecies begin!
XFabuMazX I think people like him because they sorta relate to feeling the need to prove yourself, and relate to having made poor decisions when trying to prove themselves. People who feel undermined or not enough compared to others probably sympathize and relate. Then there's also the people who see him as more a determined character who helped thunderclan find out about the dogs before it was too late.
I think so, yeah. Swiftpaw, Brightpaw and Thornpaw were all denied the chance as warriors, yet Bluestar let Cloudtail be a warrior. (Thornpaw and Brightpaw get their warrior names only thanks to Firestar)
@@TobyandMavisforever Bluestar only let Cloudtail be a warrior because he didn't have the faith in StarClan the others did. She thought he was the only loyal cat in her clan by that point because he didn't believe in StarClan.
I love that through 1:46 - 2:12, you put "pack, pack" and "kill, kill," in the background. Plus I love your music and this is my favorite one out of all.
Poor Twigpaw had to go through 3 apprenticeships maybe more, I don’t know I’m not that far. First Ivypool then Sandynose then Sparkpelt, each who started her as a newly named apprentice.
Me: *shows this video to kids* Children, this is the reason you should never fight street thugs. UvU My kids: mom these are just ca- Me: HOW DARE YOU CALL WARRIORS JUST CATS.
Swiftpaw: the cat with the BEST ideas Brightpaw: the cat who just comes with him so he won’t die Me: the person who would come along because she’s bored
Me: the person that would silently* sneak up behind them then leap on them and say: “your not leaving me. It’s so boring when my life isn’t being threatened” *I would honestly be humming I’m not fine or Walk without the stars, I stay up until 1 in the morning listening to these songs. Lol.
In honor of Swiftpaw: Starclan, this apprentice has proven that he is (a griffindor) brave, loyal, and courageous. Swiftpaw, you shall now be known as Swiftheart. May Starclan guide you.
their love story dosent really seem one for a song i mean they hardly knew eachother then they ran off and came back and "brokeup" and then crowfeather was a jerk to and about his kits and was awful to leafpool
SPOILER Actually in Leafpool's Wish, Crowfeather tried to talk to her. She chased him off, intending for him to never know about his kits. She was trying to bury her mistakes (as she felt responsible for Cinderpelt's death), and he was just as shocked as Brambleclaw(which is why he immediately denied the truth). Thanks for reading.
SPOILER Actually in Leafpool's Wish, Crowfeather tried to talk to her. She chased him off, intending for him to never know about his kits. She was trying to bury her mistakes (as she felt responsible for Cinderpelt's death), and he was just as shocked as Brambleclaw(which is why he immediately denied the truth). Thanks for reading.
Mayday Wish I might actually try to make a song about pack pack kill kill if I can figure out how to combine the voices with the music XD or maybe not if I can't find instrumentals that will fit or whatever
I've heard this a million times and I just realized that at one point of the song a back round voice is singing "pack pack, kill kill" just makes it hunters times better!
I am not throwin' away my shot I am not throwin' away my shot Hey yo, I'm just like my country I'm young, scrappy and hungry And I'm not throwin' away my shot I'ma get a scholarship to King's College I probably shouldn't brag, but dang, I amaze and astonish The problem is I got a lot of brains but no polish I gotta holler just to be heard With every word, I drop knowledge I'm a diamond in the rough, a shiny piece of coal Tryna reach my goal my power of speech, unimpeachable Only nineteen but my mind is older These New York City streets get colder, I shoulder Every burden, every disadvantage I have learned to manage, I don't have a gun to brandish I walk these streets famished The plan is to fan this spark into a flame But damn, it's getting dark, so let me spell out my name I am the A-L-E-X-A-N-D-E-R we are meant to be A colony that runs independently Meanwhile, Britain keeps shittin' on us endlessly Essentially, they tax us relentlessly Then King George turns around, runs a spendin' spree He ain't ever gonna set his descendants free So there will be a revolution in this century Enter me, he says in parentheses Don't be shocked when your history book mentions me I will lay down my life if it sets us free Eventually, you'll see my ascendancy And I am not throwin' away my shot I am not throwin' away my shot Hey yo, I'm just like my country I'm young, scrappy and hungry And I'm not throwin' away my shot I am not throwin' away my shot I am not throwin' away my shot Hey yo, I'm just like my country I'm young, scrappy and hungry And I'm not throwin' away my shot It's time to take a shot I dream of life without a monarchy The unrest in France will lead to anarchy? Anarchy how you say, how you, oh, anarchy? When I fight, I make the other side panicky With my, shot Yo, I'm a tailor's apprentice And I got y'all knuckleheads in loco parentis (loco parentis) I'm joining the rebellion 'cause I know it's my chance To socially advance, instead of sewin' some pants (woo) I'm gonna take a shot And but we'll never be truly free Until those in bondage have the same rights as you and me You and I Do or die Wait 'til I sally in on a stallion With the first black battalion Have another shot Geniuses, lower your voices You keep out of trouble and you double your choices I'm with you, but the situation is fraught You've got to be carefully taught If you talk, you're gonna get shot Burr, check what we got Mister Lafayette, hard rock like Lancelot I think your pants look hot Laurens, I like you a lot Let's hatch a plot blacker than the kettle callin' the pot What are the odds the gods would put us all in one spot Poppin' a squat on conventional wisdom, like it or not A bunch of revolutionary manumission abolitionists? Give me a position, show me where the ammunition is Oh, am I talkin' too loud? Sometimes I get over excited, shoot off at the mouth I never had a group of friends before I promise that I'll make y'all proud Let's get this guy in front of a crowd I am not throwin' away my shot I am not throwin' away my shot Hey yo, I'm just like my country I'm young, scrappy and hungry And I'm not throwin' away my shot I am not throwin' away my shot I am not throwin' away my shot Hey yo, I'm just like my country I'm young, scrappy and hungry And I'm not throwin' away my shot Everybody sing Whoa, whoa, whoa Ayy, whoa (woo), whoa Should let 'em hear ya (yeah) Let's go Whoa, whoa, whoa I said shout it to the rooftops Whoa, whoa, whoa Said, to the rooftops Whoa, whoa, whoa A-come on (yeah) Come on, let's go Rise up When you're living on your knees, you rise up Tell your brother that he's gotta rise up Tell your sister that she's gotta rise up When are these colonies gonna rise up? (Whoa, whoa) When are these colonies gonna rise up? (Whoa) When are these colonies gonna rise up? (Whoa) When are these colonies gonna rise up? Rise up I imagine death so much it feels more like a memory When's it gonna get me? In my sleep, seven feet ahead of me? If I see it comin', do I run or do I let it be? Is it like a beat without a melody? See, I never thought I'd live past twenty Where I come from some get half as many Ask anybody why we livin' fast and we laugh, reach for a flask We have to make this moment last, that's plenty Scratch that this is not a moment, it's the movement Where all the hungriest brothers with something to prove went? Foes oppose us, we take an honest stand We roll like Moses, claimin' our promised land And? If we win our independence? Is that a guarantee of freedom for our descendants? Or will the blood we shed begin an endless cycle of vengeance and death with no defendants? I know the action in the street is excitin' But Jesus, between all the bleedin' 'n' fightin' I've been readin' 'n' writin' We need to handle our financial situation Are we a nation of states what's the state of our nation? I'm past patiently waitin' I'm passionately mashin' every expectation Every action's an act of creation I'm laughin' in the face of casualties and sorrow For the first time, I'm thinkin' past tomorrow And I am not throwin' away my shot I am not throwin' away my shot Hey yo, I'm just like my country I'm young, scrappy and hungry And I'm not throwin' away my shot We're gonna rise up (time to take a shot) I am not throwin' away my shot We're gonna rise up (time to take a shot) I am not throwin' away my shot We're gonna, rise up, rise up It's time to take a shot Rise up, rise up It's time to take a shot Rise up, it's time to take a shot Rise up, take a shot, shot, shot It's time to take a shot, time to take a shot And I am not throwin' away my Not throwin' away my shot
Theodosia writes me a letter every day I'm keeping the bed warm while her husband is away He's on the British side in Georgia He's trying to keep the colonies inline But he can keep all of Georgia Theodosia, she's mine Love doesn't discriminate Between the sinners and the saints It takes and it takes and it takes And we keep loving anyway We laugh and we cry and we break And we make our mistakes And if there's a reason I'm by her side When so many have tried Then I'm willing to wait for it I'm willing to wait for it My grandfather was a fire and brimstone preacher (Preacher, Preacher, Preacher) But there are things that the Homilies and hymns won't teach ya (Teach ya, Teach ya, Teach ya) My mother was a genius (Genius) My father commanded respect (Respect, Respect) When they died they left no instructions Just a legacy to protect Death doesn't discriminate Between the sinners and the saints It takes and it takes and it takes And we keep living anyway We rise and we fall and we break And we make our mistakes And if there's a reason I'm still alive When everyone who loves me has died I'm willing to wait for it (Wait for it) I'm willing to wait for it I am the one thing in life I can control (Wait for it, wait for it, wait for it, wait for it) I am inimitable I am an original I'm not falling behind or running late (Wait for it, wait for it, wait for it, wait for it) I'm not standing still I am lying in wait (Wait, wait, wait) Hamilton faces an endless uphill climb (Climb, climb, climb) He has something to prove He has nothing to lose (Lose, lose, lose, lose) Hamilton's pace is relentless He wastes no time (Time, time, time) What is it like in his shoes? Hamilton doesn't hesitate He exhibits no restraint He takes and he takes and he takes And he keeps winning anyway He changes the game He plays and he raises the stakes And if there's a reason He seems to thrive when so few survive, then Goddamnit I'm willing to wait for it (Wait for it) I'm willing to wait for it Life doesn't discriminate Between the sinners and the saints It takes and it takes and it takes (And we keep living anyway) We rise (and we fall) We fall (and we break) (And we make our mistakes) And if there's a reason I'm still alive When so many have died Then I'm willin' to- Wait for it (Wait for it, wait for it) Wait for it (Wait for it, wait for it (Wait for it, wait for it, wait for it, wait for it, wait for it) (Wait)
MY GOD. THIS SONG IS BEAUTIFUL. You really did well to capture Swiftpaws determination to become a warrior and Brightpaws concern, but now wanting him to go alone. And the "Pack Pack Kill Kill" that was supposed to illustrate the moment when they fought the dogs was glorious
This is what started it all for me. The moment Swiftpaw started singing, I knew that this was going to be great. I started memorizing the lyrics and now Im rehearsing this song as if it were going to be a musical in the future. Thank you Blixemi. Thank you so much.
you put such hard work and emotion into your songs that I could see the parts of the story like a movie as it was sang. It showed such emotion that I could easily detect the mood and emotions of the cats. I almost cried. Good job!
you make such good songs, keep up the good work and you could be a famous singer or voice actor what if Blixemi became a character in Steven Universe and sang a song
Bluestar: Swiftpaw and Brightpaw can't be a warrior! Swiftpaw and Brightpaw: Sings Prove It Bluestar: StarClan honors your singing skills, and we welcome you as a full performer of ThunderClan Your performer names will be Swiftsong and Brightvoice.
I keep imaging that swift paw is one of my OCS:honey paw/pelt and bright paw/bright heart is one of my other OCS:acorn paw/fur.but don't worry about it I won't make a map cuz I can't post vids only playlists plus I can't animate either.the reason is cus honey paw/pelt had kinda the same story as swift paw,she hated her clan and hated being a apprentice so she ran away to a different clan and met blood star who named her honey pelt.she fell in love with him and she had kits but in a battle she met up with her old mentor:lion spirit.she killed him then faced her bro:acorn fur she tried to kill him but he ran across thunder path but when she did she was hit by a monster she of course killed cats to prove herself while acorn fur tried to stop her.she went to the dark forest surprise surprise.
This song is amazing, it's a great choice between the two characters. I'm guessing that Brightpaw joined in because she felt she had to go with him? Also, did anyone else notice the "pack pack kill kill" reference in the middle 😁 like if you did!
Did Blixemi do the voices for both Swiftpaw and Brightheart? If so, she did a really great job with voicing both of them, and as always, the lyrics were really good too! The scenes and characters that she chooses to narrate through these songs are always so well picked! (...though, I'm still waiting on a song for Jay Bae, once she acknowledges that he's objectively the bomb dot com and the best character of all time, as LZRD WZRD has pointed out 😉)
Ahh!!! I literally cannot thank you enough!! That means the world to me!! I did infact do both voices, and tried to make them a little distinguishable from each other, so thank you so much for saying that!! And eeek!!! I have so much fun, and there's so many unique situations in the books, that there's so many great scenes to explore in these songs! *And trust me you don't want a song about Jayfarter from me, it'd be a hot mess of smack talkin' Jay ;)
From favorite to least favorite Blixemi warrior cats song 1. One not Two 2. Prove It 3. Fading 4. Stride by Stride As amazing as this one was, Feathertail beats all
I love how you really expressed the feelings in Swiftpaw and Brightpaw's words. To be honest, I love how they are almost telling this the Bluestar. LOVE IT *Picks up a dangerous path* TIME TO SEE WHAT THIS HAS IN STORE FOR US!
Ok, maybe I should come up with a new song about something. Edit: ok, I’m making one called I’ve Made Up My Mind. It’s about Squirrelflight choosing Brambleclaw over Ashfur. Why should I have to choose? I don’t want to hurt their heart Because the other will have a dart in their heart He’s so kind in the past But the past is gone alas I’ve decided this these badgers may have been bad but helped me choose I’ve made up my mind I have chosen though Ash’s heart will wither to ashes And he never refuses to leave it behind and all he does to me is lash his claws I’ve made up my mind I’ve chosen now, I’ve made up my mind I’ve gone with the one meant for me, I’ve made up my mind I feel such guilt It’s like my heart is going to tilt And my heart would have burned If it had not turned To the side it had did I’ve made up my mind I’ve chosen, and I’ve made up my mind This was started and a brewing war Started was hard to ignore Each time we were face to face He never lightened up and my future was a knotted lace He never lightened up He’s always been a bossy one So now I’ve chosen and I’ve made up my mind He had Brambles ‘round his heart just like his claws Always troubled by our quarrels His fur was the color of ashes Like what he refuses his heart to turn back from If I could only have forgiven them all My temper got out of control But now I’ve made up my mind I’ve made up my mind No one can deny, I’ve made up my mind Ok, that’s what if came up with, it’s probably terrible and nobody is gonna see this but this is my idea for a song
Well, Lilly, I don't think so. I think Candi wants the person who read his/her comment to make a MAP. Blixemi doesn't want anyone to make MAPs out of her songs. Conversation over.
“More than twice as cloud” I believe by This lyric it is referring to cloud paw/tail because they were apprentices at the same time but cloudtail was made a warrior first by Bluestar because he didn’t believe in starclan and she believed that starclan had abandoned them and all the cats were traitors but besides cloudtail because he was the only one who didn’t believe in starclan
I love this song sooo much! You did amazing! But I really really like how around 1:35 when swiftpaw is singing and brightpaw/heart is saying like just a few words with him, that there is kind of a pattern but based on it she should have sang “more than twice as cloud” but she didn’t. I just really like it because it kind of makes sense with her ending up with cloud. Anyway this was just soo soo soo amazing, I love it so much!!
I never watched the video and only had listened to it once but when i listened to it again hearing the 'pack pack, kill kill' sent shivers down my spine
You got your choice that was the last day you had the name as "paw" am I right 😄 I'm sorry I just kinda laugh at the choices swiftpaw made but I love the parts when they sing to gather
Can we all agree to fund Blixemi to make a Warriors musical?
Alicia Tippit omg best idea ever
yesssss
Alicia Tippit I APPROVE
I need to see a warriors musical
Oh yesssss
When I started hearing "pack pack kill kill" I almost fell off a chair
Eeek!! I was going for that! I wanted it to be almost "creeping up" on the listener, until is was super overpowering! I hope that came across!! Thanks so much my friend!!
Had to search for it as well, but it's in the background around 02:00
ikr
Northflower OwO ikr
That's basicly me
Poor Swiftpaw, became an apprentice in Book 2, and died in Book 5. Meanwhile Firestar went from apprentice to warrior in the span of 1 book.
Oof
It's always been like that, for some reason.
True
yeah, but Firestar became an warrior with only 3 moons of apprenticeship, which is way less than a regular apprentice would take to become a warrior, but still, 6 moons don't take that long! your comment is so true :0
I know if I was swift paw I might have done this too
It would've been so cool if they had added one last "Pack pack, Kill kill" at the end in a growling whisper.
Ikr
So "Pack pack, Kill, kill" as Batman whispering?
@@uselessrot 😂
@Jamie Mould
Nyes
@@uselessrot 😂😂😂😂😂
* Hears Pack, Pack, Kill, Kill *
* Jumps out window *
LOL IM RIGHT NEXT TO A WINDOW WHEN I READ THIS AND HEARD IT
And I thought I got scared easily probably less now that I’ve read the books but still I might of just jumped when I heard it the first time
I was just dying inside when reading the book
i can't hear it
@@dayounkim929 it's towards the end, and it gets pretty loud so im not sure how you wouldn't, but just keep listening lol
-SLAMS FIST ON TABLE- THE HARMONIES
colacatinthehat nice *picks her fist up abd flips table* do it like that
ira 4 *Picks table back up and lights it on fire and THEN tosses it across the room* No, like that
*Picks up the burning table, burns it more, throws it across the room again and then smashes it with a hammer* No, like THIS.
colacatinthehat *Sets world on fire*
colacatinthehat *sets universe on fire*
nO MORE EXCUSE
*BLIxemi is gREAT*
WE GOtta pROVE IT
I was reading your comment and when I read WE GOtta pROVE IT part, the song sung it for me 😂
@@Roachbot OMG REALLY?
@@tabbycat5651 lol
Why prove it when it's true?
Theres nothing to prove if its already proven
Swiftpaw is not throwin' away his shot.
Yea he is-
Yeah, he's dead, tired, and hurt.
He’s just like his country he’s young scrappy and hungry
@@shadowstorm9601 and he is not throwing away his shot
HE IS NOT THROWING AWAY HIS SHOT!
When “pack pack kill kill” came on I was ShOoKeTh
what time stamp? I can't find it
nvm. I listened to it again and heard it this time...
I like to believe that “pack pack, kill kill” is the dogs raising cigarette awareness.
“If someone offers you a PACK of cigarettes, don’t accept. Smoking will KILL you.”
You absolute genius.
Lol YOU GENIUS
Ok that’s just amazing. Imma tell everyone that Erin Hunter is saying “Don’t smoke”
I... I love this comment
Teaches need to force students read the book 5 (pack 1) from warrior cats cuz it will entertain u not to smoke
Oh man, I got chills from that "Pack, pack, kill, kill" I love how you kinda made it sneak up as the song progressed :D
Nettleleap Productions I know right! It was awesome!!!
Wow, I never noticed that.
Nettleleap Productions same 😢😭😭
I didn't notice that until I saw that comment! e-e
I didn't hear it... 😐
Another great song, Blixemi! I LOVE how you voiced Brightpaw's concern and how she didn't want to go but refused to let Swift go alone. Perfect! :3
i watch your vids
Haha names him Swiftsong
XD wow
TennelleFlowers their both my fave
@@simplysilent7560 That is so beautiful.
If they make the Warriors movie a musical (StarClan forbid) they better get Blixemi to write the songs.
blood drool gosh now I need to make a warriors musical
blood drool omg yes
YES
blood drool YAASSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!! But please, no musical... Just no.
I seriously commented something like this, too, and I totally agree with you.... but we should all sign a sheet saying we want her to do it though XD
*pack pack kill kill plays*
Wattpad: *marks this video as offensive
Steak The HOOMAN
Oof
lmao wattpad
Ryan Summers couldn't help but read that without thinking of a gun getting loaded behind them 😂
Ryan Summers ,m
@Ryan Summers You know it's a joke, right?
It would've been cool if Brightpaw had said "Swiftpaw, please don't use yourself as bait."
Lauren Rossignol LOL! That would've been hilarious!
that is funny
Not funny, just rude. Brightheart was never like that. Read the books please. .-.
Shooting Star / Flight 😂 Honestly that would’ve been really funny 😆
Michelle Mercier YOUR RUDE
I literally listen to this song every hour, the "pack pack kill kill" bit hit me so hard
Love your art xoxo
What pack pack kill kill
Nightfeather SAME I’ve listened to this song for years and I just noticed “pack pack kill kill”!
Every hour?
2
I actually love all the different interpretations of Brightpaw before the dog incident. Some depict her as just as furious as Swiftpaw right from the start, but this shows her as hesitant but always wanting to stick by Swiftpaw no matter what-- so she would have bottled up her anger if not for him.
Also, ouch, that "this is the last day I'll have a name with "Paw"" line hurts, especially seeing as Swiftpaw kept his name and went to StarClan...
Not to mention Brightpaw got the name "Lostface" right after she was mauled by the dogs. Firestar changed this upon becoming leader, but still...
Forever an apprentice. Poor Swiftpaw. It was straight up cruel of StarClan to not offer him the chance of a warrior name once he joined them.
SwiftPaw and BrightHeart should have been mates from the start
Tell your Swiftpaw that he's gotta rise up...
TheoreticalKnot
tell brightpaw thats shes gotta rise up
when are these clans gonna rise up? rise up?
FantasticFlareon e
I IMAGINE DEATH SO MUCH IT FEELS MORE LIKE A MEMORY IS THIS WHERE IT GETS ME ON MY FEET SEVERAL FEET AHEAD OF ME
he just wasn't satisfied and threw away his shot, 'cause he wasn't willing it wait for it
He just wasn't able to wait for it.
Bright paw really said “it’s dangerous to go alone, take half of my face”
IM ACTUALLY CRYING THATS HILARIOUS
I think this is amazing! When I realized in the end it was saying "pack pack kill kill" I was like: Woah! Could this match the characters any more? You are great and I listen to everything you post.
I really like this depiction of Brightpaw/heart as the hesitant but influencial friend as opposed to the equally rash partner-in-crime that we usually see her as.
I don't know if it was just the dog experience that humbled her, but from what we see of Brightheart she is nearly always compassionate and putting the needs of others before herself, it makes sense for her to go with Swiftpaw more to make sure that he's alright than anything else- like she knows it's a bad idea but she feels obligated at first as his friend to stand by him.
I was honestly never a fan of Swiftpaw- and I don't get why he's so popular. He wasn't a big part before dying, and his entire plan if anything just proves that he really WASN'T ready to be a warrior as he was too rash and lacked patience.
I feel the same way! He was totally like Thistleclaw imo. I remember reading that Brightheart wanted to go with Swiftpaw because she loved him and if he died she would want to go with him.
XFabuMazX
I see Swiftpaw as quite a determined apprentice, he tried to prove to Bluestar that he was ready to become a warrior. He really didn't know what was stealing the prey, so it was probably quiet a big risk to even think of finding what it was, and if he wasn't there, Brightpaw wouldn't have thought of that, and so the prey would keep being stolen and no one would know about the dogs until it was too late, he really played a big part, so this is why I believe he deserves to have his own month, without him, they would have been doomed.
Actually Swiftpaw was more then ready to be a warrior he was MUCH older then Cloudtail and if Fireheart/star hadn't told swiftpaw to get more cats for a battle maybe things would be different. And Brightheart did love Swiftpaw and swiftpaw loved her one of the erins i think said that Swiftpaw hopes Brightheart will choose him over Cloudtail in starclan and he was not like thistleclaw in any way. He was trying to prove to his clan he was worthy to be a warrior Read the books over! Book five of the prophecies begin!
wait brightheart loves cloudtail...
XFabuMazX I think people like him because they sorta relate to feeling the need to prove yourself, and relate to having made poor decisions when trying to prove themselves. People who feel undermined or not enough compared to others probably sympathize and relate. Then there's also the people who see him as more a determined character who helped thunderclan find out about the dogs before it was too late.
Lol maybe Swiftpaw could have gotten his warrior name by his singing skills 😂
Silverstar LOL
Silverstar
Swiftsong
TeenyTonnie The Gaming Artist OMG YESSS
ღSilverstarღ SWIFTSONG! Awesome warrior name
lol yeah. Swiftsong maybe?
Does twice of cloud mean twice as good as Cloudtail?
I think so, yeah. Swiftpaw, Brightpaw and Thornpaw were all denied the chance as warriors, yet Bluestar let Cloudtail be a warrior. (Thornpaw and Brightpaw get their warrior names only thanks to Firestar)
Thanks
@@TobyandMavisforever Bluestar only let Cloudtail be a warrior because he didn't have the faith in StarClan the others did. She thought he was the only loyal cat in her clan by that point because he didn't believe in StarClan.
Yee
Spooky Buddies yes
I love that through 1:46 - 2:12, you put "pack, pack" and "kill, kill," in the background. Plus I love your music and this is my favorite one out of all.
I can't unhear it now 🙃
Oh, it says that?
**gose back and listens**
*hears it**
ACK **jumps out window because the Pack is freaking scary**
@@jdthebanana7967 But it's a part of the song? That joke only works for unintentional thing
“We need to prove to Bluestar that we’re ready to become warriors. And I know just how to do it.”
Me: Ah yes, something called a *warrior assessment*
OMG true lol
So underratedddd
During the 'pack pack kill kill' part I didn't notice until someone said in the comments. It's too quiet for me..
Same
alexisawe plays tfm
I didn't notice it until I saw intrumental
I dident even hear it I still cant rip
Me too
Me too
Swiftpaw: ugh, we've been training too long, IT'S TIME WE SHOULD BECOME WARRIORS
Twigpaw: *AM I A JOKE TO YOU?!?!?!*
Poor Twigpaw had to go through 3 apprenticeships maybe more, I don’t know I’m not that far. First Ivypool then Sandynose then Sparkpelt, each who started her as a newly named apprentice.
Rip-
And then Swiftpaw Dies and Brightpaw loses half her face
That's why you don't fight dogs
EXACTLY!
Or jut, don’t dog?
@GENESEE WILKINSON lol
Me: *shows this video to kids* Children, this is the reason you should never fight street thugs. UvU
My kids: mom these are just ca-
Me: HOW DARE YOU CALL WARRIORS JUST CATS.
There goes my weekend plans...
Programs:
Art: MsPaint
Me: That’s some nice MS Paint quality art
Swiftpaw: the cat with the BEST ideas
Brightpaw: the cat who just comes with him so he won’t die
Me: the person who would come along because she’s bored
Swiftpaw does not have the best ideas he got himself killed
@@System_Error404X r/woooosh
@@System_Error404X true but he just wanted to be a warrior
Me: *the person that would come to sit in a tree and watch with popcorn and not help at all*
Me: the person that would silently* sneak up behind them then leap on them and say: “your not leaving me. It’s so boring when my life isn’t being threatened”
*I would honestly be humming I’m not fine or Walk without the stars, I stay up until 1 in the morning listening to these songs. Lol.
i literally fell onto the floor when i heard pack,pack,kill,kill
Ink Sans same😂
Ink Sans When is it?
It begins the moment Brightpaw and Swiftpaw sing together. Also, in my opinion x2 is better if u wanna hear it.
i dropped my computer because i tripped over laughing LOL
I think it starts at 1:36
In honor of Swiftpaw: Starclan, this apprentice has proven that he is (a griffindor) brave, loyal, and courageous. Swiftpaw, you shall now be known as Swiftheart. May Starclan guide you.
Nah I say Swifttail that's what he wanted plus Swiftheart doesn't sound right, and it would mix with BrightHRART
swiftbreathe would've been better *IN MY OPINION*
*swift tail, swift claw*
Idk but Swift breeze would have been cool (ik it might not be the best fit to his personality but I think it sounds kinda cool)
Swift Strike sounds nice
I think Leafpool and Crowfeather need a song
their love story dosent really seem one for a song i mean they hardly knew eachother then they ran off and came back and "brokeup" and then crowfeather was a jerk to and about his kits and was awful to leafpool
SPOILER
Actually in Leafpool's Wish, Crowfeather tried to talk to her. She chased him off, intending for him to never know about his kits. She was trying to bury her mistakes (as she felt responsible for Cinderpelt's death), and he was just as shocked as Brambleclaw(which is why he immediately denied the truth). Thanks for reading.
SPOILER
Actually in Leafpool's Wish, Crowfeather tried to talk to her. She chased him off, intending for him to never know about his kits. She was trying to bury her mistakes (as she felt responsible for Cinderpelt's death), and he was just as shocked as Brambleclaw(which is why he immediately denied the truth). Thanks for reading.
havent read leafpols wish yet thanks for telling me though
Sure
Blixemi is the BEST SONG WRITER I HAVE EVER HAD THE PLEASURE TO HEAR THEIR CREATIONS
We need a whole musical that goes through the whole warriors series with these songs❣💜💓
i just realized it was saying pack pack kill kill i freaked out so much x.x
Margie Pan Same here
Margie Pan Don't hug me I'm scared.
damn things like this have me realize how fucking amazing a warriors musical would be
Blix your a great singer/song writer and you've proved it
It took me so long to hear "Pack pack Kill Kill" xD
Ravensword Productions me to lol
Same
Same I replayed while tryna find it for literally 1 hour
I was hearing "no. No, no, " the whole time until I looked in the comments...
Hollypaw - Jaypaw, I know it's hard to wait
Brightpaw - Swiftpaw, I know it's hard to wait
hm
Hmm
HMMM
Swiftpaw sounds like Ash from pokemon
Bunny Hops true XD
Now that you mention it...XD
Both are young boys voiced by women, that could be why. c:
Zoe Boughton brightpaw is a girl
I choose Swiftpaw...
Oh wait.
Those're dogs.
Crap.
U should do a song about Pack Pack Kill Kill, and great song! Added to Favorites!
If you listen closely around the time swift paw and bright paw start singing together you can actually hear what sounds like pack pack kill kill.
threebeforetwo I know, but mean like a whole song. I don't know why I like Pack Pack Kill Kill haha
yeah at 1:45
Mayday Wish I might actually try to make a song about pack pack kill kill if I can figure out how to combine the voices with the music XD or maybe not if I can't find instrumentals that will fit or whatever
(On my channel)
Swift, you literally went to your true destiny.
Death by dogs
I've heard this a million times and I just realized that at one point of the song a back round voice is singing "pack pack, kill kill" just makes it hunters times better!
Swiftpaw: "I'm not throwing away my shot!"
Brightpaw: "Wait for it"
Chibiscuit yasss
I am not throwin' away my shot
I am not throwin' away my shot
Hey yo, I'm just like my country
I'm young, scrappy and hungry
And I'm not throwin' away my shot
I'ma get a scholarship to King's College
I probably shouldn't brag, but dang, I amaze and astonish
The problem is I got a lot of brains but no polish
I gotta holler just to be heard
With every word, I drop knowledge
I'm a diamond in the rough, a shiny piece of coal
Tryna reach my goal my power of speech, unimpeachable
Only nineteen but my mind is older
These New York City streets get colder, I shoulder
Every burden, every disadvantage
I have learned to manage, I don't have a gun to brandish
I walk these streets famished
The plan is to fan this spark into a flame
But damn, it's getting dark, so let me spell out my name
I am the A-L-E-X-A-N-D-E-R we are meant to be
A colony that runs independently
Meanwhile, Britain keeps shittin' on us endlessly
Essentially, they tax us relentlessly
Then King George turns around, runs a spendin' spree
He ain't ever gonna set his descendants free
So there will be a revolution in this century
Enter me, he says in parentheses
Don't be shocked when your history book mentions me
I will lay down my life if it sets us free
Eventually, you'll see my ascendancy
And I am not throwin' away my shot
I am not throwin' away my shot
Hey yo, I'm just like my country
I'm young, scrappy and hungry
And I'm not throwin' away my shot
I am not throwin' away my shot
I am not throwin' away my shot
Hey yo, I'm just like my country
I'm young, scrappy and hungry
And I'm not throwin' away my shot
It's time to take a shot
I dream of life without a monarchy
The unrest in France will lead to anarchy?
Anarchy how you say, how you, oh, anarchy?
When I fight, I make the other side panicky
With my, shot
Yo, I'm a tailor's apprentice
And I got y'all knuckleheads in loco parentis (loco parentis)
I'm joining the rebellion 'cause I know it's my chance
To socially advance, instead of sewin' some pants (woo)
I'm gonna take a shot
And but we'll never be truly free
Until those in bondage have the same rights as you and me
You and I
Do or die
Wait 'til I sally in on a stallion
With the first black battalion
Have another shot
Geniuses, lower your voices
You keep out of trouble and you double your choices
I'm with you, but the situation is fraught
You've got to be carefully taught
If you talk, you're gonna get shot
Burr, check what we got
Mister Lafayette, hard rock like Lancelot
I think your pants look hot
Laurens, I like you a lot
Let's hatch a plot blacker than the kettle callin' the pot
What are the odds the gods would put us all in one spot
Poppin' a squat on conventional wisdom, like it or not
A bunch of revolutionary manumission abolitionists?
Give me a position, show me where the ammunition is
Oh, am I talkin' too loud?
Sometimes I get over excited, shoot off at the mouth
I never had a group of friends before
I promise that I'll make y'all proud
Let's get this guy in front of a crowd
I am not throwin' away my shot
I am not throwin' away my shot
Hey yo, I'm just like my country
I'm young, scrappy and hungry
And I'm not throwin' away my shot
I am not throwin' away my shot
I am not throwin' away my shot
Hey yo, I'm just like my country
I'm young, scrappy and hungry
And I'm not throwin' away my shot
Everybody sing
Whoa, whoa, whoa
Ayy, whoa (woo), whoa
Should let 'em hear ya (yeah)
Let's go
Whoa, whoa, whoa
I said shout it to the rooftops
Whoa, whoa, whoa
Said, to the rooftops
Whoa, whoa, whoa
A-come on (yeah)
Come on, let's go
Rise up
When you're living on your knees, you rise up
Tell your brother that he's gotta rise up
Tell your sister that she's gotta rise up
When are these colonies gonna rise up? (Whoa, whoa)
When are these colonies gonna rise up? (Whoa)
When are these colonies gonna rise up? (Whoa)
When are these colonies gonna rise up?
Rise up
I imagine death so much it feels more like a memory
When's it gonna get me?
In my sleep, seven feet ahead of me?
If I see it comin', do I run or do I let it be?
Is it like a beat without a melody?
See, I never thought I'd live past twenty
Where I come from some get half as many
Ask anybody why we livin' fast and we laugh, reach for a flask
We have to make this moment last, that's plenty
Scratch that this is not a moment, it's the movement
Where all the hungriest brothers with something to prove went?
Foes oppose us, we take an honest stand
We roll like Moses, claimin' our promised land
And? If we win our independence?
Is that a guarantee of freedom for our descendants?
Or will the blood we shed begin an endless cycle of vengeance and death with no defendants?
I know the action in the street is excitin'
But Jesus, between all the bleedin' 'n' fightin'
I've been readin' 'n' writin'
We need to handle our financial situation
Are we a nation of states what's the state of our nation?
I'm past patiently waitin' I'm passionately mashin' every expectation
Every action's an act of creation
I'm laughin' in the face of casualties and sorrow
For the first time, I'm thinkin' past tomorrow
And I am not throwin' away my shot
I am not throwin' away my shot
Hey yo, I'm just like my country
I'm young, scrappy and hungry
And I'm not throwin' away my shot
We're gonna rise up (time to take a shot)
I am not throwin' away my shot
We're gonna rise up (time to take a shot)
I am not throwin' away my shot
We're gonna, rise up, rise up
It's time to take a shot
Rise up, rise up
It's time to take a shot
Rise up, it's time to take a shot
Rise up, take a shot, shot, shot
It's time to take a shot, time to take a shot
And I am not throwin' away my
Not throwin' away my shot
Theodosia writes me a letter every day
I'm keeping the bed warm while her husband is away
He's on the British side in Georgia
He's trying to keep the colonies inline
But he can keep all of Georgia
Theodosia, she's mine
Love doesn't discriminate
Between the sinners and the saints
It takes and it takes and it takes
And we keep loving anyway
We laugh and we cry and we break
And we make our mistakes
And if there's a reason I'm by her side
When so many have tried
Then I'm willing to wait for it
I'm willing to wait for it
My grandfather was a fire and brimstone preacher
(Preacher, Preacher, Preacher)
But there are things that the
Homilies and hymns won't teach ya
(Teach ya, Teach ya, Teach ya)
My mother was a genius (Genius)
My father commanded respect (Respect, Respect)
When they died they left no instructions
Just a legacy to protect
Death doesn't discriminate
Between the sinners and the saints
It takes and it takes and it takes
And we keep living anyway
We rise and we fall and we break
And we make our mistakes
And if there's a reason I'm still alive
When everyone who loves me has died
I'm willing to wait for it (Wait for it)
I'm willing to wait for it
I am the one thing in life I can control
(Wait for it, wait for it, wait for it, wait for it)
I am inimitable
I am an original
I'm not falling behind or running late
(Wait for it, wait for it, wait for it, wait for it)
I'm not standing still
I am lying in wait (Wait, wait, wait)
Hamilton faces an endless uphill climb
(Climb, climb, climb)
He has something to prove
He has nothing to lose
(Lose, lose, lose, lose)
Hamilton's pace is relentless
He wastes no time
(Time, time, time)
What is it like in his shoes?
Hamilton doesn't hesitate
He exhibits no restraint
He takes and he takes and he takes
And he keeps winning anyway
He changes the game
He plays and he raises the stakes
And if there's a reason
He seems to thrive when so few survive, then Goddamnit
I'm willing to wait for it (Wait for it)
I'm willing to wait for it
Life doesn't discriminate
Between the sinners and the saints
It takes and it takes and it takes
(And we keep living anyway)
We rise (and we fall)
We fall (and we break)
(And we make our mistakes)
And if there's a reason I'm still alive
When so many have died
Then I'm willin' to-
Wait for it (Wait for it, wait for it)
Wait for it (Wait for it, wait for it
(Wait for it, wait for it, wait for it, wait for it, wait for it)
(Wait)
Swift paw... do not throw away your shot
*HOW DARE YOU*
Brightheart: We are out clawed out manned!
Lol
@@the-silliest-goose OUTNUMBERED OUTPLANNED
a song about ashfur brambleclaw and squirrelflight
YES
Aj the Evil Marshmallow OMG yass please do this Blixemi
Yassssss x)
yes LISTEN TO UR FANS!
For Ashford she just felt left out
"Swiftpaw I know it's hard to wait"
"Jaypaw I know it's hard to wait"
o_o
Oh shi-
Using "Pack, pack, kill, kill" as background vocals is genius and gives me chills every time-
MY GOD. THIS SONG IS BEAUTIFUL. You really did well to capture Swiftpaws determination to become a warrior and Brightpaws concern, but now wanting him to go alone. And the "Pack Pack Kill Kill" that was supposed to illustrate the moment when they fought the dogs was glorious
This song is just beautiful especially when Swiftpaw talks about Cloudtail!
2:00
Me: *Eating cereal*
Song: *Quietly says* Pack, pack, kill, kill
Me: HOLY- *Falls off chair*
7 years late, you never gave us an update, so you must have died
i just tuned into the chanting in the background... well done, this song is really good like all your content!!!
This is what started it all for me. The moment Swiftpaw started singing, I knew that this was going to be great. I started memorizing the lyrics and now Im rehearsing this song as if it were going to be a musical in the future. Thank you Blixemi. Thank you so much.
I like how the percussion is louder in Swiftpaw's verses.
Ahh, you're so talented Blix! I always look forward to your songs :D
Swiftpaw: I know just how to do it!
*Swiftpaw dies*
Brightpaw: So that's how you do it?
"Swiftpaw, I know it's hard to wait..."
_Sounds familiar._
I DON'T KNOW WHY I TRY
IT'S NOT LIKE THEY WOULD EVER CUT ME ANY SLACK
“YOUR FAR TOO SMALL YOU SEE”
“WELL ACTUALLY I DON’T“
“I JUST LONG TOO BE FREE”
Am I no longer in the fandom? Yeah. Is this still so frickin good? Hell yeah
you put such hard work and emotion into your songs that I could see the parts of the story like a movie as it was sang. It showed such emotion that I could easily detect the mood and emotions of the cats. I almost cried. Good job!
you make such good songs, keep up the good work and you could be a famous singer or voice actor
what if Blixemi became a character in Steven Universe and sang a song
Pop Doggo Thats a GREAT idea!! But she may not like Steven Universe but if there was a chance she would then..
We would HAVE to send this to Rebecca!
itsellitime
yeah but she would be perfect to be in a Steven Universe episode!
lets send this to Rebecca
holy crap yEs
I'm 1,000% sure I'd poop my pants with excitement.
Blixemi
nice to know
i really want to send you songs to Rebecca Sugar
Bluestar: Swiftpaw and Brightpaw can't be a warrior!
Swiftpaw and Brightpaw: Sings Prove It
Bluestar: StarClan honors your singing skills, and we welcome you as a full performer of ThunderClan
Your performer names will be Swiftsong and Brightvoice.
Oh my Starclan those names actually sound good
i want this in the books
i want THIS in the books
LOL that is the best fanfiction
Great StarClan the names actually are sooooooo good!
Me expecting a dog jumpscare at the end lol
But this brings back ALL the memories :D its amazing
I keep imaging that swift paw is one of my OCS:honey paw/pelt and bright paw/bright heart is one of my other OCS:acorn paw/fur.but don't worry about it I won't make a map cuz I can't post vids only playlists plus I can't animate either.the reason is cus honey paw/pelt had kinda the same story as swift paw,she hated her clan and hated being a apprentice so she ran away to a different clan and met blood star who named her honey pelt.she fell in love with him and she had kits but in a battle she met up with her old mentor:lion spirit.she killed him then faced her bro:acorn fur she tried to kill him but he ran across thunder path but when she did she was hit by a monster she of course killed cats to prove herself while acorn fur tried to stop her.she went to the dark forest surprise surprise.
Amelia Briscoe
Is it okay that Swiftpaw sounds like one of my undertale OC's? XD
Woah! That sounds interesting :OOO
You should write a fanfiction if you didn't already :D I would definitely read it
This song is amazing, it's a great choice between the two characters. I'm guessing that Brightpaw joined in because she felt she had to go with him? Also, did anyone else notice the "pack pack kill kill" reference in the middle 😁 like if you did!
Midnight Nightcore I did but I heard that Brightpaw loved Swiftpaw so she went with him
I only realized it after I saw a comment about that😂
@@alex-zd2kw Fun fact: They're cousins
Everybody says you can hear pack pack kill kill but where do you find it?
Hannah Huang When Brightpaw and Swiftpaw are singing together towards the end
Hannah Huang ok I hear it now and it's freaking me out...
Hannah Huang AHHHHHHHHHHHH I wish I didn't hear it now it's scaring me
OOOh BOY I HEAR IT
Hannah Huang around 1:44 listen closely its in th backround
OMG THEY'RE SAYING PACK PACK KILL KILL! I'M GOING TO DIE!
What?? When? I didn't hear anything :T
+LegendaryLuck around 2:00
Ciath Ryn ohh I hear it now xP
i heard it start around 1:44
I was reading this and that part was playing and I started to hear it!!! How didn't I hear that before?!?!?!?!!?!?!
I'm doing this as a duet with my friend for the school talent show :) (I will give u credit)
:O GET SOMEONE TO RECORD IT AND I WANT TO SEE THE VIDEO
Navy Fox you'll need like 5 people saying pack pack kill kill it the background
@Rippleskip lol
"I'm gonna make my moment momentous!" Wow that hit hard, didn't expect to almost cry at that line
Oh. I think I am going to cry. DON'T GO SWIFTPAW!!!! YOU HAVE TO MUCH TO LIVE FOR!!! IT'S BLUESTAR'S FAULT, NOT YOURS!!!!
Programs:
Art- Mspaint
Video Editing- Sony Vegas
Audio- Audacity
Art: Mspaint
Mspaint.
This is a joke- right?
Nope! you can see the pixels lol
Can we please have a Thunder vs Clear Sky rap battle?
Grabbles 9000 OMG YES. But no matter what I still hate clear sky. NOTHING will change that. Wait no. Cake will change that. CLEAR SKY GET ME CAKE.
YES. PLEASE.
XD
YES!!!
-it should be about how Clear Sky stole his girlfriend-
Did Blixemi do the voices for both Swiftpaw and Brightheart? If so, she did a really great job with voicing both of them, and as always, the lyrics were really good too! The scenes and characters that she chooses to narrate through these songs are always so well picked!
(...though, I'm still waiting on a song for Jay Bae, once she acknowledges that he's objectively the bomb dot com and the best character of all time, as LZRD WZRD has pointed out 😉)
Ahh!!! I literally cannot thank you enough!! That means the world to me!! I did infact do both voices, and tried to make them a little distinguishable from each other, so thank you so much for saying that!!
And eeek!!! I have so much fun, and there's so many unique situations in the books, that there's so many great scenes to explore in these songs!
*And trust me you don't want a song about Jayfarter from me, it'd be a hot mess of smack talkin' Jay ;)
Blixemi вероника?
Blixemi вероника?
Couldn't of said it better myself.
When I realised they were saying “Pack,pack,kill,kill” It improved everything. ThankYou 💜
Listening to this once more as I should and I’m getting chills. Love it
From favorite to least favorite Blixemi warrior cats song
1. One not Two
2. Prove It
3. Fading
4. Stride by Stride
As amazing as this one was, Feathertail beats all
Tbh to me, Fading was the best
Ahh! Thank you so much!! I'm so glad you're liking my music!!
I like stride by stride
I love your music so much! keep doing these please and never stop youtube
Agreed! Fading was freaking amazing!
Oml how did I not notice they were saying "pack pack kill kill" in the background before
ikr, i noticed it the 5th time i watched it
So good that I actually have the lyrics for his song and sing it 24/7 😁
Same
AMAZING! I love the part where Brightpaw joins in on Swiftpaw's singing. Your amazing Blixemi. Keep up the good work and never give up!
I love how you really expressed the feelings in Swiftpaw and Brightpaw's words. To be honest, I love how they are almost telling this the Bluestar. LOVE IT *Picks up a dangerous path* TIME TO SEE WHAT THIS HAS IN STORE FOR US!
bro swift paw was so sad all he wanted was to be validated as he respected warrior
Ok, maybe I should come up with a new song about something.
Edit: ok, I’m making one called I’ve Made Up My Mind. It’s about Squirrelflight choosing Brambleclaw over Ashfur.
Why should I have to choose?
I don’t want to hurt their heart
Because the other will have a dart in their heart
He’s so kind in the past
But the past is gone alas
I’ve decided this these badgers may have been bad but helped me choose
I’ve made up my mind
I have chosen though Ash’s heart will wither to ashes
And he never refuses to leave it behind and all he does to me is lash his claws
I’ve made up my mind
I’ve chosen now, I’ve made up my mind
I’ve gone with the one meant for me, I’ve made up my mind
I feel such guilt
It’s like my heart is going to tilt
And my heart would have burned
If it had not turned
To the side it had did
I’ve made up my mind
I’ve chosen, and I’ve made up my mind
This was started and a brewing war
Started was hard to ignore
Each time we were face to face
He never lightened up and my future was a knotted lace
He never lightened up
He’s always been a bossy one
So now I’ve chosen and I’ve made up my mind
He had Brambles ‘round his heart just like his claws
Always troubled by our quarrels
His fur was the color of ashes
Like what he refuses his heart to turn back from
If I could only have forgiven them all
My temper got out of control
But now I’ve made up my mind
I’ve made up my mind
No one can deny, I’ve made up my mind
Ok, that’s what if came up with, it’s probably terrible and nobody is gonna see this but this is my idea for a song
It's good good! You should try It!
Yeah! Cool song
I just found something-- When playing around in Soundtrap, I found the background piano music!!
I'm laughing way too hard for something like this!
Oh my gosh- the prologue of A Dangerous Path absolutely horrified me-
When I heard "pack pack kill kill" being sung in the background I was chilled right down to the bone *shudder*
Beautiful as always!
All Swiftpaw had to say was "Bluestar I'm an atheist." Bam warrior
Lmao true
Well, what are you waiting for?? Go make that map!!!!
She doesn't want people creating MAPs out of her songs..
Smelly Fish .
She wants BLIXEMI to make the map.
Well, Lilly, I don't think so.
I think Candi wants the person who read his/her comment to make a MAP. Blixemi doesn't want anyone to make MAPs out of her songs. Conversation over.
+Smelly Fish ^^^
95% of these comments are about the ``pack pack kill kill``
WHOA. Truly amazing vocals on this, I love the song! Great work!
I absolutely LOVE the parodies, I started reading the Warriors series and fell in love with it.
"I won't let you go alone"
Bright'Paw really should've stayed back, lol
a rare image of BrightHeart without an injury.
“More than twice as cloud”
I believe by This lyric it is referring to cloud paw/tail because they were apprentices at the same time but cloudtail was made a warrior first by Bluestar because he didn’t believe in starclan and she believed that starclan had abandoned them and all the cats were traitors but besides cloudtail because he was the only one who didn’t believe in starclan
Yeah..
That’s just the meaning of the lyric
Not really cryptic
I love this song sooo much! You did amazing! But I really really like how around 1:35 when swiftpaw is singing and brightpaw/heart is saying like just a few words with him, that there is kind of a pattern but based on it she should have sang “more than twice as cloud” but she didn’t. I just really like it because it kind of makes sense with her ending up with cloud. Anyway this was just soo soo soo amazing, I love it so much!!
I never watched the video and only had listened to it once but when i listened to it again hearing the 'pack pack, kill kill' sent shivers down my spine
When I heard “pack pack kill kill” I was like- “IT’S BEEN SAYING THAT ALL THIS TIME AND I JUST NOTICED IT?! I’VE BEEN LISTENING TO THIS SONG FOR YEARS
You got your choice that was the last day you had the name as "paw" am I right 😄 I'm sorry I just kinda laugh at the choices swiftpaw made but I love the parts when they sing to gather
"Pack, Pack, Kill, Kill"
*Visible Trauma*
BRIGHTPAW'S VOICE IS SO BEAUTIFUL
Holy crap. The moment where there's the "pack pack, kill kill" chanting in the background gave me chills.