Every time I see a video that’s an hour long from your channel I get so excited. The stories are always so good, and your voice is really nice to listen to. It’s the perfect combination when I want to hear a story.
The hour long stories are perfect for insomnia. He picks stories that are interesting enough to get you hooked and then his hypnotic voice lulls you to sleep. My dreams have been influenced by the stories he narrates many times.
Once again you have perfect timing Dr. Creepen! I was just looking for something to listen to while I take a break from housework and wait for my muscles spasms to subside when I got the notification, your narrataions always help me relax❤
I had to stop by,i live in Vicksburg Mississippi the mighty Mississippi river runs straight through it,,, it is known for the Battle of Vicksburg and probably lots of ghosts😊
27:13 ok, I’m predicting that this woman is the one who caused all of this craziness in V-Town. Or Vicksburg if you want to be formal about it. Just a prediction…let’s see what happens!! 54:57 Bah da da! Apparently I was right. Not that I actually had to guess, it was simply too obvious. And the poor guy didn’t even get to hit it. Tsk Tsk Tsk. Jackass.
Yeah but thinking about those spiders inside her probably made him feel better right before he had to carry his kids (I don't know where they'd be stored on a dude.) The girls name was basically narcissist so it was pretty easy to predict. Plus she was the only human there. An entire town that couldn't go out in the sun has disgusting implications if they were human because it would mean excessive inbreeding.
Ah, a story with a little bit of everything from big boobs to stinky people. The ending gave me the creepy crawlies yikes-a- daisies. Thanks for the story! Well done!
And after the woman ate a roach like string cheese then the beautiful woman came to talk to me. BUT SHE COULDN'T CAUSE I WAS ALREADY HALFWAY TO THE COUNTY LINE!!!!
Lol such a plot twist, getting betrayed by the single 10/10 woman with the big bobbers in a trash heap town full of heathens. Never saw that coming....
Thank you Dr Creepen for another awesome pasta. Excellent story and narration as is typical for you. I've been saving your pastas so that I could binge them later. Thank you for making my day. 🖤🖤🖤🖤
There is a part of the story that make the guy look stupid, the woman is the only one that is not pale and she tell you the myth of the town more than once and still you follow her willingly in a cave.
Then,have you ever seen anything? I am originally from Oak Grove,La. ; but my husband and I lived and raised our five kids in West Monroe,La. which is around 75 miles from Vicksburg,Miss. He always enjoyed stopping at the Visitor Center off of I-20. It was a place he could get a free cup of coffee and let our kids run around a bit before heading on out to either the beach in Florida or the mountains in North Carolina. He has passed on now and I don’t go to that part of Mississippi anymore as I now live in South Louisiana. Anyway,to make a long story short,I always felt spooky vibes around that place. Being part Choctaw,my grandmother was a full Choctaw from up around McGee ; like her,occasionally ; I get weird vibes. One late evening,on the way home to Louisiana,we stopped there so we could have a BR break. I glanced up at the cannon up on the hill and I could have sworn I saw soldiers. In full dress. So,I ask…have you ever seen anything?
In 2002 I bought a sword. A Civil War sword in an antique store near view of the river or rivers. Plucked down $850.00 for a model 1860 Union Light Calvary Sabre. The owners seemed please, smiling at the Yankee paying full price 😢.
As interesting as this was, it was highly predictable and neared total cliche status. I enjoyed the description of Narcissas looks, and that was about all. It was so gleamingly obvious who and what she was that I could’ve stopped listening right as soon as she spoke. But I enjoy Dr Creepens narration and was a bit curious as to what would happen to the protagonist. So that kept me hanging on. Thanks Doc for your work brining us all this story, I’ve made my personal opinion clear and yet I greatly appreciate your dedication to making these for us. As always your work was flawless and kept this one afloat. Any other narrator would have probably sank this ship! So I’m looking forward to your next notification so I can delve deeper into Creepenland! 👏👏👏👏👏👏
I haven't even got to her in this story yet and I can tell what she is just by reading that name that's such a tacky lampshade it has to belong to one of those sexy leg lamps from back in the day. hoo boy, wish I had time to write content better than this is gonna be, but I'm too busy doing manual labor to survive. such is the works
I love spiders in real life. I'm honestly more afraid of bees and especially wasps. I'm definitely allergic to wasps, but I've never been stung by a bee. I'm honestly much more comfortable holding a black widow spider in my hand than having a wasp come near me. I know the wasp has a much higher chance of killing me dead.
Someone else in the comments mentioned this story feeling like Fear And Hunger 2: Termina, and yeah. Absolutely. I feel like this is from Karin’s POV when she first gets off the train in Prehevil. Curious and stupid in a dangerous occult town full of people alive-yet-scorched by the moon god Rher, stuck in a cyclical death game.
Roaches everywhere, people behave weird and strange ooze drips from their mouths. Yeah, totally a place to stay longer than five seconds, business or not.
CAN SOMEONE PLEASE WRITE IN 3RD PERSON OMNISCIENT! PLEASE! Give me something other than all the damn first person. I need Stephen King essence. Why does every creepy pasta, reddit, and amatuer writer do first person. It immediately brings the writing down a point, or 30, for me. These stories are all getting so predictable. 😢
Don't listen to them Steve k. Go pump some out of that big brain you got and just give it to about 5 of the creepypasta people who narriate them for us why does everyone want to judge these guys so horrible I am here because I just love listening to amateur stories from the same people you don't have a pot to piss in in this race I just sunk your battle ship oops I did it again oh my sorry Brittany me too!!!!
Well done dear Doctor!!! 👏👏👏 My only critique to all these creative, incredibly conceptive stories would be; Please dear writers- so many adjectives, if you could find it in your creative centers to avoid the use of “inky?” ⬆️ this? Past the opening use! 👏🙌great varied writing! Plz don’t open with, or continued use…. The stories are always great Doc’ ty’nn
That was the worst story i have ever heard you narrate,,your voice sounds like its Ai at beginning..but the story is grimm boring and Terrible,,this is not worthy of you,and ive followed you for a couple years,i had a job to do Windows ,i looked for a hourish long story eg duration of job becuase its ladder work so didnt want to have switch channels,,i kept thinking it will get better soon,but it didnt it got worse.,sorry Doc,,just my oppinion,,hello from England ll the same 😎
I love the stories you read and write. What keeps me coming back is that VOICE! ❤
WOW! I know creepypastas are predicated on the protagonist not being the sharpest spoon in the drawer but this one was blue ribbon winning STUPID!
“Sharpest spoon in the drawer”
@noahokayama3825 yeah like from the Smashmouth song Allstar, "I ain't the sharpest spoon in the drawer"
@@pandalover900🤣👍🏽
@@pandalover900 idk that reference, but I’m glad it actually exists 😂😂😂
@@pandalover900 that was "the sharpest tool in the shed", actually.
Every time I see a video that’s an hour long from your channel I get so excited. The stories are always so good, and your voice is really nice to listen to. It’s the perfect combination when I want to hear a story.
The hour long stories are perfect for insomnia. He picks stories that are interesting enough to get you hooked and then his hypnotic voice lulls you to sleep. My dreams have been influenced by the stories he narrates many times.
@@lisawhereisthecultjam You never lied. Lol😂 I've been up all night listening last night. Here I am at work tired and still listening😂😂😂
altogether a wholesome Lovecraftian excursion. as always, excellent narration Doc
Not often Vicksburg gets mentioned anywhere other than civil war documentaries!
Every time a new story drops, I hang on every word
Once again you have perfect timing Dr. Creepen! I was just looking for something to listen to while I take a break from housework and wait for my muscles spasms to subside when I got the notification, your narrataions always help me relax❤
This is awesome. Innsmouth vibes.
I had to stop by,i live in Vicksburg Mississippi the mighty Mississippi river runs straight through it,,, it is known for the Battle of Vicksburg and probably lots of ghosts😊
27:13 ok, I’m predicting that this woman is the one who caused all of this craziness in V-Town. Or Vicksburg if you want to be formal about it. Just a prediction…let’s see what happens!!
54:57 Bah da da! Apparently I was right. Not that I actually had to guess, it was simply too obvious. And the poor guy didn’t even get to hit it. Tsk Tsk Tsk. Jackass.
Yeah but thinking about those spiders inside her probably made him feel better right before he had to carry his kids (I don't know where they'd be stored on a dude.)
The girls name was basically narcissist so it was pretty easy to predict. Plus she was the only human there. An entire town that couldn't go out in the sun has disgusting implications if they were human because it would mean excessive inbreeding.
Thanks for another great story Doc. Hope you are well!
Ah, a story with a little bit of everything from big boobs to stinky people. The ending gave me the creepy crawlies yikes-a- daisies. Thanks for the story! Well done!
And after the woman ate a roach like string cheese then the beautiful woman came to talk to me. BUT SHE COULDN'T CAUSE I WAS ALREADY HALFWAY TO THE COUNTY LINE!!!!
Had a stayover in Vicksburg once. Nice place.
Woop. Not sitting back. But I’m working. So I’m up and going with my water. But let’s go either way.
Aaaaaahhh. Perfect timing Dr. C. We appreciate you!
this is the type of guy to walk around the bad parts of Detroit with 24 karate gold and diamond jewelry
Lol such a plot twist, getting betrayed by the single 10/10 woman with the big bobbers in a trash heap town full of heathens. Never saw that coming....
🍹🐒 So ready!
thank you, Doctor.
Nice to be here.
The good doctor never disappoints! Thank you again, Good Sir!
Predictable ending aside, why would you trust anyone named Narcissa? :D
I read that title to the tune of Rumor in Saint Petersburg from Anastasia and kept me from actually listening for a minute.
Oh jeez. Now I hear it in my head and it’s- AHHH 😂😭
Thank you Dr Creepen for another awesome pasta. Excellent story and narration as is typical for you. I've been saving your pastas so that I could binge them later. Thank you for making my day. 🖤🖤🖤🖤
There is a part of the story that make the guy look stupid, the woman is the only one that is not pale and she tell you the myth of the town more than once and still you follow her willingly in a cave.
He was convinced at first that it was just stories.
Nice! An hour. Love it.
Perfect story for the perfect late hours
I was born in Vicksburg Mississippi 69 years ago ✌️
Then,have you ever seen anything? I am originally from Oak Grove,La. ; but my husband and I lived and raised our five kids in West Monroe,La. which is around 75 miles from Vicksburg,Miss. He always enjoyed stopping at the Visitor Center off of I-20. It was a place he could get a free cup of coffee and let our kids run around a bit before heading on out to either the beach in Florida or the mountains in North Carolina. He has passed on now and I don’t go to that part of Mississippi anymore as I now live in South Louisiana. Anyway,to make a long story short,I always felt spooky vibes around that place. Being part Choctaw,my grandmother was a full Choctaw from up around McGee ; like her,occasionally ; I get weird vibes. One late evening,on the way home to Louisiana,we stopped there so we could have a BR break. I glanced up at the cannon up on the hill and I could have sworn I saw soldiers. In full dress. So,I ask…have you ever seen anything?
Ah yeah,the good Doctor back with another great story! Thanks again Doc,your smooth voice and awesome narration is a prescription for my insomnia!
Your voice is mesmerizing 😊
Brava! Way to go Doc!
>Something strange in Vicksburg
>Tells us about the most average experience in Vicksburg
In 2002 I bought a sword. A Civil War sword in an antique store near view of the river or rivers. Plucked down $850.00 for a model 1860 Union Light Calvary Sabre. The owners seemed please, smiling at the Yankee paying full price 😢.
I can't wait to hear ❤ this story 😍
As interesting as this was, it was highly predictable and neared total cliche status. I enjoyed the description of Narcissas looks, and that was about all. It was so gleamingly obvious who and what she was that I could’ve stopped listening right as soon as she spoke. But I enjoy Dr Creepens narration and was a bit curious as to what would happen to the protagonist. So that kept me hanging on. Thanks Doc for your work brining us all this story, I’ve made my personal opinion clear and yet I greatly appreciate your dedication to making these for us. As always your work was flawless and kept this one afloat. Any other narrator would have probably sank this ship! So I’m looking forward to your next notification so I can delve deeper into Creepenland! 👏👏👏👏👏👏
I agree with predictable. ❤
@@audreygullas8728 thanks Audrey:)
I haven't even got to her in this story yet and I can tell what she is just by reading that name that's such a tacky lampshade it has to belong to one of those sexy leg lamps from back in the day. hoo boy, wish I had time to write content better than this is gonna be, but I'm too busy doing manual labor to survive. such is the works
His voice makes it worth it. No matter how predictable the story is 😊 I am glad that someone noticed that as well.
Thank you kind Doctor. ❤
Thank You, Doctor 💜
Talk about don't ignore the red flags when you see them!
Thanks Doc!🤗💜🕷
Listening for second time enjoyed it so much had to listen to second time😊😊😊😊
"FOR WE WRESTLE NOT AGAINST FLESH AND BLOOD BUT AGAINST"... 🙏👊🙏
I love spiders in real life. I'm honestly more afraid of bees and especially wasps. I'm definitely allergic to wasps, but I've never been stung by a bee. I'm honestly much more comfortable holding a black widow spider in my hand than having a wasp come near me. I know the wasp has a much higher chance of killing me dead.
Someone else in the comments mentioned this story feeling like Fear And Hunger 2: Termina, and yeah. Absolutely. I feel like this is from Karin’s POV when she first gets off the train in Prehevil. Curious and stupid in a dangerous occult town full of people alive-yet-scorched by the moon god Rher, stuck in a cyclical death game.
Thanks 😊
Does it count as a twist if your only question is, "why is the author delaying it?"
Yeah because that’s simply how you feel, and others don’t feel the same sometimes.
@@FernBlackwood1995 I wouldn't ask, but it said "award winning" and that bothers me
Listen yall its hard to think when youre so perpetually TORQUED that none of your blood is in your brain like this guy
the best in the business
Roaches everywhere, people behave weird and strange ooze drips from their mouths. Yeah, totally a place to stay longer than five seconds, business or not.
Cheers 😊
Our hero might be better off with listening to his big brain.
Honestly kinda reminds me of fear and hunger termina
Oh jeez. That’s literally my favourite game. Now I HAVE to listen to this whole thing.
Earliest, we've been so far, lol. Another restful sleep thanks to our beloved friend, the wonderful Dr ❤️
I live in Vicksburg ms
I'm in Olive Branch
Thought we had a civil war creepy pasta, but a story from the good doctor nonetheless, here good sir join by the fire we with some best brandy
I saw vicksburg and that's the first thought I had too
The author chose the name because it sounded cool rather than it being named after the real place.
This was a good one
Hell yeah just in time
Is there a part 2
Stevie Wonders could have seen the chick was the witch from the legend 😒🤦🤷
Good evening doctor 🍷
We love you my dear.
When you narrat a story
🖤🖤🖤
Dr creepen 😱😱
Couple things i didnt like about this story but thats not unusual for stories but overall this is a great story. I really liked the ending
What award did this win? Most garbage in class?
This was an excellent classic story tonight. Great narration. Thank you ❤️ 🤗 🌟
Are used to live in Vicksburg description of the town are inaccurate
Ahh yes, Hotel Vicksburg. Pretty ....'pretty' boy(s).
CAN SOMEONE PLEASE WRITE IN 3RD PERSON OMNISCIENT! PLEASE! Give me something other than all the damn first person. I need Stephen King essence. Why does every creepy pasta, reddit, and amatuer writer do first person. It immediately brings the writing down a point, or 30, for me. These stories are all getting so predictable. 😢
Don't listen to them Steve k. Go pump some out of that big brain you got and just give it to about 5 of the creepypasta people who narriate them for us why does everyone want to judge these guys so horrible I am here because I just love listening to amateur stories from the same people you don't have a pot to piss in in this race I just sunk your battle ship oops I did it again oh my sorry Brittany me too!!!!
Agreed. Thought of that many times myself why always 1st person? Probably because it's easier to write 😮
The ads ruined it they hit right when I’m into the story and I shut off the video and find something else to watch
Starting with that name
😎👍
✅
Bug spray
How did we get the story if the protagonist dies in the end?
technically, we don't know if the protagonist is dead or not. this is more up to interpretation.
I would happily go for eternal life and youth. I just don't want to be tied down by a god.
well the fountain of youth was a thing explorers have searched for, so there's a goal
Did an AI write this
👀
thanks doctor
Whats up doc?
Is she just telling her own story?
ITT: MC doesn't have the sense gods gave a turnip.
😂
One horse town but has car pollution one store ha
Well done dear Doctor!!! 👏👏👏
My only critique to all these creative, incredibly conceptive stories would be; Please dear writers- so many adjectives, if you could find it in your creative centers to avoid the use of “inky?” ⬆️ this? Past the opening use! 👏🙌great varied writing! Plz don’t open with, or continued use…. The stories are always great Doc’ ty’nn
Men really cant write female characters without describing their breasts, wtf
Being being from Jackson Mississippi (32 miles from Vicksburg) I had to tap in😅😅
Rule number one... never trust a beautiful woman... duh...
Great reading Dr. Creepen. 📖🪦⚰
Your voice sounds so much like Sam Neal.
That was the worst story i have ever heard you narrate,,your voice sounds like its Ai at beginning..but the story is grimm boring and Terrible,,this is not worthy of you,and ive followed you for a couple years,i had a job to do Windows ,i looked for a hourish long story eg duration of job becuase its ladder work so didnt want to have switch channels,,i kept thinking it will get better soon,but it didnt it got worse.,sorry Doc,,just my oppinion,,hello from England ll the same 😎
Chauvinist.,