The Queen B. ep.20 part 3 (Fanfiction)

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  • Опубликовано: 5 дек 2023

Комментарии • 31

  • @manilynhagus1116
    @manilynhagus1116 7 месяцев назад +2

    Thanks author very nice story,,be safe godbless..

    • @tatswriter1968
      @tatswriter1968  7 месяцев назад +1

      That so sweet of you, Thank you so much.

  • @dinamarierudas682
    @dinamarierudas682 7 месяцев назад +1

    I hope both of them will confest each other

  • @MR-nf2ru
    @MR-nf2ru 7 месяцев назад +1

    Wow! The intents chimistery between the to characters is just amazing. The story just leaves you wanting more.❤😊

    • @tatswriter1968
      @tatswriter1968  7 месяцев назад +1

      Thank you so much, that make me so happy.

  • @garfieldsiews
    @garfieldsiews 7 месяцев назад +1

    Oh how I wish the night wouldn't end. I can literally imagine how did Lisa looked at Jennie when she walk out after shower. Lisa gulped and look at how her "Adam's Apple" works it way from top to bottom. I thought Jennie could have take the opportunity to give Lisa a good night kiss. 😂 This morning coffee was nice... NO! it's great and its sweetest ever. ❤
    Thanks author for sharing 👍🏻
    JenLisa Forever ❤️ ❤️

    • @tatswriter1968
      @tatswriter1968  7 месяцев назад +2

      I'm really glad about how you guys really understand the flow of the story, which is makes me happy, I'm still working on it. and I'm happy that you guys enjoyed the story so thank you for that.

  • @dinamarierudas682
    @dinamarierudas682 7 месяцев назад +1

    🎉🎉

  • @itsmejeng3114
    @itsmejeng3114 7 месяцев назад +1

    Love it,thank u😘

  • @barbarahurtado2190
    @barbarahurtado2190 7 месяцев назад +1

    Man, I love it…. The worst part is that we have to wait for the next one, update soon. Thank you!

    • @tatswriter1968
      @tatswriter1968  7 месяцев назад +1

      I'm really glad about how you guys really understand the flow of the story, which is makes me happy, I'm still working on it. and I'm happy that you guys enjoyed the story so thank you for that.

  • @nhorvilan9874
    @nhorvilan9874 7 месяцев назад +1

    ❤❤❤... thanks author...next pls😅😘

    • @tatswriter1968
      @tatswriter1968  7 месяцев назад +1

      Thank you and I'm still working on it.

  • @eirelavikariabagat7356
    @eirelavikariabagat7356 7 месяцев назад +1

    Thanks author ❤

  • @jassromanda6674
    @jassromanda6674 7 месяцев назад +1

    Active author❤😮

  • @meherajulmallick-ot2bp
    @meherajulmallick-ot2bp 7 месяцев назад +1

    Mak .. Jennie P O V.....to

  • @user-oi9zs5mt5h
    @user-oi9zs5mt5h 7 месяцев назад +1

    Thank you 😊😊

    • @tatswriter1968
      @tatswriter1968  7 месяцев назад +1

      Thank you, too really appreciated.

  • @meherajulmallick-ot2bp
    @meherajulmallick-ot2bp 7 месяцев назад +3

    Why don't u mak Jennie s pov.. I want to know what her mind for lisa u know how lisa think ther will be great we Lisa's feeling by lisa s pov.u have to put Jennie pov so we sold know.tgen it's more good to see the story 😊😊

    • @tatswriter1968
      @tatswriter1968  7 месяцев назад +3

      Thank you for bringing in this to my attention, but sad to say, not now and I'm still working on it and thankk you so much. I really appreciated.

  • @ShabneezKNannoo786
    @ShabneezKNannoo786 7 месяцев назад +1

    Here I'm getting worried that where's rosé,as she was missing in 2 eps and rosé is kinda enjoying with her lover jisoo huh like really hickey and all 😂😂😂
    But the much exciting part was when lisa was going to wake jennie up,it's normal for jennie not to like being wake up as when you're enjoying the soft bed and suddenly being disturb,i think no one loves that,i easily get annoyed and purposely keep my eyes shut,but still nice try lisa by saying jisoo will take all her channel stuffs but jisoo love dior,i love how jennie still replied with the annoyance,certainly not liking how her sleep is disturb,i love everytime she curses,it sounds so cute 😂
    I knew it lisa minds would be stuck on the things that happened between them but jennie she didn't said much,i think she still needs time to process all things that happened with her,her heart is broken and her dreams too,so it's not easy for her to move so quickly,i guess we've to wait for her to open up with lisa or others,that's why she's too quiet since last night,also about the kiss we don't know what it means to her,it's just too much for her to handle and I'm glad that she didn't take her frustration on lisa,rather enjoying a cool bickering with her,she did enjoyed the coffee so much that she would broke Lisa's favorite cup and that too her favorite color,still lisa made another cup for her,i think jennie will be addicted to Lisa's coffee now,hopefully until now everything is going well,I'm just wondering what would be jennie's reaction when she happened to face kai,i hope she just release all her anger on him,from slapping to kicking in the ass or scratches his face with her nails 😂😂😂
    I think the next part will be very exciting,just can't wait for it...
    Thank you Author,take care...❤❤❤

    • @tatswriter1968
      @tatswriter1968  7 месяцев назад +2

      Wow, hands down. that was so sweet that you really got to know and understand the flow of the story and that makes me so glad and happy about it, sometimes it's hard to decide what to bring first and explain about the flow of it, which is sometimes I don't know what to insert and cut but the way you guys appreciated the story make me happy really, you know the feeling of tired of editing works making worth it by just hearing you guys enjoying the story, I'm really happy for that and I really appreciate it. so thank you so much.

    • @ShabneezKNannoo786
      @ShabneezKNannoo786 7 месяцев назад

      @@tatswriter1968 that's bcoz you're so good on explaining each details of the story,that little details is enough to understand the story and I'm pretty good at that,i understand the story cause i easily get the emotions,my sister told me that I can understand peoples emotions and also I'm very sensitive,i cry easily over little things,even in movies,series or stories but if it can touch my heart then i can connect to it,well this is definitely my favorite now,I'm happy that I could also make you happy same like you are doing for us,atleast my comments brings you happiness and I'm glad too that I'm the reason,I know Author that it's too hard to come with a story,then comes with what characters would fit in,what will be the roles of each of them,then the dialogues and what will be words of each ones,coming with some emotions,some funny moments,some thrilled,some actions,I don't what else,it's not easy to keep in our small minds,now after getting all the things that we need for the story,you need to work a lots,editing works also is very tiring,peoples think it's too easy to do this,that's why they put pressure to upload next part on the same day,at least they could appreciate that you're making it longer so enjoy it for 1 day,the next day they'll get another one,it's like a pills to me now,I'm happy that you give us 1 part of the story in a day,that's enough to make me happy 😊
      I will always appreciate your hardwork Author and keep writing nice things so you'll be motivated,I really enjoyed the story and I want you also to enjoy with the comments and feedback that you get from us,I'm happy that you're happy too,thanks to you too Author,God bless and take care,stay healthy and happy Author...❤️❤️❤️

  • @hwarangrjlayola9780
    @hwarangrjlayola9780 7 месяцев назад +1

    Slow down Jennie you might get drunk by drinking coffee that Lisa made, hehehe..thank you author for this hope you can follow up the next episode. I hope this is the start of something beautiful between the two of them. Author make Jennie slapped that dog again when they cross their path again, I hope Jennie slapped him.very hard ahahaha he deserve it. Author make a JENLISA moment in the next episode please.. ty ty

    • @tatswriter1968
      @tatswriter1968  7 месяцев назад +2

      I'm really glad about how you guys really understand the flow of the story, which is makes me happy, I'm still working on it. and I'm happy that you guys enjoyed the story so thank you for that.

  • @TashieJ.
    @TashieJ. 7 месяцев назад +1

    First!