YESYESYEYS I LOVE THIS. I'm gonna review it. Writing - Some parts made no sense at all, and in some situations, characters say things that aren't normally said in situations. Some parts are really good as well. Get more writers! Animation - There is too much difference between the animators, like the after credits is well animated but that scene with that green thing and Gum is very stiff. I suggest letting your animators gather more experience before assigning them a scene. Lipsyncing is also a problem in some scenes. I just find it annoying when anyone has the l-mouth in object shows for the N/D sounds. Plot - So they get kidnapped and are sent to a competition show? Not sure how this made sense lol. Actually a lot of the plot made no sense. Voice Acting - Some voice acting was great, others not so much. There were a few characters that were too quiet, and some were too loud, and the beginning, Walky Talky's voice comes out one side of the headphones but that got better. Overall - The characters are barely introduced properly, but still, first episode. You should lay them out more evenly and each one should get about the same amount of screentime for the first few episodes. Later on, you can focus on certain characters. But for now, we should get used to who is who and their personality etc. Other notes - I still love your intro, it's amazing and it's original. I even like the gray tone with it. But instead of having Lego do like, everything lol, the intro, title card, etc, try doing them yourself. It IS your show after all. Regardless of what I said, I absolutely love this! You're still very young when creating this and it's surprisingly good for your age. I'm excited to storyboard and voice act for episode 2 and onward. You have a lot of potential and I can't wait for future episodes! Good luck :)
Pros: -Some (certainly not all) original contestant ideas. -Interesting plot concept. -Alright challenge. Cons: -Line delivery seems off for most contestants. -Audio is frequently cut off. -The plot wasn't executed in the best way. (They don't report anything Battery is doing to police, even though they pointed out how they can. Walkie Talkie also seems too main character-y, if that makes sense.) -Personalities seem to stereotypical. (I'll genuinely be surprised if T.J. isn't eliminated first.) -Every part of the plot is way too fast or way too slow. Overall, 4/10. Not too bad for a first episode, though.
I love it! The assets and backgrounds are amazing. The only thing that's off for me is the lip syncing. (But's that's only because I look more into the animation then the plot) I loved the title card and intro and would love to see an object show with that same style.
It was okay. The plot so far sure goes somewhere, but a problem is that i don't know about 95% of the characters, and i really hope they get developed in the future.
This episode is really good. Here are my thoughts. Animation - The animation on the characters is a huge improvement but some of the lip-sync is weird and i hope it gets better next episode. Just please dont move the buildings backwards when the characters are moving forward. Voice Acting - I love how the voice acting is that good especially Bran OS, SD Card and Frisbee. I did a really good job on voice acting but i'll do more good voice acting in the future. My votes - I voted for SD Card to win a prize and i voted for Chef Hat for being mean. And mean characters get eliminated first. I give this episode a 10/10. Good job Daniel, I hope the next episode is good
I give this episode a 6.5/10 There were scenes you could have expanded since they seemed to be a bit too quick, your intro was good but instead of doing greyscale you could add some colour too it. Another thing is you seemed to introduce most of your characters during the challenge. Other than that your episode's story was clever as well as the challenge being unique with a cliffhanger at the end making me interested as well as some good comedic scenes. Good Job 👍
My only concerns are that the panning screen was off. Here's a tip. If someone is running to the left, the foreground and background have to go right. Vise Versa with the other. And the voices don't fit the characters. What I like tho is the title card. It actually looks like those title cards on a full length cartoon show. That is all
This episode was aight for the first episode. The animation was kinda clunky and I noticed a difference in voice acting quality and microphone quality which was quite jarring. Still better than BFDI 1. I'll give it a 5/10.
Here's my hot take on this so take it with a grain of salt, my main problem with this is the backgrounds. The couch is off perspective in the first scene, the news channel scene looks empty and the wall scratches after the intro is kind of off-putting. There's this odd buzzing sound throughout the episode too, and in need of background music. It's a rough start I suppose, but the field scenes looks pretty cool.
I’m wearing my Beats Flex, and for some reason, my left ear can hear Walkie Talkie’s voice… 1:52 OMG JACOB FAIRCLOUGH WHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY?!?!?!
Also the the team names should be: Ice cream Sandwich's: icey Allie's Tomato juice's: fresh squeezed fighters Walkie talkie's: sound squad (U can use btw)
it wasn't bad, but for me personally, most of the problems come with the voice acting. I think redoing takes, amplifying the voices, or providing subtitles would be efficient. And making more original background assets would also make the show a lot more distinguishable. the trees, grounds, and backdrop texture look like they came straight from Object Invasion. the writing is okay, I guess. there were still a few tick-tock moments where characters just say this and that. 7.5/10
Fun fact:bowl ball is empty inside and was born with no soul so he had to have a real personality. He bullies cearel box and gets bored against the other contestants. we can ignore the fact that he has a down bad heart. (What am I thinking)
@@DanielRapitis but that scene didn't really make sense since they don't want to be there and they were kidnapped (illegal) then why would they even be thinking about going to the police? but if that's explained in the next episode then i understand because i do the same with my show so ye, keep working on it!
Writing/Script:7/10 It has a good story, But the kidnapping part though. That was quick. Also Good thing I didn’t hear some bad language. Audio: Also a 7/10 There was a bit of background noise, But it’s good. It would be much better if you had the Blue Snowball Mic or the Blue Snowball iCE Mic. Animation:8/10 It was superb either you used Torsos, or Another way of Animating the Characters. Backgrounds: 8/10 They were better for the episode Thumbnail: 7/10 It was alright. Those poses of the Characters made it better. Voices: 6/10 They were good, Just needs a bit of pizzazz next episode. And by that I mean It needs a tiny bit of Improvements. They were still better though Assets: 7/10 They were good! Overall, This has been a wonderful episode. Keep the good work going!
characters seemed too laid back about them being kidnapped, most of the VA's dont do a good job, the writing is boring, and the animation is, dare i say, bad. lip syncing in some scenes are crap and the assets have waaay too dark outlines. overall i didn't like it, hope episode 2 is better
Time for my review! Whoopee! Writing: I gotta be honest, this writing was almost as bland as David from bfdi. It was kind of boring to watch. Writing: 4/10 Voice acting: Some parts were ok, but most felt misleading to the characters emotions. I suggest telling yourself or them to feel like they are in that situation. Voice acting: 5/10 Animation: Ok, so. The animation here looks like an animation you would see from a starter, though other scenes were decent. I'd say either get new animators or work on your animation skills. Animation: 4/10 Overall: 4/10 Sorry, I'm hard to impress :p
The entire setup for this show is stupid. Why are they just going along with this? They have phones, one of them literally is a phone, why aren’t they calling the police? Hell, what’s stopping them from just leaving? The only thing in their way are two guys with a van and presumably some cameramen. They could just go to the city in the background, speaking of which, why did Battery set up his illegal gameshow in a giant open field RIGHT NEXT TO A CITY. Seriously, what is the point of having this kidnapping plot if none of them care? The phone and the frisbee are the only two characters who are concerned about this, the rest are just like “Well I had things to do but fuck me, time to play in this gameshow against my will.” Why would I want to root for any of these characters? Battery is clearly amoral and biased yet Blender, his opposition, is the bad guy apparently, and the contestants are completely okay with what’s going on. Voice acting and animations are really bad as well, I just needed to explain why this awful plot makes no sense.
Oliver that’s the dumbest excuse I’ve ever heard. If you’re going to have an overarching plot in your show it need to make sense or no one is going to be invested or want to watch it. Object shows are no different.
@@teearie excuse me, but does it really matter if its just for _entertainment_ purposes? This is just for entertainment, and nothing else. They have their plot, you have yours. There's really not any difference
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Intro Music: Highland - Kasger
Thanks (•_•
Thx
HOW DID YOU KNOW THE MUSIC INTRO?!!
Thank you now I can finally litsen to it in 1 hiur
10:38 Music Credits: Sonic Mania-Angel Island Zone Act 1 (Remix)
Awesome Job Daniel, I'm proud of you man. ;)
Hi there!
YESYESYEYS I LOVE THIS. I'm gonna review it.
Writing - Some parts made no sense at all, and in some situations, characters say things that aren't normally said in situations. Some parts are really good as well. Get more writers!
Animation - There is too much difference between the animators, like the after credits is well animated but that scene with that green thing and Gum is very stiff. I suggest letting your animators gather more experience before assigning them a scene. Lipsyncing is also a problem in some scenes. I just find it annoying when anyone has the l-mouth in object shows for the N/D sounds.
Plot - So they get kidnapped and are sent to a competition show? Not sure how this made sense lol. Actually a lot of the plot made no sense.
Voice Acting - Some voice acting was great, others not so much. There were a few characters that were too quiet, and some were too loud, and the beginning, Walky Talky's voice comes out one side of the headphones but that got better.
Overall - The characters are barely introduced properly, but still, first episode. You should lay them out more evenly and each one should get about the same amount of screentime for the first few episodes. Later on, you can focus on certain characters. But for now, we should get used to who is who and their personality etc.
Other notes - I still love your intro, it's amazing and it's original. I even like the gray tone with it. But instead of having Lego do like, everything lol, the intro, title card, etc, try doing them yourself. It IS your show after all.
Regardless of what I said, I absolutely love this! You're still very young when creating this and it's surprisingly good for your age. I'm excited to storyboard and voice act for episode 2 and onward. You have a lot of potential and I can't wait for future episodes! Good luck :)
Timenzing Good review ^^
Yeah it is a bit stiff.. you're getting better and thanks Noah
;)
I didn’t know you were an og
@@Regen.inactive am
Great job! I appreciate animating for this!
Wow that's so cool :0
Pros:
-Some (certainly not all) original contestant ideas.
-Interesting plot concept.
-Alright challenge.
Cons:
-Line delivery seems off for most contestants.
-Audio is frequently cut off.
-The plot wasn't executed in the best way. (They don't report anything Battery is doing to police, even though they pointed out how they can. Walkie Talkie also seems too main character-y, if that makes sense.)
-Personalities seem to stereotypical. (I'll genuinely be surprised if T.J. isn't eliminated first.)
-Every part of the plot is way too fast or way too slow.
Overall, 4/10. Not too bad for a first episode, though.
You should check out Project: Breakout it will certainly be a improvement from this
Its been 6 years. He is not gonna come back@@DanielRapitis
@@AwesomeAliLolI mean.. I did
After so long, it's finally out, and it was great, good job Daniel
4:09 Oh yeah! SC Animator.
I love it! The assets and backgrounds are amazing. The only thing that's off for me is the lip syncing.
(But's that's only because I look more into the animation then the plot)
I loved the title card and intro and would love to see an object show with that same style.
This is a pretty good show, I hope that things will go well for it in the future.
This is amazingly animated! :) I wish it had more views...
It was okay. The plot so far sure goes somewhere, but a problem is that i don't know about 95% of the characters, and i really hope they get developed in the future.
4:59 Imagine if camera punched battery cause she opened Walkie-Talkies box but not declared team leader😂😂😂😂😂
I LOVE THE INTRO!
This episode is really good. Here are my thoughts.
Animation - The animation on the characters is a huge improvement
but some of the lip-sync is weird and i hope it gets better next episode. Just please dont move the buildings backwards when the characters are moving forward.
Voice Acting - I love how the voice acting is that good especially Bran OS, SD Card and Frisbee. I did a really good job on voice acting but i'll do more good voice acting in the future.
My votes - I voted for SD Card to win a prize and i voted for Chef Hat for being mean. And mean characters get eliminated first.
I give this episode a 10/10. Good job Daniel, I hope the next episode is good
No... this episode was legit awful.
@@JordanThe1ne we'll I mean your not wrong but I think it's ok, not the best but could have done better
Good voice EntityAnimations.
This show/First Episode is SO good.
7.9/10.
I vote for Waffle because he looks nothing like one
Your right he looked more like a badge than a waffle
Thankfully Daniel updated his design which looks much better
This is a good start! Good job
So cringe yet so damn amazing.
Great job Daniel I want to see this object show all the way to the end
0:51 is he even opening the door
No
AMAZING
Although the sorry at 1:45 is bad sorry boi
Want some candy?
Yea me to!
Choco's_ Powerpoints me too
I give this episode a 6.5/10
There were scenes you could have expanded since they seemed to be a bit too quick, your intro was good but instead of doing greyscale you could add some colour too it. Another thing is you seemed to introduce most of your characters during the challenge. Other than that your episode's story was clever as well as the challenge being unique with a cliffhanger at the end making me interested as well as some good comedic scenes. Good Job 👍
Enjoy the epis
This is a master piece... I wish I could animate :(
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i’m obsessed with this already what
My only concerns are that the panning screen was off. Here's a tip. If someone is running to the left, the foreground and background have to go right. Vise Versa with the other. And the voices don't fit the characters. What I like tho is the title card. It actually looks like those title cards on a full length cartoon show. That is all
Thx for the tip but all of this have been fixed in episode 2
I want this to keep going because I want the lore and finally in the final episode of this to show what is going on.
Vote by going to the links in the description
I can't do linkylink
Very good nice job and good animation :)
0:47 you got thicc accent
I love the work
Epic so epic I enjoy it I like this video
8:39 are they going forwards or backwards
Backwards
This episode was aight for the first episode. The animation was kinda clunky and I noticed a difference in voice acting quality and microphone quality which was quite jarring. Still better than BFDI 1. I'll give it a 5/10.
0:14 He wants something to Happen
ok this is coolio I like it 😎
Tomato juice? That sounds like the most disgusting thing ever lol
Lol the host in my object show is also a battery
Here's my hot take on this so take it with a grain of salt, my main problem with this is the backgrounds. The couch is off perspective in the first scene, the news channel scene looks empty and the wall scratches after the intro is kind of off-putting. There's this odd buzzing sound throughout the episode too, and in need of background music. It's a rough start I suppose, but the field scenes looks pretty cool.
0:52 when RUclipsrs get kidnapped
bro your outro music woke up my cat
I love the animation style and intro dont listen to what other people say
Cool you are subbed to my friends :D
Wait.... it’s all grey? 0:56
What is the name of the first song in the episode
W A T C H Y O U R L A N G U A G E B O I
this good keep on doing
I’m wearing my Beats Flex, and for some reason, my left ear can hear Walkie Talkie’s voice…
1:52 OMG JACOB FAIRCLOUGH WHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY?!?!?!
Try the whatever you did with Lego’s help on you’re own, the episode is great I bet you can do it :D
Awesome!
Also the the team names should be:
Ice cream Sandwich's: icey Allie's
Tomato juice's: fresh squeezed fighters
Walkie talkie's: sound squad
(U can use btw)
Dude this episode is 3 years old
The show has been cancelled for 11 months
And?
I did not expect this episode to be releesed
I SWEAR I HEAR CAMERAS VOICE IN SO MANY OBJECT SHOWS
I love your intro
it wasn't bad, but for me personally, most of the problems come with the voice acting. I think redoing takes, amplifying the voices, or providing subtitles would be efficient. And making more original background assets would also make the show a lot more distinguishable. the trees, grounds, and backdrop texture look like they came straight from Object Invasion.
the writing is okay, I guess. there were still a few tick-tock moments where characters just say this and that.
7.5/10
0:48 opening door frame by frame animation
You should use classic tweens instead
this video made me want a pretzel
I love this
blender sounds like shadow the hedgehog
well camera sounds like road sign from object terror
Fun fact:bowl ball is empty inside and was born with no soul so he had to have a real personality. He bullies cearel box and gets bored against the other contestants. we can ignore the fact that he has a down bad heart. (What am I thinking)
Merry Christmas to this fucking video
9:12 weren't they kidnaped? if they had access to the police then they would have escaped the show by now xD wtf
don't worry everything will be explained in the second episode
@@DanielRapitis
but that scene didn't really make sense since they don't want to be there and they were kidnapped (illegal) then why would they even be thinking about going to the police?
but if that's explained in the next episode then i understand because i do the same with my show
so ye, keep working on it!
Wonderful
Omg! NES controller got roasted by web cam in 2:36
The intro gets 10/10
You realise I’ve been trying to find this and I’ve found it!
Wait why does tomato sound like fire exit sign from animatical gadgets 1b
Nice!
Camera sounds just like WAW from Object Invasion LOLOLOLOLOL
dylanhitchcock and road Sign from OT 5
They have the same voice actor
I love this show!%93!
Ok I like it
SD Card is voiced by EntityAnimations (AstralCapri) The guy who Animates Inanimate Invasion!
Liked it
what's the link for the link? or you made it
oh you took my idea of a battery as host
Writing/Script:7/10 It has a good story, But the kidnapping part though. That was quick. Also Good thing I didn’t hear some bad language.
Audio: Also a 7/10 There was a bit of background noise, But it’s good. It would be much better if you had the Blue Snowball Mic or the Blue Snowball iCE Mic.
Animation:8/10 It was superb either you used Torsos, or Another way of Animating the Characters.
Backgrounds: 8/10 They were better for the episode
Thumbnail: 7/10 It was alright. Those poses of the Characters made it better.
Voices: 6/10 They were good, Just needs a bit of pizzazz next episode. And by that I mean It needs a tiny bit of Improvements. They were still better though
Assets: 7/10 They were good!
Overall, This has been a wonderful episode. Keep the good work going!
Lol im your 1000 sub....lol
339hahaha thx your awsome lol
Epic
Camera sounds like waw from object invasion
Was SC Animator voice a character in this episode the character voice sounds just like Him
does anyone know whats the intro
Good Show, Jolly Good Show.
dou mendez pops
what is the theme song
stop advertising your object show
characters seemed too laid back about them being kidnapped, most of the VA's dont do a good job, the writing is boring, and the animation is, dare i say, bad. lip syncing in some scenes are crap and the assets have waaay too dark outlines. overall i didn't like it, hope episode 2 is better
also the buildings went the other fucking way when they walked
It's first episode, the first few are always crap but the animation gets better over time. No need to be so pushy on it.
@@purplantic3 yes
its called contructive critism....
It’s hard to make these
You almost have 1000 subs
I mean, you GOT it
Whats the song for the intro
how about you dont
AnimatedGalaxy lol
Yeah he created browser brawl incredible items and something sports
This show is so underrated
YES
Camera :😀webcam:😏bowling ball:😒 pj:😒☠️🙂
And party hat: 😁🥳🙃🙂
Time for my review! Whoopee!
Writing: I gotta be honest, this writing was almost as bland as David from bfdi. It was kind of boring to watch.
Writing: 4/10
Voice acting: Some parts were ok, but most felt misleading to the characters emotions. I suggest telling yourself or them to feel like they are in that situation.
Voice acting: 5/10
Animation: Ok, so. The animation here looks like an animation you would see from a starter, though other scenes were decent. I'd say either get new animators or work on your animation skills.
Animation: 4/10
Overall: 4/10
Sorry, I'm hard to impress :p
Yeah same
Why does it look like they walk backwards
Too bad I don’t voice Webcam anymore.
Hey Daniel I think basketball gonna replace bowling ball I don’t ever want to see bowling ball in future espouse switch into basketball
I love Walkie Talkie,Camera and Bran 'Os
I love this show l hope that it continues also i like glowstik
Me too
The entire setup for this show is stupid.
Why are they just going along with this? They have phones, one of them literally is a phone, why aren’t they calling the police? Hell, what’s stopping them from just leaving? The only thing in their way are two guys with a van and presumably some cameramen. They could just go to the city in the background, speaking of which, why did Battery set up his illegal gameshow in a giant open field RIGHT NEXT TO A CITY.
Seriously, what is the point of having this kidnapping plot if none of them care? The phone and the frisbee are the only two characters who are concerned about this, the rest are just like “Well I had things to do but fuck me, time to play in this gameshow against my will.”
Why would I want to root for any of these characters? Battery is clearly amoral and biased yet Blender, his opposition, is the bad guy apparently, and the contestants are completely okay with what’s going on.
Voice acting and animations are really bad as well, I just needed to explain why this awful plot makes no sense.
Din0 hi counterfeit coin
Din0, this is so true. 😂
Oliver that’s the dumbest excuse I’ve ever heard. If you’re going to have an overarching plot in your show it need to make sense or no one is going to be invested or want to watch it. Object shows are no different.
Oliver Well shit guess I can’t give valid criticism to people if they’ve made an object show and I haven’t. How unfortunate.
@@teearie excuse me, but does it really matter if its just for _entertainment_ purposes? This is just for entertainment, and nothing else. They have their plot, you have yours. There's really not any difference
Animal sounds like iPhone 7 from object Saga
smokebomb in the intro is a circle but the one in the challenge is a stick
You've officially grown up my dude.
Legoboynj Ikr
Legoboynj wasssssssaaaaaaaaaaaap
lego worshippers in the replies
Spherigon Dude you know I don't "worship" him I like his content but I don't worship I like you guys the same way as Lego
@@Spherigon lmao