ill give it a 9/10. animation is a 10/10. voice acting is a 10/10. audio is a 7/10. editing is a 8/10. script writing is a 10/10. good luck on episode 3, daniel!
Ok first off major improvement this time, this episode was a lot better than last time, however there were still some parts where I got kinda bored watching, and I couldn’t help wondering why they haven’t left, there is a way to walk over to civilization they got there by a car, lmao. Visuals this episode were pretty good, I guess my only complaint is the part with bowling ball and bran o’s, the way it looked just kinda looked weird. Other than that huge step up from last episode
Probably the worst thing about the episode was the lip-sync errors, you could notice a lot of them so that has brought down the quality a whole lot, the writing was fine, but it didn’t introduce any major stuff that changes a bunch of things about the show, don’t get me wrong, low key episodes are allowed in criticism, but still. Al give it 7.4/10, not bad.
Alright, there's a lot of things to say about this. The background graphics are fine, but they look just like the Object Invasion backgrounds - I assume you have the same artist? I think you would benefit from developing your own style and doing the backgrounds yourself, or asking for different backgrounds. It's just way too similar and it'll make people compare your two shows unfairly. Secondly, the voice acting is all over the place. The host constantly has a buzzing sound behind it that can be easily removed using the Noise Removal tool on audacity, an easy fix, but it hasn't been done yet and it makes listening to him unpleasant. Some of the contestants have very, very weird inflections when they talk. They say things either too slowly, so it doesn't sound realistic, or they put weird pronunciations on different words. I get a lot of them don't have english as their first language, but they should definitely try reading the lines before they do them, because it just sounds like they're reading the lines off the script and not actually acting. Unlike most shows, the writing actually isn't unbearable. It's a little all over the place, sure, and I think it could use some more comedy to keep things interesting, or some more action-y scenes, but it's not bad. It's just hard to digest when you forget half of what the character's are saying. The challenge seemed rushed, I think? Not that it didn't last long enough, but that I felt like no one was doing it? I have a hard time both keeping track of the characters, and also figuring out who's on what team? Or remembering voices. I feel like a lot of the characters are stereotypes: jocks and valley girls, and sure, that can work sometimes, but they have to have depth to them. For example, Geoff from total drama is known as the partier, but he has depth; he's got a heart, he's emotional, he's petty. You can have stereotypes, but you have to work them into the character and morph it into something else. Purse is a valley girl who hates work and likes taking credit for things, but you've got to add more depth to her. I don't know, that's just me. I think the pacing is good. It felt like the same length the entire episode, it didn't feel like some parts were too fast or too slow. I don't quite understand the opening scene, and I think you could work on your animation. When the best scenes in the episode are done by someone else, I think you should work on getting better so the scenes look more similar, and the animators aren't easily identifiable. I also think you can work on how you set up shots, just because sometimes they all look the same and I think you can make them more interesting. Overall, it's not bad. 5.9/10. I think you can go somewhere with this.
Okay. This episode is literally 100 times better than Episode 1. I love this so much wjt Let me get to my review. Challenge Idea - It's unoriginal. Literally. Object Overload already had this idea, and I guess maybe 2 or 3 others. At least it's not the balance beam challenge which was used practically with every single object show. Then again, people lacked originality back then. But now, using this challenge idea, not that creative. Sorry. Voice Acting - You have better voice actors this time! They are clearer, and easier to understand. Although, unless it's my headphones, the scene with Bowling Ball and his confession to Bran Flakes, the audio is on one side of the headphones. Visuals - Please fix Purse's asset. My god it is actually awful. Same with Chef Hat's but he's out so who gives a fuck. The rest of the visuals actually look okay. Animation - The animation is SO MUCH BETTER than last episode which was a mess with the animation and different skills each animator had. Some scenes, I don't blame the animator, but it just looks weird, the lip syncing looks kind of bad. No offense. Great job on the visuals! Plot - The plot isn't too bad, but jumping to more depressed feelings in this this episode is still a bit too early. Wait until episode 4 or 5. Maybe even Episode 3 if you can do it correctly. Other notes - The background looks too similar to OI. The audio editing is gooood. That's about it. Overall - This is definitely an improvement over the last one. And also you're going more solo which is also just as great!! I am not going to lie here, this episode is amazing. I wish you luck on Episode 3 and can't wait to help out on it!
Cereal:so how is Bowling ball:i'm fine i guess Cereal:are you alright it's not sound like your fine Bowling ball:i said i'm fine Cereal:are you sure i've been trying to make you happy Bowling ball:look here's a thing this is why no body likes you your dumb and sappy Cereal:but i was just being friendly Bowling ball:just stop talking Smokbomb:i can't believe these two guys in our team they won't shut up I don't know:nah if we really lose i think bowling ball will be out he was kinda mean to cereal Smokbomb:this guy cereal's fualt I don't know:he was just trying to make him happy Smokbomb:i guess Cereal:look i'm sorry for being dumb can we just get the tools we're loseing Bowling ball:fine but remember this you always be useless to me
0:05-0:29 I'm not even done watching the video and I can tell that the fact he's in a restaurant is completely meaningless to the plot... An ok attempt at a segue I guess
Peace out Chef Hat! ✌️ >:) An overall decent episode. I definitely enjoyed watching it even with its flaws. The one this I do want to call out is those statues. Like, why? Why were all three of them practically the same? I don’t get if that was a joke, or laziness. If one of them looked like that (maybe the losing one) I would’ve laughed, but having them all the same with very similar judge scores is just boring.
Ay! The second episode is better then the first The voice acting is a lot better and has some emotions, the audio is better, and the characters aren’t as quiet as before I think that the show lacks on trying to get the viewers attention. The pace a little slow in some parts and others are a bit unnecessary or boring. I think that If they’re things going on in the background, funny moments, or something as simple as having a little joke in the background could really gain the viewers attention. Otherwise the episode isn’t that bad! ^w^ 7/10
Webcam:this is when i was talking about you are the one who slowed us down with your stupid vidto games Nes conroller:then stop being like your the cool guy Webcam:then what about i broke your vidto game just like this Nes conroller:tocan play it that game Webcam:oh yeah Webcam:*trows the vidto game* Nes conroller:oh so it's gonna be like that huh Nes conroller:*trows the pleat*
I will vote in the polls and hate all you want for this but im voting Walkie Talkie, or whatever he his, he clearly saw and noticed two fights go down and did nothing, sure he asked cereal if he was ok, sorry if i missgendered, but he needs to stand in as a leader and stop it, even Purse asked if they were going too hard of Chef Hat. As for likes it'll go to Camera cause im a huge fan of the voice actor and sure she didn't get much screen time but i feel like she can develop alot more.
My favourite character is Smartphone.📱📱 He is usually a complainer and funny to see him getting screwed!! Hahahahahahahahaha But please Daniel, put an infinity display on him like, today tear display on androids are soo comun.💧----->📱
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Daniel Rapitis Why did you delete the episode and reloaded it?
i vote bowling ball
starz. Did you vote on the poll
@@NoibatYayya122345554339 yes
I love how peanut butter was biased about the shattered glass team’s statue because it was the only statue made of him lol
How?
Basically shattered glass team was the only one doing peanut butter so he gave them a 10/10 I think
This was great, Keep it up Daniel. ;)
The story, writing, and animation improved from last episode without a doubt! Keep it up my friend!
Nice job. Thanks for letting me voice in this.
;)
He voiced Peanut Butter!!
Remember to also watch the episode before voting. Some people just vote even though they didn’t watch the episode…
Please heart it daniel rapitis
Although it was kind of basic, this was a very good episode!
This series has really good potential. Keep it up and hopefully people will start to watch it
this episode was great Daniel, amazing job to the crew and you dude! B)
This so great keep it up
2 years, verified youtuber, 0 likes, 0 replies, nothing.
8:40 says cereal but in the intro its bran os
TweekFromSouthParkIsNice huh
Well I mean they are cereal so...
1 like = 1 friend for Cereal. Anyways, such an improvement from the first episode!
ill give it a 9/10.
animation is a 10/10.
voice acting is a 10/10.
audio is a 7/10.
editing is a 8/10.
script writing is a 10/10.
good luck on episode 3, daniel!
In total that is a 54/100
@@npphone1588nice math lol
What an Amazing Episode! this is awesome also is better then the first one becuz the first one wakie talkie sweard
4:17 TJ: I'M NOT A CANNIBAL
Ok first off major improvement this time, this episode was a lot better than last time, however there were still some parts where I got kinda bored watching, and I couldn’t help wondering why they haven’t left, there is a way to walk over to civilization they got there by a car, lmao. Visuals this episode were pretty good, I guess my only complaint is the part with bowling ball and bran o’s, the way it looked just kinda looked weird. Other than that huge step up from last episode
Yeah lets see how bftror 6 turns out
WoahCentral hi
@Entire Algicosathlon Cast cuz it is
This episode is pretty good. I really enjoyed it.
11:27 S H I P P I N G C O N T E N T E M E R G E N C Y
14:28 music?
9:30 wow. that bounce movements are kinda made well. can you make a tutorial on how to make bounce movements that were from this scene Daniel?
3:11 just by looking at waffle i can tell who converted the scene
@@jello_. yea i do but im manly talking about lego
Shallot hare
Probably the worst thing about the episode was the lip-sync errors, you could notice a lot of them so that has brought down the quality a whole lot, the writing was fine, but it didn’t introduce any major stuff that changes a bunch of things about the show, don’t get me wrong, low key episodes are allowed in criticism, but still.
Al give it 7.4/10, not bad.
This was pretty good
**grass sounds**
**walks on asphalt**
Very interesting
You should have a job at Disney keep it up ^_^
Great job really 👍
I respect how he added sonic music most the time.
Good episode also like the old party hat asset
Awesome
5:53 Go to The Moon
This was sooo good!
What?I have a feeling that Tomato Juice is the meanest on the show but in the intro he has a happy face!
Alright, there's a lot of things to say about this.
The background graphics are fine, but they look just like the Object Invasion backgrounds - I assume you have the same artist? I think you would benefit from developing your own style and doing the backgrounds yourself, or asking for different backgrounds. It's just way too similar and it'll make people compare your two shows unfairly.
Secondly, the voice acting is all over the place. The host constantly has a buzzing sound behind it that can be easily removed using the Noise Removal tool on audacity, an easy fix, but it hasn't been done yet and it makes listening to him unpleasant. Some of the contestants have very, very weird inflections when they talk. They say things either too slowly, so it doesn't sound realistic, or they put weird pronunciations on different words. I get a lot of them don't have english as their first language, but they should definitely try reading the lines before they do them, because it just sounds like they're reading the lines off the script and not actually acting.
Unlike most shows, the writing actually isn't unbearable. It's a little all over the place, sure, and I think it could use some more comedy to keep things interesting, or some more action-y scenes, but it's not bad. It's just hard to digest when you forget half of what the character's are saying. The challenge seemed rushed, I think? Not that it didn't last long enough, but that I felt like no one was doing it? I have a hard time both keeping track of the characters, and also figuring out who's on what team? Or remembering voices. I feel like a lot of the characters are stereotypes: jocks and valley girls, and sure, that can work sometimes, but they have to have depth to them. For example, Geoff from total drama is known as the partier, but he has depth; he's got a heart, he's emotional, he's petty. You can have stereotypes, but you have to work them into the character and morph it into something else. Purse is a valley girl who hates work and likes taking credit for things, but you've got to add more depth to her. I don't know, that's just me.
I think the pacing is good. It felt like the same length the entire episode, it didn't feel like some parts were too fast or too slow. I don't quite understand the opening scene, and I think you could work on your animation. When the best scenes in the episode are done by someone else, I think you should work on getting better so the scenes look more similar, and the animators aren't easily identifiable. I also think you can work on how you set up shots, just because sometimes they all look the same and I think you can make them more interesting.
Overall, it's not bad. 5.9/10. I think you can go somewhere with this.
AHAHAHA! Ahaha ha... *sigh*
@@solaerwig What .. What does this mean
WebzForevz idk
@@WebzForevz I think it was a insult or something.
Pot:Once your in jail that’s your problem
Me:ooooooooooooooooooooooooooof
11:14 I feel bad for laughing XD
NOOOO
WHAAAAAAT!?!???!!!?!?!??
You sould be
Frizzbee: umm Tomato *Tomato Dies* Tomato: Hey Don't What Was Tomato Saying?? A, Dont Die B, Dont Be A Elimanatied C, Dont Pop
Okay. This episode is literally 100 times better than Episode 1. I love this so much wjt
Let me get to my review.
Challenge Idea - It's unoriginal. Literally. Object Overload already had this idea, and I guess maybe 2 or 3 others. At least it's not the balance beam challenge which was used practically with every single object show. Then again, people lacked originality back then. But now, using this challenge idea, not that creative. Sorry.
Voice Acting - You have better voice actors this time! They are clearer, and easier to understand. Although, unless it's my headphones, the scene with Bowling Ball and his confession to Bran Flakes, the audio is on one side of the headphones.
Visuals - Please fix Purse's asset. My god it is actually awful. Same with Chef Hat's but he's out so who gives a fuck. The rest of the visuals actually look okay.
Animation - The animation is SO MUCH BETTER than last episode which was a mess with the animation and different skills each animator had. Some scenes, I don't blame the animator, but it just looks weird, the lip syncing looks kind of bad. No offense. Great job on the visuals!
Plot - The plot isn't too bad, but jumping to more depressed feelings in this this episode is still a bit too early. Wait until episode 4 or 5. Maybe even Episode 3 if you can do it correctly.
Other notes - The background looks too similar to OI. The audio editing is gooood. That's about it.
Overall - This is definitely an improvement over the last one. And also you're going more solo which is also just as great!! I am not going to lie here, this episode is amazing. I wish you luck on Episode 3 and can't wait to help out on it!
Ok, I know it's been 2 months,but how long did it take to write this?
to write what? the review or the episode?
The review
15 - 20 minutes? i do go back to recheck to make sure im accurate with the review
The eliminated contestants will blast off to the moon.
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
No they will BLAST OFF INTO HELL
@@salt5725 heaven
Oh...poor cereal
:(
Now we know who’s getting out *cough* bowling Ball
**chough** wencam **chouch**
4-hand alien Old comment
ssbeast it was just a joke
*has corona virus* * coughs really badly* bowling ball
9:55 whispering argument
What happens if someone types in the revovery center something like “gvgvgv” and press ok
This is an improvement from the last episode
I give it a 16/30
Better than last episode
What smartphones did you based on to make "Smartphone" from ultimate insanity?
1 SAMSUNG Galaxy gran prime
2 POSITIVO TWIST 3 PRO
3 iPhone 7
Cereal:so how is
Bowling ball:i'm fine i guess
Cereal:are you alright it's not sound like your fine
Bowling ball:i said i'm fine
Cereal:are you sure i've been trying to make you happy
Bowling ball:look here's a thing this is why no body likes you your dumb and sappy
Cereal:but i was just being friendly
Bowling ball:just stop talking
Smokbomb:i can't believe these two guys in our team they won't shut up
I don't know:nah if we really lose i think bowling ball will be out he was kinda mean to cereal
Smokbomb:this guy cereal's fualt
I don't know:he was just trying to make him happy
Smokbomb:i guess
Cereal:look i'm sorry for being dumb can we just get the tools we're loseing
Bowling ball:fine but remember this you always be useless to me
Good music choices, Mario Party 6 is da bomb!!
0:05-0:29 I'm not even done watching the video and I can tell that the fact he's in a restaurant is completely meaningless to the plot...
An ok attempt at a segue I guess
Peace out Chef Hat! ✌️ >:)
An overall decent episode. I definitely enjoyed watching it even with its flaws.
The one this I do want to call out is those statues. Like, why? Why were all three of them practically the same? I don’t get if that was a joke, or laziness. If one of them looked like that (maybe the losing one) I would’ve laughed, but having them all the same with very similar judge scores is just boring.
6:11 You Actually Know That Ducktales Remastered Game???
Ay! The second episode is better then the first
The voice acting is a lot better and has some emotions, the audio is better, and the characters aren’t as quiet as before
I think that the show lacks on trying to get the viewers attention. The pace a little slow in some parts and others are a bit unnecessary or boring. I think that If they’re things going on in the background, funny moments, or something as simple as having a little joke in the background could really gain the viewers attention.
Otherwise the episode isn’t that bad! ^w^
7/10
this was really boring. better than the first episode tho
Hi plump dog
Thanks for you're feedback we're gonna try to improve the show next time
@@DanielRapitis you did great
hi plump dog
Hi
Definitely a improvement
So well go through everyones timeline
Two of the statues are doin the T-Pose lel.
1=Like Cereal Box should have a friend
5=Like Flash Drive Calls The Cops
10=Bowling Ball Should Be Gone
15=Walky Talky Kiss Camera
Uh, Camera's a boy.
Webcam:this is when i was talking about you are the one who slowed us down with your stupid vidto games
Nes conroller:then stop being like your the cool guy
Webcam:then what about i broke your vidto game just like this
Nes conroller:tocan play it that game
Webcam:oh yeah
Webcam:*trows the vidto game*
Nes conroller:oh so it's gonna be like that huh
Nes conroller:*trows the pleat*
Cool!
The new Cool Insanity
I thought it the episode was good, could’ve improved in some departments but I thought it was enjoyable. 7/10
Nani
Daniel how do I vote in the poll ?
You can't vote anymore the voting ended 3 months ago
Good job
good job m8
“have you tried PHONING the police” bruh you mean calling.
Jello-Tin Donut aaaaaa ok I get it! Thank you!
If cereal box gets eliminated you have no life
Then i guess cereal is eliminated XD
Daniel Rapitis oof
Thats hard
I will vote in the polls and hate all you want for this but im voting Walkie Talkie, or whatever he his, he clearly saw and noticed two fights go down and did nothing, sure he asked cereal if he was ok, sorry if i missgendered, but he needs to stand in as a leader and stop it, even Purse asked if they were going too hard of Chef Hat. As for likes it'll go to Camera cause im a huge fan of the voice actor and sure she didn't get much screen time but i feel like she can develop alot more.
@Oliver My mistake
@Oliver camera is a female
@Oliver then why does he sound like a female?
@@lacman5459 why is your name Lachlan
What is the song that plays at the elimination?
Nice
Why does glow-stick sounds like glasses in object invasion
1:36 what was that sound?
I got to watch it before it was deleted
12:23 - 12:59 LMAO
13:45 t-pose is my nightmare
Not anymore
Battery asserts his dominance
GLASS OF TJ!ARE TRYING TO MAKE A CANIBAL
What is chef hat upside down before?!
0:13 um You Mean Take Out
if they went to a store couldn't they have asked the clerk to call 911?
What is the name of the music you used in your intro
ilove how peanut butter reacted to the statue made of him also i vote for bball beacuse he mean
I liked walkie talkie and diskliked bowling ball
What language is Chef Hat speaking
Jello-Tin Donut ok
Cool
feels like most of this episode is animated by Lego
When ever Battery talks I hear a buzzing sound!?!?!
1 like - 1 slap for bowling ball for being mean to cereal
like: cereal (bran o's)
dislike: bowling ball
What is the song you use in the intro
is it just me or are some places missing audio?
oh. why is some of the audio only on the left speaker. my left speaker isnt working
Can you please change "Smartphone's screen to a infinity Screen? Like actual smartphones
wOW I SURE WONDER WHO'S GETTING OUT
yay
YAY
Hello
My favourite character is Smartphone.📱📱
He is usually a complainer and funny to see him getting screwed!! Hahahahahahahahaha
But please Daniel, put an infinity display on him like, today tear display on androids are soo comun.💧----->📱
who's bilingual in voicing Chef Hat ? JelloTin or YoshiTails ??
both
B O W L I N G B A L L
1:53 you can also use walkie-talkie too
Am I the only one who noticed that Chef Hat’s voice changes TWICE this episode
That's because jello forgot some of his lines.
Heart mr
Well chef hat is done I liked him
We are battery in peanut butter so Cruel
Yay! My favorite character got eliminated!
I speak French too.
Um yay... 🙁😢
Bitch please, i am the Burger Queen~