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[@asa_108]

全部サビだとサビじゃなくなる、ってのを思い出した

[@user-rs7wi9oq1k]

個人的に青髪が好きだからキャラクターの彩度維持したままのパターンも見たい！今回は作者さんが参考にしたいイラストレーターさんの色調に寄せたんだと思うけど、高彩度バッキバキに使ったまま上手くまとめられてるイラストレーターさんの絵とかもあるのでそういうのも知りたい

[@logicalyty]

いっそ彩度最大まで上げて蛍光色？原色？にしちゃえば青髪のままでも良さそうだと思った

[@raychumon]

i love using highly saturated colours in my art, so these tips are very helpful. thank you!

[@tananouekaratana]

個人的にまつげにハイライト入れてバキッと印象変わった所が好きです🙏✨

[@NaalaFaseeh]

I was reluctant when he removed the blue hair and replaced it with black. But it turns out, it looks much better this way! Thank you for the tips.

[@user-rw6qn8rt2h]

항상 재밌게 보고있어요 감사합니다! ❤

[@rosalie_rozari]

最初何の絵か全く分からなかったんだけど修正されていってから初めて体を折り曲げているという事が分かった。
やっぱりデッサンって大事なんだな。

[@googleuser3920]

好きな色いっぱい使いたくなっちゃうのすごいわかるなあ、髪と上着両方青系だからちょっと埋もれちゃってたね。
修正前の背景色がオレンジなのはメイン色が青だから反対色で目立たせたかったのかな？これもわかる、反対色でコントラストつけたくなるんだよな

[@user-zg5uu4ri8z]

この方肌の塗りがすごい綺麗でびっくりした

[@catherinegarhez8601]

Loved this correction!

[@watashiwaKIRA]

I do agree that black hair fits the illustration more 🎉

[@rayx7967]

Thank you for providing this in English! 😊

[@minsugamaxsalt]

The eyes are pretty

[@13simpkins]

前が作家性が強くて後が作家性を残しつつ商業的にしたって感じある

[@Aegisverydum]

i really like your shirt

[@user-kf1ss8et1m]

キャラクターの色変えちゃうのは違うんじゃないか....
別キャラになっちゃう

[@idonnomyname1728]

Blue hair looks better in my opinion

[@unknwn5386]

👍

[@Rigidbody.AddForce]

絵くそうまいけど、もうちょっと元のイメージを残してほしかった
個人的に元の絵はMushDashのイラストみたいな、カラフルかつぎっちぎっちで、あえてデッサンを崩して平面感を出しているような感じを目指しているように見えましたので。

[@yunnano]

前髪の影を

[@psychodarling666]

Eh? This is a repost, i remember seeing the original video years ago. I wonder what happened

[@ten1982]

the original channel got deleted

[@psychodarling666]

@@ten1982 NOOO NOWAY

[@procrastinatingme953]

​@@psychodarling666 yeah, a fan submitted an artwork for correction in his G-drive that alarmed Google's "standards". His Google account was automatically deleted. His channel was connected to this account, and that's why it was also deleted. :(

[@user-ts6rc6ih1s]

色を変えるのはピーマンと赤ピーマンくらい違うから別物になっちゃう気がします。せめて水色に近い色の方が良かった気がします。

[@user-pr6qx2fd7n]

こっちの方が良い

[@xtolrem]

別に強制してるわけじゃないんだから自分で考えて塗ればいいだけだろ

[@user-ov4qz8hl9c]

ここのコメント欄言い方が怖い（ ; ; ）ですね、色々な感じ方があるのに
私も髪の色変えるのはちょっとなと思いました