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How To Write Original Songs Easily
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**Comment Below**
How many songs have you written so far....?
I'm curious!
i wrote so many but forgot most of them
I have written about 7 songs!😊
I wrote like 3 songs
Buuuuut i think that they sound dumb 😂😂😂😂😂
I think your songs are amazing
I've written like 50 but only 3 of them are close to decent
75% of the time I come with the a good melody than realize it’s already taken.
Ian Irwin this is actually *too* relatable
I was gonna say same but turns out I’ve heard the song already so i didn’t make it up I remembered
Then*
Yasss
lol
The struggle is real when you find a melody but suck at lyrics
MusicalAsian ahh I’m opposite. I have good enough lyrics but I can’t write a melody to save my life😂😂
Welp i suck at both lmao
Sara sameee
Opposite for me
omgg same, i hate the lyrics i write
someone : I cAn tHiNk Of GoOd LyRiCs BuT nOt MeLoDyS
someone else : : I cAn tHiNk Of GoOd MeLoDyS BuT nOt LyRiCs
and there is me :
I can’t think of melodys
and also not lyrics
Wow
OH AND
I can‘t sing or play an instrument either
Why is this so relatable :’O
Felt that
Same... My mind is too unoriginal nowadays
Same/
Same :/
Her: Learn a instrument!
Me: *Gets out flute*
Her: Play chords!
Me: *Yeets flute*
samee lmao i’m planning to layer some flute over my song tho lol
So relatable
I play flute too lol
Flute gang!
SAME 😭
Her: “make up a melody and find lyrics”
Me thinking of lyrics: “tHe SoAp kEePs fALLing iN tHe bAtHtUb.”
That sounds like a hit song
hahaha
I love it
Br33 😂😂😂
Just imagine making a bit song about calling and everyone thinks it's all deep and meaningful and then in an interview you have to be like actually it's about soap
Me: has a good melody,can’t think of lyrics
Also me: has good lyrics but can’t do melody for crap
*WHY DO U HATE ME WORLD*
NARUTO SHIBE :3 I can easily think of lyrics, the hardest part for me is the melody
You two literally fit together.
King Zingo Haha
WE SHOULD WRITE A SONG!!!
@@leneice.ariana yeah
"don't crush on guys" that's genuinely good advice, though.
@@julietacardemil1376 I never crush on fictional characters honestly. occasionally it's like "they're kinda cute" but that's about it. idk I'm ace so I don't rlly get that stuff as much as most people do.
Luckily I’m a lesbian lol
@@balljointeddolly lmao same
Mj
@@balljointeddolly wow
I’m 14 and I’m hoping to start a singing career so first comes the writing :)
THAT'S AMAZING 🥲 i'm 16 and i struggle on writing songs even when i really want to
18 here feeling lika a boomer
o- i’m sure it’s gonna go great! i’m 10 and i’ve written a lot of songs
@@boredtuberlol Wow you're gonna be great
Me too ! Hopefully we can
The problem in my case
sometimes I get Ideas and melodies in the middle of class so I can't work on it instantly and then when I'm home it's gone
Svenshii same😂
Saame lol
I’ve never cared bout class. I just start humming and start writing on a sheet of paper. I wrote and finished an original song during my 2 hour class
Sameeee ahhhh
Svenshii same
Zane:try not to be repetitive
Justin Bieber: YUMMY YUMMY YUMMY YUMMY YUMMY YUMMY!!
Also BABY BABY BABY OHHH BABY BABY BABY OHHHH
MM Skate Work Work Work Work Work Work
Repetition is good, just don't go overboard
Gucci gang Gucci gang Gucci gangg😴😂
I know riiightt??? I was literally thinking of that when she said that lmfaooo
When I first started writing songs I would try to write my melodys on paper so my notebook would be looking like MmmmM oooOOOoo oo ooooOooo lol
I thought I was the only one, like I would go back and try to hum it again and it wouldn't work
@@caitlyncolantuono3180 record yourself the moment you come up with it 🧍🏻♀️
Before I had a phone, I did this thing where I would draw the lines. The longer the line, the longer the note was sustained. Looked like little stairs lol
@@lilyvalley4248 i do that now but when I was wounded I would think that doing this would work and I could read it back lmaooo
i used to do lines it was like
------ ----- ----------- --- -------- --- ------- ---
*searches how to write a song*
*ad: Do you wanna learn how to write a song?*
Me: 👁👄👁
Edit: i just came back to check the responses and got it again ;-;
That's exactly what happened to me lol
Me too-
Samee
Simply piano?
@@noanimepolice84 no, random dude :p
1 - Learn to play an instrument
2 - Download voice memos
3 - Melody
4 - Lyrics
Tips-
- Get a songwriting book
- The lyrics don't have to rhyme
- Don't rush writing your song
- Write a lot of songs
- Don't repeat the same tune too many times
Structure of song -
1. Intro/first verse
2. Pre-chorus
3. Chorus
4. Second verse
5. Chorus
6. Bridge
7. 'Spicy' chorus
LoL 'Spicy' chorus 😂
spicy chorus lmao
Sara Sehgal hey what’s a bridge aha I’m not so sure ? 😊
Im done with step 1 ooooooof-
I have a cat piano
Did you know you cant smile while taking a deep breath? Try it!
I just wanted to make you smile, maybe you had a bad day❤
Awww...
Dude... Thanks I really needed that ❤️
You‘re so sweet ❤️
Aw www,thanks.
Ella Larose aww
Zane: don’t rush it
Also Zane: HoW tO MaKe A sOnG iN 12 MiNs
i think she meant bc the video is 12 mins
Lol 😂
I wrote some short lyrics- a love song for pizza-
One slice, another one too
A third one
Cuz I'm in love with you
Yeah I love youUuU
Three slices? not enough
I want- I want all of youuuu
All of you
(Wow that's cringy lol)
*beAUTIFUL*
I started bobbing my head
I can actually sing an entire song with this-
Yo, as i was reading this comment, a Doordash ad busted in with the sickest jingle and the lyrics went reallyyy well with it. IT'S A BOP
I LOVE IT
AmaZane: Learn how to write a song in 12 minutes
Also Her : Learn to play an Instrument
Me: I’ll be back in a year
We got so much time right now 🤓
Omg you replied
you really don't need years to learn an instrument. if you can pick up a guitar, just watch youtube videos and you will already be able to play a few chords. then if there is a song you like, you just need to type the song name in google and add "chords" at the end, you will get an "ultimate guitar" tab probably, you should go there, and it shows you the lyrics and the chords that are played at each part. if there is a chord you don't know how to play you just hover your mouse or click on it with your finger if you are using a phone, and it will show you a chord diagram on how to play that chord, and already you can play your favorite songs (after some practise ofc). I just wanted to say that it is really not that hard as many people think.
Stanley Sellers AIZAWA-SENSEI
u can easly learn how to play with youtube tutorials! i learned ukelele in cuarentine by youtube and apps😌
The struggle is real when you can’t sing
True that
this speaks to my soul
Right 😢💀
the struggle is real when you can't make a melody nor write a lyrics nor sing at all 💀
you can always try and find videos on how to
"Don't crush on guys"
Me: *Laughs in lesbian*
😳
Lmao same
@@rainyy7 What?
@@skinniestpuma what
Me too. 🏳️🌈
I'm not really sure if this is good but here's a song I wrote yesterday.
I'm working on the melody right now, and maybe I'll post it on my channel.
I hope you like it!
Where It Pours
The rain only comes,
When there's clouds in the sky.
And the sun only shines,
When it isn’t night.
All rainbows form,
When the rain meets the sun.
And a big field is great,
When you want to run.
Someone said that to me,
Long ago.
And ever since, I believed,
Through every high, and every low,
There’s a place on Earth for everyone.
You just have to find yours.
Cause if you don’t like the rain,
Don’t be where it pours.
Dreamers all dream,
With their heads in the clouds.
And people can dance,
When their feet touch the ground.
Cause there’s a place on Earth for everyone.
You just have to find yours.
Cause if you don’t like the rain,
Don’t be where it pours.
I wanted to be like the popular girls.
But it just wasn’t me.
And then one day, I found my world,
And now I’m better, everyone can see.
Cause there’s a place on Earth for everyone.
You just have to find yours.
Cause if you don’t like the rain,
Don’t be where it pours.
No, not where pours.
Cause if you don’t like the rain,
Don’t be ~mhmmmm~ where it, pours.
There’s a place on Earth for everyone.
You just have to find yours.
Cause if you don’t like the rain,
Don’t be where it pours.
ı loveee this part
Do you still work on this? Is it finished?
Wooooow wth thats amazing 🤩🤩🤩
Amazing
Nice song but- AAAAA. ZUKO PFP
You: *doesnt have a instrument*
Me: *hits hands on floor and snaps*
*wow that sounds great*
Me: *runs to piano and smacks arm on keyboard*
Ow, hey that's pretty good
The people in my house: why did we raise her just to end up like this. 👁👄👁
SAME NATALIE GACHA
I DONT HAVE AN INSTRUMENT
I DON'T HAVE ANY INSTRUMENTS
It’s just do coz I also don’t know how play an instrument
I might did this but on my mum's dad
1:56 “Don’t crush on guys.” - 14 year old Zane.
*Why?*
Because at the time, I saw it as a distraction from my dreams...lmao.
Oml. Don't listen to that haha.
AmaZane Channel i have crush...is that ok...he knows i have a crush on him 😶
AmaZane Channel I love your voice
i thought you'd say ' crush on girl instead' lol
AmaZane Channel
Me trying to inpress a boy
Crush: I’m gonna play kick ball
Me: OOO NOWS MY CHANCE TO IMPRESS HIM
Me: I’ll play to!
Friend: I thought you couldn’t kick a b-
Me: SHHH STOP
Crush: ok catch
Me: ok! *fails* um...I’ll kick it! *kicks it and it goes on the school roof* WELP IM DONE
It helps actually haha because It gives You inspiration
“It’s kinda like writing a poem”
Me: *well I suck at that too...*
Same😂
My first part is "I come home to you and her sitting on the couch." It's kinda weird but the end will be "Why should she get the beauty while I get the beast"
That's really good..(i think)
I always have this feeling when I try to create a vocal melody😂 I feel like I'm "copying" other songs melodies, I don't know if you understand what I mean😅
Nina BubbleTea SAMEE! it’s like i’m just humming a song that already exists because my mind apparently can’t create its own melody😂😂
That happens to me too! Sometimes my brain just mix my own melody with something I heard somewhere
i relate to this in a personal level
I totally get what you mean! Its hard to come up with original melodies!
BRUH I AGREE WITH EVERYONE IN YOUR COMMENT SECTION 😭😭😭😭
Me trying to write a song - doesn't get something I like
When I'm trying to sleep- (my brain)- makes up the perfect song
IKR! Sometimes this happens to me, then I grab my phone and try to hum it out
Wasss up ARMY @Namjoon’s Airpods
Dude sameeeeeeeeeee I was trying to write a song for my bestie’s b-day the whole the day, and at night, when I was trying to sleep, I wrote lyrics melody, chords (yes, without the piano, just in my head) IT WAS A MASTERPIECE!!
Me too 😅
Do you want to write a song to BTS like me ?
Bruh that happens to me sometimes I just snatch my keyboard off my wall and run to plug it in by my bed so I can try to figure it out a lil
I came here to learn how to make a song,
got carried away w reading the comments
Same 🤠✋
SAME
same
Damn true
Same
I've been wanting to write a song for ages and I wrote one. I don't know if it's that good but here it goes:
What Would You Do?
An abandoned carnival
Caked in dust and ash
Who knew that all these cursed thoughts
Would make my body crash?
The ground feels like shards of glass
My body on the floor
It looks at me with death in its eyes
Wanting more and more
The flames are thick against my soul
The darkness seeping in
These tears keep running down my face
I can't keep this pain within oh
Like a dagger to the heart
Yeah, you make me fall apart
I can't take this feeling anymore
The dewed and grassy hills
Don't you know your look can kill?
These tears evaporate for you...
But what would you do?
The cuts are sinking deep
Your silky voice sent me to sleep
I can't look at you anymore
Can you be my breath when I'm breathless?
Save me when it's endless?
Or is this toxic love all you want?
Eyes of satan
Feathers of a raven
Piercing my frail heart
You left me in the wind
All these bullets in my skin
My voice is dying out oh
Like a dagger to the heart
Yeah, you make me fall apart
I can't take this feeling anymore
The dewed and grassy hills
Don't you know your look can kill?
These tears evaporate for you...
But what would you do?
Your blackened skin is fading
My blackened heart is breaking
Each breath intoxicating
This evil is awaking
Your blackened skin is fading
My blackened heart is breaking
Each breath intoxicating
This evil is awaking...
Like a dagger to the brain
Yeah, you make me go insane
I can't take this feeling anymore
The burning corpses and the blood
Can't you feel this endless flood?
These tears evaporate for you...
But what would you do?
Oh, oh, what would you do?
Oh, oh, what would you do?
Yeah, yeah, what would you do?
that was good 😌
would u mind if i kinda remade these lyrics? i'll give u creds ofc
don't post them in social media dearie, someone might steal it
Damn ❤️
Wowwww😍😍😍 luv it
What pop songs lyrics consist of:
- Babyy - 40%
- Yeah - 30%
- Oooh - 27%
- Lyrics that don’t use these words - 3%
Btw the I love the intro😂💓
salty b0i BILLIE EILISH
salty b0i *Robert Plant’s lyrics
And the "na" Like every song. na na na na na
you forgot the word "you"
@@cherrysodaz or lalala
1. Figure out how to put your feelings to words
2. Turn those words into relatable double meaning words
3. Make a catchy beat that gets stuck in people’s heads for days
4. Mush together as if you are completing a beautiful song sandwich
You are now Mariah Carey
ok thanks bye lu
I am 69 funny number
Hello army 💜 lol
I swear I laughed so loudddd I love this
Me: So step one... i can do this
Also me: I wAnNa ThRoW yOu OuTtA wInDoW yOu sHiT
Me to myself: Well, try again, sis. Nobody wants to hear a song about you hating someone for stupid reasons
her: learn how to play an instrument me: and that’s where you officially lost me
Me: *Writing a song on paper* *me reads it with melody*
Also me: this is garbage... *throws the paper away*
SO TRUEEEEEE
imagine ariana grande just watching this trying to come up with her next song like:👁👄👁
That would be hilarious but I don’t think she writes her own songs
Kayla Raczkowski I think she helps write them
@@Kayla-px5ce she does...but with some help
@@irenenaserian5920 yeah I learned that about two months ago lol
@@Kayla-px5ce she writes them with her friends and produces with her friends its like a group project she's really good im not trying to be that fan but just wanted to let you know
I'm no pro or anything but I have a lot of originals and one thing you can do is (if you're a beginner) to write songs with the basic song template. Verse, pre-chorus, chorus, Verse2, pre-chorus, chorus, bridge, chorusx2.
When you're a beginner, I wouldn't advise you to pick complex chord progressions. Instead, keep everything as simple as you can because you can make the simplest chords sound precious. Try not to write too complicated things. Take everything easily and write as simple and real as you can. Don't push yourself to hard to write "hits" or "masterpieces". Everything will come with the time.
Zet Walter thank you so much. I was curious to see what template I should do
Thank you so much!!💛
Thank you so much. I never know how to structure songs
Yes yes yes
@@lastfebruary *Todoroki*
Me: **Opens my voice memos app**
Me: Oh wow old songs
So my eardrums snapped
I could come up with lyrics just not a tune.
Same.
I’m a great writer and musician but my mind goes blank or I can’t forget a bad lyric so I can never write lyrics even though I write full on BOOKSSS 😔
I'm the complete opposite
same
I can make great tunes but lyrics r super hard T.T
How on earth can she make random words sound so beautiful and professional
Haha thank you! Just let loose and let the magic happen.
AmaZane Channel I need to learn to sing come up with good lyrics learn to play the guitar and then learn to make it all sound good and in time on the computer ahhhh this could be a few years of experience
@@Nate.Renaissance how did it go? Did you manage to do it?
Anybody here wanting to write a song with a random stranger on RUclips? *RAISES HAND SLOWLY*
yo actually though i will
Yes.
yes
Yup
Yeah, I'm here if you wanna do it!
why am i watching this i don’t even know how to sing and my voice cracks every second lol
SUGA !
same...
Your voice is so beautiful!!😍😍 thank you so much for these tips!!
Step 1
♬ believe in it and sing it all belong ♬
Step 2
♬ just roll with it and that's how you write a song♬
danai danai hi, can I use this in a song?
Janelle Moreno this is already a song...from the Esc, from Alexander Ryback(?)
all day long
danai danai EUROVISION!!!!
Me: finally has a good beat
Me (singing): tHe PrEgNaNcY tEsT iS pOsItIVe
Pregnancy test?
Congratulations
@@jeyanthisaravanasaravana9344 y e s
@@jeyanthisaravanasaravana9344 r/wooosh
I gotta see the finished lyrics
I found your channel randomly.i started rapping about 5 months ago and now I want to record them you are a really kind person and your vids helped me tyyy
Her: “Don’t Crush On Guys”
Me: Very clever!
I should have heard that advice 1 year ago 🤠🔫
Me a lesbian💪🥶
"Learn an instrument"
Me: *stares at bass guitar I've only played once*
I:
b a s e
Base?
Monoma is that you?
I did the same thing but with my Bass😂😂😂
“A great song doesn’t happen in 15 minutes”
My best songs are the ones I write in less than an hour and in the middle of the night because that’s when I get my inspiration.
Yeah, me too! I just started learning guitar but I know ukulele, so it helps. Whenever I sit with my guitar, ready to make songs it seems i never can. It’s usually at night or in a few minutes.
Same! At night watching throw the stars wow that feeling is a best feeling to write a song .
samee
Exactly! Same midnights are the time where i usually compose songs. It does work-
Anybody in 2020 August?
who bored in guarantine
and try to write a song
Yep lol
@30336彤軒 i literally coment in 2 months ago
@30336彤軒 oh
I tried writing songs before but failed, but the quarantine brought it back to me HAHA
2021 🤡
I literally watched a ad about how to write music...
Me too
same LOL
Same dude
"Don't crush on guys"
I'm wheezing because I'm a boy
Yeah, I wonder how well I'll follow that rule
Hey!!! Don't knock it till you try it!
@Breana Wyrick yeah
Oooooo sp8cy gæ
Hey...i know where that profile pic is from😉😉😉
@@bozoneramush7199 .
Me: sings my random song
My sister/brother in the next room : STFU!
Melted Marzzmello if this isn’t true idk what is
What does STFU means
@@haadiyanoorienhuma11b68 shut the fluff up
@@venuscyber2894 oo thanks
Munira Shafquat well it actually says f*** but um please don't say it-
*POV: you searched up "how to write a song" and you watched this because you needed to pass it to your teacher as a project.*
*Oh hun, your not the only one 😔✋🏻*
stalker 😤
ItsCloverYT lol 😭✨
i just need a new hobby
Uh lol not me
The Melodies are what keep me up at night 🤦🏾♂️.. Music Is The Greatest Love Your Channel .. You Littt ❤️🔥
Step one: Sing good.
Me: don’t have the facilities for that big man.
When you can sing but you can't write 👁️👄👁️
I’m am your 100th like!
@@whenyoucantchooseabias5679 same 😭😩💀
@@whenyoucantchooseabias5679 agreed lol
@@whenyoucantchooseabias5679 agreed 😔
Even though I am I writer and a singer 😭
This vid is v helpful but I wanted to point out... tbh, that ‘never let go’ song is like... bomb. you should finish it, make a ‘music video’ and just post it on your channel. i honestly love it. the tune is stuck in my head. ugh!! sooo good zane! ilyyy ♡
Omg woah really? 😅😭 Thank you!!
AmaZane Channel ahhhh omg omg ilysm thx for noticing!!! and yesssss, that needs to be published... asap😍
I agree that would be a dope song you’re so talented
Agreee! Beautiful beautiful beautiful the lyrics meant a lot to me.
I agree. As soon as I hears it I wishes I had came up with it. Love it!
You are amazingly wise for such a young lady. I'm in my 60s and learned so much helpful information from your video. Thank you so much!
Holy crap, you're a genious. Thank you for this video. Please keep up the great work. This pushed me through my writers block and gave me some inspiration.
Are these lyrics good??
"Ashes"
Losing someone feels so scary,
Even if there was really no one there.
It just feels so gloomy seeing everybody having their somebody who loves them back.
And I never felt so much worry when I started having you
Cuz based on movies, they start to lose what's theirs in just a blink
Oh, time nowadays flies so fast,
And another boring lonely day would pass.
But you're here to help me get rid of these toxic ashes.
Burnt ashes, hurtful ones that used to love me ohh
Im scared to be alone
Im scared to know you wont be home with me
Cuz I've been looking for somebody to treat me like somebody
Somebody to tell me I ain't nobody
And that somebody might be you oooh
Such struggles come and go,
Hard obstacles to take before I reach you,
More things to understand how cruel this world could be.
But open your eyes, baby. That's what you said to me.
Cuz time nowadays flies so fast
Another boring lonely day would pass
Think about our future and forget the past
Just before you go, you then started to ask
"Oh are you scared to be alone?
Don'chu worry, I'll be coming home with you
Remember you're everything to me
Never a nobody, but someone loved by me"
I started I tearing up, being so thankful to have you
My ashes that burns, now starts to disappear
Oh, you're that somebody for me
Pray that the night won't end
Knowing you're here in my bed
Whispering sweet notings to your ear
Hoping no dead ashes would come back so near
Time nowadays dies so fast
Hope you're that somebody that'll last
But im still scared cuz now I have you
And you might turn into those ashes than hurt me too-
edit,,, holy oh my why are there so many ppl ASHGDJAS i sadly never took music seriously but made it into just a hobby to write songs for my girl.. thank u for the kind words, and I'll don't mind anyone singing this if they have their own tune >
Angela Madrid you are a fudging poet
@@mableli1750 awww thank youuu! ^ _ ^
Angela Madrid I just tried singing this with my ukelele. Sounds great with the cords em, c, g, d. You’re super creative!!
Ho ly mother of God I absolutely adore this, please please please let me know if you ever make it a song/need help with it
Dudeeeeeeee while i read it I sang it and oml this is an amazing song! If you have snapchat/Instagram you should add me so I can send you a video of and see if you like the beat!
AmaZane: People don’t care about lyrics!
Me: *having a flashback to “It’s Everyday Bro”*
W i t ht h e d i s n e y c h a n n e l f l o w
B u l l y I n g m y b r o t h e r n o w y o u b u l l y i n g m y b r o
Or Justin Bieber: YeAh YoU gOt ThE yUmMy YuM tHaT
I shivered
Me: *thinks about truth hurts*
thank you for the video i just came up with a melody i promise this is the start of something new.
This helped a ton, thank you so much, also your vibe is immaculate,
I felt depressed
but not anymore,
now I feel high,
like I used to before
There ones was this guy
named high.
I usually met him in the sky.
His the important guy,
he makes people want to fly
I dont want to die
I have a life to live
so theres no reason to fill
my death with will
Try the melody of ''bird sit free'' 's hook by Sia on the biginning of the song
good lyrics
Nobody Nobody Thank You!
israe M interesting, I'll check IT out, thanks:)
Damnnn ❤❤Love it
Did anyone had the simple piano ad?
“Guys I’m only 9 and I know how to play piano only by using the simple piano app go download it”
Me be like: hell no. Edit: I didn’t expect to have this much likes but okay
Lol
yeah me too
I learned form a piano teacher but then stopped and I wish I did not because now I have no stuff XD
Same bro
Me too
“Improv”
Me: *tries and ends up humming into the unknown*
Wow what a beautiful voice! Your tone is memorising ❤️
OMG HER AND TATE MCRAE WOULD BE THE BOMBBBBBBBBBBBB😍😍😍😍
Hah I liked my own comment
I agree!!
yasssss
Erica Jines YESSS BOO
Yesssssss
"Oh lemme put the mic down so i don't gain pressure."
*Has camera staring right at her*
when the first time you wanna write a song your ukulele has suddenly disappeared from the spot its been sitting in for the past years
This video is so helpful i literally do this already but it's good to know what i'm doing is good and i should keep going and so should anyone reading this
3:45 i know she didnt just diss androids like that... we have voice recorders already installed in our phones too LMAO wow
Yo sadly my android didn't have a built in voice recorder.What version do you have.
Choco u have a Nokia
I wasn't giving one😢
@@chocobun4879 seriously?
“Do you like milk or cereal first?”
**puts bleach for milk**
😂
I'm so glad I found your channel! I love you so much!!
Zane, you are my everything. Your videos are super helpful ♥
I just started playing the uke and I've always wanted to make my own songs. This video helped a lot. Thanks.
Mae babie same!!
Me: oh hey, I love this beat. Let's create the perfect song for this.
_5 cups of coffee later_
Me: **delete** **delete** **delete** what is this monstrosity?
Thank you for sharing your process of making music!
It helped me a lot!!!1
Thanks you so much girl it helps a lot love you ❤️❤️❤️
2:50
"and it repeats itself, good for my health,
but i don't want that, i can have another set,
just improv it! i don't care 'bout you,
you should try it"
Armys are everywhere~
me thinking up literally just the chorus and not knowing how to continue-
I can only think of the first verse lol
your voice is so amazing!!
I'm writing my first actuall full song today, i've done mini ones but this will be my first full.
I think it's called: I'll leap into your arms..
I am very young, this is my mums account.
Deborah Robertson
You won’t be able to write it in one day. Give yourself time and you’ll write something better
I bet it will be good!!
sometimes you can. one time i has a burst of inspiration and wrote 7 whole
songs in a day. just putting it out there:)
My name is Deborah too! And I'm trying write songs!!😂
What a coincidence❤❤
Lennon Dolly Parton wrote Jolene and I Will Always Love You in the same night.
Is anyone going to talk about the fact that when she said milk, a bleach container popped up? I won't lie dudes, that's my kind of bowl of cereal XD
Angel Ying hahaha why isn't your comment the top comment
YEssss I noticed that too and was scrolling through the comments to see if anyone else has too.
I just checked XD
This needs to be pinned😂😂
this gives me some inspiration and courage . thanx 😻
I was not informed about this site omg!Life saver:)
I’ve been told that I have a good singing voice but I’m a terrible songwriter
Bethany Ellie I’ve been told I’m a bad singer but that I can write songs well lol
*FREAKING SAME!*
Well it could be worse. You could be like me. A terrible singer AND terrible songwriter :)
I feel you!!!
Same! Lol
My melodies are bomb as hell. My lyrics are good but I don't like writing. In fact I lose inspiration when I try to write. I gain more inspiration when I'm creating melodies. My problem is that I don't record them and end up forgetting 🤦🏾♀️ But I just create more 😂 I can hear a beat and create a melody like a fire struck by a match 🔥 I need to record more. Thanks for the tips! 😉
I gotchu! And yeah I would face the same issue haha. I’d forget what I just did.
Great job on all your videos. I appreciate you a lot.
out of all the videos i've watched this one actually helped, thank you!
“I’m Not The Best Song Writer”
-AmaZane Channel
I Wish People Didn’t Lie
Anyone wanna write a song but can’t actually sing?
Or can sing but can't really write 😣
Try 30daysinger.com
Kanesha Thomas yesss
@@donteventryit8949 ur name is dont try it.....idk if i can trust u, u confused me
I can’t do ether
I have had trouble writing songs for years. A few months ago I saw this and whenever I thought of a tune I instantly went to record it before I forgot it. I still am having trouble with writing songs, especially with my lack of patience. But baby steps, I am starting to develop the skill of looking at an object and be able to sing about it. I have a really good tune that I came up with the first time I watched this video, but I kept getting writer's block, and then my patience ran out so I didn't pursue the tune for months. Then today I started singing that tune and I recognized it. If it weren't for you, I probably wouldn't have ever been able to start writing a song. I am excited now to work on the lyrics, although I'm having trouble fitting some pieces together. I would really love it if you could reach out some time so I can show it to you. :)
I watched your video like 3 nights ago and I have finally written my first song!! Thank you so much!! I have wanted to write one for a long time and I just did!! Thanks again!!
I actually have a bad habit when it comes to humming melodies. If someone has something that would help please do leave it in the comments T^T
The problem with me is that, once I start humming out a melody, I end up singing another melody from a song I already know... I just can't seem to get rid of it! T___T but other than that, thank you so much for this video! Surprisingly to myself, this video actually helped a lot to me and I didn't once get bored hearing you talk.
I'm saying this because I normally get bored and sleepy listening to these types of videos, thank you so much!
That happens to me too rip
I know it has been a whileee but I used to have that habbit but my advice for you is to try doing it when your sorta tierd so it just flows out of you (that helped me it might not help you)
Same...I try to come up with a melody so I start humming then after a while I realize that I'm humming a bts song...😳
I recommend learning a little bit of music theory! It made my knowledge about music go deeper and now I can come up with much more original melodies and chord progressions :DDD
That was very helpful! I used to write songs but then i stopped because i don't have a guitar i only have a piano(which i can't play) & i need to improve my writing more 😩
You could do an a capella! That would be so cool honestly.
Play ukelele I highly recommend it it's AMAZING and only takes like 2 months to get a hang of and learn all the chords and at.least 5 songs.so yeah I love ukelele
LostX13 I can, but I NEEd I uKelele
Thank you for being so opened and sharing this. It is very empowering. Thank you
You're very welcome!
Thanks for making these videos they really help ☺️
me: sings my own song
my sister: oooh what song is that?
me: my song
her: yasss girl 😯😄💞
aww that's sweet :)
my sibling would say stfu bish ur lyrics are weakkkkkkkkk lmao
@@myaah9065 :(((
My sibling would say that my voice is bad 😕
@@user-zl8gg5vm1b My sibling is supportive just he would never say something like that but thanks I guess ?
"do you put milk or cereal in the bowl first?"
instead of milk, she put bleach...
4:46
Ariel Phong
You mean 4:35?
I guess you wonder where I've been..
WOW!!! you sing well and your voice OMG so beautiful sweet calm..... I like it and this video helps me write songs ZANE thanks a lot I subscribe to your channel yesterday also and I put a thumb up.
My story :
Im 10 years old lil girl,my dream is to be a singer,my family wants me to be a teacher,but i really want to be a singer...I wrote my first original song (not really) and its like i really like it and im proud of myself,i have a 10+ song and i wrote it by my self but i accidently delete it,but its fine i really dont like it tho haha,i wrote it by myself and ofcourse with the help of my friend, GOOGLE TRANSLATE,yes i know im 10 years old and english is not my first language,i wrote it and i finish it,but ofcourse no one knows that im writing a song nor my family because im scared that they will just let me study and just become a teacher.so i dont have any instrument or apps that can help me to record and i didnt know how that work.im just writing it with the help of my tablet notebook and ballpen,im typing it on my messanger so that no one can see it. Im thinking to post it on my youtube channel but i have 0 subscriber haha thats fine,and i dont want to because i didn't trust anyone because maybe, They would copy my lyrics and say that they are the one who wrote it so im scared..... btw im using my secret account so that no one will know who am i
Omg, I totally support you! I will subscribe to you! I do not know your real account tho
Just know that you were given your own gifts and talents! Maybe your gift is singing or song writing, not a teacher. Don’t stress. Praying for you!
Same
If you have a dream, chase it! At the end of the day, you should never let people decide what you're going to be. It's simply not right. So, i wish the best to you! 💖
I subscribed to you ❤️