This is glorious, I been tryin to find out about "writing my own song" for a while now, and I think this has helped. Ever heard of - Honora Xenndrew Magic - (search on google ) ? Ive heard some interesting things about it and my m8 got amazing success with it.
I'll write about how life is hard the ups and downs,how life has hapiness,sadness,and more. I got this idea beacuse how im fithing my cancer how there ups and downs......ill call it Ribons in life. THANK YOU FOR MAKING THIS VID
The chorus of my song “You There Buddyboy?” about me and my best friend: Hey man I just wanna talk. Can’t you please pick up the phone? I wanna talk to you about everything that’s happened so far. Are you there buddyboy? C’mon please can’t you respond? Are you even there anymore? Have you left this mortal realm? Or are you just eating dinner? Are you there buddyboy?
@@GriffyWhiffy Yes, I have a melody. However, the melody isn’t the greatest, so feel free to do that! If you want to make it into a full song, I’ll tell you the story behind it.
Well I wrote a song about heartbreaks even though I've never been in a relationship 😅 The song's name is "tears that fell" 1st verse: When I go outside it reminds me of our moments Under that tree we used to be All those flowers you used to buy for me 2nd verse: When I look at the moon it reminds me how you said that you would be my sun You promised me how we would have our own family But you broke our promises sayin that they are meant to be broken Chorus: But did you even think about me once Why can't you just listen to your heart Now you call me a crybaby but weren't you the reason of my tears that fell This is incomplete right now I would be very grateful if anyone can give me feedbacks then I would continue with making the whole song. Well I'm just making a song as a hobby otherwise I wanna be a doctor😅
I needed this so bad you are a life saver, Dylan!!! I’m thinking of writing a little musical because I love writing and singing. I play piano fluently so your videos really help with piano. And I think I will get into playing guitar so your videos will come in handy😁😁 thank you so much for making amazing videos for all of us!!❤️❤️
i’m growing so fast and i always thought you’d be there but you left so quickly left my heart in despair my tears keep falling like the rain from the clouds and i just need you around you were the only thing that was keeping me together you were my other half my missing piece this is a unfinished song that i just started writing and idk if its good or not if you have feedback please reply to this comment with it!! 💗
Hi Christie! I am so glad to hear that my guidance is helping you out with lyrics! They can definitely be tough to write, but there will ALWAYS be a breakthrough as long as you keep pushing yourself. Keep up the awesome work! :)
Hi friends! Here are some other helpful videos you might like to watch after this one: ✨My Lyric Writing Process: ruclips.net/video/kz4AGxvPbBs/видео.html ✨25 Song Lyrics Writing Ideas: ruclips.net/video/aFwj5bwQDy0/видео.html ✨What’s A Melody, Lyrics, & Rhythm?: ruclips.net/video/pvrrQQKaq3c/видео.html ✨What Is A Song Form: ruclips.net/video/oUJUJukP5Q4/видео.html ✨What Is A Rhyme Scheme?: ruclips.net/video/suXGrzXCNzU/видео.html ✨How To Find Rhymes: ruclips.net/video/dCfSSo8W0G4/видео.html Happy songwriting! :) :) :)
Thank you for a lovely and very helpful lesson. Just a note on you example song. I found the first half most poignant and beautiful, the more soulful and slightly melancholy verses. Then you went into a musical happy face, and it through me out of the bitter sweet emotions the first part elicited into a slightly too sugary state that felt too incongruence. I totally get what you were after; I'm just saying that -- for me, and just for what it's worth-- the early part was tapping into something exquisite and true and beautifully bittersweet, far more than the later leap into Disney style joy. Sometimes we need more time with our bittersweet feelings before we are told "now snap out of that; time to be very happy!" It's healing to sometimes BE in bittersweet mode. I've taken this time--and risked the normal resentment my comment might elicit--because your song--the early verses-- stunned me with its sad beauty. You were really on to something. Do you like Aimee Mann's songs? Ken
I’m writing a song called What she did it’s about a toxic ex, I’ll edit this and update you guys :) Edit: it didn’t go to plan, I’m going to try writing about something else
My dream is to become a famous singer when I'm older. But...I didn't wanna wait anymore, so I decided to start with writing a song then play it on my channel. (Mai Sal Tik) And I came across this video. Love it!💓😍
You literally saved my life! I have to submit a song tomorrow for an audition in my country, and without your precious help, I wouldn't have completed this song on time! I want to become a successful singer and you just flicked me to 'motivated' mode xD I love your videos so much and you deserve so much more! Once again, thanks!
How about U got me feeling like la la la la la so happy u got me feeling a puppy meeting it's owner tail wagging but I never felt this feeling I've never felt this so called love because la la la la la I've never felt this la la la la la I've never known this oh I'm so happy today I'm writing a song I'm writing a story about all of our love about all of our glory la la la la la just a kiss a butterfly la la la la la you're my fire burning through the night because la la la la la I can see us on our wedding night la la la la la just call me home la la la la la so we can be alone together la la la la la u got me feeling so happy u got me feeling like a puppy meeting its owner tail wagging I never felt this feeling I've never felt this so called love la la la la la my feelings for you come from the heavens above *I think I should have said lucky*
I am trying to write a love song for my Ex-girlfriend and. I know I am 13 and too young but I want information from you cause your the best person that teaches people about music and singing
Adam Fazbear well what kind of music you listen to? And do you play an instrument? Also don’t let someone tell you your “too young” to understand concepts like that in life. You may not fully understand because experience but hey no one should look at a number to tell you your intellect and feeling. But I’d recommend picking your feeling whether it be anger or sadness or a mixture or whatever the case may be and try to title it. And then begin writing. Songwriting is something that gets better over time bough
TheConTraDemOn thanks and no I used to but I don't play an instrument because there were instruments I don't want to play except the guitar and I am a talented singer wanting to become a famous singer and a good singer you can check my channel to know and I can sub to you back.
Hey guys that is a reading this comment, I really need help coming up with a tittle for meh song now, please help meeee!!!! I want my song to be happy and up beat!!
Honestly I just write down whatever comes in mind. But my lyrics rhymes. But my lyrics are always talking about different things. Thank god I watched this video
This was more helpful than you think! When you broke down each part, it helped me to focus on the main topic of the song so thank you so much❤️ Can I show you my song lyrics?💕🦋
I just write my own rap I also don't know how I did this it's good and now I want to write my own song this video help a lot.. Thank you so much sis 😊😊
Hey, Dylan! I'm a singer/songwriter and you've been such an inspiration! I was wondering, do you think I should put my songs on my channel? I'm scared that people won't take it seriously.
Thank you so much. Your videos are a great help for me to start my new hobby. I notice that in many songs the first and second verses (and maybe the chorus too) are split into two parts. can you talk about that latter?
Thank you Dylan this helped so much I kept pausing the video and making a song while doing it and I’m actually digging it thank you for the Inspiration.❣️
Thank You So Much!!! I am a student at the University of Utah and I am majoring in music composition. I have been writing instrumental songs since high school but I have never been able to write lyrics I try to write them and they just come out bad or just really cheesy. But this video of yours is the kick I needed to understand how to write lyrics. So again Thank you. 😁
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About true love then the nex one boyfriend and girlfriend one please thanks
@@chloethomson2050 She's not gonna write your songs for you,do it yourself
Do you ever just like randomly wanna write a song at like 3am knowing you can’t to save your life
Doing it rn lmfao 😂
Its 3:46 AM and yes.
I’m writing a song about coronavirus but the background music is gonna be the songsweet Carolina
Thicc lazar lemme know when ur done 😳
Avery lol I’m trying to write a song and it’s 2:45 am oop-
If this gets 20 likes I'm gonna make and post an original song;))
This is glorious, I been tryin to find out about "writing my own song" for a while now, and I think this has helped. Ever heard of - Honora Xenndrew Magic - (search on google ) ? Ive heard some interesting things about it and my m8 got amazing success with it.
Song title: joy
As I see the pillow that says joy in the background
I noticed that and came down to see if anyone else had seen it 😂
Same here
@@miloxzxz LOL, so did I
Same
same i was about to say that then i seen this lol
What my song is about
100% depression
100%sad
100%drama
1000000000 %has a dying horse voice
And quarantine has me thinking I'll be able to be a song writer.
Then did u write any song?
I'll write about how life is hard the ups and downs,how life has hapiness,sadness,and more.
I got this idea beacuse how im fithing my cancer how there ups and downs......ill call it
Ribons in life. THANK YOU FOR MAKING THIS VID
Thats like the best tittle ive heard
Hope you feel beeter
If u r done with the song, could u share it on ur channel? I'd love to hear it
Wow I’d love to hear that song
Amazing song title🥺 I hope you feel better💞
you’re such a wholesome person omg😤❤️ this was really helpful
Aw thanks, Chelsea! :-D
Its so hardddddd to makeeee grrrrr....😤
The chorus of my song “You There Buddyboy?” about me and my best friend:
Hey man I just wanna talk.
Can’t you please pick up the phone?
I wanna talk to you about everything that’s happened so far.
Are you there buddyboy?
C’mon please can’t you respond?
Are you even there anymore?
Have you left this mortal realm?
Or are you just eating dinner?
Are you there buddyboy?
oooo I love it😻😻
Do you have a melody for this or can I put music and a melody to it?
@@GriffyWhiffy Yes, I have a melody. However, the melody isn’t the greatest, so feel free to do that! If you want to make it into a full song, I’ll tell you the story behind it.
You want to be like bts and blackpink plz tell me
If I want to right a song I only need the melody
And hee hee hoo hoo Aaow
Shuckatucka!
*JK*
hee hee
I have NO idea for lyrics and title
Sniper_Taco mood bro mood
you can use some word generators, it can be useful
You can write a song called : Empty or No ideas on the topic that you dont have any ideas. Does it help? :)
SAME
me too
Yay! I'm going to write lyrics right now.
\\m//
Yay!! That's awesome!! Let me know how it goes :-)
Lemme guess, your a singer now?
@@JTKing7174 r u hating?
@@ELIZA-rj3ki no lol, poor choice of words
Well I wrote a song about heartbreaks even though I've never been in a relationship 😅
The song's name is "tears that fell"
1st verse:
When I go outside it reminds me of our moments
Under that tree we used to be
All those flowers you used to buy for me
2nd verse:
When I look at the moon it reminds me how you said that you would be my sun
You promised me how we would have our own family
But you broke our promises sayin that they are meant to be broken
Chorus:
But did you even think about me once
Why can't you just listen to your heart
Now you call me a crybaby but weren't you the reason of my tears that fell
This is incomplete right now I would be very grateful if anyone can give me feedbacks then I would continue with making the whole song. Well I'm just making a song as a hobby otherwise I wanna be a doctor😅
awesome!
Same here I wanna become a doctor but BTS has inspired me so i thought of writing a song...
@@sabahfathima9259 same here 😁😍😍
I needed this so bad you are a life saver, Dylan!!! I’m thinking of writing a little musical because I love writing and singing. I play piano fluently so your videos really help with piano. And I think I will get into playing guitar so your videos will come in handy😁😁 thank you so much for making amazing videos for all of us!!❤️❤️
Aww you are so welcome!! And that would be awesome if you wrote a little musical - it seems like a perfect way to combine many skills! ❤️
Good luck!
My biggest problem : I love songs and stories.....I am a author and a songwriter. Managing time is the harderst thing as I am in school.
@Angelica Valentin wow
@Angelica Valentin when I say this to people, they r usually like "it's not that hard" or something like that which gets on my nerves
The pillow says “joy” like your song!
i’m growing so fast
and i always thought you’d be there
but you left so quickly
left my heart in despair
my tears keep falling
like the rain from the clouds
and i just need you around
you were the only thing
that was keeping me together
you were my other half
my missing piece
this is a unfinished song that i just started writing and idk if its good or not if you have feedback please reply to this comment with it!! 💗
ITS SO GOOD!!!!
It’s awesome! You got this! Keep going!
awsome
It's good really
This is really good so far!!!!!!! Have you finished it yet???
Great video Dylan! I think people's like button must be broken though, there are 44 views and only 14 likes 😀
Thank you very much! I'm glad you liked it :)
the lyrics is the main problem for me. your guidance is really helping me alot.. thanks Dylan ^^
Hi Christie! I am so glad to hear that my guidance is helping you out with lyrics! They can definitely be tough to write, but there will ALWAYS be a breakthrough as long as you keep pushing yourself. Keep up the awesome work! :)
Hi friends! Here are some other helpful videos you might like to watch after this one:
✨My Lyric Writing Process: ruclips.net/video/kz4AGxvPbBs/видео.html
✨25 Song Lyrics Writing Ideas: ruclips.net/video/aFwj5bwQDy0/видео.html
✨What’s A Melody, Lyrics, & Rhythm?: ruclips.net/video/pvrrQQKaq3c/видео.html
✨What Is A Song Form: ruclips.net/video/oUJUJukP5Q4/видео.html
✨What Is A Rhyme Scheme?: ruclips.net/video/suXGrzXCNzU/видео.html
✨How To Find Rhymes: ruclips.net/video/dCfSSo8W0G4/видео.html
Happy songwriting! :) :) :)
Love u
Thank you for a lovely and very helpful lesson. Just a note on you example song. I found the first half most poignant and beautiful, the more soulful and slightly melancholy verses. Then you went into a musical happy face, and it through me out of the bitter sweet emotions the first part elicited into a slightly too sugary state that felt too incongruence. I totally get what you were after; I'm just saying that -- for me, and just for what it's worth-- the early part was tapping into something exquisite and true and beautifully bittersweet, far more than the later leap into Disney style joy. Sometimes we need more time with our bittersweet feelings before we are told "now snap out of that; time to be very happy!" It's healing to sometimes BE in bittersweet mode. I've taken this time--and risked the normal resentment my comment might elicit--because your song--the early verses-- stunned me with its sad beauty. You were really on to something. Do you like Aimee Mann's songs? Ken
@@delirisambas1701 awesome teaching appreciate you baby😘
Can u help me write a song
Can u help me write a song
I’m writing a song called What she did it’s about a toxic ex, I’ll edit this and update you guys :)
Edit: it didn’t go to plan, I’m going to try writing about something else
My dream is to become a famous singer when I'm older. But...I didn't wanna wait anymore, so I decided to start with writing a song then play it on my channel. (Mai Sal Tik) And I came across this video. Love it!💓😍
Awesome! Have fun!
Same
But it's not easy.we can try our best.....
Can you help me with a song
Same
You literally saved my life! I have to submit a song tomorrow for an audition in my country, and without your precious help, I wouldn't have completed this song on time! I want to become a successful singer and you just flicked me to 'motivated' mode xD I love your videos so much and you deserve so much more! Once again, thanks!
that one dislike is a meanie😒
Aww.. thanks for the support, Reese!
Dylan Laine you're welcome and God bless u😊💕
Traashhhhhh
Anyone wanna make songs together? It’s just I am scared so I wanna do a song with..more people you know.
Bro same
Welp me same thing
Same but my voice is bad
I love writing music, and would love to write a song with more people. I've got some good songs.
I’ll help you
How about
U got me feeling like la la la la la so happy u got me feeling a puppy meeting it's owner tail wagging but I never felt this feeling I've never felt this so called love because la la la la la I've never felt this la la la la la I've never known this oh I'm so happy today I'm writing a song I'm writing a story about all of our love about all of our glory la la la la la just a kiss a butterfly la la la la la you're my fire burning through the night because la la la la la I can see us on our wedding night la la la la la just call me home la la la la la so we can be alone together la la la la la u got me feeling so happy u got me feeling like a puppy meeting its owner tail wagging I never felt this feeling I've never felt this so called love la la la la la my feelings for you come from the heavens above
*I think I should have said lucky*
Wow am i the only one who sang it
i think it should be titled as la la la la la la .. just kidding dr, awersome ya
I’m writing songs for a musical project
The musical is based off animaniacs, and I really needed these lyric tips
Love your teaching of How To Write Lyrics For A Song! I'm thrilled to have found your RUclips Channel!!!
that was the best song writing advice i have ever heard!
Did u get the idea of Joy from your pillow?
I find the best song lyrics come organically for me without overthinking.
I already love this video and it's only been 17 seconds
same she has a pretty voice! and I believe people can write a song!!!!!!!!!!!
THANK U ❤️ MISS,🎉
LOVE FROM INDIA ❤️😊🇮🇳
Thanks A Lot 😁
Iam Understanding So well 💟
Am the only who randomly thinks "I wanna write a song"? I can not sing and I sound like a dying horse but I still randomly want to *LMAO*
I am trying to write a love song for my Ex-girlfriend and. I know I am 13 and too young but I want information from you cause your the best person that teaches people about music and singing
Adam Fazbear well what kind of music you listen to? And do you play an instrument? Also don’t let someone tell you your “too young” to understand concepts like that in life. You may not fully understand because experience but hey no one should look at a number to tell you your intellect and feeling. But I’d recommend picking your feeling whether it be anger or sadness or a mixture or whatever the case may be and try to title it. And then begin writing. Songwriting is something that gets better over time bough
TheConTraDemOn thanks and no I used to but I don't play an instrument because there were instruments I don't want to play except the guitar and I am a talented singer wanting to become a famous singer and a good singer you can check my channel to know and I can sub to you back.
Well I'm 11 and have 2 exes...
@@michaelbrawlsstars1211what the heck
Michael Brawls Stars uh. Aha. Ahaha....ahahaha.....👀
Hey guys that is a reading this comment, I really need help coming up with a tittle for meh song now, please help meeee!!!! I want my song to be happy and up beat!!
Im 10 I finally got to write and sing a song and this really helped
Thank you so much💓💓💓
If this gets 15 likes ill write my own song and post it♡♡
:never gonna happen right?
This is sooo awesome!!!
Thank you so much!!! 💕😊
Dylan Laine I can’t wait to start writing a praise song!! I was thinking about how Jesus’ love just captivates us and fills our hearts 💕
Yes it does! You should definitely use that beautiful truth as inspiration for a praise song! ❤️
@@morecowbellee same
wow Dylan Laine you really know how to write songs!!!
OMG THIS VIDEO WAS SO HELPFUL THANK YOU SO MUCH I HOPE YOU SEE THIS COMMENT
Did you take from the celebrity song or you just make it yourself?
Honestly I just write down whatever comes in mind. But my lyrics rhymes. But my lyrics are always talking about different things. Thank god I watched this video
there's a pillow called joy aha
omg thanks so much. couldnt find anything else. im so thankful because i want to be an artist. if it ever happens will totally mention you. ☺
This was more helpful than you think! When you broke down each part, it helped me to focus on the main topic of the song so thank you so much❤️ Can I show you my song lyrics?💕🦋
My biggest issue is getting beat and making song like 3 minutes. Like im not rhymer.
Would it be easier to make your song and then make up a title?
I just write my own rap I also don't know how I did this it's good and now I want to write my own song this video help a lot.. Thank you so much sis 😊😊
I know how to write lyrics but I need to know how to put a rhythm to the lyrics.. that’s the only thing I’m struggling with :(
Thank you i am now making songs
Great job Dylan, do u accept orders for lyrics without melody?
Thanks! Yes, here's a link to the "Custom Song" section of my website: www.dylanlaine.com/customsongs
Tysm ur a life saver. I worte 14 songs and im thinking of relasing an "album" called storyline :)
O dear, I can go to lyric school, music school, college.. but lyrics simply dont come out of my head. Cos I went to science school
I write just lyrics any advice
You just earned a new subscriber! Thank you for the very helpful ideas. :)
One whole year of quarintine....
I'm ready to become a famous singer. 😏
lol
This video was really helpful. I had to write a song for school and you just BLEW MY MIND!!!
This is absolutely fantastic!!
this was so helpful ... thank you ... and u’re a pretty gal ..
Hey, Dylan! I'm a singer/songwriter and you've been such an inspiration! I was wondering, do you think I should put my songs on my channel? I'm scared that people won't take it seriously.
Thank you so much. Your videos are a great help for me to start my new hobby. I notice that in many songs the first and second verses (and maybe the chorus too) are split into two parts. can you talk about that latter?
I loved this! Thank you! :)
You're welcome! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! 😊
Is there a place where I can find phrases about love and loneliness. I wanna get poetry flow with my blood.
Great video really helpful.
I'm trying to write a song intitled Tear drops but it's not perfect I can't do it what can I do this crazy song writing lyrics How LoL I am
hey Dylan Thanks for this Tutorial i will make a Love Song or Heartbreaking Song
Thank you Dylan this helped so much I kept pausing the video and making a song while doing it and I’m actually digging it thank you for the Inspiration.❣️
Hi Paige! I'm so happy that you found this video helpful and inspirational! Keep up the awesome work :)
Your voice is so sweet
Teach me how to write
Thank You So Much!!! I am a student at the University of Utah and I am majoring in music composition. I have been writing instrumental songs since high school but I have never been able to write lyrics I try to write them and they just come out bad or just really cheesy. But this video of yours is the kick I needed to understand how to write lyrics. So again Thank you. 😁
What da-- i wanna wrote about how me and my friends becamed enemy
Her: Joy........
Me: ... Is this the real life? Is this Just fantasy?
I love you, my teacher. your videos are the best
I have a question, do u have to use the same melody for all verses, or verse 1 cld have a separate melody from verse 2 etc
In commercial music, you typically hear the same melody in every verse, maybe with slight variations.
Not me wanting to write about stale bread💀💀💀💀
Bro I’d love to hear it
I can't choose a good title for my songs. XD
So much happening in my life but I caunt find the words to express my self the only word I can express is "meloncholy"
Thank you!
Great tips Dylan, thank you! :)
I'm trying to write a song called big break up but I don't know what to write for the word's
Shoutout to Victoria
Before saying joy, I'd let the violins sound. When the violins start to sound. Then, when the violins end, I star to sing again.
After this im gonna right about my depression
Writing music can be such a wonderful tool to help release emotions, so I hope that you find writing about your depression to be a useful tool.
Its nice
200K!!!!!!!
This was a very helpful song, but I wrote the song about how good pain feels good. Lol the opposite.
Dylan Laine, I want to write a song about horses, but I just can't come up with the lyrics...please help me. And pls reply!🙂🐴❤️
I want to make a song but I don't have a bit and I don't have instruments. Want can I do ?
You're so sweet and wholesome. :) Wish you nothing but happiness Dylan.
One area I have problems with is writing a melody.
You're accent was so good I'm more comfortable to understand it ........
Dude this helped so much with my song writing. I'm writing my first song now and it's called "Silence before I go". Thank you soooooo much!
Thank you for your teaching it is very good I have learned a lot from you❤u keep up the good work and God Bless
This feels like ELA class when we were learning how to answer questions and unravel poems.
Brava, bella e simpatica Dylan!!!!!!!!!
Thanks for uploading these kind of videos!! Now, I can try writing my own songs. Your song is pretty good. Thanks again!
You remind me of Britney Snow! She’s a very talented singer and actress on Pitch Perfect. You sound and look like her!! 🤍
I never knew all these things before you helped and I watched your vid ... thx so much!!!👍🎶
I don't really understand the lyrics with instrument
Pls b my friend don't know english ro well but nevermind anyways b my friend I love your channel 💜
Mam, nice video for begginers.. I hope you will post more like these