"Midnight Train" (Part 1)

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  • Опубликовано: 3 янв 2025

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  • @Truevisionsoldier
    @Truevisionsoldier 2 года назад +7

    Nine years later and I still listen to this story every once in a while. MrCreepyPasta sounded so young here

  • @POTTERANDMATRIXFAN
    @POTTERANDMATRIXFAN 10 лет назад +26

    I always like the creepypastas that builds up images in your head. This one was amazing.

  • @a.m.6388
    @a.m.6388 10 лет назад +36

    Ok all those conditions can't be explained by falling off a freaking ladder.

    • @Crazyboy48263
      @Crazyboy48263 10 лет назад +12

      It was the 20s, everyone probably guessed what really happened, but they minded their own business. Like he said with his mom, her injuries were obvious too but no one did anything. The ladder story was just the one everyone said happened

  • @TheRandomAlpaca
    @TheRandomAlpaca 11 лет назад +21

    **Hits him with a shovel twice** His voice had flipped to that genuine concern, like any good father's voice.

  • @suvenie
    @suvenie 11 лет назад +2

    im not sure why but i really loved the laugh you did for the devil conductor guy, for some reason i always kinda like it when guys can do that perfect kinda of crazy person evil laugh

  • @realMrVent
    @realMrVent 8 лет назад +15

    Man is indeed the most fearsome monster sometimes.

  • @TrillTierJakal
    @TrillTierJakal 8 лет назад +14

    you hit me with a shovel.... fuck yea I'm telling somebody. and when I get older and bigger we fighting.

  • @ClockworkCryptid
    @ClockworkCryptid 9 лет назад +13

    "And nobody, but me and my mother, knew that it was no man, but a monster."
    Now that is very offensive towards monsters!

  • @MrNuclearz
    @MrNuclearz 11 лет назад +2

    It was awfully nice of the Devil to not let Daniel on the train. Going to Hell by accident must suck.

  • @snug_as_a_bug
    @snug_as_a_bug 10 лет назад +6

    Just a small town girl,
    Livin' in a lonely world,
    She took Midnight Train goin' any where.

  • @Mo_Speckleblitz
    @Mo_Speckleblitz 8 лет назад +11

    As the daughter of an abusive father, I know that feeling...The feeling of finally being rid of him.
    This one hit me hard.

    • @faithruckdeschel1294
      @faithruckdeschel1294 8 лет назад +1

      Mo Speckleblitz I know how u feel, but in my case, it was my uncle. He abused me in every way, my mother was an enabler, but never my savior.

    • @Mo_Speckleblitz
      @Mo_Speckleblitz 8 лет назад +1

      That is one of many positive things I can say about my mom. They got divorced when I was 4, and she tried to get me out. Between the year it was and where we lived the best we could get was a week at a time though. I was 13 before the judge would let ME choose, but I did finally escape him...
      But things are definitely better now though. Not perfect by any means but still pretty good. : j
      It's been long enough for me to at least let go of some of the hate. I'm in my 20's now.

    • @faithruckdeschel1294
      @faithruckdeschel1294 8 лет назад +1

      Mo Speckleblitz I'm very happy for u, and my heart is happy too. I know what u mean by saying, u have managed to let go of some hate. I met my hubby 20 years ago, and his being abused as well, helped me to cope better. I'm 41 now, and I'm still surprised that I have to children, because for the longest time, I didn't wanna be bothered period. I know lots of people don't believe in God(that's their free given choice, of course. I still don't judge them or say they're bad)but I do believe for many reasons, and one important reason is, because I prayed for someone to love me wholeheartedly, and within the next week, my prayers was answered. I also definitely believe in Karma, because my uncle, who, caused me and my family so much pain, died a miserable death, and my mom died full of cancer. Even though, they both apologized for the pain they caused me(I was able to forgive my mom, because she was deathly afraid of my uncle, and our relationship was healed before she passed. I don't care how much she was afraid, for me, I will die making sure nobody hurts my children)I didn't any tears for him, but still not as much as people normally do when they lose their moms. I can only be honest about my feelings, please don't think I'm horrible? I'm sorry for this post being so long, but it feels good to know that another person fought, and is winning. I am so extremely happy for u, and I pray ur life continues to grow even better. Thank u for this conversation. 😀

    • @morrigan909
      @morrigan909 8 лет назад +1

      *hug*

    • @rtempest12
      @rtempest12 8 месяцев назад

      ​@@faithruckdeschel1294 😢😣 Sorry.. There's So Many of Us Out Here..
      Monsters..!! 🤬.. ✌️❤️Fröm Ont, 🇨🇦

  • @zeynelse4213
    @zeynelse4213 10 лет назад +6

    I love the distant sound of trains by my house. Especially at night it sounds so soothing....

  • @BridgesofMC
    @BridgesofMC 10 лет назад +56

    Just a small town girl, livin in a lonely world. She took a MIDNIGHT TRAIN going anywherrre.

    • @ULTIMATZEKROM
      @ULTIMATZEKROM 9 лет назад +7

      BridgesofMC Just a city boy! Born and raised in south Detroit! He took the MIDNIGHT TRAIN going anywhere!

    • @BridgesofMC
      @BridgesofMC 9 лет назад +7

      ULTIMATZEKROM a singer in a smokey room, the smell of wine and cheap perfume!

    • @ULTIMATZEKROM
      @ULTIMATZEKROM 9 лет назад +7

      BridgesofMC For a smile they can share the night! It goes on and on and on and on!

    • @BridgesofMC
      @BridgesofMC 9 лет назад +5

      ULTIMATZEKROM Strangers waitin, up and down the boulevard...

    • @ULTIMATZEKROM
      @ULTIMATZEKROM 9 лет назад +5

      Their shadows searching in the night

  • @MrBlackice420
    @MrBlackice420 12 лет назад +1

    I love MrCreepyPasta because what he does is not for "likes" or "subscribers". I normally listen to these tales over a few beers, so I may not be exactly memorizing what I see, but I don't recall ever being harassed to like or subscribe. Before I visited his channel, which has become a daily habit for me, I would read it on his website. Well done MrCreepyPasta, I no longer have to reread paragraphs due to my increasing intoxication. And to that.... Cheers m8.

  • @SQUIDMANSCOTT
    @SQUIDMANSCOTT 7 лет назад +4

    man this story is such a classic. absolutely love it

  • @dj-chemicalz811
    @dj-chemicalz811 5 лет назад +3

    I don't know why but this pasta has stuck with me for years...not because of its contents but because of the image it conjured up for me...a stormy night a train pulling up to an old farm house and every night a boy going outside to see what was going on until finally one night he gets on himself. the midnight train has always stuck with me for that very image. Funny thing is for years I thought I'd dreamt it up because I imagined the images so vividly like a surreal dream you remember for years

  • @sonicfangal2000
    @sonicfangal2000 3 года назад +1

    "Pray to the father, and His holy name. Don't go riding on that long, black train."

  • @joshuahiett4304
    @joshuahiett4304 7 лет назад +2

    This is my favorite creepypasta

  • @ShawnPattonC
    @ShawnPattonC 12 лет назад +2

    "I ain't tellin' nobody." *3 hours later* "Doctor, doctor! I think the boy's suffering from chronic shovelfaceitis!" "Well of course, Nurse Obvious, you think after 20 years I can't distinguish between accidents and deliberate violence with a lawn tool?"

  • @Greel97
    @Greel97 12 лет назад

    Love the intro. It doesn't have it's own music that takes the focus away from the story. And best of all it's possible to scan through the comments while still listening to the story, there's only a slight pause. It's very good yet still effective.

  • @veenavinod4236
    @veenavinod4236 9 лет назад +4

    One of my favourite stories.

    • @veenavinod4236
      @veenavinod4236 4 года назад

      Back after 4 years, still one of my favourites

  • @Amethyst_Spark
    @Amethyst_Spark 12 лет назад +1

    Kid protective of his mother+abusive father+years of abuse=dead father in most cases.

  • @Z3rostar
    @Z3rostar 11 лет назад +1

    Sorry, but as a person who knows a few things about physiology I have to stop at 8:50 and watch something else. 3 broken ribs is usually fatal if you aren't treated in a hospital. A cracked skull is almost always instantaneously fatal, as well as instantaneously incapacitating.
    No physician would have allowed this to slide, either. Especially not after all of the knowledge that we gained from ww1.

  • @AaronWolf1996
    @AaronWolf1996 11 лет назад +2

    I laughed when i heard "You ain't gonna be telling no one right boy?" Great story !

  • @finnstuhaug4716
    @finnstuhaug4716 11 лет назад +1

    Hmm but who was worse in that story Satain or the father? After all the father was the only one who actualy caused the kid serious fisicle harm. I am agnostic but I am just providing some food for thought.

  • @GFCOLCQuote
    @GFCOLCQuote 12 лет назад

    I'm not gonna lie guys. My goosebumps didn't fall from 26:33-27:04 because of that symphony of pain due to Mr Creepy pasta's perfect scream:Whistle ratio he put there. That felt downright terrifying to listen to.

  • @SkyschildStudios1
    @SkyschildStudios1 8 лет назад +6

    And cue the "Earl Had to Die" song by Dixie Chicks.

  • @1234567890TACO
    @1234567890TACO 12 лет назад

    Mr.CreepyPasta you are a great story teller. Honestly you are the only one who scare living crap out of me by reading these wonderful stories

  • @ResoluteCoyote
    @ResoluteCoyote 4 года назад

    I love this older style of recording. The lack of high quality audio adds so much to the experience.

  • @rtgshabs2317
    @rtgshabs2317 11 лет назад +1

    Poor kid having to go through that

  • @gmortimer20031
    @gmortimer20031 4 года назад +1

    Really beautiful, so pleased to find this.

  • @NZSF150
    @NZSF150 11 лет назад +10

    Dang! That is one violent father!
    #childabuse

    • @funkoff4988
      @funkoff4988 11 лет назад +5

      #prayforjustinsgrandparents :3

  • @Critiqu3
    @Critiqu3 12 лет назад +1

    I love happy endings. And I'm sorry to all the people who've ever had to suffer because of scum like this. Leave him/her, seek shelter in a safe house, and start a new life.

  • @ChromeShineAQW
    @ChromeShineAQW 11 лет назад +1

    Man this one was amazing, kudos to the writer!

  • @jamesmoore8336
    @jamesmoore8336 9 лет назад +12

    WARNING: this pasta is unusually erotic. there are also some especially nasty details about the complications of outhouse ownership.

  • @jcruz821
    @jcruz821 12 лет назад

    Better than the stuff they make me read at school. I loved it, can't wait until the next part.

  • @cindymcoldiron
    @cindymcoldiron 8 лет назад

    Listening to the stories often leads me to places mostly unknown to me. This one took me back home. It was like the song "Killing me softly". Well told.

  • @pauldeleon1323
    @pauldeleon1323 5 лет назад

    Remake this for your new followers. This is one of your best narrated stories. I’m sure your new followers would love this

  • @ballandstickmodel
    @ballandstickmodel 12 лет назад

    Wow, I suggested this yesterday or the day before and now here it is. Thanks a lot Mr. CreepyPasta! :D

  • @xRolled
    @xRolled 12 лет назад

    Revisiting this, it's for sure my favorite you've read so far. Please do the next parts? That would be totally rad!

  • @maxm5938
    @maxm5938 8 лет назад +11

    polar express from hell

  • @zeejayy6039
    @zeejayy6039 11 лет назад +2

    Looks like this this crazy train...
    *puts on sunglasses*
    ... Has gone off the rails.

  • @maggiefaggiee
    @maggiefaggiee 12 лет назад

    One of the most beautifully written pastas I've ever read.

  • @dromalloma2651
    @dromalloma2651 7 лет назад +2

    SHE'S GOT A TICKET TO RIDE, BUT SHE DON'T CARE

  • @GraveyardMaiden
    @GraveyardMaiden 11 лет назад +1

    just a small town girl living in a lonely world she took the midnight train going any where......

  • @SomeJelly
    @SomeJelly 12 лет назад

    I think this is one of the best stories do far! So well written, like a novel! So amazing~

  • @Tpot29
    @Tpot29 11 лет назад +2

    Strangers waiting, up and down the boulevard
    Their shadows searching in the night
    Streetlights people, living just to find emotion
    Hiding, somewhere in the night.

  • @CapnJigglypuff
    @CapnJigglypuff 11 лет назад

    I think it's safe to say that this is the most sympathetic portrayal of the Devil ever.

  • @Danmerk3
    @Danmerk3 12 лет назад

    @MrCreepyPasta Your stories are really addicting to listen!

  • @alexjones5782
    @alexjones5782 12 лет назад

    This is a creepypasta! It's so well written, I absouloutely love this story and can not wait till the next one. I think I will wait for you to read it for me. You painted a very vivd picture in my head.

  • @thenerdwhodances
    @thenerdwhodances 12 лет назад

    That laugh you've got is damn near perfect...FOR A CRAZED PSYCHOTIC NETHERWORLD DEMON CONDUCTOR.

  • @seanbsby5652
    @seanbsby5652 12 лет назад

    i love your work keep it up i listen to them when doing homework and playing games at night keeps things fun thank you again! :)

  • @chriswhite6937
    @chriswhite6937 12 лет назад

    This story is so creepy, and I like how you used a cover of "True" by Akira Yamaoka in Silent Hill 2, which is a masterpiece game.

  • @ClintJohnHampton
    @ClintJohnHampton 12 лет назад

    This should be a movie. This is my favorite pasta. It's so well written.It needs to be a movie. Anyone agree?

  • @vulcangrl13
    @vulcangrl13 12 лет назад

    One of the first and best creepypastas I ever read.

  • @Monsterdrool
    @Monsterdrool 12 лет назад

    Excellent storytelling as always.

  • @SpazemStudios
    @SpazemStudios 12 лет назад

    Loved your work in Jeff vs. Jane.

  • @athim2575
    @athim2575 12 лет назад

    Love your new opening animation!

  • @themonsterdaful
    @themonsterdaful 12 лет назад

    This is a good story. Very well written.

  • @moustik7432
    @moustik7432 9 лет назад +1

    Very good story, well written and well narrated. Thank you :)

  • @HawkSupport
    @HawkSupport 12 лет назад

    Um... Ok, the first 7 minutes I almost cried. But me being the hard core MrCreepyPasta fan, I trekked on. And enjoyed this story.

  • @OrcistCleaver
    @OrcistCleaver 11 лет назад +2

    I knew I was gonna see Journey comments down here....I wasn't disappointed

  • @OneTailedTerror1
    @OneTailedTerror1 7 лет назад

    This creepypasta deserves a reboot!

  • @SandwitchReaper
    @SandwitchReaper 11 лет назад +51

    _I TOOK THE MIDNIGHT TRAIN GOIN' AAAANYYYYYWHHEEEREEEE_

    • @reapercraft8122
      @reapercraft8122 11 лет назад +9

      DONT STOP BELIVEING

    • @funkoff4988
      @funkoff4988 11 лет назад +5

      reapercraft Don't stop the gama radiation! :D

    • @CrimsonSandBoa
      @CrimsonSandBoa 11 лет назад +3

      reapercraft
      HOLD ON TO THAT FEEEEELIIIIINNNNNGGG~

    • @simasgx
      @simasgx 11 лет назад

      That's how alot of rape's start :3

    • @deathtap
      @deathtap 10 лет назад +1

      You must be a small town girl.

  • @MareCat31
    @MareCat31 11 лет назад +1

    poor Daniel...

  • @YoungInspiredArtist
    @YoungInspiredArtist 11 лет назад +2

    IM GOIN OFF THE RAILS LIKE A CRAZY TRAIN!~!!!

  • @isaacb3709
    @isaacb3709 10 лет назад +6

    16:00 I'm trying to eat

  • @Silencer501
    @Silencer501 12 лет назад

    Yay I've been waiting for this story!

  • @dedfuk419
    @dedfuk419 12 лет назад

    Legit, these are like my bed stories. LOL.
    I love horror stories this much.

  • @MegaBleedman
    @MegaBleedman 9 лет назад +4

    I bet Mayweather's got a first class ticket to the Midnight train.

  • @Dreamdaze000
    @Dreamdaze000 8 лет назад

    I absolutely love the description of the train and conductor, enamored really.

  • @kinglessjester4529
    @kinglessjester4529 8 лет назад +10

    JUST A SMALL TOWN GIRL LIVIN' IN A LONELY WORLD!

  • @jamienielson4340
    @jamienielson4340 6 лет назад +1

    OMG you sounded so young

  • @RingoRoad
    @RingoRoad 11 лет назад

    "A whistle, low and hot"
    How the magical fuck does a whistle sound hot?

  • @Voltage108
    @Voltage108 12 лет назад

    You sir, can really make me feel for a character

  • @speedy2davey
    @speedy2davey 12 лет назад

    Hot damn that was good, and there's even a second part! :D

  • @Life3607
    @Life3607 10 лет назад

    This is your best damn creepypasta
    Thanks

  • @stupidpasswordaz
    @stupidpasswordaz 12 лет назад

    CANT WAIT FOR PART 2 :D

  • @croixraiden3805
    @croixraiden3805 4 года назад

    Can't wait for this to get a reboot

  • @JosephKnezovicz
    @JosephKnezovicz 12 лет назад

    13:14 I knew he would be in a fuc... I knew he would be in a fighting mood, lol
    I doesn't matters it's funny to hear it sometimes when the narrator makes a mistake, hehehe
    Love your narrating, bro

  • @isaacb3709
    @isaacb3709 10 лет назад +6

    17:57 I'M EATING

  • @bul13ts
    @bul13ts 12 лет назад

    Yeah, Im totally recording my own version! I have the perfect voice for the conductor, (the fact that Ive been singing bass since I was twelve has only helped my voice acting abilities)

  • @Coco-iz3ce
    @Coco-iz3ce 12 лет назад

    That laugh was adorable :3

  • @zarktomb6493
    @zarktomb6493 11 лет назад +3

    Did he ever make a part 2?

  • @goryparodiesproductions6561
    @goryparodiesproductions6561 9 лет назад +2

    All I can think of when I listen to this story is that this is all taken from a rejected premise from Squidbillies -_-

  • @Xelamorph67
    @Xelamorph67 12 лет назад

    MrCreepyPasta, I'm not the first to ask, but do you have any idea when the second part will be released?

  • @pauldeleon1323
    @pauldeleon1323 5 лет назад

    This story made me subscribe to this channel. 👌

  • @Shadowmere55
    @Shadowmere55 11 лет назад +1

    Moral of the story: Karma's a bitch.

  • @TheLawliet10
    @TheLawliet10 12 лет назад

    Why do I picture a mysterious old man with an ornate cane telling me this on a train, but with Mr.Creepypasta's voice?

  • @TheSoladygaga22
    @TheSoladygaga22 11 лет назад

    I agree with nepeta this should be a custom map, and it might possibly be the dark descent

  • @danielgerman1874
    @danielgerman1874 9 лет назад +16

    This guy lost his virginity when he was 14 I'm18 and haven't even been close to losing it....something's wrong here

    • @danielgerman1874
      @danielgerman1874 9 лет назад

      GlonX that could be it

    • @arthas640
      @arthas640 8 лет назад +3

      +Daniel German The first 5 minutes of this creepypasta sounds more like an erotic novella then a horror story

    • @danielgerman1874
      @danielgerman1874 8 лет назад

      +FarroWife that would suck, but you're right

    • @danielgerman1874
      @danielgerman1874 8 лет назад

      +Arthas Menethil Haha so true

    • @dakotablanton7868
      @dakotablanton7868 8 лет назад

      Damn Daniel.....

  • @arios1570
    @arios1570 12 лет назад

    As long as people like me are stupid enough to watch these before trying to go to sleep for an 8 a.m. shift, you don't have to worry about people coming back.

  • @joshsamuelson6001
    @joshsamuelson6001 11 лет назад

    That was actually really good

  • @HeberekeShikaku
    @HeberekeShikaku 12 лет назад

    a channel here on youtube, she seems to have disappeared though but she did some really great creepypasta readings.

  • @FLYINGONIONS1
    @FLYINGONIONS1 12 лет назад

    lol but seriously this story was good and i hope to see a part two

  • @RealistikFiktion
    @RealistikFiktion 11 лет назад

    This is brilliant!!! :D

  • @SSj900Goku
    @SSj900Goku 10 лет назад +5

    There's a long black train comin down the line... lol =D

  • @rockstone9552
    @rockstone9552 10 лет назад +12

    And I thought my father was bad

  • @Skidder1369
    @Skidder1369 12 лет назад

    SOME WILL WIN, SOME WILL LOSE!
    SOME ARE BORN TO SING THE BLUES
    OH, THE MOVIE NEVER ENDS
    IT GOES ON AND ON AND ON AND ON

  • @blademartin2014
    @blademartin2014 11 лет назад

    A singer in a smokey room
    A smell of wine and cheap perfume
    For a smile they can share the night
    It goes on and on and on and on