In case anyone was curious, the original author of this tale confirmed that because of his love of the works of H.P Lovecraft he made it so that the being that the cult was worshipping in this story is in fact the Lovecraftian entity known as Hastur.
I'm half a decade late and I don't know if your work times have gotten better, but I really appreciate that you're doing these readings man. You really put a lot of effort into dramatic readings and it' honestly brings the stories to life a lot more than others reading the same story. So thank you for the work you put in and for making our days less sucky :).
It’s crazy to think your comment was 6 years ago.. let alone this video. I remember when it came out and I couldn’t get enough of him. All mf his readings are great..
MrCyanMan That is completely illogical you are not born gay.... Man was meant to be with a Woman and vice versa not man with man.... you are quite mistaken and confused..... Do try to have better information about such topics before you engage in such degradation.....
MrCyanMan and as Christians we do not see gays as monsters but as misguided sinners who need to repent..... Again do try to have more information on such topics before bashing Christianity.....
MrCyanMan You sir can continue believing that.... but in the end 'Every knee shall bow, and every tongue shall confess that Jesus Christ is Lord...' you have misinterpreted every part of the Bible sir that you have used.... And if a man chooses to lust after a man it is by choice not by the way he was born..... I mean If that were the case I think you need to return to physical anatomy class sir due to your lack of understand of the process of reproduction.... that should be enough evidence that homes equality is man made not caused by birth or all this other amusing excuses they make in order to justify their sin.... And the answer to your question is because God gave man free will sir he does not force anyone to serve him we True Christians are willing to serve him.... I regret to say many of our brethren have acted innapropriately and you have seen that which is a shame.... But that does not excuse mans sin.... And about your last part about Christianity being the worst religion.... You apparently just do not want to take responsibility for your actions so you apparently believe that if you don't believe in God then you aren't accountable.... It really is a shame that so many believe like this because so many of those same people will be ashamed as every sin they have ever committed will be shown before everyone.... I pray that you shall Accept Christ as your Lord and Savior before it's too late....
MrCyanMan well sir... then allow me to explain to you your belief then according to logic.... You say there is no such thing as sin... then you must also believe that there is no problem with rape or murder or theft..... Since you apparently do not believe in Honor or Loyalty you must believe it's okay to cheat on your spouse or Girlfriend.... You must believe that you can do anything you want and no one should care..... Because since you don't believe in God then according to you there is no good or evil....
There are far more Lovecraftian beings who are far more impressive than Cthulhu? Though I can see where you get that reference because of the water element.
Erik Baade I need noise to go to sleep. This is the perfect remedy; not to mention it will create strange dreams from time to time. I had the strangest dream I'd ever had last night when I did this. ಠ_ಠ
Endere yah i decided to fall asleep to these and had five seizures and the last one i noticed i was having one and couldnt even say the word Jesus and i tried so hard to say it it was painful
Very much Lovecraftian. Atmospheric, dark, and leaves enough to the imagination to keep that dark, mysterious uneasy feeling. Much credit to both writer and reader.
This is an incredibly well written story. This is a VERY talented author. I feel some CLEAR influences from Lovecraft. So refreshing to see another student of the master. ~
One of the best creepypastas I've heard. :) Great story, Spider_J, and great reading, MCP! I love the way the conflicting emotions are depicted in this and how atmospheric the story is.
Here on January 10th, 2020... it’s a trip, considering the first and last time I heard this before today was in 2012, and I’m only here again because I saw a picture of the creature above (I now know it’s an Umibozu) in Markiplier’s recent video, which triggered the memory 💜🖤💗
All creepypasta are SCARY. Its just sometimes the reader/listener subconsciously dont want to get scared so they say its not scary. Creepypasta is HORRIBLY SCARY if you simply put your guards down. With them up however,which most people do, they seem like no big deal at all. LOVE THIS CREEPY CHANNEL DUDE!👍
Aquaman of the earth... RISE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
You love me mr.creepypasta........Thank you Tootsie-roll! You just made my Halloween!!!! Thank you for all the creepy goodness Pasta man, I listen to u a couple times a day!! See-ya later pumpkin vader. Happy Halloween everyone!!!
His gaze never leaving mine, his smile one of grim satisfaction that's when i realized it. I was in love with this psychopath who just drowned my brother.
Insane mans schedule. 1- Wake up and play Amnesia: The Dark Decent 2- Go to work. 3-Hate work. 4- Come home, shower. 5- Read/listen to Creepypasta's. 6- Sleep while listening to H.P Lovecraft Audiobooks. 7- Repeat.
MrCreepyPasta, I was wondering if you would read a story that I wrote although it's written from the perspective of a female. At the very least would you do me the honor of reading story and telling me what you think even if you don't want to read the story for your channel.
i think you should've just message him or submit it too creepy pasta they usually offer editing to stories that has potential but still lacking a thing or two before publishing them online.
Welp... something tells me that this would be the perfect place to spread my message of the gods and to gather followers because this world is filled with sin!
i listened to this years ago and wanted to listen to this again, but i couldnt remember the title. But now it popped out of nowhere in my recommended...
Hello Mr Creepypasta, hope u are well. i just wanted to say Thank You for your hardwork keeping us entertained. You are really good. from your fans in HK, Nicola & family
In case anyone was curious, the original author of this tale confirmed that because of his love of the works of H.P Lovecraft he made it so that the being that the cult was worshipping in this story is in fact the Lovecraftian entity known as Hastur.
Neat
Hastur!? He’s my favorite lovecraft god!
Stepmother killed during by a drunk driver while coming home from the liquor store.
How ironic.
It's fitting, the exact opposite of ironic.
Palpatine: Ironic. She could save others from drunk driving, but not herself.
This is the first creepypasta I'd ever heard. I'd been hooked since, and any lesser quality reader just wouldn't do.
Odd Kensei The first one I heard was squidwards suicide
I read your comment
:/ mu face wut
+Odd Kensei I am reading all da comments in this video
I think the pastor was the narrator's rage personified since that was created with that childhood memory.
Perhaps.
That's a very good analysis.
Like Silent Hill!
Pretty sure he just saw the hellspawn stepbrother's "sins" and acted on one that was befitting the situation.
Especially interesting when the brother “tried” to drown the narrator in a pond the same way
Lovecraft would be proud of this one.
+Jeff Baker Exactly what I was thinking.
+Jeff Baker Is that so? Let's give this a listen then! I love Lovecraft's work.
I read your comment
To right.
Another offering to Shrek...
"And the man said unto the: it's not ogre yet!"
And the man was commended correct and doth was given thine key to the great and holy sanctum of The all mighty ruler Shrek
pale guy, in a black robe, with really old looking glasses, a crimson emblem in his heart, and an evil grin? that man is NOT a paster. duh.
your commenting so much Its annoying
+Carl Halbig *you're
Otaku Dominick
your represents possession. you're represents you are. The comment was "you are commenting so much"
educate yourself
I read your comment
@@lll-cz7yg And I read yours
I'm half a decade late and I don't know if your work times have gotten better, but I really appreciate that you're doing these readings man. You really put a lot of effort into dramatic readings and it' honestly brings the stories to life a lot more than others reading the same story. So thank you for the work you put in and for making our days less sucky :).
It’s crazy to think your comment was 6 years ago.. let alone this video. I remember when it came out and I couldn’t get enough of him. All mf his readings are great..
Devout agnostic is an oxymoron.
MrCyanMan Gays are not a race it is a decision geez how is it so difficult for you people to understand that.....
MrCyanMan That is completely illogical you are not born gay.... Man was meant to be with a Woman and vice versa not man with man.... you are quite mistaken and confused..... Do try to have better information about such topics before you engage in such degradation.....
MrCyanMan and as Christians we do not see gays as monsters but as misguided sinners who need to repent..... Again do try to have more information on such topics before bashing Christianity.....
MrCyanMan You sir can continue believing that.... but in the end 'Every knee shall bow, and every tongue shall confess that Jesus Christ is Lord...' you have misinterpreted every part of the Bible sir that you have used.... And if a man chooses to lust after a man it is by choice not by the way he was born..... I mean If that were the case I think you need to return to physical anatomy class sir due to your lack of understand of the process of reproduction.... that should be enough evidence that homes equality is man made not caused by birth or all this other amusing excuses they make in order to justify their sin.... And the answer to your question is because God gave man free will sir he does not force anyone to serve him we True Christians are willing to serve him.... I regret to say many of our brethren have acted innapropriately and you have seen that which is a shame.... But that does not excuse mans sin.... And about your last part about Christianity being the worst religion.... You apparently just do not want to take responsibility for your actions so you apparently believe that if you don't believe in God then you aren't accountable.... It really is a shame that so many believe like this because so many of those same people will be ashamed as every sin they have ever committed will be shown before everyone.... I pray that you shall Accept Christ as your Lord and Savior before it's too late....
MrCyanMan well sir... then allow me to explain to you your belief then according to logic.... You say there is no such thing as sin... then you must also believe that there is no problem with rape or murder or theft..... Since you apparently do not believe in Honor or Loyalty you must believe it's okay to cheat on your spouse or Girlfriend.... You must believe that you can do anything you want and no one should care..... Because since you don't believe in God then according to you there is no good or evil....
i wanna make a film to this narrative i can see it.... anyone ever wanted to this?
you have no idea how awesome it would be
lets do it creepy, contact me
@@jayzg60 Did you guys succeed?
Still sounds better than the West Burro Baptist Church
it's not hard to be better then that "organization"
True west burro sucks!
+Emerald is not splash , Very Clever. :) I like what you did there.
Is it not spelt west borough?
Jay Buzzton The Wesboro Baptist Church
Talos be praised!!!
haha dragon eminent!
+Blackasknight426 yes! and may we finally get to kick the thalmor's asses in the next ES game!
+Blackasknight426 No! PRAISE THE DARK LORD MOLAG BAL
Talos Guide You
I read your comment
Brings to mind the Oil slick monster from Stephen King's The Raft.
rip mrcreepypasta. this was my late childhood. this was back when he was good. I wish he was still like this.
Explain. What's your issues with his newer content?
I love the picture
Very intriguing story.
Aiden Boomer Your opinion.
I liked it very much also
@@aidenboomervideo fitting name
The emotion in you narration is fantastic.
There are far more Lovecraftian beings who are far more impressive than Cthulhu? Though I can see where you get that reference because of the water element.
Jex G ikr, I'm more interested in the yellow king then cthulhu... At least the yellow king is actively causing people to go insane.
This is quite possibly my favorite Creepy Pasta.
Holy fucking shit. I wish I could write like this!!!!!
you guys are weak if you don't rely on this to bedtime stories
Well I mean
Mr. C.P.'s voice is relaxing.
***** I'm secretly in love with him.
Erik Baade I need noise to go to sleep. This is the perfect remedy; not to mention it will create strange dreams from time to time. I had the strangest dream I'd ever had last night when I did this. ಠ_ಠ
Endere yah i decided to fall asleep to these and had five seizures and the last one i noticed i was having one and couldnt even say the word Jesus and i tried so hard to say it it was painful
Very much Lovecraftian. Atmospheric, dark, and leaves enough to the imagination to keep that dark, mysterious uneasy feeling. Much credit to both writer and reader.
I can actually feel the emotion of the narrator that he has towards his stepbrother and his stepmother. O.O That is awesome! Well done!
This is an incredibly well written story. This is a VERY talented author. I feel some CLEAR influences from Lovecraft. So refreshing to see another student of the master. ~
Where's the picture from? it's pretty haunting and creepy looking
The ending of this sounded very lovecraftian. Love it.
One of the best creepypastas I've heard. :) Great story, Spider_J, and great reading, MCP! I love the way the conflicting emotions are depicted in this and how atmospheric the story is.
Nifty neo-lovecraftian story.
6/18/2019 Terrific story! Water stories are the best.
This pasta made me cry.. I dunno, but I'm sobbing like a baby right now.
same here o_o
I can't stop fapping with my tears.
DaveyGB same here, bro.
At least i'm not the only one
omf im with yah ;-;
These Videos Soothe Me For Some Odd reason
That is one creepy-ass picture.
WHATCHA MEAN GAL? ITS BUTIFUL! :33
Nice pic wedel I think am I right
He's an angry boy
I like your face it’s fake
Here on January 10th, 2020... it’s a trip, considering the first and last time I heard this before today was in 2012, and I’m only here again because I saw a picture of the creature above (I now know it’s an Umibozu) in Markiplier’s recent video, which triggered the memory 💜🖤💗
that picture is dropping something in the bath
Kelly Johnson or when something touches your foot when swimming
We appreciate that you take time out of your day to tend to our story needs though. D:
one day I will read all these comments
+Liam Diaz omg yesssss I willl
Done yet
5 years later and we will never know
Damn it CreepyPasta! stop being so addicting! I need to study for my mid-terms...
A church that's extremely secretive about it's practices, where have I heard that one before?..
I read your comment
All creepypasta are SCARY. Its just sometimes the reader/listener subconsciously dont want to get scared so they say its not scary. Creepypasta is HORRIBLY SCARY if you simply put your guards down. With them up however,which most people do, they seem like no big deal at all. LOVE THIS CREEPY CHANNEL DUDE!👍
Sounds like Cthulhu cultists.
Yeah, I though it sounded like something from a Lovecraft story!
Michael Cuthbertson italy :3
Michael Cuthbertson Lovecraft??
John451 H.P. Lovecraft, one of the worlds greatest horror writers. The creator of The Elder Gods, and the most famous of them, Cthulhu
With the typewriter sounds, this creepypasta's writing sounds like they wrote it around the 60s or 70s
Aquaman of the earth... RISE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Sounds like this was some Lovecraftian Cthulhu cult ritual
MrCreepyPasta best story teller ever!
If my stepmom had treated me like that I would have went to the police and told them she molested me.
I read your comment
+ThatKidOverThere
Don't lie to the cops.
+thatKidOverTher got to have proof
haha
If I had a step mom like that, i would walk outside and set one foot into the woods
Ha! I'm in the woods, beat me again bitch , gotta catch my ass.
You love me mr.creepypasta........Thank you Tootsie-roll! You just made my Halloween!!!! Thank you for all the creepy goodness Pasta man, I listen to u a couple times a day!! See-ya later pumpkin vader. Happy Halloween everyone!!!
This is like Lovecraft done wrong.
Yeah I got the whole Lovecraft vibe as well. Not great but not horrible. Didn't make me want to skip it.
Best. Voice. Acting. Ever.
First creepypasta I ever heard.
you'll love it here
His gaze never leaving mine, his smile one of grim satisfaction that's when i realized it. I was in love with this psychopath who just drowned my brother.
I have to say it; The person doing this sounds alot like Elijah Wood.
This one made me think about the story a lot with the thing that pulled him into the pond and all
As i comment i'ts exactly 30,000 views!
The interesting conversations in your head that you have with the voices is quite intruiging :3
ok,that was sooooooo scary im so creeped out right now!!!!!!!!!!!!
You fight aliens every day eleven you little shit how are you scared of an imaginary story?
it was sarcasm you idiot...
I know, but it's not everyday you get to call The Doctor a "little shit."
4 hours of sleep? I give you props, you are very amazing at what you do, sir.
I think I will stay with God thank you very much
***** get over yourself.
***** Y u no believe in me?
oh thank you
It was an awesome episode. And the whole 'never ending line' was actually a pretty great idea.
If I was him and I could move I wouldve of jumped in after him
Nice Disturbed pic! Glad to find another fan of the band.
I like they're song down with the sickness
ethan coleman *their
ethan coleman *their
*there
This is actually REALLY good. Props to the person who wrote it.
who or what is that in the picture?
Yes.
Your good. Every video fucks me over. Well done.
A-DUN DUN SHIT!
I don't care if I have a brain and by commenting back you are proving my point even more and making me look better.
Latin. Deadly shit.
Death Tap
intri donnis parte.
Insane mans schedule.
1- Wake up and play Amnesia: The Dark Decent
2- Go to work.
3-Hate work.
4- Come home, shower.
5- Read/listen to Creepypasta's.
6- Sleep while listening to H.P Lovecraft Audiobooks.
7- Repeat.
MrCreepyPasta, I was wondering if you would read a story that I wrote although it's written from the perspective of a female. At the very least would you do me the honor of reading story and telling me what you think even if you don't want to read the story for your channel.
i think you should've just message him or submit it too creepy pasta they usually offer editing to stories that has potential but still lacking a thing or two before publishing them online.
@@kdvr766 Bit late there, but good try, at least I know how to summit a story now.
Your voice. N matter how much the pictures or story scares me, your voice keeps me there. And I don't know why...
The cuthulu unicorns are coming and they need blood to make their pizza sauce.
Matt C it's spelled Cthulhu
his voice gives me goosebumps. I love it!
Welp... something tells me that this would be the perfect place to spread my message of the gods and to gather followers because this world is filled with sin!
***** what? a cult!?!
Apparently, no one gets the joke...
Beau Burch
no thanks dude. :|
Carla Davis Yea, I will pass as well, thanks for offering!
I'm good too
This is one of my favorites.
I love these stories! MrCreepyPasta? Good job!
You have an awesome story telling voice, friend.
Oh snap! Did i just hear his breath flow over the mic?! That's the first time I've heard that in a MrCreepyPasta video!!
i listened to this years ago and wanted to listen to this again, but i couldnt remember the title. But now it popped out of nowhere in my recommended...
Reminds me of an H.P. Lovecraft story. I like the typewriter sound effect in the beginning and end.
I love how one of the recommended video's on my playlist is 50 Ways to Say Goodbye
XD
I really like how you use Silent Hill stuff in the audio. "Prayer" was a perfect choice, methinks. ^^
I've got a bad habit of falling asleep to these... Really gotta stop if I ever want to sleep peacefully in the basement again...
11:43 "words that will haunt me to my grave" *RUclips ad kicks in* YOUR COUSIN, FROMMM BOSTONNN. HAHAHHAHA
iv heard a lot of his readings and wondered how has he kept his sanity
I love you too, MrCreepyPasta.
"Perfect Latin." LMAO are you kidding me?
awesome creepypasta I liked it ur a legend bro keep making more vids
This story has a very Lovecraftian vibe to it. c:
This is soooo freaky... DON'T STAHP! These help me stay up at night when I have nothing to do the next morning XP
Hello Mr Creepypasta, hope u are well. i just wanted to say Thank You for your hardwork keeping us entertained. You are really good. from your fans in HK, Nicola & family
Great story, Mister J.
This was a great story.
Did anyone get a chill on those final words?
"Don't be afraid"
you has a nice voice
and you are really good at reading outloud. youre awesome.
this means they were devils
a creepypasta that is awesome
Really good ! Excellent story and reading !!!
Did I mention I got all of my knowledge on this stuff from Supernatural? Seems like an important detail.
by far my favorite one
Very well done! I enjoyed this
this made me cry x.x
Three words that will haunt me to my grave
:unskippable ad immediately plays loud ass music:
This story is so Lovecraft.