Two possibilities: One: Salem is giving Adam the assist and that's why all the Grimm have shown up. Two: Adam was so Ass-mad about Blake that his negative emotions single handedly summoned a whole army
@@TheWarmachine375 Well, if we talk power scaling: -Yang got one-shotted by Adam both in the canon Volume 3 ending and this one. -Adam played around with 3rd Year Beacon's students (The closest a student can be to a Pro Huntsman) Like they were nothing. -Adam just fought Qrow, Russell snd Cardin at the same time... While blindfolded... And would have cut them down had he not pointed at Team RWBY. -Has the most destructive semblance in FRWBY, having caused an avalanche with his cut, and the Tower in the previous volume... I think he's gonna be just fine, Adam is just built different xd
@@TheWarmachine375 For what I can remember of the show, the ones who f*cked up the Power Scale the most were Team RWBY, beating people who they had no business beating. In Fixing RWBY at least they keep it consistent, with the Maidens sitting at the top, Qrow being a Badass Pro-Huntsman, Team RWBY and the remnants of Team JNPR still trying to improve and still having trouble measuring up to the Villains and Pro-Huntsmen, and Adam being a Beast who wants to run everyone's fade xd
Gotta love how savage is Adam, the guy just walked across Yang as nothing, she panics in horror with a flashback of the dude cutting her arm off, and he just passes like she doesn't even exist That, or he just didn't see her with the blindfold, I don't have any problem with either version
I like that bit in where, Ruby was having a hard time to coordinate attacks with her own team, but the moment JNR arrives, she was flawless. And it makes sense Sure she was leader of RWBY for a long time in beacon, but even during their beacon days, they still had many things to work on. So when the fall happend, and became separated from them, she basically became estranged a bit from her own team, whilst with JNR, she was already pretty good friends with Jaune, Nora, and mutual with Ren, so when they were traveling to mistral for many months, they got along well. So ironically, Ruby feels more like a stranger in her own team, than she is to another lol
"I've been looking forward to this" Adam smiles crazily. Yang glared at him with a fiery hatred, cocking her gauntlets back. "My powers have doubled since the last time we met Taurus." Adam's smirk widened as his eyes lit up with excitement. "Good, twice the pride, double the fall".
Loved Adam's slasher movie villain energy. He's currently the embodiment of "action speaks louder than words" as he dominates the team without saying a single word. Poor Ruby. She finally reunites with her team only to separate from them. That cliffhanger was criminal.
I swear the scene with Blake and Cardin almost made me cry from how wholesome and sweet it was. Seeing how far Cardin has come to the point where he’s able to help Blake is just a masterful pay off to his character development up to this point.
I love how terrifying Moonslice feels like in FRWBY. It feels like nothing can stop it: Aura? Yang. A structure? Mistral CCT. Its only downside is that Adam seemingly cant use it willy-nilly and that he has to immobilize himself for a moment before using it. _But good god I can imagine if this was animated that the Moonslice would have cut some of Yang's hair that blew in the wind when it barely missed team RWBY and to then see it destroy a solid portion of the cliff would have been terrifying and set in the realisation that if Qrow didnt knock Adam off that he would have killed all of team RWBY with most of their Auras left in one strike and that's terrifying I love it!_
Adam's semblance, in my opinion, is similar to one for all (All Might and Deku's quirk). It stockpiles every kind of energy, kinetic, solar, wind, water, etc. Meaning he has a ton of energy stored up before every fight, and depending how much he plans to use in an attack determines the energy.
It also shows just how angry and blinded by rage Adam is, to the point of dismissing Qrow after headbutting him, despite leaving himself open for an attack, just so he could kill Blake right away with Moonslice. Like, he isn't going to go into a cringe monologue like in the canon Show, this Adam is just going to straight up delete the whole cast from existence and everyone else within a 50 foot radius from him at sight xd
That change with Jaune at the end is extra emotional. I can see Ruby cutting the car from Jaune's perspective. He's seeing Pyrrha all over again in what Ruby just did and that's probably going to have some excellent development later.
Notes: - Love the first sequence with Cinder. She doesn't say anything but you see the hardship and pain she's enduring. It kinda mirrors OG volume 4 a little with how it gets you to feel a little bad for Cinder by having her not talk lol. The bit of backstory we got was nice, it makes me wonder if we're just skipping the whole Cinderella part entirely. I can understand why and I guess this scene gives you enough context to fill in blanks, but it feels like information missing. Idk. - I'm glad Yang is still upset rather than it just being "I'm glad things are back to normal." It should be harder for things to go back to being 'normal' after all that. - The talk with Blake, Cardin and Russel was nice. We get into Blake's headspace more and it shows how much Cardin has grown. - It's so refreshing to see Ruby and Weiss actually acknowledge Adam's existence. I also really like Adam's silent determination here rather than having give some evil monologues. He's a man on a mission, and it makes him much more terrifying. - The end scene was absolutely brilliant. I hadn’t been that engaged in anything RWBY related for a long time.
I’m pretty sure the arm has actually been taking more of her body in the show. In V5 it went to her elbow and in later Volumes (7&8) it goes all the way to her shoulder
Cinder's backstory was so well done, it didn't retell the fairy tale, just showed us enough to explain how her story is different and gives us just enough to know why she turned out the way she is.
And with Tyrian being the one to appear in the aftermath. It seems like mere coincidence, that maybe Cinder wouldn’t be here of not for that. Also, Tyrian is a professional child snatcher.
It was this installment that really surprised me. I was really worried thinking Carden was going to lose his arm. And that’s when I realized…I genially care about this guy. Good on you mate, you did what I thought was impossible. But now that I care, I’m concerned on how you seems to never let him escape a scene undamaged. Please don’t turn my boy until Ironwood Jr.
Really like the direction you are taking Adam. Making him the nearly unstoppable force of nature he should of been. Hated how my iaijitsu boy was done dirty.
Best part is how those he fights aren't just fodder either and it's shown they're not instead of just being told they're not as they're actually able to keep up a decent amount before it all goes to hell.
Weiss's sigh at the sight of a drunk Qrow. Man, that was a difficult sentence. Weiss little sigh after seeing Qrow at the bar made me stop and think. Of course she knew that he is an alcoholic, look at her mom. But I don't think it's easy for Weiss to see Ruby, her sweet and naive friend, slooooowly understand how Qrow's addiction works and how badly he needs help.
I feel for Qrow really, imagine having a semblance that is bringing bad luck. Man probably blames himself a lot for any bad stuff that happens. Summer's death, the Fall of Beacon, etc. makes this worse, and even if Qrow knows not everything was his fault, he probably feels that his semblance had something to do with it.
Notes on Episode 3: 1) I liked the confrontation between Yang and Blake. It's easy to understand where Blake is coming from with wanting to help Yang, but assuming Yang needs more help than she did before can be very hurtful. I feel like the episode understands that and Blake learned a good lesson. 2) Thank god Weiss said something, because the way the characters have been infantilizing Qrow is starting to get me. I understand that Qrow isn't very responsible, but everyone taking turns babysitting the guy with a mental health issue (yes, alcoholism is a mental health issue) is a bad look. Not that this is a huge problem with the fixing or anything. It's just a small thing that's bugging me a little. Weiss calling it out helped. 3) I really liked Yang's flashback scene.
I do appreciate the fact that Ruby a managed a coordinated attack with RNJR but not RWBY. I like that they have to work to get into sync again. It feels more true to life and gives the team something to work for
Okay, so we've got Cardin and Russell returning and having a good sit down moment with Blake (with an additional nod to Holy Bun). Adam makes a bigger impact and appearance than in the original volume. And the tension of distrust between Yang and Blake is greater. So far so good, Phoenix.
For this chapter it was a masterpiece, the fighting RJNR team work was beautiful, RWBY was disoriented and sloppy love that even more and that a avalanche took out the train over a grim was pure genius. Hope Ruby sacrifice moment is a lesson that she remembers, can't save everyone Canon season 7-8
'He just stood there, menacingly' you guys couldn't resist the Spongebob reference, could you? Loved the two episode special, really was a good present for the holidays and a wise move on your part to split the train section into two episodes. Wonder how team RWBY plus Roman and Neo are gonna react to the train since I'm pretty sure that they don't have the relic as Qrow was the man watching it, but I don't recall seeing him or anyone else having it on their person. That said, I wonder how they'll react to hearing that it wasn't just Adam and his over 9K hater energy that drew all those Grimm, but the relic, a fact that Ozpin never thought to share with them. How will they react to seeing Roman's childhood home? What secrets will it contain? What changes did you make to Cinder's backstory? I don't know but I can't wait to see it all in 2023.
I don't think a big deal should be made about the relic attracting Grimm or that Ozpin didn't mention it. I mean, it's a magical god artifact out in the open on a world where magic is almost non-existant, it stands to reason that it would light up the sky like a beacon to anything that can sense magic. And what do you know it just so happens that the main antagonist of the series is one of the handful of magical beings left in the world who might be able to sense that shit. Coupled with the fact that said antagonist happens to be in control of the grimm, then it's not surprising that they'd be hunted in transit. As for Ozpin not telling them about it, I'd really like him to just shake his head in slight disappointment that he should need to spell out the obvious for them, something like "Salem knows we have the relic, she knows we're most likely to take it to Atlas, there's a limited number of ways we can get there so it's not like we're being evasive, and if the grimm can sense the limited power of individual human souls then why would you assume they couldn't sense the literal magical god relic?" At worst, maybe have him say he didn't tell them because they wouldn't have risked the train and insisted on going on foot so as not to risk other people's lives, thereby increasing the time they'd be in transit and the likelihood of them losing the relic to attackers before making it to Argus/Atlas.
i think the relic is still on the train with everyone but RUBY. i think everyone will be more panicked about finding rwby. she fell into the chasom, and is likely lost. everyone is gunna panic.
I don't know what happened on the train in canon RWBY so I'm excited to see what fixing RWBY has in store. Edit: That... was... amazing... Adam was menacing, that Cardin and Blake moment was great, I'm sure that was Maria, the Roman and Neo antics were fun, the JNR strategy was smart and all the details like team RWBY not coordinating well, Yang having ptsd and actual hints at an interesting backstory for Cinder, are all reasons why I love FRWBY more than RWBY.
The short list of Canon did Ruby and teams fight grim Ruby and teams tail bodyguards of train to fuck-off. Ruby and teams kill most of the grim Ruby tail JNR to stay with the passengers RWBY two other fight more grim Boss fight Kill boss with F-you spin attacks Grim hit train Back side train fall off tracks Back train carts snap off conveniently Front carks get away safely RWBY and two others fall to there dies They live.. how? Who knows. There more but all end it here.. hope this helps some.
Adam in this version was like , "miss me bitches". Also this was a an incredible fixing episode by the way, your team did a awesome job, KEEP IT UP! 👍👍👍
The thing I really like about Adam in FRWBY so far is that they've constantly had to jump this man to get the upper hand. A one v one with him is suicide for most of the characters, which makes him feel like the threat he was supposed to be
It still depresses me how quickly RT killed off Roman. This Fixing series continues to show just how great an influence he could have been within or without the core RWBY group
Adam: "Now I've dazed Qrow. I'm gonna slice those girls into Ruby moon dust." *Charges Moon slice* Qrow: "That's my secret, Adam. I'm always in a daze." *Tackles Adam off train*
I like that Qrow had a spar with Adam. Especially with Qrow being impaired by the alcohol as I feel he is a more competent fighter than Adam so his inebriation feels appropriate for their brief confrontation
Not so sure about that, Adam was also blindfolded and stated to have his sight impaired a bit, and still fought off Qrow who was also being assisted by Cardin and Russell, at the same time they were being surrounded by Grimm. I prefer to think they're evenly matched, if not having Adam being a bit stronger, seeing how Adam seems more of a brutal and fast fighter with a very destructive Semblance, just to make it even MORE dangerous having him chasing the Gang across the globe, while also dragging an entire army of Grimm behind him (Though it's probably just the Relic's doing). Adam just seems like such a menace in FRWBY xd
Splitting JNR from the rest of the group is honestly such a smart move narratively. The trio really didn’t do much till they all got to Argus. I also love the dynamic of how team RWBY is out of sync and will enjoy all the drama that’s to come because of it. Happy holidays and a happy new year to all y’all and can’t wait to get back on the volume 6 grind.
It’s easy to see moments wherein the writers and artist struck with ambition, even if they couldn’t deliver with actual studio quality animation; and it pays off in scenes which give you the impression of what the Fixing RWBY team had in their head and how cool it was meant to feel. Every scene and element of the production feels passionately and even confidently crafted. Hats off once again and happy holidays!
That's really awesome to hear! Given the ramshackle construction of Fixing, hearing that these elements can still come together to offer a cohesive, engaging experience is pretty much the best reassurance you could ask for. Happy holidays to you too.
Now this would be great to see. Ruby herself in a vacuum. I would really wanna see her naive persona become more and more jaded as the solitude of huntsman work got to her. Not necessarily to the same way it affects Qrow or Raven, but definitely snapping at her team and embittered at them as the toll of what she carries pushes her to a mental breaking point.
Ho-ly shit. The animation production is getting way better than what I would have expected from an indie fixing RWBY series. By the time we reach volume 9 we'll be at RWBY gen 1 levels.
I like that you were able to use the development and injury Cardin has in the rewrite for him to give Blake those words of advice. It fits perfectly and really meshes with the story you have been setting up.
THIS WAS SO GOOD AND ENTERTAINING ! THE AMOUNT OF TIME THAT I SCREAMED AT MY TV FOR HOW IMPRESSIVE IT IS ! BADASS AND COOL AN DYNAMIC! THIS IS THE SUMMARY OF THE SERIES! ADAM’S SONG ! THE MOMENT QROW TOSSED HIM OUT OF THE TRAIN WHILE CHARGING UP HIS MOON-SLICE ATTACK GOT ME SO NERVOUS ! I UNDERSTOOD AT THE SAME TIME AS QROW WHAT WAS ABOUT TO HAPPEN!!! THE ARTSTYLE OF THAT MOMENT ! THE DISPLAY OF EMOTIONS ! RUBY LAST MOMENT WAS SO HEROIC AND JUST A RUNY THING TO DO ! GAVE ME SUMMERS TOMBSTONE WRITING VIBE “Thus kindly I scatter” I LOVE HOW SHE HAS HER MOMENTS TO SHINE ! SHE TRULY STAND OUT ! Raymond THERE IS TOO MUCH TO PRAISE THERE ! THANK YOU FOR THIS ! TRULY MADE MY WEEK ! NOW UNTIL LATE JANUARY 😢 HAVE A NICE HOLIDAYS ❤
Omg!! You just gave the boi Adam more attention as well as very threatening force for team Rwby to overcome later on. I am most excited to see what he’ll do next, especially to a certain schnee (Weiss is my favorite out of the Rwby girls and want to see what she’ll do when she meets Adam, aka a victim from her family’s company) And as always, amazing work to celtic and the artists
SPOILERS AHEAD: I cannot describe how sad yet badass the last scene was with Ruby cutting the train line to save JNR and the rest of the train from the avalanche, with Juane trying to reaching out for Ruby with regret. I know you could argue that Ruby could have just done the same from the other side of the cart but in this format of video (use of multiple images rather than animation) it really makes it seem like she had less than seconds to decide - maybe even having a slight slow-mow effect in the scene
I imagine these two episodes are grouped together to keep the train part in one video. Maybe one episode will be hanging out on the train and the next episode is the fight and eventual crash.
I love what your doing with the villains! Cinder’s backstory has me really interested and I’m curious what’s gonna happen to her after surviving her last big fight. Also love that Cinder feels older. I assumed Cinder was an adult when I first watched the show but then they made it out like she’s a teenager. So I’m really glad she’s an adult in this version, it’s made a lot more sense and makes it interesting. And I love Adam, how he feels like a force of nature and is genuinely intimidating, he’s just terrifyingly powerful. I love how for Yang he’s left such a huge impact on her, traumatizing and crippling her, but to Adam she’s nothing. She isn’t even worth acknowledging. Definitely gonna make a Adam vs Yang fight much more satisfying.
I like how there's an emphasis on how team RWBY lost touch with each other and how it shows in their lack of coordination in a fight...especially in comparison to how seemless the coordination between team RNJR is.
1:58 Getting William Birkin from Resident Evil 2 vibes from that creepy stuff. :x Jesus, Adam coming in like he''s the fookin terminator O_O Cardin is such an awesome character in your rewrite. You took an otherwise forgettable mook and made him into a great recurring character who has impact on the main cast and who's presence is always a welcome sight.
o7 Russel. LOVE the Grim Arm being an actual thing as opposed to a quick Cinder Cheat to deny fight scenes, very nightmarish. Happy various holidays and days off Celtic and Huntsmen.
The anticipation is killing me!!! Though I am enjoying this rewrite , I understand that your staff need time to rest and spend time with their families, I look forward to next part of this series!
EPISODE 3. -Woa, opening animation of Cinder is well done, and the scene of the blackness taking another bit of Cinder's flesh, along with the music definately gave me the creeps. Good stuff. Favourite visuals of this video. -Flashback is great. Love that meeting of Tyrion and Cinder. I think I like this little bit of characterization more than anything in canon. Guy was very intimidating here. -Enjoyed the train transition. -Small laugh listening to Nora wanting the pearls. -Nice moment with Cardin and Blake. She probably could have gotten the same advice from several other characters, but Cardin was a good choice, especially since it's probably important for them to have some time to warm up, given the hostile relations they had before. EPISODE 4 -Hmm, random grimm attack too? Aren't there supposed to be automated turrets or something? Seems like they don't know if anything is attacking until they get on the train, which seems a little late. I mean, I guess that dust train in the Blake trailer also didn't do anything until they were on the train but this really seems like a dumb feature. You should have defenses that stop enemies from getting on board. -Oh, a BIG grimm attack, and there are turrets, which need to be activated, by people normally inside the train? There should be watch towers for this. Also, it would be odd if this was a coincedence, I would hope Adam knew those grimm were about to attack, which is why he attacked when he did. -Nice fight animations against that bird Grimm. -They entered another tunnel, how did that effect all the people on top of the train? You only show the grimm getting destroyed, but how close is the tunnel roof to the ground? Wouldn't they have needed to get inbetween the carts? -Adam doing well, and another massive slice from him. His semblance seems to be the most destructive of anything I recall seeing in this. -They need Neo as an escort, not Roman. Neo can hide them until they get their weapons, and then she can run away. -Nice comparison between Ruby with team... um JNPR remments vs team RWBY. I guess this is the first time they've all fought together since the attack on Beacon. Most of them were there fighting against Cinder, but I don't recall Ruby calling out team attacks then, probably needs all 4 members to do that? -Couldn't Ruby cut the other side, so she wasn't being left behind? Hmm a break to recharge? How much work was done this week? Those animations surely took longer than a week, right? A week isn't a lot of time, how is all this divided up? I would guess that most of the illustrations are done before you release a batch, and then it gets divided up, while everyone works on the next batch. That way you have a month to do what you need, minimum. Heck, it might be a good idea to just make sure everything is done before even starting to do releases? I guess that isn't really nessicary though.
Sketchy Huntsmen here, we started making art for Fixing Rwby in mid october, so nearly 2 and a half months in advance, tho this episode has a good amount of art made leading up to its release since we wanted to make it really hype
Ruby could've easily cut it from the other side for sure, but could she let her team alone to fall with the train? it seems better to stick with them rather than throwing them away with a falling train and an avalanche and then saying "OH NO! MY TEAM! Anyways..."
Honestly thought qrow would say something corny to adam before fighting him XD something like: "So you're the one who took my niece's hand; didn't think someone would do it literally"
Well Blake, you could have stayed with Sun, who loved you unconditionally, supported you in all of your endeavors, and never got upset with you no matter what the circumstances were. And had a perfect 6-pack. Pretty much anything a girl could want in a significant other. Oh well.... *shrug*
I know we didn’t get much of Cinder’s past just yet but what little we got is already better then in the show: it doesn’t read like some edgy 15 year old’s first fan fiction where having the character endlessly being put through the wringer passes as “development”. I like how Cinder’s arm is slowly over taking her body. Cardin continues to actually be a person which is nice. I like how there’s more set up for Qrow’s alcoholism being a legitimate problem instead of the show where it just sort of has it become one after taking pot shots at it constantly (not to mention in Chibi the entire joke with Qrow is that he acts drunk). I’m just imagining Adam doing like Mr. Popo from Dragon Ball Z Abridged: “Hi…” I like how Adam continues to feel like a legitimate threat. Bury the Light playing was epic. I like how their was no stupid melodrama with the turrets. I like how RWBY are actually out of touch with each other, there’s no way after being separated for such a length of time they wouldn’t be at least a bit rusty. Ruby being more in tune with Jaune, Nora and Ren was a nice touch. The ending was intense.
omg this is my first time hearing rwby rewrite and it's a very fun ride, i was underestimated it. It just so enjoyable and easy to follow, great job for the script writer, I like this version far more than the original
So far this volume has been a joy to watch through My only concern is that what took place in the first episode from original rwby needed to reach episode 4. Kinda worried for the pacing on this assuming we're still having 22 episodes each volume. But overall great work with whats done so far, glad to hear the team is taking a break as well
Considering they divided RWBY and JNR its likely that all the Argus side stuff like Jhon's subplot happens concurrently with the apathy arc using cutaways, then cutting all the conflict with Corduving and Ospin that made Rwby sound like terrible people, makes so that with all of this done the 22 episode format is well kept
love the changes with adam attacking the train! i hope to see more build-up with adam vs weiss, considering she is schnee and all. can't wait to see how you handle the potential blake + yang vs adam fight in the future. (also biased but I hope you retcon that stupid brand scar of his into something cooler lmao)
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Two possibilities: One: Salem is giving Adam the assist and that's why all the Grimm have shown up. Two: Adam was so Ass-mad about Blake that his negative emotions single handedly summoned a whole army
"You bastard i could kiss you."
This is a lot funnier with the comments about Ren in S5
Qrow: So, you’re the bastard who took my niece’s arm.
Adam: Who are you?
Either Adam is an idiot or trying to mask his fear that he's facing a professional Huntsman.
Yang was just a student while Qrow is a veteran.
Qrow: I’m a drunk Dante
@@TheWarmachine375
Well, if we talk power scaling:
-Yang got one-shotted by Adam both in the canon Volume 3 ending and this one.
-Adam played around with 3rd Year Beacon's students (The closest a student can be to a Pro Huntsman) Like they were nothing.
-Adam just fought Qrow, Russell snd Cardin at the same time... While blindfolded... And would have cut them down had he not pointed at Team RWBY.
-Has the most destructive semblance in FRWBY, having caused an avalanche with his cut, and the Tower in the previous volume...
I think he's gonna be just fine, Adam is just built different xd
@@redsage5876 Yeah powerscaling is weird especially when Qrow got cheap shotted by Tyrian because Ruby had to get in the way
@@TheWarmachine375
For what I can remember of the show, the ones who f*cked up the Power Scale the most were Team RWBY, beating people who they had no business beating.
In Fixing RWBY at least they keep it consistent, with the Maidens sitting at the top, Qrow being a Badass Pro-Huntsman, Team RWBY and the remnants of Team JNPR still trying to improve and still having trouble measuring up to the Villains and Pro-Huntsmen, and Adam being a Beast who wants to run everyone's fade xd
Gotta love how savage is Adam, the guy just walked across Yang as nothing, she panics in horror with a flashback of the dude cutting her arm off, and he just passes like she doesn't even exist
That, or he just didn't see her with the blindfold, I don't have any problem with either version
He's so focused on Blake that he doesn't care about leftovers.
with either vision*
@@BobMcBobJr I meant it as either version of the interpretation, but sure, I see your point
@@HJSDGCE not even Weiss schnee?
@@andrewsung3965 Is Weiss a leftover?
the choice to have “bury the light” play in the background whenever it’s building up to adam using moonslice is CLASS.
It's fucking perfect
Definitely better than the original making him generic simp villian.
He is the storm that is approaching?
@@7Celestron
Provoking black clouds in isolation.
he may be the reclaimer of his name?
"You fell down an elevator shaft?"
"It's a long story"
"Sound like multiple short stories to me"
I'm ashamed to say that only NOW I got it 😂
I like that bit in where, Ruby was having a hard time to coordinate attacks with her own team, but the moment JNR arrives, she was flawless. And it makes sense
Sure she was leader of RWBY for a long time in beacon, but even during their beacon days, they still had many things to work on. So when the fall happend, and became separated from them, she basically became estranged a bit from her own team, whilst with JNR, she was already pretty good friends with Jaune, Nora, and mutual with Ren, so when they were traveling to mistral for many months, they got along well. So ironically, Ruby feels more like a stranger in her own team, than she is to another lol
"I've been looking forward to this" Adam smiles crazily. Yang glared at him with a fiery hatred, cocking her gauntlets back.
"My powers have doubled since the last time we met Taurus."
Adam's smirk widened as his eyes lit up with excitement.
"Good, twice the pride, double the fall".
Adam: Show me your Motivation!
This also applies to Cardin since Adam took his eye
Okay, so is it safe for me to asume that I'm not the only one who can only hear Adam speaking in Vergil's voice?
Loved Adam's slasher movie villain energy. He's currently the embodiment of "action speaks louder than words" as he dominates the team without saying a single word.
Poor Ruby. She finally reunites with her team only to separate from them. That cliffhanger was criminal.
That's what I thought at first but she falls with them right?
@@futurestories2380 Yeah, she separates from Ren, Jaune, and Nora
@@SuperPianogirl123 😕😭
Why did I get myself excited?
He's just standing there... Menacingly
@@julianrobertson1869 and cut off the roof of the train cart. Like shredder from 2012.
I swear the scene with Blake and Cardin almost made me cry from how wholesome and sweet it was. Seeing how far Cardin has come to the point where he’s able to help Blake is just a masterful pay off to his character development up to this point.
I love this version of Cardin as well. Beacon has changed him forever. He also looks badass with an eyepatch.
I love how terrifying Moonslice feels like in FRWBY. It feels like nothing can stop it: Aura? Yang. A structure? Mistral CCT.
Its only downside is that Adam seemingly cant use it willy-nilly and that he has to immobilize himself for a moment before using it.
_But good god I can imagine if this was animated that the Moonslice would have cut some of Yang's hair that blew in the wind when it barely missed team RWBY and to then see it destroy a solid portion of the cliff would have been terrifying and set in the realisation that if Qrow didnt knock Adam off that he would have killed all of team RWBY with most of their Auras left in one strike and that's terrifying I love it!_
Adam's semblance, in my opinion, is similar to one for all (All Might and Deku's quirk). It stockpiles every kind of energy, kinetic, solar, wind, water, etc. Meaning he has a ton of energy stored up before every fight, and depending how much he plans to use in an attack determines the energy.
@@zillagrilla315 that could make sense, and I actually like that idea
It also shows just how angry and blinded by rage Adam is, to the point of dismissing Qrow after headbutting him, despite leaving himself open for an attack, just so he could kill Blake right away with Moonslice.
Like, he isn't going to go into a cringe monologue like in the canon Show, this Adam is just going to straight up delete the whole cast from existence and everyone else within a 50 foot radius from him at sight xd
Much better than in canon where it's disintegrating giant Atlas mechs in volume one but doesn't even damage Yang's Atlas robot arm in volume 6.
Moonslice being used so sparingly really gives it more weight, when it does build up and happen, its a holy shit reaction
That change with Jaune at the end is extra emotional. I can see Ruby cutting the car from Jaune's perspective. He's seeing Pyrrha all over again in what Ruby just did and that's probably going to have some excellent development later.
Absolutely love the more Adam content and how Ruby is more in sync with the Jaune, Ren and Nora compared to the rest of WBY
Adam: "I'm still not paying child support"
Notes:
- Love the first sequence with Cinder. She doesn't say anything but you see the hardship and pain she's enduring. It kinda mirrors OG volume 4 a little with how it gets you to feel a little bad for Cinder by having her not talk lol. The bit of backstory we got was nice, it makes me wonder if we're just skipping the whole Cinderella part entirely. I can understand why and I guess this scene gives you enough context to fill in blanks, but it feels like information missing. Idk.
- I'm glad Yang is still upset rather than it just being "I'm glad things are back to normal." It should be harder for things to go back to being 'normal' after all that.
- The talk with Blake, Cardin and Russel was nice. We get into Blake's headspace more and it shows how much Cardin has grown.
- It's so refreshing to see Ruby and Weiss actually acknowledge Adam's existence. I also really like Adam's silent determination here rather than having give some evil monologues. He's a man on a mission, and it makes him much more terrifying.
- The end scene was absolutely brilliant. I hadn’t been that engaged in anything RWBY related for a long time.
Oh so you made it so Cinders arm slowly takes more of her! That is so interesting and a neat idea!
I’m pretty sure the arm has actually been taking more of her body in the show.
In V5 it went to her elbow and in later Volumes (7&8) it goes all the way to her shoulder
@@parkermaisterra8532Yeah, I was thinking that too
I can't help but imagine the arm is like a weird leech/worm like grim that is just slowly but surely eating her arm.
@@matijasostojic4288 she did have that bug grimm she used to get the first maidens power so probably
It’s great to see hints of Cinder’s past and Adam’s involvement in the volume getting early attention.
He's just standing there MENECINGLY
LoL I laughed at that part. Made me imagine Patrick was there looking at Adam 😎🤣🤣
Never has a SpongeBob joke made me shiver wow dude you're cooking
I like Cardin’s development in this story.
I love the art from syto in this. Also bury the light is always a banger.
Cinder's backstory was so well done, it didn't retell the fairy tale, just showed us enough to explain how her story is different and gives us just enough to know why she turned out the way she is.
And with Tyrian being the one to appear in the aftermath.
It seems like mere coincidence, that maybe Cinder wouldn’t be here of not for that.
Also, Tyrian is a professional child snatcher.
It was this installment that really surprised me. I was really worried thinking Carden was going to lose his arm. And that’s when I realized…I genially care about this guy. Good on you mate, you did what I thought was impossible.
But now that I care, I’m concerned on how you seems to never let him escape a scene undamaged. Please don’t turn my boy until Ironwood Jr.
Really like the direction you are taking Adam. Making him the nearly unstoppable force of nature he should of been. Hated how my iaijitsu boy was done dirty.
Best part is how those he fights aren't just fodder either and it's shown they're not instead of just being told they're not as they're actually able to keep up a decent amount before it all goes to hell.
Just wait till the long awaited fight between russell and Adam happens. Adam should be afraid of his power.
Poor Russell, I don't think a proper landing strategy would do him much good even if he had a way to take out the Grimm carrying him off.
Yeah man Jeez I feel for Cardin losing a friend and biggest confidant imo
Weiss's sigh at the sight of a drunk Qrow.
Man, that was a difficult sentence.
Weiss little sigh after seeing Qrow at the bar made me stop and think. Of course she knew that he is an alcoholic, look at her mom.
But I don't think it's easy for Weiss to see Ruby, her sweet and naive friend, slooooowly understand how Qrow's addiction works and how badly he needs help.
I feel for Qrow really, imagine having a semblance that is bringing bad luck. Man probably blames himself a lot for any bad stuff that happens. Summer's death, the Fall of Beacon, etc. makes this worse, and even if Qrow knows not everything was his fault, he probably feels that his semblance had something to do with it.
Notes on Episode 3:
1) I liked the confrontation between Yang and Blake. It's easy to understand where Blake is coming from with wanting to help Yang, but assuming Yang needs more help than she did before can be very hurtful. I feel like the episode understands that and Blake learned a good lesson.
2) Thank god Weiss said something, because the way the characters have been infantilizing Qrow is starting to get me. I understand that Qrow isn't very responsible, but everyone taking turns babysitting the guy with a mental health issue (yes, alcoholism is a mental health issue) is a bad look. Not that this is a huge problem with the fixing or anything. It's just a small thing that's bugging me a little. Weiss calling it out helped.
3) I really liked Yang's flashback scene.
I do appreciate the fact that Ruby a managed a coordinated attack with RNJR but not RWBY. I like that they have to work to get into sync again. It feels more true to life and gives the team something to work for
He's just standing there... MENACINGLY!!!!
I love just adding a few screens makes Adam's slow decent into madness so much more believable than wat RT did.
Okay, so we've got Cardin and Russell returning and having a good sit down moment with Blake (with an additional nod to Holy Bun). Adam makes a bigger impact and appearance than in the original volume. And the tension of distrust between Yang and Blake is greater.
So far so good, Phoenix.
"We cut to bla-" *Grammarly ad starts*
Wow, its so close to being an actual show that it even has ad breaks.
For this chapter it was a masterpiece, the fighting RJNR team work was beautiful, RWBY was disoriented and sloppy love that even more and that a avalanche took out the train over a grim was pure genius.
Hope Ruby sacrifice moment is a lesson that she remembers, can't save everyone Canon season 7-8
'He just stood there, menacingly' you guys couldn't resist the Spongebob reference, could you? Loved the two episode special, really was a good present for the holidays and a wise move on your part to split the train section into two episodes. Wonder how team RWBY plus Roman and Neo are gonna react to the train since I'm pretty sure that they don't have the relic as Qrow was the man watching it, but I don't recall seeing him or anyone else having it on their person. That said, I wonder how they'll react to hearing that it wasn't just Adam and his over 9K hater energy that drew all those Grimm, but the relic, a fact that Ozpin never thought to share with them.
How will they react to seeing Roman's childhood home? What secrets will it contain? What changes did you make to Cinder's backstory? I don't know but I can't wait to see it all in 2023.
I don't think a big deal should be made about the relic attracting Grimm or that Ozpin didn't mention it. I mean, it's a magical god artifact out in the open on a world where magic is almost non-existant, it stands to reason that it would light up the sky like a beacon to anything that can sense magic. And what do you know it just so happens that the main antagonist of the series is one of the handful of magical beings left in the world who might be able to sense that shit. Coupled with the fact that said antagonist happens to be in control of the grimm, then it's not surprising that they'd be hunted in transit. As for Ozpin not telling them about it, I'd really like him to just shake his head in slight disappointment that he should need to spell out the obvious for them, something like "Salem knows we have the relic, she knows we're most likely to take it to Atlas, there's a limited number of ways we can get there so it's not like we're being evasive, and if the grimm can sense the limited power of individual human souls then why would you assume they couldn't sense the literal magical god relic?" At worst, maybe have him say he didn't tell them because they wouldn't have risked the train and insisted on going on foot so as not to risk other people's lives, thereby increasing the time they'd be in transit and the likelihood of them losing the relic to attackers before making it to Argus/Atlas.
i think the relic is still on the train with everyone but RUBY. i think everyone will be more panicked about finding rwby. she fell into the chasom, and is likely lost. everyone is gunna panic.
I don't know what happened on the train in canon RWBY so I'm excited to see what fixing RWBY has in store.
Edit: That... was... amazing...
Adam was menacing, that Cardin and Blake moment was great, I'm sure that was Maria, the Roman and Neo antics were fun, the JNR strategy was smart and all the details like team RWBY not coordinating well, Yang having ptsd and actual hints at an interesting backstory for Cinder, are all reasons why I love FRWBY more than RWBY.
Lucky bastard
The short list of Canon did
Ruby and teams fight grim
Ruby and teams tail bodyguards of train to fuck-off.
Ruby and teams kill most of the grim
Ruby tail JNR to stay with the passengers
RWBY two other fight more grim
Boss fight
Kill boss with F-you spin attacks
Grim hit train
Back side train fall off tracks
Back train carts snap off conveniently
Front carks get away safely
RWBY and two others fall to there dies
They live.. how? Who knows.
There more but all end it here.. hope this helps some.
3 AND 4!? Christmas truly came early.
I just did too 🥵
@@Kclanks 😳😳😳
Adam in this version was like , "miss me bitches". Also this was a an incredible fixing episode by the way, your team did a awesome job, KEEP IT UP! 👍👍👍
The thing I really like about Adam in FRWBY so far is that they've constantly had to jump this man to get the upper hand. A one v one with him is suicide for most of the characters, which makes him feel like the threat he was supposed to be
It still depresses me how quickly RT killed off Roman.
This Fixing series continues to show just how great an influence he could have been within or without the core RWBY group
Better him and Pyrrha dead than be character assassinated by CRWBY.
@@imgvillasrc1608 This is incredibly true.
Keeps him from being a bastardized version of himself that needs fixing too.
I’m glad you had ren use his unarmed fighting style here. It’s something that was only used once in the show and wasn’t brought up again.
22:15 - looks like Adam is more than just a little motivated now.
He’s just standing there… MENACINGLY
I'm sure I'm not the first person to say this, but I consider your version of RWBY to be canon.
I think I just love how many artists are involved in this personally
Adam: "Now I've dazed Qrow. I'm gonna slice those girls into Ruby moon dust."
*Charges Moon slice*
Qrow: "That's my secret, Adam. I'm always in a daze."
*Tackles Adam off train*
I like that Qrow had a spar with Adam. Especially with Qrow being impaired by the alcohol as I feel he is a more competent fighter than Adam so his inebriation feels appropriate for their brief confrontation
Not so sure about that, Adam was also blindfolded and stated to have his sight impaired a bit, and still fought off Qrow who was also being assisted by Cardin and Russell, at the same time they were being surrounded by Grimm.
I prefer to think they're evenly matched, if not having Adam being a bit stronger, seeing how Adam seems more of a brutal and fast fighter with a very destructive Semblance, just to make it even MORE dangerous having him chasing the Gang across the globe, while also dragging an entire army of Grimm behind him (Though it's probably just the Relic's doing).
Adam just seems like such a menace in FRWBY xd
Splitting JNR from the rest of the group is honestly such a smart move narratively. The trio really didn’t do much till they all got to Argus. I also love the dynamic of how team RWBY is out of sync and will enjoy all the drama that’s to come because of it. Happy holidays and a happy new year to all y’all and can’t wait to get back on the volume 6 grind.
It’s easy to see moments wherein the writers and artist struck with ambition, even if they couldn’t deliver with actual studio quality animation; and it pays off in scenes which give you the impression of what the Fixing RWBY team had in their head and how cool it was meant to feel. Every scene and element of the production feels passionately and even confidently crafted. Hats off once again and happy holidays!
That's really awesome to hear! Given the ramshackle construction of Fixing, hearing that these elements can still come together to offer a cohesive, engaging experience is pretty much the best reassurance you could ask for. Happy holidays to you too.
Love how the train fight ends, feels more dramatic than the original
Now this would be great to see. Ruby herself in a vacuum. I would really wanna see her naive persona become more and more jaded as the solitude of huntsman work got to her. Not necessarily to the same way it affects Qrow or Raven, but definitely snapping at her team and embittered at them as the toll of what she carries pushes her to a mental breaking point.
I find this idea to be way better than the show itself.
2:30 The long-awaited return of everyone's favorite nutjob! Ohhh, it's good to see Tyrian again.
Ho-ly shit. The animation production is getting way better than what I would have expected from an indie fixing RWBY series. By the time we reach volume 9 we'll be at RWBY gen 1 levels.
It all comes full circle and I for one welcome it with open arms
maybe in looks but the part I cared about, Monties touch that whatever model improvements the show had... will never be recreated
@@omalleycaboose5937 Mark Zhang, Raxacory, and Cake Station would like a word with you.
I like that you were able to use the development and injury Cardin has in the rewrite for him to give Blake those words of advice. It fits perfectly and really meshes with the story you have been setting up.
Team RNJR getting awesome team attacks and great coordination is freaking awesome
THIS WAS SO GOOD AND ENTERTAINING ! THE AMOUNT OF TIME THAT I SCREAMED AT MY TV FOR HOW IMPRESSIVE IT IS !
BADASS AND COOL AN DYNAMIC! THIS IS THE SUMMARY OF THE SERIES!
ADAM’S SONG ! THE MOMENT QROW TOSSED HIM OUT OF THE TRAIN WHILE CHARGING UP HIS MOON-SLICE ATTACK GOT ME SO NERVOUS ! I UNDERSTOOD AT THE SAME TIME AS QROW WHAT WAS ABOUT TO HAPPEN!!! THE ARTSTYLE OF THAT MOMENT ! THE DISPLAY OF EMOTIONS !
RUBY LAST MOMENT WAS SO HEROIC AND JUST A RUNY THING TO DO ! GAVE ME SUMMERS TOMBSTONE WRITING VIBE “Thus kindly I scatter” I LOVE HOW SHE HAS HER MOMENTS TO SHINE ! SHE TRULY STAND OUT !
Raymond THERE IS TOO MUCH TO PRAISE THERE ! THANK YOU FOR THIS ! TRULY MADE MY WEEK !
NOW UNTIL LATE JANUARY 😢
HAVE A NICE HOLIDAYS ❤
Omg!! You just gave the boi Adam more attention as well as very threatening force for team Rwby to overcome later on. I am most excited to see what he’ll do next, especially to a certain schnee (Weiss is my favorite out of the Rwby girls and want to see what she’ll do when she meets Adam, aka a victim from her family’s company)
And as always, amazing work to celtic and the artists
SPOILERS AHEAD:
I cannot describe how sad yet badass the last scene was with Ruby cutting the train line to save JNR and the rest of the train from the avalanche, with Juane trying to reaching out for Ruby with regret. I know you could argue that Ruby could have just done the same from the other side of the cart but in this format of video (use of multiple images rather than animation) it really makes it seem like she had less than seconds to decide - maybe even having a slight slow-mow effect in the scene
I’m pretty sure that’s what was being conveyed: a split second decision.
I imagine these two episodes are grouped together to keep the train part in one video.
Maybe one episode will be hanging out on the train and the next episode is the fight and eventual crash.
I want to see Adam and the plastic chair. Make It happen people.
The plastic chair is God tier meme
Also the sunglasses... And the monster can xd
Stands there menacingly
So Adam's just gonna go full slasher movie on team rwby this season. Great!!
Estoy muy emocionado por ver que van a hacer con él, pero hasta ahora la vibra de Slasher que tiene me gusta bastante.
Having Cardin and Russel, take the place of the 2 random guards. That was nice surprise. :D
I love what your doing with the villains! Cinder’s backstory has me really interested and I’m curious what’s gonna happen to her after surviving her last big fight. Also love that Cinder feels older. I assumed Cinder was an adult when I first watched the show but then they made it out like she’s a teenager. So I’m really glad she’s an adult in this version, it’s made a lot more sense and makes it interesting. And I love Adam, how he feels like a force of nature and is genuinely intimidating, he’s just terrifyingly powerful. I love how for Yang he’s left such a huge impact on her, traumatizing and crippling her, but to Adam she’s nothing. She isn’t even worth acknowledging. Definitely gonna make a Adam vs Yang fight much more satisfying.
I like how there's an emphasis on how team RWBY lost touch with each other and how it shows in their lack of coordination in a fight...especially in comparison to how seemless the coordination between team RNJR is.
1:58 Getting William Birkin from Resident Evil 2 vibes from that creepy stuff. :x
Jesus, Adam coming in like he''s the fookin terminator O_O
Cardin is such an awesome character in your rewrite. You took an otherwise forgettable mook and made him into a great recurring character who has impact on the main cast and who's presence is always a welcome sight.
o7 Russel.
LOVE the Grim Arm being an actual thing as opposed to a quick Cinder Cheat to deny fight scenes, very nightmarish.
Happy various holidays and days off Celtic and Huntsmen.
God that ending with Ruby hits so well after everything leading up that moment! Ahhhh! This Fixing series is so good!
This is the RWBY universe I'd watch. Gosh this is soo good
Ah this is already so much better than the original Volume 6
21:36 just now i did notice the remnants AU artist
Curse you Raymond curse your sudden by inevitable cliffhanger
The anticipation is killing me!!! Though I am enjoying this rewrite , I understand that your staff need time to rest and spend time with their families, I look forward to next part of this series!
EPISODE 3.
-Woa, opening animation of Cinder is well done, and the scene of the blackness taking another bit of Cinder's flesh, along with the music definately gave me the creeps. Good stuff. Favourite visuals of this video.
-Flashback is great. Love that meeting of Tyrion and Cinder. I think I like this little bit of characterization more than anything in canon. Guy was very intimidating here.
-Enjoyed the train transition.
-Small laugh listening to Nora wanting the pearls.
-Nice moment with Cardin and Blake. She probably could have gotten the same advice from several other characters, but Cardin was a good choice, especially since it's probably important for them to have some time to warm up, given the hostile relations they had before.
EPISODE 4
-Hmm, random grimm attack too? Aren't there supposed to be automated turrets or something? Seems like they don't know if anything is attacking until they get on the train, which seems a little late. I mean, I guess that dust train in the Blake trailer also didn't do anything until they were on the train but this really seems like a dumb feature. You should have defenses that stop enemies from getting on board.
-Oh, a BIG grimm attack, and there are turrets, which need to be activated, by people normally inside the train? There should be watch towers for this. Also, it would be odd if this was a coincedence, I would hope Adam knew those grimm were about to attack, which is why he attacked when he did.
-Nice fight animations against that bird Grimm.
-They entered another tunnel, how did that effect all the people on top of the train? You only show the grimm getting destroyed, but how close is the tunnel roof to the ground? Wouldn't they have needed to get inbetween the carts?
-Adam doing well, and another massive slice from him. His semblance seems to be the most destructive of anything I recall seeing in this.
-They need Neo as an escort, not Roman. Neo can hide them until they get their weapons, and then she can run away.
-Nice comparison between Ruby with team... um JNPR remments vs team RWBY. I guess this is the first time they've all fought together since the attack on Beacon. Most of them were there fighting against Cinder, but I don't recall Ruby calling out team attacks then, probably needs all 4 members to do that?
-Couldn't Ruby cut the other side, so she wasn't being left behind?
Hmm a break to recharge? How much work was done this week? Those animations surely took longer than a week, right? A week isn't a lot of time, how is all this divided up? I would guess that most of the illustrations are done before you release a batch, and then it gets divided up, while everyone works on the next batch. That way you have a month to do what you need, minimum. Heck, it might be a good idea to just make sure everything is done before even starting to do releases? I guess that isn't really nessicary though.
Sketchy Huntsmen here, we started making art for Fixing Rwby in mid october, so nearly 2 and a half months in advance, tho this episode has a good amount of art made leading up to its release since we wanted to make it really hype
Ruby could've easily cut it from the other side for sure, but could she let her team alone to fall with the train? it seems better to stick with them rather than throwing them away with a falling train and an avalanche and then saying "OH NO! MY TEAM! Anyways..."
@@xxhaxonxx8345 I guess I missed that not everyone else was on the front side of the train. Staying back with her team was the correct move.
Even with only images, this is way better than the original show! Good job!
There you are! You almost had me worried. Also 2 at once!? It must be chri- oh right. Btw, I’m excited to see what you’ll do with Salem
Honestly thought qrow would say something corny to adam before fighting him XD something like: "So you're the one who took my niece's hand; didn't think someone would do it literally"
Considering his drunkard state, yeah
Well Blake, you could have stayed with Sun, who loved you unconditionally, supported you in all of your endeavors, and never got upset with you no matter what the circumstances were. And had a perfect 6-pack. Pretty much anything a girl could want in a significant other. Oh well.... *shrug*
I know we didn’t get much of Cinder’s past just yet but what little we got is already better then in the show: it doesn’t read like some edgy 15 year old’s first fan fiction where having the character endlessly being put through the wringer passes as “development”.
I like how Cinder’s arm is slowly over taking her body.
Cardin continues to actually be a person which is nice.
I like how there’s more set up for Qrow’s alcoholism being a legitimate problem instead of the show where it just sort of has it become one after taking pot shots at it constantly (not to mention in Chibi the entire joke with Qrow is that he acts drunk).
I’m just imagining Adam doing like Mr. Popo from Dragon Ball Z Abridged: “Hi…”
I like how Adam continues to feel like a legitimate threat.
Bury the Light playing was epic.
I like how their was no stupid melodrama with the turrets.
I like how RWBY are actually out of touch with each other, there’s no way after being separated for such a length of time they wouldn’t be at least a bit rusty.
Ruby being more in tune with Jaune, Nora and Ren was a nice touch.
The ending was intense.
Just like the real show, the production value rises with every season^^
Looking forward to being an actual amateur 3D production in like 3 years, lol
omg this is my first time hearing rwby rewrite and it's a very fun ride, i was underestimated it. It just so enjoyable and easy to follow, great job for the script writer, I like this version far more than the original
make sure you're starting at the actual beginning of Fixing
So far this volume has been a joy to watch through
My only concern is that what took place in the first episode from original rwby needed to reach episode 4. Kinda worried for the pacing on this assuming we're still having 22 episodes each volume.
But overall great work with whats done so far, glad to hear the team is taking a break as well
Considering they divided RWBY and JNR its likely that all the Argus side stuff like Jhon's subplot happens concurrently with the apathy arc using cutaways, then cutting all the conflict with Corduving and Ospin that made Rwby sound like terrible people, makes so that with all of this done the 22 episode format is well kept
19:28 So when do we get Nora saying "That's my man!" to Roman.
He's just standing there MENACINGLY!
Hope everyone has a happy and safe Christmas.
14:04 GET OUT OF THERE SPONGEBOB!!!!
love the changes with adam attacking the train! i hope to see more build-up with adam vs weiss, considering she is schnee and all. can't wait to see how you handle the potential blake + yang vs adam fight in the future. (also biased but I hope you retcon that stupid brand scar of his into something cooler lmao)
This was great, but when qrow tackled Adam I wonder what was his reaction to qrow turning into a bird🤔
Adam: He turned himself into a bird! Funniest shit i've ever seen.
JAUNE HITTING THE GRIDDY WITH THAT
~TRAUMAAAAA~
I kinda wish someone said "Its a long 10 stories" when they were talking about falling down the elevator. Or however many stories he fell.
BRO THE ENDING IS MAKING ME SO CURIOUS ON WHATS GONNA HAPPEN NEXT OMGG, KEEP IT UP! I LOVE THIS SM :D
i'm barking, absolutely barking rn
you have gotten much better at describing battles
Such Awesome Fighting Scenes!
Fixing RWBY is making RWBY Cool Again!
#MakeRWBYCoolAgain
Adam is one angry magnet
Another installment finished! Excellent job! The ending really got me feeling scared for Ruby ngl.
I’m glad I waited
Adam’s here!
I thought that the first three episode of volume 6 was good but you somehow made it even better
A surprise to be sure but a welcome one.
Oh, I've been excited for the next episode. It should be any day now.
Really loving the rewrite of rwby happy holidays
You, my friend, have EARNED my Subscription!
it was fun drawing for this episode
Wolf my beloved
You did an amazing job! 👍
@@SwitchbackCh lol