Very hard to hear pluck on melody line. Bass is also washed like it has a reverb on it. I would make it a bit louder and put an octave lower. Aslo, this might be JUST ME problem, but I don't think I like the chord progression. With the melody it sounds a bit weird and unconvincing, if it makes sense. I do like the melody and the way its structured. Also like drums, although I would eq kick's mids a bit. P.S. Also a reccomendation, bar 15 when the momet of silence happens, you can cut off percs and maybe even snares and add some reverb on that cymbol that playes specifically on bar 15. It would sound much cooler, trust me. P.P.S. Congrats on the 10th day of your journey. P.P.P.S. Well, not exactly 10th day now, I guess.
Always very happy to get some feedback on my work! Trying to incorporate some of these notes as I go along so please continue 🎉🎉. PS Thank you for your gzs. Looking forward to continuing to improve this craft over time!
Love this. when that snare comes in is *chefs kiss*
Very hard to hear pluck on melody line. Bass is also washed like it has a reverb on it. I would make it a bit louder and put an octave lower. Aslo, this might be JUST ME problem, but I don't think I like the chord progression. With the melody it sounds a bit weird and unconvincing, if it makes sense.
I do like the melody and the way its structured. Also like drums, although I would eq kick's mids a bit.
P.S. Also a reccomendation, bar 15 when the momet of silence happens, you can cut off percs and maybe even snares and add some reverb on that cymbol that playes specifically on bar 15. It would sound much cooler, trust me.
P.P.S. Congrats on the 10th day of your journey.
P.P.P.S. Well, not exactly 10th day now, I guess.
Always very happy to get some feedback on my work! Trying to incorporate some of these notes as I go along so please continue 🎉🎉.
PS Thank you for your gzs. Looking forward to continuing to improve this craft over time!