Growing up watching old 80s and 90s and even 70s horror movies… I’ve learned that you should almost always listen to the deranged old man telling you to leave
@@ndlmousas a kid I used to think people like you were just a cheap plot hook, as I grew up I realized that I was wrong, and idiots who think children =bad are real
Great story for sure. To me, your stories are like a good book I can’t put down. Also, the narration with voice inflection makes them even better and I so appreciate that extra effort.
Awesome story Jordan. You are a great story writer and storyteller. 💕💕 I agree with an earlier person, my concerns are always for the animals I don’t want to see them hurt, so thanks for keeping the dog safe. 💕
Gipson must be a popular name because this is like the third Creepypasta I listened too which involves a Wendingo, a cabin in the woods and a dog named Gipson.
It was Gibson actually but yeah that was my real dog's name. You probably heard this story being read by other channels. I think DMT and Campfire Tales are the other two who have read it.
@@JordanGrupe interesting I know the one I heard for was on Mrcreepypasta's channel and his was very similar. It involved this guy and his dog Gibson going up to a isolated cabin during a snow storm to meet his buddies so they can go ice fishing. Only for him and Gibson to be stalked by a Wendigo.
If I thought that the man had harmed my child and wouldn't tell me where they were, I would show him that there can be far more scary and deadly things in this world than a wendigo.
I'm curious as to what about my previous post regarding "making sure you have the right person before seeking bloody vengeance on them" made it get deleted? Is asking people to get the facts right before they beat someone to a bloody pulp considered hate speech or something?
What a great story!!! Funny and gory and creepy and satisfying all at once! I love that you thoroughly used the ideas you introduced like the kerosene lamps, that's some detective story level writing. And the ending is just the best. So glad I found your channel. I have subscribed and will now launch through your video catalogue.
@@ETOILEPHANTOME It, it has to be done when it's really cold. I myself took that exact. Had to have snow on the ground, we kept warm by sleeping in our sleeping bags (which reflects ur heat).
Hi Jordan 👋. Sorry I missed a little late 😢. I couldn't sleep last night 😔. I turned in an application to a gas station near us. They called me this morning and I have to be there at 9:30 tomorrow morning for a interview. 🙏🤞🙏🤞
Yall....not all parents or people responsible for kids, are all good or smart or even suitable for either position. If you're gonna get mad at the writer for a story like this then you gotta be HELLA PISSED at REALITY! 🤷
Love how the author captured the guilt you experience when you do a parent fuck up 😙👌 can't say I've ever fucked up to a point my kid met a wendigo though
The story is narrated from a first person perspective, but it is written with the detachment of a third person narrator. The writing and pacing in general just is off with this one.
The AI generated wendigo in the thumbnail is too fat and hairy. They're supposed to be wasting away, and the antlers are supposedly part of the deer skull they use as a mask
Damn for a badge! SMDH If I was a parent to any of them my child would've gone @ all period!!! Why in the tarnation would there be a badge for sleeping n the winter let alone the dead of winter outside!! They could've camped outside in one of the Scout's backyards!!! Does anyone agree with me??
Everybody is handling this way too well. The lack of panic, delirium inducing terror and going into shock feels incredibly unrealistic. The main character isn't believably shity, he comes across like he has almost no emotional investment in any of this at all. I think the best example of the unrealistic detachment is the kid coming back, missing an eye, after being forced to watch a literal monster tear his friend's intestines out and devour them in front of him (along with the missing eye) and then being able to not only find his way back with a concussion but be able to relay the events verbally within 24 hours. That kid should either be curled up in a ball dead somewhere or almost completely unresponsive from going into shock. If you have ever watched a person be forcibly relieved of their eyeball they aren't exactly in the most present State of mind afterwards TLDR: damn, this some dog shit💯
If they make it out of this the camp master is going to be up on some very serious neglect charges, also pretty sure there is a rule that more than 1 adult has to go in case the adults like a predator right?
Growing up watching old 80s and 90s and even 70s horror movies… I’ve learned that you should almost always listen to the deranged old man telling you to leave
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I’ve never hated a main character so much in my life.. good writing Jordan
The Guy was EXTRA Stupid..My God
This “dad” is really pissing me off.
Awww . . . . . What a nice Scout Master. He's bringing 'bite sized' appetizers for the Wendigo! 🇨🇦
The guy literally did more to take care of his dog than he did to take care of those children including his own.
Frfr its so shameful. He was a straight coward frfr they gonna eat him next lol
Hell yeah, children are little god awful monsters, a dog is man's best friend
@@ndlmousas a kid I used to think people like you were just a cheap plot hook, as I grew up I realized that I was wrong, and idiots who think children =bad are real
10/10 this honestly blended dread and a bit of comedy moments very well in my opinion
Your narrations are amazing, but the fact that you also write some of your own stories is just incredible.
this is the greatest channel i have come across to listen to while i work
I like the crackling fire in the background!
Love it!! A very tall hunter…. Obviously!
I can't wait to hear the standalone Hollows End story tomorrow 😊
I always worry about the pet surviving more than the people.
No harm comes to the dog at all, don't worry. I avoid animal violence in all of the stories I write, and I will try to avoid using them on the channel
Same
Can you imagine a story of a pet survivor but the pet had a body can 😱
Thats why we love you Jordan
Dumb.
People especially children have far more value than any animal.
Great story for sure. To me, your stories are like a good book I can’t put down. Also, the narration with voice inflection makes them even better and I so appreciate that extra effort.
Glad you enjoyed it!
Awesome story Jordan. You are a great story writer and storyteller. 💕💕 I agree with an earlier person, my concerns are always for the animals I don’t want to see them hurt, so thanks for keeping the dog safe. 💕
Absolutely!!
SWEEYTT I love Wendigo stories!
Gipson must be a popular name because this is like the third Creepypasta I listened too which involves a Wendingo, a cabin in the woods and a dog named Gipson.
It was Gibson actually but yeah that was my real dog's name. You probably heard this story being read by other channels. I think DMT and Campfire Tales are the other two who have read it.
@@JordanGrupe interesting I know the one I heard for was on Mrcreepypasta's channel and his was very similar. It involved this guy and his dog Gibson going up to a isolated cabin during a snow storm to meet his buddies so they can go ice fishing. Only for him and Gibson to be stalked by a Wendigo.
@@JordanGrupeGive your doggo a treat from me.
If I thought that the man had harmed my child and wouldn't tell me where they were, I would show him that there can be far more scary and deadly things in this world than a wendigo.
You would torture a mentally ill man purely on unverified suspicion?
That's hilarious.
I'm curious as to what about my previous post regarding "making sure you have the right person before seeking bloody vengeance on them" made it get deleted? Is asking people to get the facts right before they beat someone to a bloody pulp considered hate speech or something?
@@Here_is_WaldoOof lol, youtube sucks
@@Here_is_WaldoBecause RUclips has become a censorious communist platform that hates free speech.
What a great story!!! Funny and gory and creepy and satisfying all at once! I love that you thoroughly used the ideas you introduced like the kerosene lamps, that's some detective story level writing. And the ending is just the best. So glad I found your channel. I have subscribed and will now launch through your video catalogue.
I said it once and I say it again, you are my favorite storyteller ❤ your voices are Brilliant ❤ Thank you
Peter i think ( the voice for the character) annoyed me enough to make me wanna punch my phone 😂
Another goody by Jordan
Cheers Jordan 😊
12:36 tent? Are they gonna sleep out in the freezing cold when there’s a cabin right there???
Ima go to the cabin screw the tent
He literally said multiple times that they had to sleep in the tent for a night to get the winter camping badge lol
@@XM8A1 i heard, but it’s freezing, they could always try that any other time
@@ETOILEPHANTOME
It, it has to be done when it's really cold. I myself took that exact. Had to have snow on the ground, we kept warm by sleeping in our sleeping bags (which reflects ur heat).
@@XM8A1 you can have snow without having such extreme weather, you know? That’s just dangerous.
Thanks for the new post Jordan!
More to come! I've got a few longer stories coming this week!
@@JordanGrupe you've become one of my favorite creators. Awesome content. One of a kind narration. Thank you for all the hard work!
@@JordanGrupe You've got to be the hardest working creepy pasta person on the scene. And arguably top 3 talented.
Loved the story
Hi Jordan 👋. Sorry I missed a little late 😢. I couldn't sleep last night 😔. I turned in an application to a gas station near us. They called me this morning and I have to be there at 9:30 tomorrow morning for a interview. 🙏🤞🙏🤞
Good luck Kimberly! I hope the interview goes well!
Good luck!!!🎉
Good luck! Whatever you do, DON'T take the night shift...and if you do, write us creepypasta😊
Thank you so much Jordan. 👍🏻😃
Remember to hit the like button. It really helps the channel
Thanks Diann!
How's your cat?
Thank you so much for this great stories Jordan keep up the great work❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤😂
Man this was a great story
Great stuff my man.
👍🏻👍🏻exemplary and superbly thrillingly entertaining. I enjoyed and loved every minute of this story. Thanks Jordan. 😇💖
Thankyou Jordan another brilliant scary story. ❤
bro love the vids keep the good work
I guess it was brutally cold then lol. Good story Mr. G.
Can't believe i actually finished this...
I always expect a Wendigo....
Me too. I automatically assume there will be one.
😂😂😂
@@traweigand4013 Tiresome... innit.?
Well it is mentioned in the title.
First time listening to you, i am subbed to wayy too many horror story channels on youtube.. but this video definitely made me sub again :D
Awesome! Thank you!
Perhaps it's time to move to Florida, where the winters aren't so cold.
Ol Monongahela
Yall....not all parents or people responsible for kids, are all good or smart or even suitable for either position. If you're gonna get mad at the writer for a story like this then you gotta be HELLA PISSED at REALITY! 🤷
Love how the author captured the guilt you experience when you do a parent fuck up 😙👌 can't say I've ever fucked up to a point my kid met a wendigo though
Yet. 😉 My daughter's 22. I've thought of hiring one a few times.😅
@@yvette_is_Mamacado 🤣🤣🤣
The protagonist is hilarious 😂
I love how realistically inept this dad is
I love this story 😁
Thankyou!! Another great story! ❤😊❤😊
The story is narrated from a first person perspective, but it is written with the detachment of a third person narrator.
The writing and pacing in general just is off with this one.
I love those different annoying voices you make. It makes me laugh imagining the whole scene developing.
Yep. Thats bad news
The AI generated wendigo in the thumbnail is too fat and hairy. They're supposed to be wasting away, and the antlers are supposedly part of the deer skull they use as a mask
Why do people always warn others but never explain why.
Damn for a badge! SMDH If I was a parent to any of them my child would've gone @ all period!!! Why in the tarnation would there be a badge for sleeping n the winter let alone the dead of winter outside!! They could've camped outside in one of the Scout's backyards!!! Does anyone agree with me??
He has to be the worst camp trainer ive met
Righhht lol
30:26 was that his kid trying to get in?
Fun story, great narration but why do a lot of the voices sound like Jimmy Pesto is narrating creepypastas?
Farts are funny 😂
Jordan, what software do you use for thumbnails? Any tips?
I use Canva with images from midjourney
I can tell it’s gonna be good when they’re talking about farts less than a minute in lol
Move to Florida or Arizona
Poor Jeff- he had pyro tendencies like meeee…. 😢
Lol, no one does.
Everybody is handling this way too well. The lack of panic, delirium inducing terror and going into shock feels incredibly unrealistic. The main character isn't believably shity, he comes across like he has almost no emotional investment in any of this at all. I think the best example of the unrealistic detachment is the kid coming back, missing an eye, after being forced to watch a literal monster tear his friend's intestines out and devour them in front of him (along with the missing eye) and then being able to not only find his way back with a concussion but be able to relay the events verbally within 24 hours. That kid should either be curled up in a ball dead somewhere or almost completely unresponsive from going into shock. If you have ever watched a person be forcibly relieved of their eyeball they aren't exactly in the most present State of mind afterwards
TLDR: damn, this some dog shit💯
Derp
If they make it out of this the camp master is going to be up on some very serious neglect charges, also pretty sure there is a rule that more than 1 adult has to go in case the adults like a predator right?
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Or the Spanish Inquisition…
Look, Belize has a very relaxed immigration policy.
who is here because of Alastor from Hazbi Hotel
I don't get some of the comments? It's not real, it's just a made up story!! Chill out and enjoy it for what it is.
if Gibson died I'd block the channel for at least a day is was scared he'd freeze😢
Fucking hate the ads.
One each five fucking minutes. Ruins the ambiance.
This was.... really hard to listen to
Seriously? The price is right theme?! You’re about to lose a follower. 😂
The Canadian accent cracks me up.
I would leave Peter at the lake