Oh my gosh I love it so much!!! Like tokyograpez said, you really clearly got across the story here and somehow made me completely invested in these characters in just 4 minutes. I'm curious about how the three characters we first meet are connected to each other; tired looking shopping list guy, hat girl, and Corey . It wasn't exactly clear whether they were friends, siblings, or partners, or some mix of the three? Obviously hat girl likes, well liked (so freaking sad) the girl who Corey introduced them to at the beginning, but if a poly relationship is involved than that doesn't really negate the possibility of her being in a relationship with the others? Seriously, this animatic is doing to my brain what teachers wish the deep meaningful videos they assign would do. Rhetorical analysis to the max!
Whaha ty I'm so glad you like it x3 So, the hat girl (sarah) and the shopping list guy (Richard) they are just friends, Sarah was engaged to Corey but they don't like each other that way and Richard was training to be his bodyguard. There are a poly couple but they didn't appear in this animatic whaha x3 Oh and yes Sarah liked that other girl (Allie) :3 Whaha its so good to see someone so interested on something i made ty once again. XD
@@whisk3rs_ Oooh, okay! To be honest I had thought for a second that there were a bunch of people walking around with magic prosthetic arms until I read one of your other comments, but I really like the idea of the armored and almost sacred left hand. Tangentially reminds me of The Stormlight Archive by Brandon Sanderson! I'm wondering, I can see that William is a sort of villain character, but that Corey is also not entirely blameless either. And then there are the god's left hands who seem like the awful celestial girl band of this world and are manipulating William? I guess I'm wondering, with all these morally grey or black people, is there one main antagonist and/or one main conflict to the story? It feels a little hard to tell exactly who to root for and who to definitely not to root for and I actually kind of love that.
Whaha magic prosthetic arms sound cool too. xD Oh, I don't know what the Stromlight archive is, but I'll check it out. William is actually the protagonist, but he has his morals a little twisted, and Corey means well, but is very naive. Whahahaha awful celestial girl band I love it and yes the girl band is manipulating William but not completely as they both want the same thing. So the main conflict is about William's obsession with Rachel and Ryan, when they travel to another realm, someone tries to murder his friends and William needs to find out who is it. The antagonist is the person who wants to kill Rachel Ryan. I understand that it's hard to know who to root for since both sides are wrong, but i think I'm team William until he goes yandere on others xD
Adorooooo❤❤❤❤ Muito bom!!!! Parabéns🥰😍 És uma artista espetacular! Acredito que para se fazer uma animação demora-se pelo menos 1 mês, dá trabalho e a tua arte deveria ser recompensada🤑💲💲💲🤑🤑🤑
@@bc3x_ alrighty, so basically my character live on a very religious world where they idolize “god’s left hand”, who are the 4 kids that appear on the mirrors on the confrontation animatic. In this world everyone must go trough a ritual on their left hand, something like a baptism (thats why all of them use an armor on their left hand) people who don’t do it are considered sinners and are condemned to death, but some of them manged to escape and survive. The protagonist on this animatic ( Corey) is a prince of one of the kingdoms and is against the death penalty so he helps those sinners surviving on a old chapel, but he ends up trusting the wrong person, William who made a deal with god’s left hand on the past and has the objective of killing all sinners. I hope this helps whahaha X3
Corey's mom: "COREY! what's William doing here?" Corey: "Oh...i invited him." Corey's mom: "ARE YOU INSANE?" Corey's mom: "He is going to get us all killed!" Corey: "Don't be so dramatic, William is a friend!" William 2 minutes and 45 seconds later: *STRAIGHT UP MURDERS ALLIE AND QUEEN LILLIAN.* Me: *"So Corey...WHAT was that about William being your friend buddy?"*
o just watched all ur oc animatics in a very odd order because now i’m invested in the lore but what the HELL. i thought william was a solid decent upstanding man ☹️☹️
yes i can x3 So, in the story I'm writing, people follow a religion that idolizes the left hand, they do something like a baptism when they're young, and they wear armor on their left arm, since someone who doesn't have a left hand or is missing a finger on it are considered sinners and are persecuted to death (there is a reason for all this, but I'm afraid it gets confusing xD). The animatic boy (Corey) ends up meeting some sinners hidden in an old chapel and introduces his friends to them, everyone begins to dream of freeing the sinners but Corey ends up trusting the wrong person, who kills everyone who lived in that chapel, in the end Corey's friends blame him for what happened and abandon him. I hope this helps x3
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Grreatt job! Love how I could tell what was going on with the story without even having context of your OCs and their world. Excellent work!
Aw that really mades me happy, thank you 💖
Oh my gosh I love it so much!!! Like tokyograpez said, you really clearly got across the story here and somehow made me completely invested in these characters in just 4 minutes. I'm curious about how the three characters we first meet are connected to each other; tired looking shopping list guy, hat girl, and Corey . It wasn't exactly clear whether they were friends, siblings, or partners, or some mix of the three? Obviously hat girl likes, well liked (so freaking sad) the girl who Corey introduced them to at the beginning, but if a poly relationship is involved than that doesn't really negate the possibility of her being in a relationship with the others? Seriously, this animatic is doing to my brain what teachers wish the deep meaningful videos they assign would do. Rhetorical analysis to the max!
Whaha ty I'm so glad you like it x3
So, the hat girl (sarah) and the shopping list guy (Richard) they are just friends, Sarah was engaged to Corey but they don't like each other that way and Richard was training to be his bodyguard. There are a poly couple but they didn't appear in this animatic whaha x3
Oh and yes Sarah liked that other girl (Allie) :3
Whaha its so good to see someone so interested on something i made ty once again. XD
@@whisk3rs_ Oooh, okay! To be honest I had thought for a second that there were a bunch of people walking around with magic prosthetic arms until I read one of your other comments, but I really like the idea of the armored and almost sacred left hand. Tangentially reminds me of The Stormlight Archive by Brandon Sanderson! I'm wondering, I can see that William is a sort of villain character, but that Corey is also not entirely blameless either. And then there are the god's left hands who seem like the awful celestial girl band of this world and are manipulating William? I guess I'm wondering, with all these morally grey or black people, is there one main antagonist and/or one main conflict to the story? It feels a little hard to tell exactly who to root for and who to definitely not to root for and I actually kind of love that.
Whaha magic prosthetic arms sound cool too. xD
Oh, I don't know what the Stromlight archive is, but I'll check it out.
William is actually the protagonist, but he has his morals a little twisted, and Corey means well, but is very naive.
Whahahaha awful celestial girl band I love it and yes the girl band is manipulating William but not completely as they both want the same thing.
So the main conflict is about William's obsession with Rachel and Ryan, when they travel to another realm, someone tries to murder his friends and William needs to find out who is it. The antagonist is the person who wants to kill Rachel Ryan.
I understand that it's hard to know who to root for since both sides are wrong, but i think I'm team William until he goes yandere on others xD
Okay this made me tear up a bit
Wonderful keep it up :000 🎉
Aw ty so much ☺️💖
Ooooh very pretty art!!
Ty 💕
Adorooooo❤❤❤❤ Muito bom!!!! Parabéns🥰😍 És uma artista espetacular! Acredito que para se fazer uma animação demora-se pelo menos 1 mês, dá trabalho e a tua arte deveria ser recompensada🤑💲💲💲🤑🤑🤑
Whaha obg, ter pessoas a assistir e gostar dos meus videos ja me deixa muito feliz 😉❤️
The storyline is amazing!
Im glad you like it :3
Great animatic as last time 😁
Thank you 😊
@@whisk3rs_ np, im still figuring out the lore, let me quess its complicated af lol
@@bc3x_ whahaha i can explain if you want x3
@@whisk3rs_ yes please
@@bc3x_ alrighty, so basically my character live on a very religious world where they idolize “god’s left hand”, who are the 4 kids that appear on the mirrors on the confrontation animatic. In this world everyone must go trough a ritual on their left hand, something like a baptism (thats why all of them use an armor on their left hand) people who don’t do it are considered sinners and are condemned to death, but some of them manged to escape and survive. The protagonist on this animatic ( Corey) is a prince of one of the kingdoms and is against the death penalty so he helps those sinners surviving on a old chapel, but he ends up trusting the wrong person, William who made a deal with god’s left hand on the past and has the objective of killing all sinners. I hope this helps whahaha X3
Corey's mom:
"COREY! what's William doing here?"
Corey:
"Oh...i invited him."
Corey's mom:
"ARE YOU INSANE?"
Corey's mom:
"He is going to get us all killed!"
Corey:
"Don't be so dramatic, William is a friend!"
William 2 minutes and 45 seconds later:
*STRAIGHT UP MURDERS ALLIE AND QUEEN LILLIAN.*
Me:
*"So Corey...WHAT was that about William being your friend buddy?"*
this is pretty!!!
Thank you 😊
Help! Someone just stuck me with a whole lot of hurt! *spits out blood* Someone call an ambulance!
Hold on! They are coming 😭🚑🚑🚑🚑🚑
@@whisk3rs_ XD
o just watched all ur oc animatics in a very odd order because now i’m invested in the lore but what the HELL. i thought william was a solid decent upstanding man ☹️☹️
Whaha nah, he is not a decent man
BEAUTY!!!! >:D
😊❤️
I am rather confused but incredibly intrigued can someone please explain what’s going on
yes i can x3
So, in the story I'm writing, people follow a religion that idolizes the left hand, they do something like a baptism when they're young, and they wear armor on their left arm, since someone who doesn't have a left hand or is missing a finger on it are considered sinners and are persecuted to death (there is a reason for all this, but I'm afraid it gets confusing xD). The animatic boy (Corey) ends up meeting some sinners hidden in an old chapel and introduces his friends to them, everyone begins to dream of freeing the sinners but Corey ends up trusting the wrong person, who kills everyone who lived in that chapel, in the end Corey's friends blame him for what happened and abandon him. I hope this helps x3
It's always mofos called William....
Can you please explain what happened at the end?