Just a quick little tip or whatever you want to call it. Try not to incidentally introduce your main character at 1:28 while your telling story/ giving context, leave the character introduction until the defining point in the film (the basketball sequence). Personally I would have had a longer pause of silence and a stronger shot of the main character before the film progresses into the action. Another quick thing is too much of something isn’t always a good thing (shorten the basketball scene or make the shots more engaging and make the audience feel progression not just a loop of the same thing). I hope this helps, these are just little continuity errors I picked up on and some ideas, your work was really inspiring and well planned :)
I agree with Leland on the beginning. And the basketball sequence could have been better. But this is amazing. The voice over is EVERYTHING THOUGH! I may use this for one of my short clips. Thank You! I am looking for ideas for my first clip.
This is great - especially loved the start... Would you mind telling me what the background music in the beginning is called? Cheers, keep up the good work :))
Abi adamın evinin önünde pota var. Biz basketbol oynamaya çıksak sabahın 7'sinde ki imkan yok olsa, 7'yi bırak 5'de basket oynamaya gider, 7'de eve döner 8'e kadar duş alıp hazırlanır, okula giderim. Okuldan dönünce de 2 saat daha basket oynar, ders çalışır ve yatardım. Her neyse, biz oynamaya çalışsak; 2 saat pota ara, pota buldun daha 2 dk. geçmeden çevredeki insanlar hemen top sesine kızmaya başlıyor. Zaten ülkede bu spora saygı yok birde sanki tüm insanlar sporcu olmamamız için çabalıyor gibi. Bizde basketçi olmak istiyoruz. Tek hayalim bu fakat hayal kırıklığına uğrayacak gibiyim. Elimizden geldiğince çabalıyoruz fakat böyle, bu videodaki gibi ibneler her zaman senden 1 adım önde oluyor...
I’m here in 2024 this was motivating og 😭
The opening was brilliant. The basketball sequence should have been better.
I agree. Do you think you could check mines out on my channel. Its called dedication as well. Been needing criticism and subs. Lol. Thanks
hate harder big nigga
great filming and editing
Good work I know you still out there wirking hard
Thanks for the dedication
Just a quick little tip or whatever you want to call it. Try not to incidentally introduce your main character at 1:28 while your telling story/ giving context, leave the character introduction until the defining point in the film (the basketball sequence). Personally I would have had a longer pause of silence and a stronger shot of the main character before the film progresses into the action. Another quick thing is too much of something isn’t always a good thing (shorten the basketball scene or make the shots more engaging and make the audience feel progression not just a loop of the same thing). I hope this helps, these are just little continuity errors I picked up on and some ideas, your work was really inspiring and well planned :)
Disclaimer: 1:45 min speech, 4++ min basketball scene lol
Nice Shots Man
nice bro. Respect.
🎉🎉
What's the background music at the start?
Im in the zone
❤️
I agree with Leland on the beginning. And the basketball sequence could have been better. But this is amazing. The voice over is EVERYTHING THOUGH! I may use this for one of my short clips. Thank You! I am looking for ideas for my first clip.
This is great - especially loved the start... Would you mind telling me what the background music in the beginning is called?
Cheers, keep up the good work :))
James Robertson I'm in the zone
Thats how you play ball
Thx man we lose but we never give up
2019??????
Dope....you have talent Gz word!
Love it
First doing workout and then game
Good job boys
i failed over and over again thats why i succeeded
-micheal jordan
I would have stayed out there all dam day lol, dope video doe
bro you got game
Wow this is AMAZING! I did something very similar to this on my channel. Funny thing is I named mines dedication aswell. You should check it out!
Abi adamın evinin önünde pota var. Biz basketbol oynamaya çıksak sabahın 7'sinde ki imkan yok olsa, 7'yi bırak 5'de basket oynamaya gider, 7'de eve döner 8'e kadar duş alıp hazırlanır, okula giderim. Okuldan dönünce de 2 saat daha basket oynar, ders çalışır ve yatardım. Her neyse, biz oynamaya çalışsak; 2 saat pota ara, pota buldun daha 2 dk. geçmeden çevredeki insanlar hemen top sesine kızmaya başlıyor. Zaten ülkede bu spora saygı yok birde sanki tüm insanlar sporcu olmamamız için çabalıyor gibi. Bizde basketçi olmak istiyoruz. Tek hayalim bu fakat hayal kırıklığına uğrayacak gibiyim. Elimizden geldiğince çabalıyoruz fakat böyle, bu videodaki gibi ibneler her zaman senden 1 adım önde oluyor...
Basketball Turkey kardeşim haklısın
Who watching this in 2020
The crossovers were too slow but the shots were on point
Can u give link backsound for this video
July 2nd 2019 boiis
4/21/2021
Bro good video but the narrator sounds like kendrick lamar
Who is the Narrator?
2:33 song name?
Ardacerenn Cerenarda In the zone
thanks
Koo
Kool
Give me my 5 minutes back
with all due respect....i got something for your 5 minutes
Incredible video man!!! Ur narration is amazing! Also I did something kind of like of this if you wanna check it out
Worst
kid ain't that good tho