I feel like this had too little references to Dantes Divine Comedy, except for the "My love is the kind that moves the Sun and Stars" and general references to Religion
what a truly remarkable society we live in, where i can watch two self insert protagonists of notoriously self indulgent fanfictions from completely different centuries go toe-to-toe in a rap battle of all things.
From someone who made a videogame about Dante - this wasn’t half bad! The matchup is *extremely* funny, the performances are good, and while I wish there were more references to the Divine Comedy, I think Dante was decently written here. I feel like the biggest miss is that Dante doesn’t really feel like the “divine lyricist”, his verses are “just” good. Which is perfectly reasonable for a rap battle with the funny My Immortal lady, bear in mind. This is a long-winded way to say that I liked this more than I thought I would, good job! Keep it up! :)
Yeah, to be fair, Dante's verses are really bogged down by how poor quality My Immortal actually is. There is so much to talk about, and so many bad aspects, it really means that there isn't really a good way to go from bar to bar without just giving up.
Nah, could've though. Basically if Ebony focused more on Dante writing a fanfic where everyone he hates gets sent to hell and got jerked off for it and other flaws, and Dante focused on the flaws of My Immortal in more depth, like the masticating scene.
One day I was listening to a rap battle and thought: "It would be cool if someone made one with Dante Alighieri! Surely nobody will, though" I was wrong.
Well here's the thing: Dante is...well...Dante. Ebony Darkness Dementia Raven Way...yea, she lost the match the second her name was read out. If that seems harsh or unfair, don't blame me, blame whoever thought to give the poor girl a name like that.
Ok, for the most part, I side with Dante by default (I never had anything to do with Harry Potter or its fanbase growing up), but "I *earned* a seat next to God..." I'm pretty sure Innocent III and Frederick II stopped bickering for a few seconds just to raise their brows at that kind of ego...and heresy.
Dante absolutely killed it. To be honest it wasn't a contest Dante's work has survived hundreds of years While My Immortal won't even last a generation. LOL
not gonna lie both went hard in the first rouund but the guy inthe 2nd was kinda underwhelming despite his versebeing longer; like how do you mess up that badly when going last, when you should have more weight because of that at first sight?
@@dylan8435 drive.google.com/file/d/1XERUQzvyjW1XgMUg0rx4gSNOXkAMP4sy/view?usp=drivesdk I’ll give you the link to the instrumental as the best I can do cuz the original beat was privatized
Yeah but somehow Ebony's disses were better and she won? Like Dante didn't do anything other than vaguely call My Immortal laughably bad but he could have even gone deeper into that too.
"You present yourself as a vampire right? Clever way to hide the fact you dont go outside" 😂😂😂😂, hilarious and amazing
The Self Indulgent Fanfiction of Modern Era vs The Self Indulgent Fanfiction of History
What a surprisingly fitting matchup.
The Greatest Fanfiction of Today vs The Greatest Fanfiction in History
@@AlkalineandAcid Nah Self indulgent makes more sense
"only dammed student on Hogwarts who can't spell" paused and went " OH SHIT THE BURN! "
I feel like this had too little references to Dantes Divine Comedy, except for the "My love is the kind that moves the Sun and Stars" and general references to Religion
what a truly remarkable society we live in, where i can watch two self insert protagonists of notoriously self indulgent fanfictions from completely different centuries go toe-to-toe in a rap battle of all things.
Dante historically engaged in "Tenzoni", which basically were the equivalent of rap battles at the time
Indeed 🙂↕️
From someone who made a videogame about Dante - this wasn’t half bad! The matchup is *extremely* funny, the performances are good, and while I wish there were more references to the Divine Comedy, I think Dante was decently written here. I feel like the biggest miss is that Dante doesn’t really feel like the “divine lyricist”, his verses are “just” good. Which is perfectly reasonable for a rap battle with the funny My Immortal lady, bear in mind.
This is a long-winded way to say that I liked this more than I thought I would, good job! Keep it up! :)
Yeah, to be fair, Dante's verses are really bogged down by how poor quality My Immortal actually is. There is so much to talk about, and so many bad aspects, it really means that there isn't really a good way to go from bar to bar without just giving up.
Il multiverso è un concetto di cui sappiamo spaventosamente poco
My Immortal unironically slapped this battle.
Also, as this is *Literary* Rap Battles...
Guy Montag (Fahrenheit 451) vs Rowan Damisch (Arc of a Scythe)
Nah, could've though. Basically if Ebony focused more on Dante writing a fanfic where everyone he hates gets sent to hell and got jerked off for it and other flaws, and Dante focused on the flaws of My Immortal in more depth, like the masticating scene.
No
One day I was listening to a rap battle and thought: "It would be cool if someone made one with Dante Alighieri! Surely nobody will, though"
I was wrong.
Ebony kinda dragged his ass, her flow was insane. I also love how you guys worked her constant outfit descriptions into the battle
And her strange euphemisms
No
Pretty good! I'm surprised this has so little views, I'd definitely expect more!
They bolth cooled but i like the dudes accent. I think he won
This made me cackle with glee. "If you want to do you-know-what..." destroyed me.
Dante clearly won
You, Taiga, WAFox and everyone are doing awesome.
Ah, this will look good on my art resume! 😊
Wild so many people thought Dante won, I thought Ebony absolutely wrecked him.
Great vid!
Well here's the thing: Dante is...well...Dante.
Ebony Darkness Dementia Raven Way...yea, she lost the match the second her name was read out. If that seems harsh or unfair, don't blame me, blame whoever thought to give the poor girl a name like that.
0:33 yap
This is cool!!
this is the oddest thing i expected to like today, haha
one man diddy party
Very cool ❤❤
My Immortal really DRAGGED him. She took this battle so well.
Dante won this, hands down!
Nice!
Dante is legit one of the greatest writers of all time, its unfortunate Purgatorio and Paradiso arent as well known as Inferno
the creature of frankenstein vs AM
As an italian, i approve (but the accent is atrocius lmao)
Pretty good job, liked it.
You don't know how old I feel right now
I ought to say, WeThink did a pretty good job at rapping!
Dante went crazy hard.
Ok, for the most part, I side with Dante by default (I never had anything to do with Harry Potter or its fanbase growing up), but "I *earned* a seat next to God..."
I'm pretty sure Innocent III and Frederick II stopped bickering for a few seconds just to raise their brows at that kind of ego...and heresy.
Pllz do the neighbor from Hello neighbor vs William Afton from FNAF
Dante absolutely killed it. To be honest it wasn't a contest Dante's work has survived hundreds of years While My Immortal won't even last a generation. LOL
I love and hate this at the same time.
not gonna lie both went hard in the first rouund but the guy inthe 2nd was kinda underwhelming despite his versebeing longer; like how do you mess up that badly when going last, when you should have more weight because of that at first sight?
Pretty good but some parts felt off beat, 6/10, cant wait to watch another
loved this. Who's the guy in blue coat that shows up for Dante?
That’s Virgil
Beat name?
@@dylan8435 drive.google.com/file/d/1XERUQzvyjW1XgMUg0rx4gSNOXkAMP4sy/view?usp=drivesdk
I’ll give you the link to the instrumental as the best I can do cuz the original beat was privatized
@@wethinkcompany9124 you know what? This beat has a "strong leader" type of vibe like a rap Battle of leaders
Damn dante destroyed her
Not very balanced battle with Dante's Inferno being iconic.
Yeah but somehow Ebony's disses were better and she won? Like Dante didn't do anything other than vaguely call My Immortal laughably bad but he could have even gone deeper into that too.
This existing is a disgrace to Alighieri.
My offer for next one:
- Ashlyn from "School Bus Graveyard" VS Nick Burckhardt from "Grimm"
Also:
- Ancestor from "Darkest Dungeon" VS Jimmy from "Mouthwashing"
Two guys that messed up everything, time and time again.