This story is so convoluted and incomplete that it is a total waste of time. No ending, repeated parts, ridiculous episodes, and inane pronunciations. The story needs a part two. Something to tie all the former stupid sentences together.
lots of holes in the stories. How does homeless suddenly become an heir overnight? Too many things in this story is unbelievable and seems to be added in last minute
This story has been very poorly written jumping all over the place and the important details really lacking and useless details abundant and the guy is weirdly stupid.
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Wow. This is an incomplete story. So many loose ends. Where is the endings to all the loose ends.
Abrupt ending with no closure
This story is so convoluted and incomplete that it is a total waste of time.
No ending, repeated parts, ridiculous episodes, and inane pronunciations.
The story needs a part two. Something to tie all the former stupid sentences together.
This story needs part two.
I'm sorry, but to me this story had no ending and was just one sad incident after another.
I hate these. Like a snuff movie.
I feel like it was a convoluted clusterfuck and a huge waste of time.
does anyone proof and edit these stories so many repeats
I thought the story had great potential and was very gripping but it needed rounding out to tie up all the loose ends.
What happened to Natasha? Who was her mother? More importantly, why didn’t Riodorn Raskolnikov ever show up?
When's part 2???
lots of holes in the stories. How does homeless suddenly become an heir overnight? Too many things in this story is unbelievable and seems to be added in last minute
Wtf was that? Just stopped mid way with dozens of glaring plot holes and incorrect term used everywhere.
Waste of time. The philosophical rambling at the end makes no sense.
Did joe biden write this? Because it makes no sense.
Donald Trump whispered the story in to Bidens ear, so go figure...
Way too much unseeded BS that does nothing for the story
This story has been very poorly written jumping all over the place and the important details really lacking and useless details abundant and the guy is weirdly stupid.
This writer has no talent. Stupid story line with lousy writing = total waste of readers time.
Needs a part 2. To find out what ever happened to him 😮
Man, every time you hear characters with russian names, you know the story will be far-fetched, long-winded nonsense.
Great story more please
story sucks ! no ending