Well, both had already been written and were pretty far into production… I didn’t actually make this entire thing start to finish in 3 days, I’m not that fast 😂
@@paramount3603 once a story has been adapted so many times, there’s nothing new you can bring to it. I try to avoid super popular stories and instead focus on more unique ideas.
You know, this sounds a lot like Ballahoo Manor, only much more horrific. Way to bring in the bloody axe! Just think how Spencer would've reacted if he had seen the ghosts for himself... Oh, dear Lord, the bloopers at the end! 😆
I am dare to say that this is even worst than the case of "Ballohoo Manor" where only two persons died. While Boxford Loop Incident wasn't an incident but a massacre. It really sent me chills when I heard Edward's Story, feelin' even bad for thoses who perish in such massacre Besides from that, you did an amazing job!
Well, two people that we know of. It is mentioned that engines who took trains to the manor often saw terrible things, and that one such case was where the soldier killed a nurse and himself.
This feels like a Great Waterton retell of Horror at Ballahoo Manor. The screams of a woman running from a mentally deranged man that kills her. It gets your head spinning. It could almost be a sequel to Mike’s story (theburiedtruck) The Tender. All the more reason to love it.🎃👹
This is a great story. I see you got inspiration from Shunter Productions' Ballohoo Manor. But made it your own. I like the narration done by 84F Studios. He did a wonderful job here on narrating here. Overall a great story for Halloween. Well done here. Have a Happy Halloween!
Now it explain why in Hero of the Rails the Duke and Duchess wanted a new summer house,they left there old summer house alone,leaving the souls that died on that night to continue to repet there fait over and over.
This is one of the best ghost stories from the TTTE community and the first one to feature ax murders! And I'm impressed that you chose such a bold backstory for your first ghost story! This story and 10 O'Claw are the best ghost stories that I've watched this year. I'm excited to see more of your content.
I love to see stories featuring Nevil, mostly because he has such a unique design and was so underutilized. I love how you gave a backstory to the Boxford estate, even though it is dark. But I do have one nit-pick, not about the story. the Boxford junction branches of to the left, not the right. you can see this in Edward the Great.
Maintenance Trains be like Victor Tanzig: Boring Carson08022: I sleep Rhen Prod: BIG RESPONSIBILITY Jokes aside, this was a pretty good story! Looking forward to more.
dang, that was a very spooky story i've listen to for halloween this year from sudrian stories of hell, this was also a great inspiration on one of DGB12's stories of Ballahoo Manor, which that is also very cool as a reference. anyway's nice job on your Sudrian Stories From Hell for halloween 2022 dude, and Happy Halloween. 🎃
The artwork is great - the sunset and fog effects in particular. And it was good to see a Robinson 'Immingham' class engine in the early Sodor days. Must admit though, the story is much darker than any other Sodor story I've seen.
What they should have done is that after the boxford’s sold the mansion They should have ripped up the track connecting the loop with the main line to make sure it stays untouched for the rest of time
Geez, this reminds me of the Villisca axe murders. I don't think ANYONE would wanna purchase that house, now that it was the scene of a grisly massacre. Why would that axe-wielding maniac do such a thing? Was he mentally unstable or did he have a grudge against the homeowners?!
Your guess is as good as mine William My guess is that he was mentally unstable But I do agree with you. Why would anyone want to be the owner of a house that had a number of people murdered?!
Because he's the oldest mainline engine in service. When you've been around for 120 or so years, you're bound to seen a whole lot of shit over the decades.
That was shocking when I saw this story, but it was brilliant. To be honest, you should have had Boxford's Duke and Duchess contact the Sodor Ghost Hunters, who along with psychic mediums and a priest, to investigate, on film using night-vision cameras, EVPs, and thermostats, to investigate the Boxford Mansion and then perform a path-crossing ritual to let the victim ghosts move on and then release the good within the killer and then have him move on ending the haunting permanently. Then Boxford Mansion will be in use once more. If could release "Boxford Loop (alternative ending) || Sudrian Stories From Hell #4" with this very paranormal investigation and path-crossing ritual, that would be great.
If we are to assume the engine that used to pull trains there was Afton… wild idea here but maybe HE may have more insight into who that man was and his twisted motives… one doesn’t start cutting apart people with an axe for no reason after all..
I think this one is the best out of the series So far. It's got Balahoo Manor energy, but with some interesting takes ad liberties to set it apart! NGL the Screams really got me lmao. Great work man! Absolutely love the content that this fandom brings at this time of year! and yours is at the top of the list!!
Sodor may as well be the word Capital in terms of supernatural events. Neville at the center of a story was nice. He doesn't get a lot of spotlight, it's a nice change when he does.
I love the fact that you left that little script blooper in at the end of the video for those that watch past the end credits for a final jumpscare or something. It was hilarious. XD
I really enjoyed the setup and the building tension in this story, but... And this might just be me: does anyone else feel like it's kinda hard to sell the human models as being scary? Idk, I don't see people ever having issues with it but I feel like the show played to its strengths when they used the human models for gags and rarely used them for spooks. Old Bailey's silhouette is the one exception that comes to mind, which subdued the somewhat goofy look of models in the series. Might just be me. But overall I still enjoyed a lot of the story. Recontextualizing the Boxford Loop into a creepy disused line worked perfectly. My favorite part though was the remark that Neville considered going on strike, really nice way to beef up his character with some personality.
Hmm, it's a shame the ghosts weren't given a way to find peace. They'll just keep repeating that night like they have for years, and will do so for eternity.
It’s great story with Neville. I mean of course you took some Inspiration from Shunter Productions. But that’s totally fine. This fandom exists to inspire people. Nice work!
I get up early to sing this little song: Run rabbit run rabbit run run run Bang bang bang bang goes the farmer's gun run rabbit run rabbit run run run He'll get by without his rabbit pie so run rabbit run rabbit run run
This Story is very interesting i wanted to know what was the purpose for that man to committed a massacre crime for his actions was it because of the business that he was his poor and broke? Or was it because of that he saw many rich people but fot him he doesn't? Theres a lot of them to make theories on why the Boxford loop was having some supernatural encounters. The theory: for this Axe 🪓 man he was sick and tired of his struggle life being a job he wasn't taken care off he even have a rough life as a child grown to adult than he saw tons of rich people having there best life of there own that made him mad and rage took over him that night he carried a axe went to the Boxford Mansion and kill the party guest one by one till he took his own life but of this world he was living.
Awesome story. The only thing I noticed (and this isn’t a critique of you specifically, more or less T&F ghost stories as a whole) it feels like it’s always Edward telling the backstories. I get it though, he’s old enough to have known what happened but its beginning to feel a little, overused? Idk besides that, still a great story and nice usage of Neville.
@@jamesthomas5109Although I'm aware that the flashback is black and white, that engine's livery doesn't look like it has LNWR on it. Almost as if he's wearing a British Railways livery.
No wonder Hero Of The Rails had the Duke And Duchess Of Boxford getting a new summer house. This story explains the subplot of that movie.
Imagine if hiro & Spencer knew about The history Of boxford LOOP,
I am so impressed with how fast you make these, you asked like 3 days what character we wanted a story with
Well, both had already been written and were pretty far into production… I didn’t actually make this entire thing start to finish in 3 days, I’m not that fast 😂
@@RhenProd Rheneas what if sir topham hatt had an encounter like a ghost engine or the ghost of his grand father
@@RhenProd i also wanna see your own version of the tale of the bad engine
@@paramount3603 once a story has been adapted so many times, there’s nothing new you can bring to it. I try to avoid super popular stories and instead focus on more unique ideas.
@@RhenProd what about said about sir topham hate having an encounter like a ghost engine or his grand father sir Charles
You know, this sounds a lot like Ballahoo Manor, only much more horrific. Way to bring in the bloody axe!
Just think how Spencer would've reacted if he had seen the ghosts for himself...
Oh, dear Lord, the bloopers at the end! 😆
Dennis didn't mock him. After his experience with a certain other Diesel he knew exactly what Nevelle went through.
Yeah I guess that true
Continuity’s
RIP Norman!
Good move Dennis
I am dare to say that this is even worst than the case of "Ballohoo Manor" where only two persons died.
While Boxford Loop Incident wasn't an incident but a massacre.
It really sent me chills when I heard Edward's Story, feelin' even bad for thoses who perish in such massacre
Besides from that, you did an amazing job!
Well, two people that we know of. It is mentioned that engines who took trains to the manor often saw terrible things, and that one such case was where the soldier killed a nurse and himself.
@@jlaws8740 I completly forgot about it, but I think those were Soldiers suffering from Shellshock. Right?
@@hanz_mannerich1645 Yup.
This feels like a Great Waterton retell of Horror at Ballahoo Manor. The screams of a woman running from a mentally deranged man that kills her. It gets your head spinning. It could almost be a sequel to Mike’s story (theburiedtruck) The Tender. All the more reason to love it.🎃👹
I guess you could also say this is a darker version of Derek and the Manor. Lovely stuff.
This is a great story. I see you got inspiration from Shunter Productions' Ballohoo Manor. But made it your own.
I like the narration done by 84F Studios. He did a wonderful job here on narrating here.
Overall a great story for Halloween. Well done here. Have a Happy Halloween!
the duke and duchess boxford's house looks exactly like in hero of the rails great job of making it look like model era style
Now it explain why in Hero of the Rails the Duke and Duchess wanted a new summer house,they left there old summer house alone,leaving the souls that died on that night to continue to repet there fait over and over.
"It's a beautiful and picturesque location in the summer months secluded in the woods with animals frocking freely in the sunshine"
😂
And???
This is one of the best ghost stories from the TTTE community and the first one to feature ax murders! And I'm impressed that you chose such a bold backstory for your first ghost story! This story and 10 O'Claw are the best ghost stories that I've watched this year. I'm excited to see more of your content.
I Like Ghost Stories Thay Are Awesome Thomas And Friends Is Amazing And I Like The Halloween Episodes
I love to see stories featuring Nevil, mostly because he has such a unique design and was so underutilized. I love how you gave a backstory to the Boxford estate, even though it is dark. But I do have one nit-pick, not about the story. the Boxford junction branches of to the left, not the right. you can see this in Edward the Great.
This is actually the Si3D map of Sodor, specifically their last one. Hence why Kellsthorpe Road is seen here.
Maintenance Trains be like
Victor Tanzig: Boring
Carson08022: I sleep
Rhen Prod: BIG RESPONSIBILITY
Jokes aside, this was a pretty good story! Looking forward to more.
I like Maintenance trains
I've noticed that during Neville's close ups at the harbour, his siderods continuously change position even though he's not moving.
lovely neville story, always happy to see one with him as the star
dang, that was a very spooky story i've listen to for halloween this year from sudrian stories of hell, this was also a great inspiration on one of DGB12's stories of Ballahoo Manor, which that is also very cool as a reference. anyway's nice job on your Sudrian Stories From Hell for halloween 2022 dude, and Happy Halloween. 🎃
wasnt it shunter productions?
Looks like the Duke and Duchess will have to find a new summer house.
Love your miniseries Rhen. Excited to see this one this evening. 🎃🎃🎃
You know that Neville is my favorite T&F character and a good Neville episode is a good one for me. 😊
I cant wait to watch more stories
I really enjoyed watching your horror stories for this year, Boxford loop and 10 o'claw were my two favourites out of the four. Happy halloween🎃🎃🦇🦇
Neville is such a underrated character!
This was truly a chilling end off to an amazing Halloween series that I've loved watching! Thank you for this incredible series
Love how norman is just like, "ah well that figures" when sir tophat has a crew ready by tomorrow
The artwork is great - the sunset and fog effects in particular. And it was good to see a Robinson 'Immingham' class engine in the early Sodor days. Must admit though, the story is much darker than any other Sodor story I've seen.
What they should have done is that after the boxford’s sold the mansion
They should have ripped up the track connecting the loop with the main line to make sure it stays untouched for the rest of time
When are you goin to make another Sodor Supernatural about Sheffield and the encounter with Neil. Maybe there is an answer about Toby's disappearance.
yeah i want to know too i want that guard to face justice for what he did to Bert and Atlas
What’s the name of the music that started at 0:32
@@InfinityRed520 the guard has been already dead because Atlas hit him when he was still inside the break van.
12:40 Love this soundtrack, Kevin Macload I think. Fits the video very well, Happy Halloween and best wishes. 👌
Geez, this reminds me of the Villisca axe murders. I don't think ANYONE would wanna purchase that house, now that it was the scene of a grisly massacre.
Why would that axe-wielding maniac do such a thing? Was he mentally unstable or did he have a grudge against the homeowners?!
Your guess is as good as mine William
My guess is that he was mentally unstable
But I do agree with you.
Why would anyone want to be the owner of a house that had a number of people murdered?!
True it's nice to see one of the tvs les ues characters get a storie good work mate
Why is it that every time Edward is in ghost story, He is always connected to the accidents.
In my theory; it’s cause he’s been around for a while! Maybe he’s encountered some of these ghosts
Because he's the oldest mainline engine in service. When you've been around for 120 or so years, you're bound to seen a whole lot of shit over the decades.
Nicely done. The boxford loop should have stayed untouched.
That was shocking when I saw this story, but it was brilliant. To be honest, you should have had Boxford's Duke and Duchess contact the Sodor Ghost Hunters, who along with psychic mediums and a priest, to investigate, on film using night-vision cameras, EVPs, and thermostats, to investigate the Boxford Mansion and then perform a path-crossing ritual to let the victim ghosts move on and then release the good within the killer and then have him move on ending the haunting permanently. Then Boxford Mansion will be in use once more. If could release "Boxford Loop (alternative ending) || Sudrian Stories From Hell #4" with this very paranormal investigation and path-crossing ritual, that would be great.
Or may as well get the Ghostbusters involved too
I’ll see if I could put that together using my LEGO mini figures and my track master engines although I don’t have Neville
No it’s the end!! This was such a amazing series!! Please do make more like sodor supernatural, this series was amazing!
I’m loving these horror stories on here and would love to more
I always wonder how diesel 10 would behave during moments the the one in this senario
If we are to assume the engine that used to pull trains there was Afton… wild idea here but maybe HE may have more insight into who that man was and his twisted motives… one doesn’t start cutting apart people with an axe for no reason after all..
I think this one is the best out of the series So far. It's got Balahoo Manor energy, but with some interesting takes ad liberties to set it apart! NGL the Screams really got me lmao. Great work man! Absolutely love the content that this fandom brings at this time of year! and yours is at the top of the list!!
Sodor may as well be the word Capital in terms of supernatural events. Neville at the center of a story was nice. He doesn't get a lot of spotlight, it's a nice change when he does.
@84fstudios6 I thought I recognized your voice. You did the voices for Blue snowplow's 'Railspin Splitspace'. I can hear Hawin's voice in this story.
I love the fact that you left that little script blooper in at the end of the video for those that watch past the end credits for a final jumpscare or something. It was hilarious. XD
13:34, the most scariest scene
A Ghostly Murder Story, sounds HORRIFIC!!! 😱😨😱
“Chomash”
I really enjoyed the setup and the building tension in this story, but... And this might just be me: does anyone else feel like it's kinda hard to sell the human models as being scary?
Idk, I don't see people ever having issues with it but I feel like the show played to its strengths when they used the human models for gags and rarely used them for spooks. Old Bailey's silhouette is the one exception that comes to mind, which subdued the somewhat goofy look of models in the series.
Might just be me. But overall I still enjoyed a lot of the story. Recontextualizing the Boxford Loop into a creepy disused line worked perfectly. My favorite part though was the remark that Neville considered going on strike, really nice way to beef up his character with some personality.
Hmm, it's a shame the ghosts weren't given a way to find peace.
They'll just keep repeating that night like they have for years, and will do so for eternity.
I’ve always like nevel. He is a unique engine
Same. The Q1 in general is unique as well, being very reliable despite it coming off as "ugly" or "simple" to some people
@@Gearz-365(Was surprised that Gear's from Garry's Mod or from The NEW Zany Gmod is here) Surprised to see you here
It’s great story with Neville. I mean of course you took some Inspiration from Shunter Productions. But that’s totally fine. This fandom exists to inspire people. Nice work!
I was expecting someone to just burn the boxford down because…fire can kill ghosts
That was dark and scary, but I enjoyed the story.
what a story
Amazing job on this!
I get up early to sing this little song:
Run rabbit run rabbit run run run
Bang bang bang bang goes the farmer's gun
run rabbit run rabbit run run run
He'll get by without his rabbit pie
so run rabbit run rabbit run run
I think neville is a important character
Well done!
This Story is very interesting i wanted to know what was the purpose for that man to committed a massacre crime for his actions was it because of the business that he was his poor and broke? Or was it because of that he saw many rich people but fot him he doesn't?
Theres a lot of them to make theories on why the Boxford loop was having some supernatural encounters.
The theory: for this Axe 🪓 man he was sick and tired of his struggle life being a job he wasn't taken care off he even have a rough life as a child grown to adult than he saw tons of rich people having there best life of there own that made him mad and rage took over him that night he carried a axe went to the Boxford Mansion and kill the party guest one by one till he took his own life but of this world he was living.
reminds me of the story Horror at Ballahoo Manor
Awesome story. The only thing I noticed (and this isn’t a critique of you specifically, more or less T&F ghost stories as a whole) it feels like it’s always Edward telling the backstories. I get it though, he’s old enough to have known what happened but its beginning to feel a little, overused? Idk besides that, still a great story and nice usage of Neville.
12:52 Was that one of the original North Western engines who got kicked off the railway for their bad behaviour?
I think that was one of Afton's brothers.
@@timothyreid8944 Could be, I'm not sure.
@@jamesthomas5109Although I'm aware that the flashback is black and white, that engine's livery doesn't look like it has LNWR on it. Almost as if he's wearing a British Railways livery.
@@timothyreid8944I actually think it’s Crovan
Because it’s got the same shape as him
Happy Halloween
you saved the best for last
Have a great Halloween 🎃
Good luck Neville
Poor Neville
Good story
If you're taking suggestions, would it be okay if I could make one
Nice video
Do this take place during Hero of The Rails, or before the movie?
@@jimmymccartney2049 well I’m just saying.
16:32 funniest scene of this story
Best scene
9:56 anyone know the soundtrack ?
Spencer's model looks like it has some real bad wheelslip. Any idea why?
It's a glitch in Trainz apparently.
Will Spencer still come to sodor every summer?
If you have a discord I would be honored to write a story with you :) a scary story!!
Woody And Buzz And Erika And Annabelle And Bagheera And Baloo And Duck And Skoda And GMC And Tofas And Mazda And Lady
Not a bad story, but it feels to similar to Ballahoo Manor by Shunterproductions.
Poor men 😢😢 😭😢😭
14:35-15:43
What is your favorite season of thomas
10:31
Why is the narrator's voice look similar as Lazy Masquerade
Hi
Second
Nice job. second means you're edward
First