I'm using this as an exemplar informative speech for my oral communications class in our discussion board, prior to our presentations, and I just wanted to say that you did such an incredible job with your presentation! I love how the Kesha joke becomes a main thread that you use to structure the speech, and find it so impressive that you opened on a hook and finished on a hook that both carried with it the love/drug dichotomy! Paige, you did such a fantastic job! Thank you for showing us what an informative speech is supposed to look like! I see that this was posted 7 years ago, and I bet your skills as an orator have come in handy in your professional life! You go GIRL!
@@Rose2gard dude, the assignment was to find an exemplar on youtube and critique it... Why you gotta be like that when you dont know what youre talking about?
As a middle school Forensics coach in Fresno - who was randomly suggested this video due to all the event examples I've looked up to show my students - I was a little shocked at the coincidence of you mentioning professors at Fresno State. Small world. Sadly, not a video I can show my middle schoolers considering the topic. That said, great job! I enjoy the humor you were able to add without turning it into the comedy routine which this topic often devolves into.
@@PunmasterSTP Well, this was our third year, still small (and the only FUSD middle school competing against other local school districts), but my students placed at every single one of our MS tournaments, and one of my students got 5th at State in POI. There was a lot of behind the scenes... kerfuffle... which prevented us from going to Nationals, but fingers crossed for next year. Thanks for asking!
@@j.rileyindependentproductions I'm really glad to hear that! I did speech for my last two years in high school in another state, so I'm not sure how things work in California, but I hope your team keeps growing 👍
I love the last line! Perfect ending to the speech! I find myself watching these in prep of upcoming speeches and love to see how others carry themselves amidst the moment.
Paige, I really enjoyed your speech on falling in love. I like that you gave a clear preview of your main points in the introduction. I really enjoy how you demonstrated nonverbal communication to adapt with your audience. You did a great job with organization and engaging the audience. One thing you might consider improving in your speech is to use more evidence to support your thesis. One way to do this would be to provide the sources or websites you used for your speech. You used much evidence but did not provide it here. Overall, I thought this was a very good attempt at public speaking. Using the Public Speaking Competence Rubric for Speeches, I have given your speech a proficiency rating ‘advanced’. Thank you for sharing your speech. -Brittany
Brittany Sowers-Page hey Brittany I was reading your comment, and I saw that you mentioned to provide sources or websites and I actually am trying to do an informative speech but I need help with doing that? Like how do you provide the source in your speech?
Hey! I stumbled across this video looking for a sample to use in my song, is it ok if i use a snippet of this clip for it? You will be credited as well!
hi, i love your speech.. I'm in communication class at kirkwood communtiy college and we're doing evaluations on informative speeches and i would love to use your video for my evaluation speech. :D
what was the doctors name? can i get it please. i need a quote from a doctor for my speech next week. i have the same topic as you hahaha btw. i love your speech
Hey Paige, I wanted to sample this video for an instrumental I'm making. I want to get your permission to use just the audio in this video before I release it, please let me know if this is cool with you. Thanks! -Joe
nailsbypaige hey Paige omg I love this speech actually my teacher sent it to me to do a peer review on it and you actually caught my attention great job! I was actually wondering if you have the outline for this I have to do my speech on immigration and I’m having some sort of trouble
that is not what love is.. it is not fun or light hearted, love is staying with your significant other, through the marriage of one man and one women, even when it doesn't feel fun, enjoyable, even when it's hard, and tedious. your definition of love is so shallow. Love is caring for your partner and taking care of their needs even when you don't feel like it. love is not just having sex and having fun with your partner, that doesn't even come close to what love is.
I'm using this as an exemplar informative speech for my oral communications class in our discussion board, prior to our presentations, and I just wanted to say that you did such an incredible job with your presentation! I love how the Kesha joke becomes a main thread that you use to structure the speech, and find it so impressive that you opened on a hook and finished on a hook that both carried with it the love/drug dichotomy! Paige, you did such a fantastic job! Thank you for showing us what an informative speech is supposed to look like!
I see that this was posted 7 years ago, and I bet your skills as an orator have come in handy in your professional life! You go GIRL!
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@@Rose2gard dude, the assignment was to find an exemplar on youtube and critique it... Why you gotta be like that when you dont know what youre talking about?
Got an A on the critique by the way, and my informative speech was making a salad; I got a B+ on that. Thanks for not asking, ya jerk :(
@@kagamer21 Congrats on getting an A and a B+, and I hope the rest of the class went well 👍
Great job! I show this speech to my basic public speaking classes every semester as a good example of an informative speech.
Awesome!!! You just gave me the confidence I need for Comm 1000. Love it! You were calm, clear, concise, thorough, and most importantly, informative!
Hey how'd Comm 1000 go?
She is so calm and collected.
As a middle school Forensics coach in Fresno - who was randomly suggested this video due to all the event examples I've looked up to show my students - I was a little shocked at the coincidence of you mentioning professors at Fresno State. Small world. Sadly, not a video I can show my middle schoolers considering the topic. That said, great job! I enjoy the humor you were able to add without turning it into the comedy routine which this topic often devolves into.
How's your team in Fresno doing?
@@PunmasterSTP Well, this was our third year, still small (and the only FUSD middle school competing against other local school districts), but my students placed at every single one of our MS tournaments, and one of my students got 5th at State in POI. There was a lot of behind the scenes... kerfuffle... which prevented us from going to Nationals, but fingers crossed for next year. Thanks for asking!
@@j.rileyindependentproductions I'm really glad to hear that! I did speech for my last two years in high school in another state, so I'm not sure how things work in California, but I hope your team keeps growing 👍
I just watched your other speech and this one. You look more relaxed and confident this time. Im so proud of you!
I love the last line! Perfect ending to the speech! I find myself watching these in prep of upcoming speeches and love to see how others carry themselves amidst the moment.
Her: According to Dr. Stever Stosny, everyone here is designed to crave love and affection.
*Asexual Aromantics have left the chat*
This is by far my favorite speeches so far. You really did a great job at catching my attention. Thanks for posting this!
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can i get the script? outline?
Paige, you did a great job on the informative speech. I give it an A.
i really like this speech.
Who is that doctor at november 2006 that says we often confuse love and lust?? I didn't heard it cause someone coughed. Sorry.
Paige,
I really enjoyed your speech on falling in love. I like that you gave a clear preview of your main points in the introduction. I really enjoy how you demonstrated nonverbal communication to adapt with your audience. You did a great job with organization and engaging the audience.
One thing you might consider improving in your speech is to use more evidence to support your thesis. One way to do this would be to provide the sources or websites you used for your speech. You used much evidence but did not provide it here.
Overall, I thought this was a very good attempt at public speaking. Using the Public Speaking Competence Rubric for Speeches, I have given your speech a proficiency rating ‘advanced’. Thank you for sharing your speech.
-Brittany
Brittany Sowers-Page hey Brittany I was reading your comment, and I saw that you mentioned to provide sources or websites and I actually am trying to do an informative speech but I need help with doing that? Like how do you provide the source in your speech?
@@katherina3943 Check out my informative speech ruclips.net/video/JIe7yNoFn-k/видео.html
Maybe this will help.
Blessings to you, in Jesus name.
Brittany Sowers-Page thank you so much! Blessings to you!!
Very awesome video thanks for sharing this, wow I'm learning a lot
Hey! I stumbled across this video looking for a sample to use in my song, is it ok if i use a snippet of this clip for it? You will be credited as well!
I stumbled across her math trail video and then found this one and was blown away at the number of views. Both were really cool 👍
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Don't hurt me, no more.
Can you send me the Speech you made? it's really awesome
I loved watching your speech!
Omg this girl should do advertising like her voice sounds great.
Amazing!
My lecturer brought me here kdksk
hi, i love your speech.. I'm in communication class at kirkwood communtiy college and we're doing evaluations on informative speeches and i would love to use your video for my evaluation speech. :D
+Raivyn Turner thank you so much! Good luck with your speech!
Out of curiosity, how'd the rest of your communication class go?
can you email me the outline of this speech?
Really enjoyed this speech! mine if i use it to evaluate it for a class? Because i liked it.
Out of curiosity, did you end up using it, and if so, for what class?
Your speech is very nice can you email the outline of your speech?
I really enjoyed the speech. That guy couldn't hold in his cough?? how excessive
Her pants make my eyes hurt, but good speech
how r u not nervous like i wish i had a good speaking voice :(((((
you should email me your outline of this speech
you should email me your outline of your apology you gave your school dean after being kicked out
@@DontFuckWitDreDay loool! More specifically, kicked out for plagiarism and a bad attitude. This woman sounded so blunt and rude
@@p_eabean how was that even rude?
Well done!
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Loved your personality and performance😍👌🏼
are you online rn!
Excellent!
what was the doctors name? can i get it please. i need a quote from a doctor for my speech next week. i have the same topic as you hahaha btw. i love your speech
Hey Paige, I wanted to sample this video for an instrumental I'm making. I want to get your permission to use just the audio in this video before I release it, please let me know if this is cool with you. Thanks!
-Joe
premoman12 yes of course! Can you send it to me once you do?
nailsbypaige hey Paige omg I love this speech actually my teacher sent it to me to do a peer review on it and you actually caught my attention great job! I was actually wondering if you have the outline for this I have to do my speech on immigration and I’m having some sort of trouble
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She is beautiful
Why are her dogs out
Jesus loves you!!!
this video is 20% coughing
Damn good speech!
not bad
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Falling in Love will make me wanna do drugs
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that is not what love is.. it is not fun or light hearted, love is staying with your significant other, through the marriage of one man and one women, even when it doesn't feel fun, enjoyable, even when it's hard, and tedious. your definition of love is so shallow. Love is caring for your partner and taking care of their needs even when you don't feel like it. love is not just having sex and having fun with your partner, that doesn't even come close to what love is.
She's fine
hey fresnooo!! go dogs
"everyone here experiences love"
*laughs in asexual*
i feel like she smells weird
This speech was chemicalwesome! 👍🧪