(Correction 91) How do you draw illustrations that people can relate to?

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[@fire-bunny]

伝えたいことをいくつも詰め込むんじゃなくて、一番伝えたい事を一つに絞って、それを中心に絵を構成することが大事だという事がよくわかりました。

[@haka4979]

服の形がすごく綺麗

[@kk-om4yb]

9:28
高貴なおき様

[@akatsuki0o0Megu122]

この回でさいとうなおき先生知ったから再放送嬉しい

[@リュウ-o6e]

添削前の髪が炎の状態の女の子、
作者の方の中では髪が炎の理由や、ストーリーのバックボーンがありそうだけど、それを一枚の絵で見た人に伝えるのは凄く難しそう🤔
もしこれがシリーズモノのイラストで、そういうキャラクター性の背景が垣間見えたなら、キャラとして成り立ちそうではあるけど(*⁰▿⁰*)

[@義中野]

描きたい題材があったときにパッと思いつくイメージが共感の元になるんじゃないかと、俳句でいう季語みたいな
服が秋物なのは伝わりやすかった、女の子より手前の花（ツツジ？）は春の印象がつよいかな

[@肉ラスケイジ]

水平、垂直で構成された立体感の少ない平面的な構図がかえって「街並みまで絵のキャンバス感」を引き出していて、
花の演出がとても効果的に映えててとても華やかで可愛い印象を受けました。
大型アウトレットモールの広告デザインに使えそう！！

[@rainya_nira]

添削前の構図がそもそも上手いなぁ
すごい

[@nantekotta_pandaotta]

人の顔とか体は添削してないのにこんなに変わるんだ…

[@UtakataParu]

元イラスト、多分雨上がりの街・水の魚たちが泳いでるイメージだったのかな、こういう感じのイラスト可愛くて好き

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This is one of my favorite episodes! So many good points and advice

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す、すげぇ

[@MORTIKILL]

Спасибо 😊

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