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  • Опубликовано: 19 окт 2024

Комментарии • 4

  • @ExploreEmbraceExpress
    @ExploreEmbraceExpress 4 месяца назад +1

    Can't stay long, have to work on my novel. LOVE critique videos!

  • @lesliesmith7757
    @lesliesmith7757 4 месяца назад

    Thank you so much for the review! 😊 yes, it was intended for him to come across creepy/stalker-ish and hearing it read, I didn't like 'lips tiped' and I'm already looking to make changes to that. Thank you again. ❤

    • @semi-sagesofthepages8408
      @semi-sagesofthepages8408  4 месяца назад

      Oh good! Glad we weren't wrong about that--it was an entertaining read. Thank you for submitting!