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Can't stay long, have to work on my novel. LOVE critique videos!
Yay! Keep watching--we've got a lot more in the works!
Thank you so much for the review! 😊 yes, it was intended for him to come across creepy/stalker-ish and hearing it read, I didn't like 'lips tiped' and I'm already looking to make changes to that. Thank you again. ❤
Oh good! Glad we weren't wrong about that--it was an entertaining read. Thank you for submitting!
Can't stay long, have to work on my novel. LOVE critique videos!
Yay! Keep watching--we've got a lot more in the works!
Thank you so much for the review! 😊 yes, it was intended for him to come across creepy/stalker-ish and hearing it read, I didn't like 'lips tiped' and I'm already looking to make changes to that. Thank you again. ❤
Oh good! Glad we weren't wrong about that--it was an entertaining read. Thank you for submitting!