IELTS WRITING Ideas - Should teenagers get part-time jobs? (Re-release)
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In some countries parents encourage teenagers to get a part time job because they want their children to be independent,and if they are left alone on this after their death they want their children to excel.for instance :if children are spoon fed they may do not how to work and all but if they are trained at teen age they may have that zeal of working and its importance.Not to forget teenage is the important age which plays a major role in childs development either to be positive or negative.so this is rhe best time to put their focus on work and deviate them from other forms of distractors.
On the other hand some parents feel that letting their children work at certain tender age may cause stress and it may inhibit physical growth and psychological development.for instance A teenage individual who works at such age may not focus on anything except work and in future it may be the only source for him to earn money and he will not have extra time to learn new things ,because that age plays a crucial role in learning new things
Hi chris, im eka from indonesia. For me it doesnt matter to encourage our children to get part time job, parents have to follow and remember the activities of their children, be resposible to manage time for studying and working, management of time is a must, and then by working makes children know how to get money and be wise to spend money, and of course makes children be good at social live, how to adapt with other people,
I think it is very helpful for everyone
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Hello Chris can you help me evaluate this IELTS task 1 academic essay.
Thanks!❤
(It's from IELTS 15 test 2)
Question:
The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The line graph illustrates the amount of tourism in a certain Caribbean island, from 2010 to 2017.
Overall, it is clear that the total, and the number staying on cruise ships rose steadily throughout the period. Although the amount of tourists staying on the island increased, it experienced fluctuations, it also plateaued.
The total rose continuously between 2010 and 2017, going from 1 million to around 2.75 million in 2016. Afterwards, it experienced a significant increase to 3.5 million, the biggest in 2017.
The number staying on the ground started at close to 0.75 million, then the amount on land regularly rose until 2013 when it plateaued. Finally it decreased slightly to 2012 levels, about 1.25 million, only to return to 2013 levels, 1.5 million in 2017 taking last.
Lastly, there were approximately 0.25 million at the start, then this amount fluctuated for three years, until 2014 when it rose noticeably to 1 million, rising continuously til the end, finishing 2nd at 2 million.
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Until you're not reached as capabilities to how to handle both i think should be focus on studies at 10th standard at this class your career would be decided. I had experience i had no enough time for assignment or homework or studies even i didn't take any tutions for studies i didn't have any sources to helped me at studies also in my school my attendance would be reflected i was began to far from others student at exam days i was busy to completed my assignment or i also completed to my friends assignment when my time was passed i didn't ideas i had less time to prepared for exam. Because i have less sources have no friends which one was it's also lefted school just given exam.. So .. I was average student if was have enough times i could prepared atleast at 10th standerd.. After 10th we can worked whatever we want,to my whole education background had been reflected.. So i must say those who have no ideas how to handle just give first priorities of studies if was able when that time my education wouldn't be reflect.. I didn't on job but i was busy in many works my whole time was just busy to completed my task except studies which time i had to save that time i spended on compleyed on homework or assignment. That was my mistake that i should focus on studies rather than assignment.
Great topic and awesome ideas
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