Great video. One small critique is to watch your audio levels. I can't understand some of what you're saying due to the music being too loud. Some of that might be due to accent but it's it's exacerbated by the loud music imo.
Thank you - I appreciate the comment and the critique. I'll watch the audio levels for the next few videos I make - trying to find the right balance for the music currently, so I appreciate you calling it to my attention more, will try and edit with headphones on to pay extra attention to the audio. Thanks again!
Recommended by a friend to check out your lore videos. The scripts are solid and flow well, and I'm glad there is someone keeping all of these storylines straight. As for the delivery, and the audio, I find the music level entirely too high for me to *ENJOY* watching through the whole video. You get washed out entirely. Additionally, throw in some of the enthusiasm that your script screams for; Dramatize the era's and important moments in order to keep the attention for the full duration. I think these few changes could really highlight how detailed and considerate your script is and would certainly bring me back for more content on my favorite OSRS storylines.
Thank you for the considerate feedback! I appreciate it. The audio is better in the more recent videos as I realised I made the music way too high - something I did stupidly but improved on. But I'll note the enthusiasm aswell - just my natural speech but I understand what you mean. Again, thank you for supporting the content.
@@Gravitybind absolutely! I watched the dwarves video from today and feel like I have a little egg on my face because you definitely already made some great adjustments that I mentioned. The delivery is improving too. It’s all about that consistent trend forward, right? I’m looking forward to seeing some of your heavy hitters re-polished as well as your coverage of future additions to this awesome game’s lore.
![The Accidental God [OSRS Perspective]](http://i.ytimg.com/vi/r64kg_WwuaQ/mqdefault.jpg)
How in the world do you have less than 1k subs, we've needed an osrs lore channel for so long
That's very kind, thank you! Lotta history in Gielinor so trying my best to get through it
hell yea man, a video detailing more about each DT2 boss would be interesting.
Thanks dude, that's a really good idea actually! Lotta additional lore with the bosses so will add that to the project list
hey man don't stop making videos. These lore videos are really good and fun. You'll grow in no time :)
You could have milked this for so much more! I’ve decided to watch them all anyways lol
Just found yor channel today (saw your post on reddit) and watched all of your osrs lore videos.
Amazing content keep it up!
Thank you so much! Really appreciate the support, got lots of lore vids on the way!
Great video. One small critique is to watch your audio levels. I can't understand some of what you're saying due to the music being too loud. Some of that might be due to accent but it's it's exacerbated by the loud music imo.
Thank you - I appreciate the comment and the critique. I'll watch the audio levels for the next few videos I make - trying to find the right balance for the music currently, so I appreciate you calling it to my attention more, will try and edit with headphones on to pay extra attention to the audio. Thanks again!
@@Gravitybind appreciate it and the video! Keep up the lore work!
I'm not mad that this storyline is just directly stolen from the Silmarillion
Welsh and Sindarin are even equally unpronounceable too🧐
Seren is my favorite god
Hail Guthix
Recommended by a friend to check out your lore videos. The scripts are solid and flow well, and I'm glad there is someone keeping all of these storylines straight.
As for the delivery, and the audio, I find the music level entirely too high for me to *ENJOY* watching through the whole video. You get washed out entirely. Additionally, throw in some of the enthusiasm that your script screams for; Dramatize the era's and important moments in order to keep the attention for the full duration.
I think these few changes could really highlight how detailed and considerate your script is and would certainly bring me back for more content on my favorite OSRS storylines.
Thank you for the considerate feedback! I appreciate it. The audio is better in the more recent videos as I realised I made the music way too high - something I did stupidly but improved on. But I'll note the enthusiasm aswell - just my natural speech but I understand what you mean. Again, thank you for supporting the content.
@@Gravitybind absolutely!
I watched the dwarves video from today and feel like I have a little egg on my face because you definitely already made some great adjustments that I mentioned.
The delivery is improving too. It’s all about that consistent trend forward, right?
I’m looking forward to seeing some of your heavy hitters re-polished as well as your coverage of future additions to this awesome game’s lore.
We are known by many names a Thief, War Criminal, Genocidal Maniac etc, etc.
nice
awesome video. thank you
Thank you!
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