Final Message to the Galactic Empire: You Crossed the Line | HFY Full Story

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  • Опубликовано: 9 янв 2025

Комментарии • 107

  • @ghimmy47
    @ghimmy47 25 дней назад +13

    The negative is for the rocking still image. Make it still.

    • @StellarHFY5
      @StellarHFY5  24 дня назад +1

      Thank you for your feedback! I completely understand your point about the rocking still image-it can definitely take away from the experience. We’ve actually stopped using that in our recent videos, so I’d love for you to check them out and let me know what you think!

  • @christianufomadu2942
    @christianufomadu2942 22 дня назад +4

    I salute everyone involved in the making of this video. Thank you 😊. I thoroughly enjoyed the story. More please.

  • @ejjantz2878
    @ejjantz2878 27 дней назад +10

    Motion sickness, i grew out of it by age 10.
    Please dont repeat.
    Best to listen only.

    • @StellarHFY5
      @StellarHFY5  26 дней назад

      Thanks for your feedback! We appreciate you pointing that out. We’re working on improving our video stability to make the viewing experience smoother and more enjoyable. Your input helps us get better, and we hope you’ll enjoy the upcoming videos!

    • @yesno-cv2cd
      @yesno-cv2cd 14 дней назад

      What do you sit there and stare at the screen ofc it’s only for listening

  • @Cbabilon675
    @Cbabilon675 2 дня назад

    This has got to be one of the best.Well told stories i've heard in a while😊😊😊

    • @StellarHFY5
      @StellarHFY5  2 дня назад +1

      Wow, thank you so much for your kind words-it truly means the world to me! 😊😊 I’m thrilled you enjoyed the story, and it’s feedback like yours that keeps me motivated to create even more. If you have a favorite type of story or a topic you’d love to see, let me know-I’d be happy to explore it. Thanks again for making my day brighter!"

  • @dropshot1967
    @dropshot1967 28 дней назад +16

    The movement of the pictures is making me nauseous. I also find that the shadow around the subtitle text reduces readability. The story feels stretched and overly wordy. A more compact writing style would enhance the story and would reduce the length of the story significantly.

    • @StellarHFY5
      @StellarHFY5  28 дней назад +1

      I understand how moving visuals and shadowed text can affect the reading experience. I’ll ensure that future presentations or adaptations minimize distracting visual effects and prioritize clarity in text styling.
      Also the story’s depth and detail aim to immerse the reader in an expansive narrative, but I understand your point about conciseness. A more compact writing style could better maintain pacing and engagement. I'll explore ways to streamline the content while preserving the story’s essence in future revisions.

  • @stevenbuckley1416
    @stevenbuckley1416 12 дней назад +1

    What I like is that you read people comments and strive to correct the problem that is commendable, you have a new sub how thank you 🙏👍

    • @StellarHFY5
      @StellarHFY5  10 дней назад

      Reading and responding to comments is one of my favorite parts-it helps me grow and connect with awesome people like you. I’m thrilled to have you as a new subscriber. Welcome aboard, and thank you for joining the journey!

  • @giljensen1132
    @giljensen1132 28 дней назад +6

    I was waiting for a Chen to show and roughly 21 minutes in there she was.

    • @StellarHFY5
      @StellarHFY5  27 дней назад +1

      Glad you were looking forward to that moment! While "Chen" made an impression, we’ve decided to retire that name and explore fresh directions for future characters. Hope you enjoyed the story and stay tuned for what’s coming next-it’s going to be exciting!

  • @gaiashaman7370
    @gaiashaman7370 Месяц назад +10

    Rocking your vids is sick-making and why I won't subscribe, nor up-check your vids.

    • @StellarHFY5
      @StellarHFY5  Месяц назад +5

      Thank you for sharing your thoughts! I’ve taken feedback like yours to heart and have stopped “rocking” the videos. I’m refining my style, and I think you’ll love the upcoming content-it’s all about delivering great stories in a more thoughtful way. I hope you’ll give it a chance and let me know what you think! 😊

  • @cozdiver
    @cozdiver 25 дней назад +6

    Are you trying to give people motion sickness? If so, then you succeeded!

    • @StellarHFY5
      @StellarHFY5  24 дня назад

      Thanks for your feedback! your input helps us get better, and we hope you’ll enjoy the upcoming videos!

  • @kconnor4568
    @kconnor4568 28 дней назад +5

    You gotta love it. The AVERY AKA. THE THE EMPIRE ( on earth aka : avavarians or birds ) . ARE FIGHTING WITH EARTH AND THE AVORY (which to me sounds suspiciously to me sounds a lot like birds but that’s just me) .

    • @StellarHFY5
      @StellarHFY5  27 дней назад +1

      You’ve got a sharp eye for patterns! It does seem like there’s a bird theme going on with the names-completely unintentional, I promise! The Avery and the Avory are definitely locked in a galactic struggle, but maybe they’re bird-inspired allies or rivals?
      Who knows-might make for an interesting plot twist! Appreciate your comment and your sense of humor.

    • @marcleewinser8534
      @marcleewinser8534 12 дней назад

      Just wait for Tex Avery...

    • @kconnor4568
      @kconnor4568 12 дней назад

      Appreciate you noticing my sly usage of wit . I just wonder how many other people picked it up.
      But it would make for an interesting follow up video, (hint hint hint)

  • @fwgilbert
    @fwgilbert 27 дней назад +5

    The story was good, BUT, the rocking of the background was distracting, very distracting.

    • @StellarHFY5
      @StellarHFY5  26 дней назад

      Thanks for your feedback! We appreciate you pointing that out. We’re working on improving our video stability to make the viewing experience smoother and more enjoyable. Your input helps us get better, and we hope you’ll enjoy the upcoming videos!

  • @TWBiker
    @TWBiker Месяц назад +3

    Did Zara/Zero/0 of the Avery suddenly betray her people and try to defend the Eclipse device? Check the story at 51:00. That's a major issue

    • @StellarHFY5
      @StellarHFY5  Месяц назад +2

      The character associated with the Eclipse device in the story is General Zara, a loyalist to the Empire, not an Avori leader. General Zara was introduced as a high-ranking Empire officer who advocated for deploying Project Eclipse as a desperate measure to crush the rebellion. Her actions were entirely aligned with the Empire’s oppressive agenda.
      On the contrary, Chancellor Xyra of the Avori, a key ally of humanity, consistently supported the alliance and worked to unite the galaxy against the Empire. There is no betrayal from the Avori in the story; their role is steadfast in opposing the Empire and advancing the alliance’s goals.

  • @stephenpublicover8818
    @stephenpublicover8818 27 дней назад +7

    Great Sci-Fi story, more stores like this one Please! 😀🥶🤔👌👍✌ Hello from Nova Scotia, Canada.

    • @ElginPrachett
      @ElginPrachett 27 дней назад

      😮

    • @StellarHFY5
      @StellarHFY5  26 дней назад

      Thank you! Greetings to Nova Scotia! Stay tuned for more galactic adventures-your support keeps the stories coming! 🚀✨

  • @realcleardiamond
    @realcleardiamond 26 дней назад +2

    would be nice to have these stories on Spotify to listen to on the go

    • @StellarHFY5
      @StellarHFY5  24 дня назад +1

      That’s such a fantastic idea! Having these stories on Spotify would make it so much easier to enjoy them anywhere-on your commute, during workouts, or while unwinding at home.
      I’ve been thinking about expanding to platforms like Spotify, and your suggestion is the perfect motivation to dive into it. Thank you for the nudge! I’ll start exploring how to make it happen and keep you updated on the progress. Stay tuned-you might soon have these stories in your pocket!

    • @realcleardiamond
      @realcleardiamond 24 дня назад +1

      @@StellarHFY5 yay that just made my day! i look forward to seeing it become reality!

    • @glr2051
      @glr2051 4 дня назад

      Use RUclips Music instead.

  • @TreyPeach-lb1qu
    @TreyPeach-lb1qu 5 дней назад

    Well written, narrative,and orations

    • @StellarHFY5
      @StellarHFY5  5 дней назад

      Thank you so much for your kind words! It means the world to us that you enjoyed the writing and the storytelling style. We pour our hearts into crafting narratives that resonate and leave an impact, and knowing it connected with you truly motivates us to keep pushing forward. Stay tuned for more stories-we can't wait to share them with you!

  • @jaytee3895
    @jaytee3895 8 дней назад +2

    Loved it. Who the hell stares at a screen for over an hour when listening to audio? Get a grip haters.

    • @StellarHFY5
      @StellarHFY5  7 дней назад

      Glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for the support and for keeping things real!

  • @drswanny9000
    @drswanny9000 6 дней назад +1

    I can ignore the wiggly pics (seems silly to do that, I’m not sure t he point of all that motion). The actual story seems long winded. There was a lot of repetition to the point that I was skipping over a lot of the story.

    • @StellarHFY5
      @StellarHFY5  5 дней назад +1

      Thanks for your feedback! I understand how the wiggly pictures and repetition could be distracting. We've already stopped using those moving pictures in our recent videos, and we're working on tightening up the storytelling to avoid repetition. I appreciate you sticking with us and sharing your thoughts-it helps us improve!

  • @martinherbert9649
    @martinherbert9649 14 часов назад

    Just listened to it excellent

    • @StellarHFY5
      @StellarHFY5  13 часов назад

      Thank you so much! I’m thrilled you enjoyed the story

  • @carlfranz6805
    @carlfranz6805 Месяц назад +19

    Way too much preaching, not enough story.

    • @StellarHFY5
      @StellarHFY5  Месяц назад +7

      Thanks for the feedback! I’ll make sure to balance the storytelling and keep the focus on the narrative in future videos. I appreciate you pointing that out-it helps me improve the content for you all. Stay tuned for the next story!

    • @menhyras
      @menhyras День назад +1

      And all enemy captains are males, but all good guys are female captains :D

  • @LawrenceKennard
    @LawrenceKennard 9 дней назад +1

    Big mistake how did they know the device was called the eclipse device😮

    • @StellarHFY5
      @StellarHFY5  8 дней назад

      They likely learned through intelligence from spies, defectors, or intercepted communications within the Empire. The alliance’s extensive network made sure no critical detail slipped by! 😊

  • @williamkennison8920
    @williamkennison8920 23 дня назад +4

    Who in the world thinks the rocking is a smart move? It's just makes some people sick and anoys others. Please quit it.

    • @StellarHFY5
      @StellarHFY5  18 дней назад +1

      Thank you for sharing your thoughts! It sounds like the "rocking" might not be working for everyone, and I completely understand how it could come across as more distracting than engaging. Feedback like this is incredibly helpful-I’ll definitely reconsider that element in future chapters to keep the story enjoyable for everyone.
      Your input ensures these stories are as immersive as possible, so I truly appreciate it. I’ll aim to improve and create something that’s captivating without the unnecessary distractions. Thanks for sticking with it! 🙏✨

  • @dramspringfeald
    @dramspringfeald 16 дней назад +1

    15 minutes in, and its Chen with the coward fleet.

    • @StellarHFY5
      @StellarHFY5  14 дней назад

      Thanks for watching and for pointing that out! Just a quick update: we've decided to retire the name 'Chen' from our stories moving forward. We're always evolving to create even better content, and we appreciate your sharp eye and support for our channel. Stay tuned for more epic HFY adventures

    • @dramspringfeald
      @dramspringfeald 14 дней назад +1

      @StellarHFY5 it's not the name that's the issue, it's the quite literally everything after. "Behind every hotel, every space hospital and every civilian ships was a massive hidden super mega ultra turbo fleet hidden in quantum physics that the writers don't understand"
      Are you training this on watt pad or what?

  • @puffnstuff12
    @puffnstuff12 4 дня назад +2

    DEI strong women strike again in yet another story.

    • @StellarHFY5
      @StellarHFY5  3 дня назад

      Thank you for sharing your thoughts. Stories are always a work in progress, and I aim to create balanced and engaging narratives with a variety of characters. I’ll take your feedback into account to ensure every character serves the story authentically. Appreciate you taking the time to comment!

  • @kconnor4568
    @kconnor4568 28 дней назад +2

    Can we please check our spelling. For a supposedly advanced race we are obviously advanced race we have an issue with our spelling at the first grade level and obviously need help with it to be understood now.

    • @StellarHFY5
      @StellarHFY5  27 дней назад

      Thank you for pointing that out! We truly appreciate your feedback and are working on refining every aspect of our storytelling, including spelling and grammar. Communication is key, and we want to ensure that our content is clear and enjoyable for everyone. Thanks for your patience as we strive to improve! 😊

  • @CarolBethCobun
    @CarolBethCobun Месяц назад +5

    Another wiggler. Ugh!!! Going to stop even trying to watch videos made by you.

    • @StellarHFY5
      @StellarHFY5  Месяц назад +3

      Hey Carol, we have just stopped wiggling our videos and we promise this will never happen again.

    • @einyv
      @einyv Месяц назад +1

      ​@@StellarHFY5why would you add it in the first place?

  • @johnclemons2208
    @johnclemons2208 14 дней назад

    I guess no men could make it to be leaders on any of these planets

    • @StellarHFY5
      @StellarHFY5  10 дней назад

      Leadership in stories should reflect balance and diversity, and I appreciate your perspective. I’ll keep this in mind to ensure future narratives showcase a variety of leaders, regardless of gender, to better resonate with everyone. Your input is always valuable-thank you!

  • @ronniebentley5847
    @ronniebentley5847 5 дней назад

    Good story. Everybody complaining about the rocking picture just don't look at your phone.

    • @StellarHFY5
      @StellarHFY5  5 дней назад

      Thank you for enjoying the story! 😊 I appreciate you standing up for us regarding the rocking picture-it’s awesome to see supportive comments like yours. By the way, we’ve already stopped using those moving images in our recent videos, so the viewing experience is even better now. Thanks for being part of our community-it means a lot to me!

  • @craigsawicky1643
    @craigsawicky1643 11 дней назад

    Row, Wait

    • @StellarHFY5
      @StellarHFY5  10 дней назад

      Sometimes, the best part of a story is the anticipation! Row or wait-every choice leads to adventure. Thanks for sharing your thoughts!

  • @speedballjones5235
    @speedballjones5235 25 дней назад +1

    Story was way too extraneous.

    • @StellarHFY5
      @StellarHFY5  24 дня назад +1

      Thank you for your feedback! I understand how an overly extraneous story can lose its impact. I’ll make sure to tighten up the storytelling in the future, focusing on the core narrative and cutting unnecessary details to keep it engaging and to the point.
      Your input helps me improve, and I truly appreciate you sharing it. I’ll work harder to create stories that capture your interest without dragging on. Thank you for sticking with me!

  • @kaykaymishka5548
    @kaykaymishka5548 21 день назад +1

    Ugh...way to repetive...could have been half the time.

    • @StellarHFY5
      @StellarHFY5  17 дней назад

      Ugh...way to repetive...could have been half the time.

  • @gerbendejong7057
    @gerbendejong7057 Месяц назад +5

    nice story.
    1 question though; why are there only woman in position of power? (admiral, captain etc..) it's getting pretty anoying and very un-realistic. how may admiral's do you kow who are woman? i'm not sayig it's impossible. but all of them in 1 story? that's just dumb...

    • @StellarHFY5
      @StellarHFY5  Месяц назад +3

      We understand your concern, which is why we’ve decided to maintain a balanced mix moving forward. Our upcoming stories will reflect this approach.

    • @verenanorby2791
      @verenanorby2791 23 дня назад +2

      Story must have been written by a woman

  • @trevormartin5249
    @trevormartin5249 21 день назад +1

    Stopped listening when the dumb wiggling pictures gave me motion sickness.

    • @StellarHFY5
      @StellarHFY5  17 дней назад

      I’m really sorry to hear that the visuals caused discomfort. I’ll keep this in mind and work on creating a more viewer-friendly experience in future videos. Thank you for sharing your feedback-it helps me improve the channel for everyone. Take care!

  • @dannawaldman3175
    @dannawaldman3175 16 дней назад

    I've been listening to these stories for a month or so. They are like podcasts and nice to have droning on in the background. That said, it's interesting that for all of the female characters in the stories, which I notice and appreciate, I've yet to find a single story narrated in a woman's voice. If this is AI and voices can be programmed, would it be that hard to change the timbre of the voice track, especially when the gender of the narrator is female? Am I the only one who has every asked about this? Is a woman's voice so disturbing to listen to?

    • @StellarHFY5
      @StellarHFY5  14 дней назад

      Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts and for being a dedicated listener! We’re really glad you enjoy the stories. You bring up an excellent point about voice diversity. It’s not that a woman’s voice is disturbing-in fact, it’s something we’ve been considering! Including female narration could add a fresh dynamic to our storytelling, especially for stories with strong female protagonists.
      You’re not alone in bringing this up, and your feedback is a great reminder for us to explore this further. We’re constantly looking to improve and diversify our content, so stay tuned for updates. We appreciate your input and support-it truly helps us grow!

  • @koppsr
    @koppsr 21 день назад +1

    The usual mix of As, Ls and Asns only. Did you guys blow up Europe or something?
    This drab standard mix is getting annoying.
    And embarrassing.
    Also maybe skip moving the picture around, motion sickness is a thing!

    • @StellarHFY5
      @StellarHFY5  17 дней назад

      Thank you for your feedback! I hear you-variety in representation is important, and I’ll work on diversifying characters and stories to keep things fresh and engaging. I’ll also take your suggestion about the visuals seriously and aim for a more static approach to avoid causing discomfort.
      Your honesty helps me improve, and I truly appreciate you taking the time to share your thoughts. Thank you for being part of the channel!

  • @davidbillings3370
    @davidbillings3370 10 дней назад

    I love people complaining bout the pics the point of the video is to listen not look at pics yall special

  • @tonydrescher6647
    @tonydrescher6647 19 дней назад

    Please learn proper word spelling. For example, one and won are pronounced the same but meaning is very different. One is a number and won mean victory.

    • @StellarHFY5
      @StellarHFY5  19 дней назад

      Hi there,
      Thank you for pointing that out-I really appreciate your attention to detail! I completely understand how such errors can be distracting, and I sincerely apologize for any confusion caused. I’ll make sure to double-check spelling and word usage more carefully in future recordings to avoid similar mistakes.
      Your feedback helps me improve, and I’m grateful for your support and understanding. Thanks for watching, and I hope you’ll enjoy the upcoming content! 😊

  • @mickl5536
    @mickl5536 12 дней назад

    Just exactly what is the point or purpose of "rocking" pictures? Just to detract from a fairly decent story ? Bloody stupid and earns a thumbs down.

    • @StellarHFY5
      @StellarHFY5  10 дней назад

      Thank you for the feedback,I really appreciate your honesty. The moving pictures were intended to add some visual flair, but I understand how they might be distracting. I'll definitely take your input into consideration for future videos. Your support helps me improve, and I hope to keep delivering stories you can enjoy!

  • @seanskelton2007
    @seanskelton2007 2 дня назад

    for the love of anything....DO NOT ROCK STILL PICTURES
    it reaks if cheap special effects and does nothing but distract from the story.....actually i couldnt even last 10 min with that on my screen..shame since the story seemed interesting.

    • @StellarHFY5
      @StellarHFY5  2 дня назад

      I really appreciate it. 😊 I completely understand how distracting the rocking pictures can be, and I’m happy to let you know we’ve already stopped using that effect in our recent videos. It’s great to hear you found the story interesting, and I’d love for you to give one of our newer videos a shot-we’ve made improvements based on feedback just like yours. Thanks again for sharing your thoughts; it truly helps us grow!

  • @TakashiLiebl
    @TakashiLiebl 6 дней назад

    Too much

    • @StellarHFY5
      @StellarHFY5  5 дней назад

      Thanks for the support! We’ve already stopped using the rocking pictures in recent videos, so it’s all smooth now. Glad you enjoyed the story!

  • @CorneliaJurisic
    @CorneliaJurisic 19 дней назад

    Getting seasick up down up down.I just had dinner i dont want to get sick.The is repeat again and again trying to listen to it but its well boring.Yawn .

    • @StellarHFY5
      @StellarHFY5  19 дней назад

      Hi there,
      Thank you for your honest feedback-I really appreciate you taking the time to share your thoughts! I completely understand how the up-and-down motion in the video could be uncomfortable, and I’m truly sorry about that. I’ll make sure to avoid using such effects in future videos to ensure a smoother and more enjoyable viewing experience.
      As for the repetitive parts, I’ll revisit the storytelling style to keep it engaging and avoid redundancy moving forward. Your input helps me improve, and I’m committed to making these stories worth your time!
      Thank you for giving it a chance, and I hope you’ll stick around for the updates-we’re always aiming to do better!

  • @aaronhale8602
    @aaronhale8602 24 дня назад +2

    Another woke story.

    • @StellarHFY5
      @StellarHFY5  17 дней назад

      Thank you for your feedback! I aim to tell stories that resonate with a wide range of audiences, and I appreciate you taking the time to share your thoughts. If there are specific themes or styles you'd like to see more of, feel free to let me know-I’m always open to new ideas and improving the content!

  • @Jw-no7id
    @Jw-no7id 12 дней назад

    Cliché to cliché filler words that don't mean or advance the story very much more clichés and more tough talk clichés followed by how threatening this is to humanity. If this is an AI generated story, get a better AI. If this is human written story, try writing a story that doesn't use tired old repetitive comments.

    • @StellarHFY5
      @StellarHFY5  10 дней назад

      I completely understand where you're coming from-nobody wants a story weighed down by clichés or filler. Whether AI-assisted or human-written, every story should strive to be original and engaging. I’ll take your critique to heart and work on delivering sharper, more innovative narratives in the future. Your input helps me grow as a storyteller, so thank you for sharing it!

  • @milosstefanovic6603
    @milosstefanovic6603 12 дней назад

    All this AI stories are PUSHING SO HARD girl bosses, like someone programed the to do so lol. Ambassador Kelly, President Karen, Chief Scientist Betty. Always some woman comes with victory solution that no one thought off or enter a black hole that no one HAVE BALLS to enter, its ridiculous

    • @StellarHFY5
      @StellarHFY5  10 дней назад

      I can see how certain story elements might feel repetitive or overly focused on one type of character. My goal is to create balanced narratives with diverse characters who shine based on their actions, not just their titles. Your feedback is valuable, and I’ll work to ensure future stories feature a broader variety of characters and dynamics. Thanks for sticking with the channel and sharing your thoughts

    • @milosstefanovic6603
      @milosstefanovic6603 9 дней назад

      @@StellarHFY5 You are putting females in a positions they wouldn like to be in the first place, and you are giving them roles that they wouldnt want in a first place. I imagine a female would be in a medical positions or biological or xenobiological positions far more than in fighting positions

  • @brianblackwell5713
    @brianblackwell5713 22 дня назад

    First you steal from star wars now star trek like everyone else. No imagination.

    • @brianblackwell5713
      @brianblackwell5713 22 дня назад

      How many times do you need to say that “the fleets are forming?”

    • @StellarHFY5
      @StellarHFY5  18 дней назад

      Thank you for your honest feedback. I understand where you're coming from, and I’ll take this as a reminder to work harder at creating truly unique and original stories that stand apart. Sci-fi often draws from shared archetypes and inspirations, but the goal is always to put a fresh, personal spin on them, not to mimic what's already been done.
      Your comment highlights the need to dig deeper into new ideas, and I genuinely appreciate that push. Stay tuned-there’s plenty of uncharted creative territory ahead!