(I can't believe I haven't gotten around to commenting on this yet, please forgive me!!!!) When I wrote/drew this comic in 2020, I did not even consider making a tie between the two of the endings. I just decided to make two endings as a sort of comic-layout experiment - BUT THE WAY THAT YOU TIED THEM TOGETHER??? INCREDIBLE!!!! I could not have done it better myself!!!! I am SO impressed you've made my old comic (veeery old... im still cringing at some of the drawings, especially on the first page XDD) this dynamic and well-flowing. I will forever love your work!!! KEEP IT UP!!! ❤💕✨⭐❤❤ Also I have to mention, 'His Theme' from Undertale is SURPRISINGLY fitting for this comic, and I love how you put it in!!! :D (also just a lil fun fact... I drew the first page of this comic about 5 months before I had the idea to write Partners In Crime. Just thought I'd share this detail!!! ^^)
@@travon4924 and compared to how old t he others are, she's too young to suffer like this. (Also, she's over a thousand years old, since she said she waited that long for her to come back)
The interesting thing about Steven and his connection to his mother is the sheer fact that he learns everything about her in reverse. First about his relationship with Greg, then, when she was resistants leader, the hints that she kept secrets from everyone including pearl which when you tie that in with the big secret that she was keeping for pink, it has just had a little extra layer of hurt when she found out the pink was keeping secrets even from her. The whole issue with spinel was basically pink diamond, believing that she needed to be serious now that she had earth. I’m being serious means putting away all of your toys.
Lost friends, the feeling of no turning back, and just trying your best to do something to help a tormented young soul. I'd say given the context of the game, the song fits well with this comic.
Holy shit went 0 to 100 really quick here. Steven having the ability to seemingly rewind back time def fits him, I can def see something like that having a big impact if it was canon
these were two separate comics. Phoenix did the bad ending first then, to combine the comics into one, Steven claimed the "bad ending" was a vision Garnet showed him where he and Spinel died in Pink's garden and the "good ending" was what actually happened, at least in the context of Phoenix's dub
@@Mariewolf_94 REMBER ONE EPISODE HE DID GO BACK IN TIME AND CREATED A PARADOX BUT GOT RID OF IT ,ENGERY AND MATTER CANT BE CREATED NOR DESTROYED SO THE TIME ENGERY WAS IN HIS GEM GOT RELESED WHEN HE DIDE BOOM I WORKED THIS INTO CANNON
@@tavi265 He actually used an artifact to do that though, the Hourglass, and he destroyed it at the end of the episode. It actually didn’t have anything to do with him or his powers.
these two comics had nothing to do w/ each other, besides the main scene, but you flowed them together so flawlessly! while watching the comic dub and reading your description, i was still on the "bad ending" side of the comic so i was wondering "How in the hell could you connect this to the good ending besides pulling a cliche 'oh, it was just a nightmare'? That probably wouldn't even flow well anyway, so how???" but then you pulled a narration explaining it was a Garnet vision Steven had seen and had it flow into the "good ending" comic of "what actually happened" and how Steven altered the future Garnet foresaw. you did such an amazing job!
Steven is so kind Even if someone attacks him He's still when I want to hurt them He wants to make sure everyone's okay even if he's in danger that's so sweet of him 😊
This Steven Universe comic dub with this alternate ending was just so emotional and touching! Major kudos to the actors as well and I do feel sorry for Spinel and Steven to be honest.
How did Steven contact the diamonds if Spinel breaks the communicator? She couldn't have obtained the sharp edge of warp pad material without using the broken communicator as the means of breaking the warp pad.
No one one gonna talk about how universal the undertale soundtrack is like every single comic I've been reading from Sonic from mario even this if it wasn't for undertale I have no idea what kind music they would be using
Yea there's even a fnf mod being made with a pearl from steven universe (the tv show) called Dagger!Pearl, this pearl is so obsessed with Rose that she decides to cut out Steven's gem while he's sleeping, but he ends up waking OR at least that's the general concept of the mod, but it hasn't been fully made yet
I wish we explored the garden more Steven started gardening wish he made this place his. Even all the other places that were his mom's the arsenal, room, ship, etc. Despite seeing them they never really had prolonged significance
Pretty sure it's because Steven doesn't want to be reminded of all the terrible things his mother has done, I mean look how things went down in Steven universe future. It took him to get away from all the gems stuff & explore other parts of the world not just live the life his mother has to make him happy
everyone hurt'z but please dont ever leave someone in this kinda pain all any of us want is good even from the worst of us unless hate and the need to burn everything is destroyed one heart at a time there will always be war and strife but..please..dont just leave a person in there own space under a lie of love......
Killing her and making her suddenly take a heel-face turn is not a redemption arc! If the crewniverse can redeem literal space dictators who committed mass genocide *multiple times,* I'd say they can redeem Jasper!
@@RedDragonForce2 If there is one thing that would have made their bond stronger: Steven should have tried calling Spinel _"Nora",_ The name that Rose Quartz would have given to Steven had he been born as a girl.
I get that not everyone can be redeemed and that you can’t save everyone, but its up to us, all of us, to at least give them a chance to save themselves by making the choice
I just smiled didnt cry Becuase I know someday I still say goodbye I hope you all hear this someday However young or old it may I have come to say Have fun Give love Live your life your own way
u made the comic rlly well. the art, the personality, the only thing is the dialogue sorta doesnt make sense in spots and the VO is a bit off, but otherwise its almost perfect
this makes me think how many times Garnet must have seen him die with future vision, i wonder if she's ever scared that one of those realities will happen and she won't be able to stop it this time
Spinel deserved better when pink abandoned her. spinel waited there smiling in the start..but nothing was good for her when she was alone... shes been alone a long time..when she got a message from steven she ran then things were never the same she thought... Then everything changed stevens happily ever after been wrong when spinel wanted revenge. She wanted to poison the earth and poofed the gems..when she poisoned it steven wanted to talk about it. We know spinel did bad things but she never meant that she just want pink and spinel that she was from era 1..poor her..
To be fair, at this point all she really did was fuck up the gems (which is already found to be fixable) and kill a hill (also easily fixable). No major damage was done at this point that couldn't be fixed in about a week.
I just want to say I’ve been a fan of your videos for a while, also on a side note could you do a comic dub of this comic called gone feral, it’s created by superFrenzyHare, if you check it out let me know what you think
!["You Don't Need Me." (Comic Dub) [Steven Universe: The Movie]](http://i.ytimg.com/vi/UXM2YBYI_nI/mqdefault.jpg)
(I can't believe I haven't gotten around to commenting on this yet, please forgive me!!!!)
When I wrote/drew this comic in 2020, I did not even consider making a tie between the two of the endings. I just decided to make two endings as a sort of comic-layout experiment -
BUT THE WAY THAT YOU TIED THEM TOGETHER??? INCREDIBLE!!!! I could not have done it better myself!!!! I am SO impressed you've made my old comic (veeery old... im still cringing at some of the drawings, especially on the first page XDD) this dynamic and well-flowing. I will forever love your work!!! KEEP IT UP!!! ❤💕✨⭐❤❤
Also I have to mention, 'His Theme' from Undertale is SURPRISINGLY fitting for this comic, and I love how you put it in!!! :D
(also just a lil fun fact... I drew the first page of this comic about 5 months before I had the idea to write Partners In Crime. Just thought I'd share this detail!!! ^^)
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Still great work you did, makes me sad no one hugged her in the movie
Ya so that what happens if the hero does not get burnt out. It is a much better ending.
@Logan Shaw yeah steven really slipped up as he got older
😢😢
It *still* hurts whenever Spinel says, " I just want to be your friend....." 😭💔
She just wanted to play
And instead she was left alone and forgotten like a plush rabbit in a garden.
Steven will be her friend.
@@cesarv7685 :'(
@Cesar V: “Let’s go in the garden…”
@@PeachWookiee NO
Can we acknowledge the fact that Steven calls her Pink instead of Mom
I wouldn't want to say she's .gov mother either
@@Angelmochianimations Yeah fair
If I never knew her I wouldn’t call her a mom.
@@baileybhamjee8080 It’s the fact he called her mom in the past of the series though
@@wgs5643 yeah but, I feel like if he called her mom it would probably hurt spinel more emotionally
"I just want to be your friend"
A gem so kind and so young yet she suffer so long and felt so hurt.
Ahe Really didn't deserve such fate.
Despite what she planned to do to earth, she deserves a friend
Bro she like 100 years old 💀💀💀
@@travon4924 and compared to how old t he others are, she's too young to suffer like this.
(Also, she's over a thousand years old, since she said she waited that long for her to come back)
@@cesarv7685 oh I didn’t know she was that old thanks for telling me!!!
@@travon4924 6000 yrs old but point is she didn’t know better she was basically made with the mind of a happy little kid
The interesting thing about Steven and his connection to his mother is the sheer fact that he learns everything about her in reverse.
First about his relationship with Greg, then, when she was resistants leader, the hints that she kept secrets from everyone including pearl
which when you tie that in with the big secret that she was keeping for pink, it has just had a little extra layer of hurt when she found out the pink was keeping secrets even from her.
The whole issue with spinel was basically pink diamond, believing that she needed to be serious now that she had earth.
I’m being serious means putting away all of your toys.
And Spinel was getting very clingy toward the end. I think Pink felt smothered, too.
Even if it requires a bloody scene, that combined ending is better than either alone. Hopefully your addition may become added to the comic somehow!
Learning from your past will ensure it will not be your future
True Uncle Iroh, you truly are amazing
I clicked the video.
I see the teleporter break.
I see Steven get stabbed.
I see Spinel get cracked.
Great start
Fr
MY JAW DROPPED! (Yep, perfect ending to steven universe)
J? 💀
@@AnipokNotRealMe To😅
*[I would not mind seeing this ending on the show...]*
Neither would I
Sadly, the movie was for children
And dark seeing actual blood in kid show *(movie)*
I SEE YOU EVERYWHERE-
You still deserve community service
@@steven.q I guess for trying to destroy earth, that would be a fair punishment
His Theme Is always so emotional😭
Lost friends, the feeling of no turning back, and just trying your best to do something to help a tormented young soul. I'd say given the context of the game, the song fits well with this comic.
@@rosykindbunny1313 agreed
It does indeed fit... doesn't make it any less emotional tho..
Dang, this comic dub gave me so many emotions that I'm in tears 😭
Real
Holy shit went 0 to 100 really quick here. Steven having the ability to seemingly rewind back time def fits him, I can def see something like that having a big impact if it was canon
these were two separate comics. Phoenix did the bad ending first then, to combine the comics into one, Steven claimed the "bad ending" was a vision Garnet showed him where he and Spinel died in Pink's garden and the "good ending" was what actually happened, at least in the context of Phoenix's dub
@@Mariewolf_94 REMBER ONE EPISODE HE DID GO BACK IN TIME AND CREATED A PARADOX BUT GOT RID OF IT ,ENGERY AND MATTER CANT BE CREATED NOR DESTROYED SO THE TIME ENGERY WAS IN HIS GEM GOT RELESED WHEN HE DIDE BOOM I WORKED THIS INTO CANNON
@@tavi265 He actually used an artifact to do that though, the Hourglass, and he destroyed it at the end of the episode. It actually didn’t have anything to do with him or his powers.
@@damonsnow11 but I'm talking about is the energy from the artifact that I think went in his gem when he destroy it
Damn!
I'm glad people still remember this show after almost 3
My friend, people will remember this show long enough.
The past viewer's memories will last and they won't forget steven universe
This ending was even more better than in the movie! Spinel deserve to be happy and have her happy ending
It’s too late. She’s already too far gone.
Spinel saying "i-i-i- i just wanna be your friend...." is the saddest line ikve ever heared spinel deserved better than this
these two comics had nothing to do w/ each other, besides the main scene, but you flowed them together so flawlessly! while watching the comic dub and reading your description, i was still on the "bad ending" side of the comic so i was wondering "How in the hell could you connect this to the good ending besides pulling a cliche 'oh, it was just a nightmare'? That probably wouldn't even flow well anyway, so how???" but then you pulled a narration explaining it was a Garnet vision Steven had seen and had it flow into the "good ending" comic of "what actually happened" and how Steven altered the future Garnet foresaw. you did such an amazing job!
This actually made me tear up. Great story telling. I can't tell you how much I feel for Spinel, even if she is a fiction character.
Steven is so kind Even if someone attacks him He's still when I want to hurt them He wants to make sure everyone's okay even if he's in danger that's so sweet of him 😊
I held my tears in while watching this even though i still have freedom to cry but I dont feel like Infront of my parents/grandparents.
THIS WAS SO DAMN GOOD KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
I love Good Ending and Spinel needs a friend and family and hugs. And Love.
This Steven Universe comic dub with this alternate ending was just so emotional and touching! Major kudos to the actors as well and I do feel sorry for Spinel and Steven to be honest.
I bet if they could've gotten away with it, this would've been the ending. It just... feels better somehow.
why does spinel in steven jacket look so adorable to me
Spinel: “If there’s anyone that deserves to die alone… It’s you!”
my god this was so emotional
Damn, that hit hard…
It hit so damn hard for me too
How did Steven contact the diamonds if Spinel breaks the communicator? She couldn't have obtained the sharp edge of warp pad material without using the broken communicator as the means of breaking the warp pad.
Maybe that was a spare they found? 🤔 🤷♀️
No one one gonna talk about how universal the undertale soundtrack is like every single comic I've been reading from Sonic from mario even this if it wasn't for undertale I have no idea what kind music they would be using
@@ACE-lp5hv To be fair, The Undertale Music in this does fit since Steven is a Pacifist, Same with Frisk.
Has anyone notice that all the movie comics either has Steven dead or really hurt
Yeah that's true. And one of the more popular ones involve SU: The Movie, If Steven just died outright. It's honestly kinda sad at this point.
@@glitchyboi50 I love the brainwash
Yea there's even a fnf mod being made with a pearl from steven universe (the tv show) called Dagger!Pearl, this pearl is so obsessed with Rose that she decides to cut out Steven's gem while he's sleeping, but he ends up waking OR at least that's the general concept of the mod, but it hasn't been fully made yet
@@dychen5777 I’ve seen it I don’t mind that cause it’s a cool FNF mod and I like the tuber
I wish we explored the garden more Steven started gardening wish he made this place his. Even all the other places that were his mom's the arsenal, room, ship, etc. Despite seeing them they never really had prolonged significance
Pretty sure it's because Steven doesn't want to be reminded of all the terrible things his mother has done, I mean look how things went down in Steven universe future. It took him to get away from all the gems stuff & explore other parts of the world not just live the life his mother has to make him happy
Bro the inclusion of 'His Theme' from undertale was great, really hits it home how important this was that everything was turning out better
everyone hurt'z but please dont ever leave someone in this kinda pain all any of us want is good even from the worst of us unless hate and the need to burn everything is destroyed one heart at a time there will always be war and strife but..please..dont just leave a person in there own space under a lie of love......
*WHY COULDN'T THIS BEEN THE REAL DEAL!!!!!!!!* 😱😭😢😥
That's so sad and beautiful at the same time.. ;(
If Steven was a Chill Guy:
I believe that Stephen Universe is still alive but in our hearts
Jasper deserved redemption
Killing her and making her suddenly take a heel-face turn is not a redemption arc! If the crewniverse can redeem literal space dictators who committed mass genocide *multiple times,* I'd say they can redeem Jasper!
So good!!
“I’m so sorry, Pink… I just finished to promise you to have a colony… please come back… we need you… I need you…”
This is the best comedy I've seen in ages I'm sorry I know it is trying so hard to be serious but its so funny
which parts lol?
@@namelessguy5491 Spinel holding up the shard to kill herself with noodle arms
Also all the emotional beats
I wish this really in the movie would make the scene better
At the 4:00 mark, Yellow said don't go anywhere. Where would they even go if the teleporter is broken?
Was her gemstone always that big?
“Okay, we’ll be right there, Steven! Just don’t go anywhere!”
*Bruh*
Awesome comic
His theme playing in the background is so awesome and adorable
Yeah bringing back more of jinx work
Like when one of the artists erases the mess that Rebeca made and fixes it, creating this masterpiece of cinema.
[Oh Gee,I could’ve died]
Thank God the first part was Just what Garnet showed Steven... I was angry..
The Sister Steven never had... The Little Brother Spinel always wanted...
Steven technically had Amethyst as a sister, but there’s nothing wrong with one more.
@@RedDragonForce2 If there is one thing that would have made their bond stronger: Steven should have tried calling Spinel _"Nora",_ The name that Rose Quartz would have given to Steven had he been born as a girl.
Made me cry…. Amazing 🥲👍
You really hit me with the undertale music damb that hurts but it’s like a good hurt yknow
I get that not everyone can be redeemed and that you can’t save everyone, but its up to us, all of us, to at least give them a chance to save themselves by making the choice
THAT FIRST BIT HAD ME WORRIED.
That fist bit had me in all different kinds of emotional zones!
I just smiled didnt cry
Becuase I know someday
I still say goodbye
I hope you all hear this someday
However young or old it may
I have come to say
Have fun
Give love
Live your life your own way
I still watch this movie to this day
Fun fact: spinel and Steven are probably siblings sense Steven is the descendant of pink diamond
this is so sad and yet so wholesome
3:30 was that on purpose or by accident because WHAT CAN I DO FOR YOU oh no it’s stuck in my head I’m gonna sing it all day now yay
Best comic ever
Really cool
I don't Remember seeing it
Shouldn't the gem heal Steven?
If I remember, his powers were still on the fritz at this point from the rejuvinator.
u made the comic rlly well. the art, the personality, the only thing is the dialogue sorta doesnt make sense in spots and the VO is a bit off, but otherwise its almost perfect
Everything Spinel does is just really relatable. Not exactly referring to this comic dub since that would be pretty "edgy", but like....
And by letting go of the pain that they you by forgiving them, and not let it weigh you down, but let it build you up
Aprendemos uma regra muito importante nunca ficamos sozinho 😢😢😢😢👍♥️
0:50 - oh no
1:26 - yes the drama I didn’t know I needed
2:26 - Oop
3:26 - :)
3:32 - WHAT CAN I DO FOR YOU 🎸🎶🎵
5:37 - 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
That's a dramatic scene!
We all wish we had friend like Stewen but we should be more like Stewen
This is making me cry most of the time
bro the "isn't that pinks plaything" is just so funny
I like how ending 1 spinels last words are “Steven?” Like as if she is generally worried she might’ve killed him
Dónde encuentro el cómic en español
this makes me think how many times Garnet must have seen him die with future vision, i wonder if she's ever scared that one of those realities will happen and she won't be able to stop it this time
Murdered Ending and best friends ending
Wholesome video
i know this is an au but wouldn’t Stevens gem heal him right after spinel removes the shard from him?
He got hit with the rejuvenater
Man, I miss SU gone wrong. I wonder what happenned to the artist
I love the internet
Spinel deserved better when pink abandoned her. spinel waited there smiling in the start..but nothing was good for her when she was alone... shes been alone a long time..when she got a message from steven she ran then things were never the same she thought... Then everything changed stevens happily ever after been wrong when spinel wanted revenge. She wanted to poison the earth and poofed the gems..when she poisoned it steven wanted to talk about it. We know spinel did bad things but she never meant that she just want pink and spinel that she was from era 1..poor her..
It's ok because she was safe from gem war:)
This could have happened if cartoon network isn't you know a kid channel
He is so good at acting spinel
Steven, hold Spinel accountable for trying to end the Earth.
To be fair, at this point all she really did was fuck up the gems (which is already found to be fixable) and kill a hill (also easily fixable). No major damage was done at this point that couldn't be fixed in about a week.
@@aryaleef8899 there's still poison from the injector in the Earth.
3:52 how did they call them if it was broken 💀
Probably fixed it with magic is my guess. 😅
My whiskers died yesterday 😢
I’m deeply sorry for your loss, my friend. If there’s anything we can do, we’re all here for you. 💕 🙏
@@PhoenixPrime thank you my dear friend
2:53 when you leave the underground
Every time I watch this video I just get more impressed at how over the top that first half is
Idk why but it still hurts when spinel says "I just want to be your friend.." :[
I just want to say I’ve been a fan of your videos for a while, also on a side note could you do a comic dub of this comic called gone feral, it’s created by superFrenzyHare, if you check it out let me know what you think
Me : *sees a content warning* Oh. It won't be that bad. Surely.
Me : *watches the first half of the video* ... I take my words back! O_O
stop it, blue...stop using your powers on me!
An emotional speech is always made better when Undertale plays in the background
Did you have to add his theme from undertale to this to make it more emotional?
If he still had his powers, he could remember the episode where he shattered Jasper he can heal, shattered gems and so yellow diamond too
I still love this movie
THAT FIRST PART SHOCKED ME SM 0:48
The undertale music go well with this
spinel be buzzing hot but this story touched my heart...i love this piece